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16th Apr '18 12:22:53 PM ZimFan89
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--> "''I'm'' a liar, Madame?[...]And what about ''you'', Madame? [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Have]] ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion you]]'' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion been honest with your associates?]] I mean, you took Jasmine under your wing without much deliberation, didn't you? You've trained her, brought her into your trust and made her think you as a friend, a ''mentor''...Does she know what waits at the end of the line? You've made cattle of her, Athena. You've fattened her up for slaughter and you're not even sorry about it. [[AtLeastIAdmitIt The difference between you and me is that I]] ''[[AtLeastIAdmitIt admit]]'' [[AtLeastIAdmitIt I'm a sociopathic liar]]. Do you?"

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--> ---> "''I'm'' a liar, Madame?[...]And what about ''you'', Madame? [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Have]] ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion you]]'' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion been honest with your associates?]] I mean, you took Jasmine under your wing without much deliberation, didn't you? You've trained her, brought her into your trust and made her think you as a friend, a ''mentor''...Does she know what waits at the end of the line? You've made cattle of her, Athena. You've fattened her up for slaughter and you're not even sorry about it. [[AtLeastIAdmitIt The difference between you and me is that I]] ''[[AtLeastIAdmitIt admit]]'' [[AtLeastIAdmitIt I'm a sociopathic liar]]. Do you?"
10th Apr '18 1:01:12 PM KrspaceT
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* ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines'' has this game-changer after Aurora stops Belladonna from attacking a captive Ash:
-->'''Belladonna''': Thank you [[AffectionateNickname My Dear]]….you stopped me from making a horrible mistake. You stopped me, from killing [[LukeIAmYourFather the Brother I never knew I had]].

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* ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines'' have a variety of these both for a single sidestory narrative, or the universe as a whole.
** After John Archer's Gardevoir asks what happened to her trainer, Dexter chimes in with information about him, ending with his status:
-->'''Dexter''': John was found several months ago: dead…"
** [[WhamEpisode Chapter 23]]
has this game-changer a pretty big bombshell after Aurora stops prevents Belladonna from attacking a captive Ash:
-->'''Belladonna''': Thank you [[AffectionateNickname My Dear]]….you stopped me from making a horrible mistake. You stopped me, from killing [[LukeIAmYourFather the Brother I never knew I had]].had.
** In the Georgia Gaiden, Dr. Brennan, having just run a DNA test on the SerialKiller known as "The Reaper", gives this bit of bad news:
-->'''Dr. Brennan''': The DNA matches the Striaton Gym Leader, Eric Knudsen. Ghost-type specialist.
** In the Big P Pokémon Race Interlude, there's this conversation at the end:
-->'''Hex''': Urgh, when I get ta him, I swear I'm gonna [[WolverineClaws Shadow Claw]] his face out!
-->'''Lara''': Hex, we ain't supposed ta say that here!
-->'''Hex''': Aw, come on, ya don't want ta [[PlayingWithFire roast]] his sorry ass fer everything he did ta us?
** Chapter 29 ends with the following line by Sabrina:
-->'''Sabrina''': Do move the Primeape, would you? I have a plan.
** The biggest one so far, in Chapter 34:
-->'''Narration''': She had achieved a secondary objective, having Ash know that his father was the worst man on the planet, even if she had not directly noted him as his title of the Bloodline King.
10th Apr '18 12:49:43 PM Sixthhokage1
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-->'''Octavia''':“[[{{Transsexual}} A colt.]]”

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-->'''Octavia''':“[[{{Transsexual}} -->'''Octavia''':“[[{{transgender}} A colt.]]”
6th Apr '18 11:51:17 AM AbsolutelyAverage
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* ''Roleplay/LordsAmongTheAshes'' has several from both sides of the quest:
** Cleaning Up:
-->“Oscar Diggs, at your service, Your Majesty. I was drawn to your city by the tales of your force’s acts of heroism on the high seas. I was hoping to offer my services to you in this time of turmoil.”
-->And with those words, [[BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy Ozpin,]] [[EccentricMentor your Headmaster from outside the simulation,]] offers you his hand.
** Turn 7 Results (Jaune):
-->When Cinder came to Normandy, she was impressed. Suitably so to discuss an alliance and after a feast held on the first day to welcome her, you got one. Well, it was one way to get an alliance, though [[AltarDiplomacy the new ring of black dust crystal on your finger seems weirdly cold]].
** Battle for Jersey part 8:
-->[[InvisibleWriting [SYSTEM FAILURE, IMMINENT] ]]
-->[[TakingYouWithMe [ACTIVATING HADES PROTOCOLS] ]]
-->[[MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning [WARBEAST 5 COMPROMISED. VENGEANCE PROTOCOL INITIATED.] ]]
-->[[LostSuperWeapon [WARBEASTS 2, 12 DETECTED. WARBEASTS ACTIVE.] ]]
-->[[OhCrap [WIDENING SEARCH. SIX SIGNALS IDENTIFIED.] ]]
-->[[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt [SENDING ACTIVATION COMMAND.] ]]
** Titan Aftermath: The Watcher:
-->“You may refer to me as…[[BigBad Salem]]. Perhaps we shall meet again, if you heed my advice.”
** The Calculus of war:
-->[[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt “… All of the continents other than Menagerie and the Dark Continent are lost. The situation is untenable.”]]
** Turn 18 Results (Jaune):
-->“Though, if you would trust anyone to know about the titan, it would probably be the one remaining member of the group that made it.[...] [[GoneHorriblyRight Bahamut was my greatest creation, and my greatest failure.]] And I have reason to believe [[HijackingCthulhu we can control it again. At least long enough to trigger the self-destruct mechanism]]."
4th Apr '18 6:41:23 AM KrspaceT
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\n* ''Fanfic/SonOfTheWesternSea'', Chapter 4
--> They had compared him to Heracles. They’d been wrong.
--> Percy wasn’t the next Heracles.
--> He was the next [[DeityOfHumanOrigin Dionysus]].
3rd Apr '18 10:52:53 AM fighwitt
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* In ''ComicBook/{{Supergirl}}'' story ''Fanfic/HellsisterTrilogy'': "We have evidence that Darkseid has the son Mordru fathered with Satan Girl."
30th Mar '18 2:19:12 PM ZimFan89
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* In ''Fanfic/AManOfIron'' we have Syrio namedropping his master/teacher to Arya after implying he would be interested in her: ''ComicBook/{{Magneto}}''.

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* In ''Fanfic/AManOfIron'' ''Fanfic/AManOfIron''
** In Book 1, Chapter 21,
we have Syrio namedropping his master/teacher to Arya after implying he would be interested in her: ''ComicBook/{{Magneto}}''.



** The final line of Book 1:
-->'''[[CameBackWrong Sansa]]''': And I... shall be the [[GreaterScopeVillain Night's Queen.]]
** Chapter 7 of Book 2:
-->'''Thor''': I believe Melisandre... is an Asgardian. And if that is true you all may be in grave danger.
** Chapter 8 of Book 2 has Daenerys' new ally introduce himself.
-->'''Viktor''': In Westeros, I was known as Viktor Vondam. But in Qarth...I am '''[[ComicBook/DoctorDoom Doom]]'''.
** Chapter 12 of Book 2 has Jaime return to the Lannister camp, claiming to have escaped the North, and his behaviour convinces Tywin that he's not an imposter, and he introduces the two squires, a Baratheon bastard and a Northern girl, that helped him escape. Then they tell Tywin what their names are...
-->'''The Boy''': Petyr. (Gendry's cover name)
-->'''The Girl''': And Kat. (Arya's cover name)
** In Chapter 22 of Book 2, Mystique reveals that her mother died birthing her after a fire that destroyed her whole family. When Arya asks where this was, she replies "Summerhall". This means that her mother Jenny was Jenny of Oldstones, and that Mystique is therefore a granddaughter of Aegon V.



'''???:''' Me? I am the Governor.

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'''???:''' '''[[HiddenVillain ???]]:''' Me? I am [[NotQuiteDead the Governor.]]



--> ''[[Myth/KingArthur Arthur Pendragon]]''
** Chapter 10: Jazz finds a note...
--> ''J FENTON''\\

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--> ---> ''[[Myth/KingArthur Arthur Pendragon]]''
** *** Chapter 10: Jazz finds a note...
--> ---> ''J FENTON''\\



** Chapter 12: [[KilledOffForReal "They had killed the Fiddley Thing."]]
** Chapter 15: Grim's ''entire'' TheReasonYouSuckSpeech towards Madame Athena is this.

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** *** Chapter 12: [[KilledOffForReal "They had killed the Fiddley Thing."]]
** *** Chapter 15: Grim's ''entire'' TheReasonYouSuckSpeech towards Madame Athena is this.



** Chapter 25 has two:
--> '''Athena:''' [[TheChosenOne Jazz is the key.]] She will be the one who decides the fate of the world. Either she will allow [=ReGenesis=] to start a new dark age, or...or she'll die. Those are our only options.\\

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** *** Chapter 25 has two:
--> ---> '''Athena:''' [[TheChosenOne Jazz is the key.]] She will be the one who decides the fate of the world. Either she will allow [=ReGenesis=] to start a new dark age, or...or she'll die. Those are our only options.\\



** Chapter 31 has a few:
--> '''Dipper:''' King Arthur had a son, Galahad. A son with Morgan le Fay. His name was Mordred. Either Mabel and I are Mordred's descendants, or Wendy is. Which means we can close the vortex.\\

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** *** Chapter 31 has a few:
--> ---> '''Dipper:''' King Arthur had a son, Galahad. A son with Morgan le Fay. His name was Mordred. Either Mabel and I are Mordred's descendants, or Wendy is. Which means we can close the vortex.\\



--> '''Ford:''' ''Never!'' I'd never give this to you! [[ANaziByAnyOtherName You're just like the Nazis!]]\\

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--> ---> '''Ford:''' ''Never!'' I'd never give this to you! [[ANaziByAnyOtherName You're just like the Nazis!]]\\



** Chapter 24 starts out as what looks like a standalone. Then...
--> '''Trigger:''' Just a question. How'd you know about this Zim thing?\\

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** *** Chapter 24 starts out as what looks like a standalone. Then...
--> ---> '''Trigger:''' Just a question. How'd you know about this Zim thing?\\



** Chapter 29:
--> '''ComicBook/CaptainAmerica:''' Where are the hostages, Wilkus?\\

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** *** Chapter 29:
--> ---> '''ComicBook/CaptainAmerica:''' Where are the hostages, Wilkus?\\



** The last lines in chapter 31 set up the plot for next year:

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** *** The last lines in chapter 31 set up the plot for next year:



-->''"[[TheMole J. Edgar Hoover]] hung up the phone and sat back in his office chair. The infiltration of the United States was going just as planned."''
** Chapter 23:
--> '''PURITY trooper:''' What do we do[[note]]with Vlad Masters[[/note]], sir?\\

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-->''"[[TheMole --->''"[[TheMole J. Edgar Hoover]] hung up the phone and sat back in his office chair. The infiltration of the United States was going just as planned."''
** *** Chapter 23:
--> ---> '''PURITY trooper:''' What do we do[[note]]with Vlad Masters[[/note]], sir?\\



** Chapter 25:
--> "There's three of them; they have no names, but are codenamed WILHELM, FREIDRICH, and BARBAROSSA. They each carry a battery of large missiles - very short ranged, but extremely destructive. The missile warheads are based on stolen blueprints for the Grand Slam - the so-called 'earthquake bomb'.\\

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** *** Chapter 25:
--> ---> "There's three of them; they have no names, but are codenamed WILHELM, FREIDRICH, and BARBAROSSA. They each carry a battery of large missiles - very short ranged, but extremely destructive. The missile warheads are based on stolen blueprints for the Grand Slam - the so-called 'earthquake bomb'.\\



** Chapter 26 has a couple:
--> '''Ford:''' You inserted an order into a brain implant that would allow PURITY to [[BrainwashedAndCrazy take control of the military!]]\\

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** *** Chapter 26 has a couple:
--> ---> '''Ford:''' You inserted an order into a brain implant that would allow PURITY to [[BrainwashedAndCrazy take control of the military!]]\\



** Chapter 31, of course, has several:
--> '''[[CorruptPolitician President Fulton]]:''' Secretary Wilder, your group drives a hard bargain. But I think we can do business.\\

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** *** Chapter 31, of course, has several:
--> ---> '''[[CorruptPolitician President Fulton]]:''' Secretary Wilder, your group drives a hard bargain. But I think we can do business.\\
8th Mar '18 8:56:59 PM nombretomado
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* ''TurnaboutSubstitution'':

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* ''TurnaboutSubstitution'':''VisualNovel/ApolloJusticeAceAttorneyCase5TurnaboutSubstitution'':
22nd Feb '18 3:54:07 PM Storygirl000
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\n* The anthology series ''Fanfic/HalloweenUnspectacular'' has plenty of these.
** From chapter 31 of the first collection, when Zim sees the previously undescribed [[OmnicidalManiac ReGenesis]]:
--> ''[[CanonCharacterAllAlong "Dib?"]]''
** From ''Terror Australis Incognita'', chapter 20; Dani is reading up on a group of supposedly destroyed witch hunters when she discovers a secret message in a picture...
--> '''Dani:''' ''(reading)'' "Be warned – we cannot be stopped. We control the governments and the people – we will cleanse the earth of chaos and witchcraft. Signed in the year..."\\
''(her eyes go wide)''\\
'''Dani:''' [[OhCrap This message was [written] two years ago.]]
** From ''Mess Effect'', the last line in the Gaol/Governor storyline ends up revealing it to be a part of the MythArc:
--> "Sam? Do you know anything about 'El Dorado'?"
** Also related to the above, the reveal of the identity of the main villain of the El Dorado arc:
--> '''Dani:''' Wh-what are you?\\
'''???:''' Me? I am the Governor.
** ''The Final Push'' has plenty of them.
*** Chapter 7: There's an entire ''letter'' composed of wham lines, specifically the reveal that Jack Fenton's father -- Danny's grandfather -- is both using the alias [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Fiddleford McGucket and the writer of the Journals.]] And then there's the name Maddie found on the top of the Fenton family tree...
--> ''[[Myth/KingArthur Arthur Pendragon]]''
** Chapter 10: Jazz finds a note...
--> ''J FENTON''\\
''YOU ARE BEING GROOMED. ESCAPE ATHENA ASAP''\\
''ANON''
** Chapter 12: [[KilledOffForReal "They had killed the Fiddley Thing."]]
** Chapter 15: Grim's ''entire'' TheReasonYouSuckSpeech towards Madame Athena is this.
--> "''I'm'' a liar, Madame?[...]And what about ''you'', Madame? [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Have]] ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion you]]'' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion been honest with your associates?]] I mean, you took Jasmine under your wing without much deliberation, didn't you? You've trained her, brought her into your trust and made her think you as a friend, a ''mentor''...Does she know what waits at the end of the line? You've made cattle of her, Athena. You've fattened her up for slaughter and you're not even sorry about it. [[AtLeastIAdmitIt The difference between you and me is that I]] ''[[AtLeastIAdmitIt admit]]'' [[AtLeastIAdmitIt I'm a sociopathic liar]]. Do you?"
** Chapter 25 has two:
--> '''Athena:''' [[TheChosenOne Jazz is the key.]] She will be the one who decides the fate of the world. Either she will allow [=ReGenesis=] to start a new dark age, or...or she'll die. Those are our only options.\\
...\\
'''Mystery Figure:''' My name is Tammy Turner. [[KidFromTheFuture I come from twenty-five years in the future.]]
** Chapter 31 has a few:
--> '''Dipper:''' King Arthur had a son, Galahad. A son with Morgan le Fay. His name was Mordred. Either Mabel and I are Mordred's descendants, or Wendy is. Which means we can close the vortex.\\
...\\
'''Sandy:''' What happened? Where am I?\\
'''[[AuthorAvatar E350]]:''' In the place where [[ArcWords it doesn't always rain.]]
** From ''Lair of the Hack Writer'', there's these:
*** Chapter 17 sheds some new light on our BigBad team, PURITY...
--> '''Ford:''' ''Never!'' I'd never give this to you! [[ANaziByAnyOtherName You're just like the Nazis!]]\\
'''[[PsychicPowers Jarvis]]:''' ...just like the Nazis? They're...they're not just like the Nazis. They ''are'' the Nazis.
** Chapter 24 starts out as what looks like a standalone. Then...
--> '''Trigger:''' Just a question. How'd you know about this Zim thing?\\
'''Agent:''' Oh, some other government agency grabbed him. Nothing to worry about.\\
'''Powers:''' What agency? There's nobody else operating in the area!\\
'''Agent:''' Um...PURITY. Why?
** Chapter 29:
--> '''ComicBook/CaptainAmerica:''' Where are the hostages, Wilkus?\\
'''Wilkus:''' [[RedHerring They're long gone. Along with our best troops. What you've fought today was merely a sacrificial rear-guard. You were never intended to lose.]]
** The last lines in chapter 31 set up the plot for next year:
--> '''Admiral Massinger:''' My name is Admiral Eugene Massinger, and I am the Chairman of the Joint Chiefs. We're interested in seeing PURITY revived.\\
'''General Rausseman:''' Does the President know?\\
'''Admiral Massinger:''' What the President doesn't know won't hurt him.
** From ''Watchmeh'':
*** Chapter 5:
-->''"[[TheMole J. Edgar Hoover]] hung up the phone and sat back in his office chair. The infiltration of the United States was going just as planned."''
** Chapter 23:
--> '''PURITY trooper:''' What do we do[[note]]with Vlad Masters[[/note]], sir?\\
'''Rausseman:''' [[KilledOffForReal Kill him.]]
** Chapter 25:
--> "There's three of them; they have no names, but are codenamed WILHELM, FREIDRICH, and BARBAROSSA. They each carry a battery of large missiles - very short ranged, but extremely destructive. The missile warheads are based on stolen blueprints for the Grand Slam - the so-called 'earthquake bomb'.\\
\\
They are u-boats, [[OhCrap and they are slipping quietly into New York Harbour.]]
** Chapter 26 has a couple:
--> '''Ford:''' You inserted an order into a brain implant that would allow PURITY to [[BrainwashedAndCrazy take control of the military!]]\\
...\\
'''Allsworthy:''' ''[[ComicBook/{{Watchmen}} I did it thirty-five minutes ago.]]''
** Chapter 31, of course, has several:
--> '''[[CorruptPolitician President Fulton]]:''' Secretary Wilder, your group drives a hard bargain. But I think we can do business.\\
...\\
'''Rausseman:''' No, I think we ''both'' know how this ends. Kneel, if you please.\\
'''Stan:''' [[DefiantToTheEnd No.]] ''Never.'' Not to ''you.''\\
'''Rausseman:''' ''(nods)'' Very well.\\
''(He pulls the trigger.)''\\
...\\
'''Timmy:''' A...angel?\\
'''Lapis Lazuli:''' Trust me, I'm the farthest thing from that.\\
...\\
'''Lapis:''' You might have ''died''.\\
'''Stan:''' Yeah, I remember that. So why am I...what, undead?\\
'''Timmy:''' Don't thank us man. Thank ''her''.\\
'''Stan:''' "Her"?\\
'''Lapis:''' We call her...''[[CosmicEntity Phoenix]].''"\\
...\\
''"ComicBook/{{Galactus}} slowly awoke from his slumber. [[OhCrap It was time to feed.]]"''

20th Feb '18 1:37:16 PM NordRonnoc
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** In ''A New Day'', partway into the seventh chapter titled {{UsefulNotes/Boston}}, there was this line as Eric was doing his homework:
--->[[spoiler: It would have been nothing out of the ordinary for him, if not for a trial of smoke rising southwest of here.]]
--->[[spoiler: '''A couple paragraphs later''': A faint boom and another trial of smoke rose near the same spot. There was never a fire going on over there.]]
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