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7th Dec '16 9:13:13 PM Ferot_Dreadnaught
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-->'''Yang:''' [[Main/OutOfCharacterAlert Hello]], [[spoiler:Tai.]]

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-->'''Yang:''' [[Main/OutOfCharacterAlert [[OutOfCharacterAlert Hello]], [[spoiler:Tai.]]
7th Dec '16 9:03:35 PM iroanxi
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* ''FanFic/RobbReturns'' has Chapter 23. ''[[ArcWords The Others come. The Stark calls for aid. You are needed.]]'' They also act as this InUniverse.
** Chapter 45. [[spoiler:"My champion," Arryn said with a savage smile. "The sea."]]
28th Nov '16 8:57:07 PM ImperialMajestyXO
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10090792/1/Zero-no-Tsukaima-Saito-the-Onmyoji Zero no Tsukaima: Saito the Onmyoji]]'' drops this bombshell while Saito is trying to figure out what's wrong with Louise's magic:

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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10090792/1/Zero-no-Tsukaima-Saito-the-Onmyoji Zero no Tsukaima: Saito the Onmyoji]]'' ''Fanfic/ZeroNoTsukaimaSaitoTheOnmyoji'' drops this bombshell while Saito is trying to figure out what's wrong with Louise's magic:
19th Nov '16 1:22:40 PM Beedle
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** Chapter 10:
--->'''Gendo''': Then you will do as you are ordered. Or I will separate you and the Second Child permanently.
17th Nov '16 9:17:39 PM RaineyH
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* The ''RWBY'' fic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11866291/1/Seven-for-a-Secret Seven for a Secret]]'' ends on a nice one:
-->'''Yang:''' [[Main/OutOfCharacterAlert Hello]], [[spoiler:Tai.]]
17th Nov '16 8:08:17 AM Orbiting
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--->'''Gendo''' (to Shinji and Asuka):''"As of this moment, you are no longer Evangelion Pilots. Leave."''

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--->'''Gendo''' (to ''[to Shinji and Asuka):''"As Asuka]'': As of this moment, you are no longer Evangelion Pilots. Leave."''



** [[spoiler: Rei's discussion with Kaworu]] after Asuka's birthday party has a rare case where ArcWords are used in this manner.

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** [[spoiler: Rei's discussion with Kaworu]] Kaworu after Asuka's birthday party has a rare case where ArcWords are used in this manner.



--->'''Kaworu''': (to Rei) [[spoiler:''"I have met Shinji Ikari before. Loved him. I think. I have seen myself die a hundred times, usually by his hand. I think."'']]

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--->'''Kaworu''': (to Rei) [[spoiler:''"I ''[to Rei]'' I have met Shinji Ikari before. Loved him. I think. I have seen myself die a hundred times, usually by his hand. I think."'']]



'''[[spoiler:Kaoru]]:''' Actually, they're my grandparents.

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'''[[spoiler:Kaoru]]:''' '''Kaoru:''' Actually, they're my grandparents.



-->[[spoiler: This is not a place of honor. No great deed is commemorated here. Nothing of value is here.]]

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-->[[spoiler: This -->This is not a place of honor. No great deed is commemorated here. Nothing of value is here.]]



--> '''Harry:''' [[spoiler:Hello, Lord Voldemort.]]
--> '''Quirrel:'''[[spoiler:Hello, Tom Riddle.]]
* Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin, the end of chapter 78. [[spoiler: "Please, Harry, we're all friends here. Call me Regulus." This line not only reveals the true identity of the fake Gilderoy Lockhart but also that his strange actions over the past year have really been laying the groundwork for freeing Sirius Black from Azkaban.]]

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--> '''Harry:''' [[spoiler:Hello, Hello, Lord Voldemort.]]
Voldemort.
--> '''Quirrel:'''[[spoiler:Hello, '''Quirrel:''' Hello, Tom Riddle.]]
Riddle.
* Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin, the end of chapter 78. [[spoiler: "Please, Harry, we're all friends here. Call me Regulus." This line not only reveals the true identity of the fake Gilderoy Lockhart but also that his strange actions over the past year have really been laying the groundwork for freeing Sirius Black from Azkaban.]]



--> '''[[spoiler: Head Klein]]:''' How old are you, Calvin?

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--> '''[[spoiler: Head Klein]]:''' '''Head Klein:''' How old are you, Calvin?



--> '''[[spoiler: Head Klein]]:''' What year is it now?

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--> '''[[spoiler: Head Klein]]:''' '''Head Klein:''' What year is it now?



--> '''[[spoiler: Head Klein]]:''' And what year were you born?
--> '''Calvin:''' [[spoiler: I was born in 1979...[[Main/ExplainExplainOhCrap I'm six years old, and I was born nearly 35 years ago...]] (beat) What have they done?]]

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--> '''[[spoiler: Head Klein]]:''' '''Head Klein:''' And what year were you born?
--> '''Calvin:''' [[spoiler: I was born in 1979...[[Main/ExplainExplainOhCrap I'm six years old, and I was born nearly 35 years ago...]] (beat) ''[beat]'' What have they done?]]done?



--> '''Law Of Identity''': "You sure are finding the flaws rather conspicuously, aren’t you? I think you deserve one more test after what happened today."
--> '''Keena''': "Oh yeah, what's that?"
--> [[spoiler: Alternate Dimension Keena]]: "[[AnotherDimension That would be me.]]"

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--> '''Law Of Identity''': "You You sure are finding the flaws rather conspicuously, aren’t you? I think you deserve one more test after what happened today."
today.
--> '''Keena''': "Oh Oh yeah, what's that?"
--> [[spoiler: Alternate
that?
-->'''Alternate
Dimension Keena]]: "[[AnotherDimension Keena''': [[AnotherDimension That would be me.]]"]]



--> '''[[Manga/YumekuiMerry Mystletainn]]''': "The name's Mystletainn. And frankly, you are all ripe for the killing...heh heh heh..."
* [[FanFic/TheVerySecretDiary "You have mentioned this You-Know-Who several times, Virginia. But I do not know who. Won't you tell me?"]]

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--> '''[[Manga/YumekuiMerry Mystletainn]]''': "The The name's Mystletainn. And frankly, you are all ripe for the killing...heh heh heh..."
heh...
* [[FanFic/TheVerySecretDiary ''FanFic/TheVerySecretDiary'': "You have mentioned this You-Know-Who several times, Virginia. But I do not know who. Won't you tell me?"]] me?"



-->'''Yukino''': "There's a fourth time portal!"

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-->'''Yukino''': "There's There's a fourth time portal!"portal!



-->'''Mai''': "I should have known it was you... Shiho-chan."

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-->'''Mai''': "I I should have known it was you... Shiho-chan."



-->'''The Obsidian Lord''': "That is incorrect; you are speaking to [[DemonicPossession the Usurper.]]."

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-->'''The Obsidian Lord''': "That That is incorrect; you are speaking to [[DemonicPossession the Usurper.]]."



-->'''The Advisor''': "You have not only triumphed over the rules of the Hime Carnival itself, slain its mastermind and managed to do so with most of you still alive... but you have also defeated several of my most powerful creations."

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-->'''The Advisor''': "You You have not only triumphed over the rules of the Hime Carnival itself, slain its mastermind and managed to do so with most of you still alive... but you have also defeated several of my most powerful creations."



--> Chapter 9: " Kai. Kai Leng. But you can call me Ghost."

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--> Chapter 9: " Kai."Kai. Kai Leng. But you can call me Ghost."



-->'''Nanoha''':When were you going to tell us that we weren't going to Alhazred?

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-->'''Nanoha''':When -->'''Nanoha''': When were you going to tell us that we weren't going to Alhazred?



-->'''Cedric Diggory''': You can call me...[[spoiler: Ivan Ooze.]]

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-->'''Cedric Diggory''': You can call me...[[spoiler: Ivan Ooze.]]



-->'''[[spoiler:Twilight Twinkle]]:''' Behold, Nightmare [[spoiler:Eclipse]].

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-->'''[[spoiler:Twilight Twinkle]]:''' -->'''Twilight Twinkle:''' Behold, Nightmare [[spoiler:Eclipse]].Eclipse.



-->'''Narration:''' [[spoiler:She]] blinked.

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-->'''Narration:''' [[spoiler:She]] She blinked.



--> The couple started to lean in to seal the bargain when [[spoiler: [[MaternityCrisis a loud splash of liquid was heard]]]].
* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10022203/1/Catch-A-Brief-Reflection Catch A Brief Reflection]] has Bardot saying this to [[spoiler:Barney]]:

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--> The couple started to lean in to seal the bargain when [[spoiler: [[MaternityCrisis a loud splash of liquid was heard]]]].
heard]].
* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10022203/1/Catch-A-Brief-Reflection Catch A Brief Reflection]] has Bardot saying this to [[spoiler:Barney]]:Barney:



---> '''Sorcha''': [[spoiler: [[DoomedByCanon The Osiris]]]].

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---> '''Sorcha''': [[spoiler: [[DoomedByCanon The Osiris]]]].Osiris]].



* ''Fanfic/MovieNightAtFreddys'': Mike utters this line when he realizes that [[spoiler: Freddy Fazbear is no longer on the show stage]]:
--> '''Mike:''' No! No. No! Fuck no! Fuck everything! Where’d he go? [[spoiler: ''Where the fuck did Fazbear go?'']]

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* ''Fanfic/MovieNightAtFreddys'': Mike utters this line when he realizes that [[spoiler: Freddy Fazbear is no longer on the show stage]]:
stage:
--> '''Mike:''' No! No. No! Fuck no! Fuck everything! Where’d he go? [[spoiler: ''Where the fuck did Fazbear go?'']]go?''



-->[[spoiler:Jeremiah's]] Sutherland then exploded, the cockpit still in it's torso.

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-->[[spoiler:Jeremiah's]] -->Jeremiah's Sutherland then exploded, the cockpit still in it's torso.



-->'''Soma''':[[spoiler:How can Nakiri cook just like [[MissingMom mom]]?]]

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-->'''Soma''':[[spoiler:How -->'''Soma''': How can Nakiri cook just like [[MissingMom mom]]?]]mom]]?



--> Her voice a wavering croak, [[OriginalCharacter Amanda]] said, "[[spoiler:Gone. He's gone.]]"

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--> Her voice a wavering croak, [[OriginalCharacter Amanda]] said, "[[spoiler:Gone."Gone. He's gone.]]""



--> He reached out and stroked her hair, [[spoiler: [[TimeSkip the long brown strands having long since faded into white]].]]

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--> He reached out and stroked her hair, [[spoiler: [[TimeSkip the long brown strands having long since faded into white]].]]



--> '''Adam Taurus''': "[[spoiler:[[BigBad Siegmund Schnee]]]], you drive a hard bargain."
--> '''Ozpin''': ''(in reference to a certain piece of equipment which [[spoiler:Siegmund]] is suspected to have snuck in with)'' "[[OhCrap An hour bef...]][[TheReveal dear Dust.]]"

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--> '''Adam Taurus''': "[[spoiler:[[BigBad [[BigBad Siegmund Schnee]]]], Schnee]], you drive a hard bargain."
bargain.
--> '''Ozpin''': ''(in reference to a certain piece of equipment which [[spoiler:Siegmund]] Siegmund is suspected to have snuck in with)'' "[[OhCrap An hour bef...]][[TheReveal dear Dust.]]"



--> '''Fiora:''' ''(upon seeing Emmeryn)'' [[spoiler:"....[[LukeYouAreMyFather Mother?]]'']]

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--> '''Fiora:''' ''(upon ''[upon seeing Emmeryn)'' [[spoiler:"....Emmeryn]'' ....[[LukeYouAreMyFather Mother?]]'']]Mother?]]



-->'''Joy''': “Hopes and ''dreams''! That’s ''it''! Sadness, you’re a ''genius''!”

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-->'''Joy''': “Hopes Hopes and ''dreams''! That’s ''it''! Sadness, you’re a ''genius''!” ''genius''!



-->'''Riley''': "Um, guys? [[spoiler:What does white mean]]?"

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-->'''Riley''': "Um, Um, guys? [[spoiler:What What does white mean]]?"mean?



-->'''Ann''': "[[spoiler:Who's Disgust?]]"

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-->'''Ann''': "[[spoiler:Who's Disgust?]]"Who's Disgust?



--> "The console wasn't turning a bright, comforting yellow as normal. In fact, it wasn't doing a thing. [[spoiler: That is, until it turned white.]]"
* In the third installment of the FanFic/ElementalChessTrilogy, Edward Elric sends a desperate telegram to his friends at the Briggs fortress to let them know the outcome of [[spoiler:Roy Mustang's murder trial]]. It contains just one word: ''[[ChessMotif Checkmate]].''

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--> "The console wasn't turning a bright, comforting yellow as normal. In fact, it wasn't doing a thing. [[spoiler: That is, until it turned white.]]"
"
* In the third installment of the FanFic/ElementalChessTrilogy, Edward Elric sends a desperate telegram to his friends at the Briggs fortress to let them know the outcome of [[spoiler:Roy Roy Mustang's murder trial]].trial. It contains just one word: ''[[ChessMotif Checkmate]].''



-->Part 3.1: “The name's Tom,” he greeted me. “Tom Calvert.” [[spoiler: Thomas Calvert, aka Coil, was her boss before he betrayed her and she killed him.]]

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-->Part 3.1: “The name's Tom,” he greeted me. “Tom Calvert.” [[spoiler: Thomas Calvert, aka Coil, was her boss before he betrayed her and she killed him.]]



* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/290837/ What's Your Story, Morning Glory?]]
--> '''Goldie:''' ''"Oh, I need you to autograph something, mommy! I made a new friend today, and she said this is her favorite book, so I told her I'd get you to autograph it."''
--> '''Galaxy:''' ''"Well, if it's for a friend of yours, not to mention a fan, I can hardly say no. What's her name?"''
--> '''Goldie:''' ''[[HeartwarmingOrphan "Morning Glory."]]''
--> '''Galaxy:''' ''[[ParentalAbandonment *Suddenly goes very still.**]]''

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* [[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/290837/ What's Your Story, Morning Glory?]]
Glory?]]''
--> '''Goldie:''' ''"Oh, Oh, I need you to autograph something, mommy! I made a new friend today, and she said this is her favorite book, so I told her I'd get you to autograph it."''
it.
--> '''Galaxy:''' ''"Well, Well, if it's for a friend of yours, not to mention a fan, I can hardly say no. What's her name?"''
name?
--> '''Goldie:''' ''[[HeartwarmingOrphan "Morning [[HeartwarmingOrphan Morning Glory."]]''
]]
--> '''Galaxy:''' ''[[ParentalAbandonment *Suddenly [Suddenly goes very still.**]]'']]]''



'''Tom:''' Yes, you do. You know who. You know who... ''[[spoiler:You-Know-Who.]]''

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'''Tom:''' Yes, you do. You know who. You know who... ''[[spoiler:You-Know-Who.]]''''You-Know-Who.''



** From Chapter 13, more for the implication that the speaker is [[spoiler: a Boov]], than what they're saying:

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** From Chapter 13, more for the implication that the speaker is [[spoiler: a Boov]], Boov, than what they're saying:



** The first in Chapter 9 when [[spoiler: Rai]] joins the Black Knights with C.C.
-->'''C.C ''': "after all that was the deal we made... [[spoiler: E.E]]."

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** The first in Chapter 9 when [[spoiler: Rai]] Rai joins the Black Knights with C.C.
-->'''C.C ''': "after After all that was the deal we made... [[spoiler: E.E]]."E.



-->'''Harald Thompson''' "Now do you Kaguya Sumeragi know anything called the [[spoiler: Sumeragi Legacy]]".
** Chapter seventeen when Rai is reunited with [[spoiler: E.E]].
-->'''Rai''' I..I remember now.. it's all coming back to me.. [[spoiler: E.E]].

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-->'''Harald Thompson''' "Now Now do you Kaguya Sumeragi know anything called the [[spoiler: Sumeragi Legacy]]".
Legacy.
** Chapter seventeen when Rai is reunited with [[spoiler: E.E]].E.
-->'''Rai''' I..I remember now.. it's all coming back to me.. [[spoiler: E.E]].E.
14th Nov '16 5:10:53 PM nombretomado
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* From the ''KatawaShoujo'' fic, [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=2708#p45716 From Shizune's perspective]]

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* From the ''KatawaShoujo'' ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo'' fic, [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=2708#p45716 From Shizune's perspective]]



* In [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8235065/1/The_Greatest_Gift_of_the_Heart The Greatest Gift Of The Heart]], [[KatawaShoujo Hisao]], after Hanako's bad ending, [[ItsAWonderfulPlot gets to see what things would have been like if he had never come to Yamaku]], and finds out that all his friends are miserable. The worst news of all, however, comes when he gets to check in on Hanako's status.

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* In [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8235065/1/The_Greatest_Gift_of_the_Heart The Greatest Gift Of The Heart]], [[KatawaShoujo [[VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo Hisao]], after Hanako's bad ending, [[ItsAWonderfulPlot gets to see what things would have been like if he had never come to Yamaku]], and finds out that all his friends are miserable. The worst news of all, however, comes when he gets to check in on Hanako's status.
13th Nov '16 1:32:19 AM Citizen_Alan
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* Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin, the end of chapter 78. [[spoiler: "Please, Harry, we're all friends here. Call me Regulus." This line not only reveals the true identity of the fake Gilderoy Lockhart but also that his strange actions over the past year have really been laying the groundwork for freeing Sirius Black from Azkaban.]]
29th Oct '16 6:13:51 PM nombretomado
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* ''HarryPotterAndTheMethodsOfRationality'':

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* ''HarryPotterAndTheMethodsOfRationality'':''Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheMethodsOfRationality'':
28th Oct '16 1:10:02 PM Romancechina999
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* ''Fanfic/CodeGeassColorlessMemories'' has a fair few examples.
** The first in Chapter 9 when [[spoiler: Rai]] joins the Black Knights with C.C.
-->'''C.C ''': "after all that was the deal we made... [[spoiler: E.E]]."
** Next one in Backstage 4 when Kaguya runs into an OSI agent near her Family's Temple.
-->'''Harald Thompson''' "Now do you Kaguya Sumeragi know anything called the [[spoiler: Sumeragi Legacy]]".
** Chapter seventeen when Rai is reunited with [[spoiler: E.E]].
-->'''Rai''' I..I remember now.. it's all coming back to me.. [[spoiler: E.E]].
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