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--> '''Hertz:''' Ha! No. If I was your mom... '''I''' wouldn't even '''be''' here.
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--> '''Hertz:''' Ha! No. If I was your mom... '''I''' wouldn't even '''be''' here.here.
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* InstantlyProvenWrong: While stopping at an island, Captain Nora has everyone hunt wild boars and threatens to leave anyone behind who doesn't bring back at least one. She later reveals this is a MotivationalLie and she doesn't abandon people on the island. Just then a bearded man in rags appears claiming she did just that. Nora points out he went missing, they stayed there for several days looking for him and this happened ''one month'' earlier.
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* MoodWhiplash: After [[spoiler: getting treated to seeing whatever's left of her dad]], we cut immediately to a flashback of an adorable Zeppelin celebrating her fifth birthday.
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* MoodWhiplash: MoodWhiplash:
** After [[spoiler: getting treated to seeing whatever's left of her dad]], we cut immediately to a flashback of an adorable Zeppelin celebrating her fifth birthday.
** After [[spoiler: getting treated to seeing whatever's left of her dad]], we cut immediately to a flashback of an adorable Zeppelin celebrating her fifth birthday.
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* WellDoneDaughterGirl: Zepplin suffers from this bad in regards to her father. What makes it brutal is that he died a war hero when she was a little girl.
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* WellDoneDaughterGirl: WellDoneSonGuy: Zepplin suffers from this bad in regards to her father. What makes it brutal is that he died a war hero when she was a little girl.
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* {{AKA47}}: [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comics/1459468780-542.png The guns in the hands of the Steinbech protagonists]] as they go off to catch a ride on a boat for a mission strongly resembles [[https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/1/1a/FG42.jpg late-war FG 42s]] (seen on the bottom).
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* {{AKA47}}: [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comics/1459468780-542.png The guns in carried by the hands of the Steinbech protagonists]] as they go off head to catch a ride on a boat for a mission strongly resembles resemble [[https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/1/1a/FG42.jpg late-war FG 42s]] (seen on the bottom).
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A webcomic by Melissa Albino, aka Nalem, ''[[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/ Lighter Than Heir]]'' is the story of Zeppelin von Schultheiss, a volant (flying human) girl who's tired of living in the shadow of her famous father. Growing up as the only daughter of deceased war hero left Zeppelin with high expectations and a massive chip on her shoulder, so she signed up for the military as soon as she could, determined to become an even bigger war hero than he was. With an ego as big as hers, she'll be in for a surprise, because the army is not known for catering to the whims of 19 year old girls, even if they are the only daughter of the late, great Major Hemmel Von Schultheiss.
Updates every Tuesday and Friday.
Updates every Tuesday and Friday.
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* AdultFear: A lot of chilling things in this story can happen in real life.
** Being strangled to death.
** Being tortured to death in a human experiment.
** Being strangled to death.
** Being tortured to death in a human experiment.
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* AdultFear: A lot With a cast of chilling things in this young adults and a string of horrible war crimes, there's no end to the adult fear. This story can happen in real life.
** Being strangled to death.
** Being tortured to death in a human experiment.has:
** Being strangled to death.
** Being tortured to death in a human experiment.
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** Soldiers killing children. [[note]]When one commenter complained about this scene being over-the-top, the author sarcastically stated that such things don't happen in real life and then promptly linked to a news article about something similar happening in real life.[[/note]]
** Your home country being invaded by an enemy that does not value civilian lives.
** Being imprisoned by your country's government because of your ancestry.
** Your home country being invaded by an enemy that does not value civilian lives.
** Being imprisoned by your country's government because of your ancestry.
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** Soldiers killing children. [[note]]When one commenter someone complained about this scene being over-the-top, the author sarcastically stated that such things don't happen in real life and then life- before promptly linked linking to a news article about something similar happening in real life.[[/note]]
**Your home country being invaded A military invasion by an enemy that does not value civilian lives.
** Mass imprisonment on the basis of ancestry.
** [[spoiler: Beingimprisoned by your country's tortured to death in a government because of your ancestry.experiment.]]
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** Mass imprisonment on the basis of ancestry.
** [[spoiler: Being
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* AmusingInjuries: Roth unnecessarily knees Schultz [[GroinAttack in the groin]] during a hand-to-hand exercise, which is naturally inherently funny. One of Roth's fingers gets shot off in a training accident, and it is treated as humorous (it gets reattached). Averted with most of the other injuries shown, which are treated seriously.
* AnArmAndALeg: The comic does not shy away from showing the horrific effects of military weaponry. Fortunately for Steinbach's soldiers, their ArtificialLimbs are top-notch.
* ANaziByAnyOtherName: [[spoiler: The Zamoran Government.]] The similarities include[[spoiler: being forbidden from holding a military after losing a war with a neighbor country, being resentful with said neighbor, building up a formidable military in secrecy, performing grisly human experiments on unwilling victims in secret laboratories, being obsessed with genetic "superiority", launching surprize attacks without warning, and massacring entire cities. [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/467-destroyed Even their banner looks similar to the one used by Nazi Germany]].]].
* AnArmAndALeg: The comic does not shy away from showing the horrific effects of military weaponry. Fortunately for Steinbach's soldiers, their ArtificialLimbs are top-notch.
* ANaziByAnyOtherName: [[spoiler: The Zamoran Government.]] The similarities include[[spoiler: being forbidden from holding a military after losing a war with a neighbor country, being resentful with said neighbor, building up a formidable military in secrecy, performing grisly human experiments on unwilling victims in secret laboratories, being obsessed with genetic "superiority", launching surprize attacks without warning, and massacring entire cities. [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/467-destroyed Even their banner looks similar to the one used by Nazi Germany]].]].
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* AlmostKiss: In the last panel of [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/457-down-here page 458]], a tipsy Zeppelin and a tipsy Hertz get very, very close after the former falls on top of the latter... who proceeds to unceremoniously shove her off in the first panel of the next page.
* AmusingInjuries: Roth unnecessarily knees Schultz [[GroinAttack in the groin]] during a hand-to-hand exercise, which is naturallyinherently funny. One Later, one of Roth's fingers gets shot off in a training accident, and it is treated as humorous (it gets reattached). Averted with most of the other injuries shown, which are treated seriously.
* AnArmAndALeg: The comic does not shy away from showing the horrific effects of military weaponry. Fortunately forSteinbach's Steinbech's soldiers, their ArtificialLimbs are top-notch.
** Well, military weaponry as well as, in [[spoiler:Avery Roemer's]] case, lightning rods and gravity.
* ANaziByAnyOtherName: [[spoiler: The Zamoran Government.]] The similaritiesinclude[[spoiler: being include [[spoiler:being forbidden from holding a military after losing a war with a neighbor neighboring country, being resentful with towards said neighbor, building up a formidable military in secrecy, secret, performing grisly human experiments on unwilling victims in secret laboratories, being obsessed with genetic "superiority", launching surprize surprise attacks without warning, and massacring entire cities. [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/467-destroyed Even Hell, with a splash of black paint, their banner looks similar wouldn't fail to evoke a resemblance to the one used by Nazi Germany]].flag]].]].
* AmusingInjuries: Roth unnecessarily knees Schultz [[GroinAttack in the groin]] during a hand-to-hand exercise, which is naturally
* AnArmAndALeg: The comic does not shy away from showing the horrific effects of military weaponry. Fortunately for
** Well, military weaponry as well as, in [[spoiler:Avery Roemer's]] case, lightning rods and gravity.
* ANaziByAnyOtherName: [[spoiler: The Zamoran Government.]] The similarities
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* ArtisticLicensePhysics: Volents are said to be so buoyant that they can't sink, like a balloon. Zeppelin later uses this to crush a Volent by pressing them against the water. Anyone who has actually tried to hold a inflatable ball under water will know however that it's certainly ''possible'' to submerge something very buoyant (and it won't be harmed), it's just difficult.
* AssholeVictim: The Zamoran farmer who the squad robs and who Zeppelin knocks out. While he was indeed defending his farm from robbers, [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/303-so-not-helping when he cornered three of them]] he was going to murder them in cold blood instead of simply holding them until the police arrive.
* BlackAndGreyMorality: Neither Steinbech nor Zamora are really upstanding countries, but the former is shown to be less brutal than the latter. [[spoiler: Steinbech holds racist attitudes towards Zamorans, used firebombs on Zamorian Cities during the last war, and during the current war handed power from a freely elected parliament to a military dictatorship. However the Zamorians perform grisly human experiments in an effort to produce super soldiers, assassinated the Steinbech Prime Minister, and attacked Steinbech cities unprovoked.]]
* BloodKnight: Zeppelin, shading into TheBerserker after she escapes Doctor Villalobos. Face her in combat and she will kill you, even if she has to sacrifice parts of her own body to do so. Already HotBlooded with a hair-trigger BerserkButton and a well-founded hatred for the Zamorans, Zeppelin is teetering on the brink of becoming something much worse. Hertz recognizes the signs even if nobody else does.
* BreakTheHaughty: Austerlitz admits that a big part of his DrillSergeantNasty training was supposed to do this for Zeppelin. Despite it failing, he grudgingly lets her graduate from training with the rest. [[spoiler: Her disastrous tour of Zamora and finding her father's butchered corpse]] have done a much better job of being this trope.
* CerebusSyndrome: Even in its more violent and dramatic bits, the strip stays relatively lighthearted - until Zeppelin [[spoiler:is vivisected, then finds her father's corpse]], at which point [[TwoLinesNoWaiting all the plotlines]] start to get very dark, very fast. The comic picks up with lightheartedness there after, but grimness sits alongside it very clearly.
* CycleOfRevenge: The Zamorans still resent Steinbech's actions during the war [[spoiler:against Boyarov]], to the point of infiltrating their bases and sabotaging their weapons. This, understandably, annoys the Steiners, and around and around it goes. Roth is nearly killed by a scout who beats him bloody because she blames Steiners for her family's death when she was eight--never mind that he was twelve at the time, and thus clearly not in any way responsible.
* AssholeVictim: The Zamoran farmer who the squad robs and who Zeppelin knocks out. While he was indeed defending his farm from robbers, [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/303-so-not-helping when he cornered three of them]] he was going to murder them in cold blood instead of simply holding them until the police arrive.
* BlackAndGreyMorality: Neither Steinbech nor Zamora are really upstanding countries, but the former is shown to be less brutal than the latter. [[spoiler: Steinbech holds racist attitudes towards Zamorans, used firebombs on Zamorian Cities during the last war, and during the current war handed power from a freely elected parliament to a military dictatorship. However the Zamorians perform grisly human experiments in an effort to produce super soldiers, assassinated the Steinbech Prime Minister, and attacked Steinbech cities unprovoked.]]
* BloodKnight: Zeppelin, shading into TheBerserker after she escapes Doctor Villalobos. Face her in combat and she will kill you, even if she has to sacrifice parts of her own body to do so. Already HotBlooded with a hair-trigger BerserkButton and a well-founded hatred for the Zamorans, Zeppelin is teetering on the brink of becoming something much worse. Hertz recognizes the signs even if nobody else does.
* BreakTheHaughty: Austerlitz admits that a big part of his DrillSergeantNasty training was supposed to do this for Zeppelin. Despite it failing, he grudgingly lets her graduate from training with the rest. [[spoiler: Her disastrous tour of Zamora and finding her father's butchered corpse]] have done a much better job of being this trope.
* CerebusSyndrome: Even in its more violent and dramatic bits, the strip stays relatively lighthearted - until Zeppelin [[spoiler:is vivisected, then finds her father's corpse]], at which point [[TwoLinesNoWaiting all the plotlines]] start to get very dark, very fast. The comic picks up with lightheartedness there after, but grimness sits alongside it very clearly.
* CycleOfRevenge: The Zamorans still resent Steinbech's actions during the war [[spoiler:against Boyarov]], to the point of infiltrating their bases and sabotaging their weapons. This, understandably, annoys the Steiners, and around and around it goes. Roth is nearly killed by a scout who beats him bloody because she blames Steiners for her family's death when she was eight--never mind that he was twelve at the time, and thus clearly not in any way responsible.
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Neither Steinbech nor Zamora are really upstanding countries, but the former is shown to be less brutal than the latter. [[spoiler: Steinbech holds racist attitudes towards Zamorans, used firebombs on
* BloodKnight: Zeppelin, shading into TheBerserker after she [[spoiler: escapes Doctor
* BreakTheHaughty: Austerlitz admits that a big part of his DrillSergeantNasty training was supposed to do this for Zeppelin. Despite it failing, he grudgingly lets her graduate from training with the rest. [[spoiler: Her disastrous tour of Zamora and finding her father's butchered corpse]] have done a much better job of
* CerebusSyndrome: Even in its more violent and dramatic bits, the strip stays relatively lighthearted - until Zeppelin [[spoiler:is vivisected, then finds her father's corpse]], at which point [[TwoLinesNoWaiting all the
* CycleOfRevenge: The Zamorans still resent Steinbech's actions during the war [[spoiler:against Boyarov]], to the point of infiltrating their bases and sabotaging their weapons. This, understandably, annoys the Steiners, and around and around it goes. Roth is nearly killed by a scout who beats him bloody because she blames Steiners for her family's death when she was
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* DisappearedDad: Zeppelin is still angry at her father for failing to return. [[spoiler: Finding out just what happened to him, that he was tortured to death and vivisected by Zamoran Scientists, is even worse]].
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* DisappearedDad: Zeppelin is still angry at her father for failing to return. [[spoiler: Finding out just what happened to him, him- that he was tortured to death death, and vivisected by Zamoran Scientists, is even worse]].scientists- isn't the explanation she wanted.]]
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* FireForgedFriends: The different members of the squad become less hostile towards each other as the circumstances they endure become progressively worse. [[spoiler: Especially when the war begins.]]
* {{Flight}}: A rare few humans, such as Zeppelin and her father before her, are "volants", capable of unaided flight. It's not very well known how they've come about, how common they are, or just what makes a volant, but it does seem to be naturally occurring, and they ''are'' a known quantity in the world; Hemmel was sought out to join the Steinbech military specifically so he could be groomed as a war hero and icon. [[spoiler:At some point before the events of the comic started, Zamora started experimenting on humans to try and "induce" volant traits in humans, and are eventually capable of mass-producing them for wartime.]] Of note, despite the rough technology level of the setting, Volants are the ''only'' current source of human flight, making them all the more valuable.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: A bystander comments that Zepplin's mom has seen better days in the 6th comic...because it's revealed she was a pinup girl for propaganda in the previous war 549 comics later.
* FullBoarAction: At one point the squad needs to capture some wild boars.
* HeadInTheSandManagement: The Steinbech Chancellor tried to use diplomacy to prevent another war [[spoiler: even after the Zamoran Military attacked an extraction convoy and tortured three of his own soldiers. He ends up being assassinated by Zamoran Sniper and control of the government is given over to the Steinbech military.]]
* {{Flight}}: A rare few humans, such as Zeppelin and her father before her, are "volants", capable of unaided flight. It's not very well known how they've come about, how common they are, or just what makes a volant, but it does seem to be naturally occurring, and they ''are'' a known quantity in the world; Hemmel was sought out to join the Steinbech military specifically so he could be groomed as a war hero and icon. [[spoiler:At some point before the events of the comic started, Zamora started experimenting on humans to try and "induce" volant traits in humans, and are eventually capable of mass-producing them for wartime.]] Of note, despite the rough technology level of the setting, Volants are the ''only'' current source of human flight, making them all the more valuable.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: A bystander comments that Zepplin's mom has seen better days in the 6th comic...because it's revealed she was a pinup girl for propaganda in the previous war 549 comics later.
* FullBoarAction: At one point the squad needs to capture some wild boars.
* HeadInTheSandManagement: The Steinbech Chancellor tried to use diplomacy to prevent another war [[spoiler: even after the Zamoran Military attacked an extraction convoy and tortured three of his own soldiers. He ends up being assassinated by Zamoran Sniper and control of the government is given over to the Steinbech military.]]
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* FireForgedFriends: The different members of the squad become less hostile towards each other as the circumstances they endure become progressively worse. [[spoiler: Especially when the new war begins.]]
* {{Flight}}: A rare few humans, such as Zeppelin and her father before her, are "volants", capable ofunaided unassisted free flight. It's not very well known how they've come about, to be, how common they are, or just what makes a volant, but it does seem to be naturally occurring, and they there ''are'' a known quantity in the world; Hemmel was sought out to join the Steinbech military specifically so he could be groomed as a war hero and icon. [[spoiler:At some point before the events of the comic started, Zamora started experimenting on humans to try and "induce" volant traits in humans, and are eventually became capable of mass-producing them for wartime.]] Of note, despite the rough technology level of the setting, Volants volants are the ''only'' current source of human flight, making them all the more valuable.
* {{Foreshadowing}}:A In the [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/006-infamous sixth comic]], a bystander comments that Zepplin's mom has seen better days in the 6th comic...because days. [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/555-be-brave 549 comics later]], it's revealed that [[IWasQuiteALooker she was a propaganda pinup girl for propaganda in the previous war 549 comics later.
* FullBoarAction: Atwar]]. It's nothing major plot-wise, but it's one point hell of a long-term setup.
* FunnyBackgroundEvent: After they AlmostKiss, Hertz and Zeppelin get into cute background shenanigans at thesquad needs to capture some wild boars.
bar, as Ria and Schultz have an angst-ridden foreground event.
* HarshWordImpact: A drunken Zeppelin gets Hertz with one of these.
--> '''Zeppelin:''' Oh! Oh! Maybe that's why you can't fly!
* HeadInTheSandManagement: The Steinbech Chancellor tried to use diplomacy to prevent another war [[spoiler: even after the ZamoranMilitary military attacked an extraction convoy and tortured three of his the Chancellor's own soldiers. He ends up being assassinated by a Zamoran Sniper sniper, and control of the government is given over to the Steinbech military.]]
* {{Flight}}: A rare few humans, such as Zeppelin and her father before her, are "volants", capable of
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
* FullBoarAction: At
* FunnyBackgroundEvent: After they AlmostKiss, Hertz and Zeppelin get into cute background shenanigans at the
* HarshWordImpact: A drunken Zeppelin gets Hertz with one of these.
--> '''Zeppelin:''' Oh! Oh! Maybe that's why you can't fly!
* HeadInTheSandManagement: The Steinbech Chancellor tried to use diplomacy to prevent another war [[spoiler: even after the Zamoran
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** Zeppelin, after killing four Zamorian Volants and after [[spoiler: finding her father's mutilated corpse]].
* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: A more accidental version though no less unpleasant - Vogel mentions his family is very scatterbrained, and elaborates with an anecdote of his mother struggling for three hours to find him after forgetting she strapped him to his back while he was young. Schultz states that he might actually be safer in Steinbach, and even Roth (who was a family-less ConMan that was punched in the jaw so much he had to get a titanium replacement) seemed horrified.
* HurricaneOfPuns: Page 351 is basically Roth and Hertz making puns. [[LamePunReaction Even one of the captive Zamoran Guards]] begs them to stop.
* {{Hypocrite}}:
** For a country that hates all machines, the Zamorans sure have a lot of guns and at least one radar station.
** The scientist in charge of the Zamoran volant project claims that human enhancement is totally different than the technology the Zamorans hate. However, she seems to be a bit sarcastic and just seems to be paying lip service to the idea. She doesn't seem to be Zamoran at all, and even experimented on Steiners in the past.
* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: A more accidental version though no less unpleasant - Vogel mentions his family is very scatterbrained, and elaborates with an anecdote of his mother struggling for three hours to find him after forgetting she strapped him to his back while he was young. Schultz states that he might actually be safer in Steinbach, and even Roth (who was a family-less ConMan that was punched in the jaw so much he had to get a titanium replacement) seemed horrified.
* HurricaneOfPuns: Page 351 is basically Roth and Hertz making puns. [[LamePunReaction Even one of the captive Zamoran Guards]] begs them to stop.
* {{Hypocrite}}:
** For a country that hates all machines, the Zamorans sure have a lot of guns and at least one radar station.
** The scientist in charge of the Zamoran volant project claims that human enhancement is totally different than the technology the Zamorans hate. However, she seems to be a bit sarcastic and just seems to be paying lip service to the idea. She doesn't seem to be Zamoran at all, and even experimented on Steiners in the past.
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** Zeppelin, after killing four Zamorian Volants Zamoran volants and after [[spoiler: finding her father's mutilated corpse]].
* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: A more accidental version though no less unpleasant - Vogel mentions his family is very scatterbrained, and elaborates with an anecdote of his mother struggling for three hours to find him after forgetting she strapped him to his back while he was young. Schultz states that he might actually be safer inSteinbach, Steinbech, and even Roth (who was a family-less ConMan that was punched in the jaw so much he had to get a titanium replacement) seemed horrified.
* HurricaneOfPuns: [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/351-punish Page351 351]] is basically a steady stream of puns from Roth and Hertz making puns. Hertz. [[LamePunReaction Even one of the A captive Zamoran Guards]] guard]] begs them to stop.
*{{Hypocrite}}:
**{{Hypocrite}}: For a country that hates all machines, the Zamorans sure have a lot of guns guns, and at least one radar station.
** Thestation. These are, however, necessities if one is fighting in a war. What isn't a necessity is a [[spoiler:volant human engineering project by a scientist in charge of the Zamoran volant project who claims that human enhancement is totally different than from the technology the Zamorans hate. However, she seems to be a bit sarcastic and just seems to be paying lip service to the idea. She Hell, she doesn't seem to be Zamoran at all, and even experimented on Steiners in the past.]]
* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: A more accidental version though no less unpleasant - Vogel mentions his family is very scatterbrained, and elaborates with an anecdote of his mother struggling for three hours to find him after forgetting she strapped him to his back while he was young. Schultz states that he might actually be safer in
* HurricaneOfPuns: [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/351-punish Page
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** Fleischer made one with Hertz's help, because she wanted one.
** [[spoiler:Later becomes a standard unit in the Steinbech military. [[LensmanArmsRace Of course, now Zamora has genetically engineered Volants...]]]]
* IWasQuiteALooker: Zeppelin's mother. So much that he was a pin-up girl for war propganda, as it turns out.
* {{Jerkass}}: Roth and Austerlitz, Hertz to an extent, but Zeppelin is the main offender.
** [[spoiler:Later becomes a standard unit in the Steinbech military. [[LensmanArmsRace Of course, now Zamora has genetically engineered Volants...]]]]
* IWasQuiteALooker: Zeppelin's mother. So much that he was a pin-up girl for war propganda, as it turns out.
* {{Jerkass}}: Roth and Austerlitz, Hertz to an extent, but Zeppelin is the main offender.
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** Fleischer made one with Hertz's help, because she wanted one.
** [[spoiler:Laterone. It later becomes a standard unit in the Steinbech military. [[LensmanArmsRace Of course, now Zamora has genetically engineered Volants...]]]]
* IWasQuiteALooker: Zeppelin's mother. So much that he was a pin-up girl for war propganda, as it turns out.
military.
* {{Jerkass}}:Roth and Austerlitz, Hertz to an extent, but Zeppelin is the main offender.biggest offender of all, but Roth and Austerlitz are guilty as well. So is Hertz, to a lesser extent.
** [[spoiler:Later
* IWasQuiteALooker: Zeppelin's mother. So much that he was a pin-up girl for war propganda, as it turns out.
* {{Jerkass}}:
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* LastNameBasis: The characters being in the military, they usually refer to each other by last name.
* LensmanArmsRace: Zamoran volant super soldiers versus Steiner mechas.
* LensmanArmsRace: Zamoran volant super soldiers versus Steiner mechas.
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* LastNameBasis: The characters being in the military, they who usually refer to each other by last name.
* LensmanArmsRace: [[spoiler: Zamoran volant supersoldiers soldiers]] versus Steiner mechas.
* LensmanArmsRace: [[spoiler: Zamoran volant super
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* MauveShirt: The Zamoran security forces that apprehend Hertz and Roth get names and a bit of characterization. [[spoiler:Then Zeppelin kills them all while she's in shock after seeing her father's dissected corpse.]]
* MildlyMilitary: Played with. The majority of the military does run on fairly tight discipline. The squad of the protagonists...not so much. The military brass doesn't seem overly concerned, though. [[spoiler:This is because they are more focused on the possibility of the war re-starting.]]
* MildlyMilitary: Played with. The majority of the military does run on fairly tight discipline. The squad of the protagonists...not so much. The military brass doesn't seem overly concerned, though. [[spoiler:This is because they are more focused on the possibility of the war re-starting.]]
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* MauveShirt: The Zamoran security forces that apprehend Hertz and Roth get names and a bit of characterization. [[spoiler:Then Zeppelin kills them all while she's in shock shock, after seeing her father's dissected corpse.]]
* MildlyMilitary: Played with. The majority of the military does run on fairly tight discipline. The squad of theprotagonists...protagonists, not so much. The military brass doesn't seem overly concerned, though. [[spoiler:This is because they are more focused on the possibility of the war re-starting.rekindling.]]
* MildlyMilitary: Played with. The majority of the military does run on fairly tight discipline. The squad of the
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** Almost literally! After Ria expresses apprehension at having to kill a person, Zeppelin breaks the tension by humorously shaking the entire squad around the back of the truck they were in because she decided to drive on the ground instead of the road for a spell.
* MotivationalLie: Captain Nora orders everyone to bring back one wild boar from Schweinefleisch Island or get left behind. When Ria's team brings back one and is about to head back to their trap for more, she admits she doesn't really leave people behind. A bearded man in rags shows up on the beach demanding revenge, but Nora points out he had gotten lost and they waited two days for him, and it happened ''last month'' (meaning he already had a long beard). He settles for being rescued from the island.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Fritz Roth is on the receiving end of one after he gets captured by a Zamorian Guard.
* OhCrap: How the squad reacts [[spoiler: When the government announces the war against Zamora]].
** A Zamoran security guard understandably has this reaction after he watches [[spoiler:Zeppelin toss his comrade through ''a wall'' with her Volant powers. She makes good on his fears by spearing him to death using the dissection machine Hemmel was connected to.]]
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to), and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of state) were all squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise, Hertz was experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death and tried to vivisect Zeppelin. Finally Vogel (whom Fleisher injured and who Zeppelin's squad had to escort back to Zamora) is a cousin to Kurt Bosque (who tried to strangle Zeppelin to death).]]
* MotivationalLie: Captain Nora orders everyone to bring back one wild boar from Schweinefleisch Island or get left behind. When Ria's team brings back one and is about to head back to their trap for more, she admits she doesn't really leave people behind. A bearded man in rags shows up on the beach demanding revenge, but Nora points out he had gotten lost and they waited two days for him, and it happened ''last month'' (meaning he already had a long beard). He settles for being rescued from the island.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Fritz Roth is on the receiving end of one after he gets captured by a Zamorian Guard.
* OhCrap: How the squad reacts [[spoiler: When the government announces the war against Zamora]].
** A Zamoran security guard understandably has this reaction after he watches [[spoiler:Zeppelin toss his comrade through ''a wall'' with her Volant powers. She makes good on his fears by spearing him to death using the dissection machine Hemmel was connected to.]]
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to), and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of state) were all squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise, Hertz was experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death and tried to vivisect Zeppelin. Finally Vogel (whom Fleisher injured and who Zeppelin's squad had to escort back to Zamora) is a cousin to Kurt Bosque (who tried to strangle Zeppelin to death).]]
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** Almost literally! After literally when, after Ria expresses apprehension at having to kill a person, Zeppelin breaks the tension by humorously shaking the entire squad around the back of the truck they were in because she decided to drive on the ground instead of the road for a spell.
* MotivationalLie: Captain Nora orders everyone to [[FullBoarAction bring back one wild boar from SchweinefleischIsland Island]] or get left behind. When Ria's team brings back one and is about to head back to their trap for more, she admits she doesn't really leave people behind. A bearded man in rags shows up on the beach demanding revenge, but Nora points out he had gotten lost and they waited two days for him, and it happened ''last month'' (meaning he already had a long beard). He settles for being rescued from the island.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Fritz Roth is on the receiving end of one after he gets captured by aZamorian Guard.
Zamoran guard.
* OhCrap: How the squad reacts [[spoiler:When when the government announces the war against Zamora]].
** A Zamoran security guard understandably has this reaction after he watches [[spoiler:Zeppelin toss his comrade through ''a wall'' with herVolant volant powers. She Zeppelin makes good on his fears by spearing him to death using the dissection machine Hemmel her father was connected to.]]
*OneDegreeOfSeparation: OneDegreeOfSeparation:
** [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to), and General Eckstein (themilitary's general of the army and Steinbech army, now current head of state) were all squadmates squad-mates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise, father, Hemmel.]]
** Hertz wasexperimented [[spoiler:experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death and later tried to vivisect Zeppelin. Finally Vogel (whom Fleisher injured Zeppelin in kind. He reveals that they're NotSoDifferent when, later, he shows her his matching scar.]]
** Vogel- who Fleischer injured, and who Zeppelin's squad had to escort back toZamora) Zamora- is a cousin to Kurt Bosque (who [[spoiler:Kurt Bosque, who once tried to strangle Zeppelin to death).]]death.]]
* PluckyGirl: Roemer. [[spoiler:Having her arm impaled by a lightning rod and torn from her body after being dropped from on high, and suffering through the phantom pain of that dismemberment, ''then'' having a horrible war start up again,]] is but a mild inconvenience for her cheery disposition.
* MotivationalLie: Captain Nora orders everyone to [[FullBoarAction bring back one wild boar from Schweinefleisch
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Fritz Roth is on the receiving end of one after he gets captured by a
* OhCrap: How the squad reacts [[spoiler:
** A Zamoran security guard understandably has this reaction after he watches [[spoiler:Zeppelin toss his comrade through ''a wall'' with her
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** [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to), and General Eckstein (the
** Hertz was
** Vogel- who Fleischer injured, and who Zeppelin's squad had to escort back to
* PluckyGirl: Roemer. [[spoiler:Having her arm impaled by a lightning rod and torn from her body after being dropped from on high, and suffering through the phantom pain of that dismemberment, ''then'' having a horrible war start up again,]] is but a mild inconvenience for her cheery disposition.
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** A few pages later we see an unnamed Steinbech Border Guard punching a Zamoran Tourist in the nose.
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** A few pages later we see an unnamed Steinbech Border Guard border guard punching a Zamoran Tourist tourist in the nose.
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** When they finally got Vogel home, Hertz and Roth went to use the old Steiner radio tower without asking any questions. Vogel would have been able to tell them that it had been repurposed into a military outpost, and was off limits.
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** When they finally got Vogel home, Hertz and Roth went to use the old Steiner radio tower without asking any questions. Vogel would have been able to tell them that it had been repurposed re-purposed into a military outpost, and was off limits.
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** When they're in prison, the prime minister doesn't believe them either--partly because of the scout lying to her, and partly because the Zamoran they claim to be escorting is nowhere to be found. But at least she started by asking why they were in the country.
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** When they're in prison, the prime minister doesn't believe them either--partly either- partly because of the scout lying to her, and partly because the Zamoran they claim to be escorting is nowhere to be found. But at least she started by asking why they were in the country.
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* ThePowerOfLegacy: [[spoiler: After Zeppelin finds her father's tortured and mutilated corpse, she states that she won't tell anyone what happened to him and proceeds to burn down the entire facility.]]
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* ThePowerOfLegacy: [[spoiler: After Zeppelin might hold resentment towards her father, but it is built on a basis of respect for him, and her mission to live up to- and improve upon- the legacy he left behind. [[spoiler:The culmination of this: after Zeppelin finds her father's tortured and mutilated corpse, she states vows that she won't tell anyone what happened to him him, and proceeds to burn down the entire facility.]]
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* {{Steampunk}}: Some influences are there, such as the machines they pilot and the metallic arm cast.
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* {{Steampunk}}: Some influences are there, such as the machines they the Steiners pilot and the metallic arm cast.
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* SilentSnarker: One of the people standing in line in [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/010-prima-donna page 10.]]
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* SilentSnarker: One of the people standing in line in on [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/010-prima-donna page 10.]]
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** Zeppelin starts suffering from PTSD after she kills Zamoran Soldiers, and after she [[spoiler: finds her father's bloody corpse]].
** Klein has become far more withdrawn after she is kills a Zamoran.
** Klein has become far more withdrawn after she is kills a Zamoran.
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** Zeppelin starts suffering from PTSD after she kills Zamoran Soldiers, soldiers, and after she [[spoiler: finds her father's bloody dissected corpse]].
** Kleinhas become becomes far more withdrawn after she is kills a Zamoran.her first kill.
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* ShurFineGuns: The rifles used by the Steinbech military are ''incredibly'' sensitive and tend to misfire with the slightest jolt, as noted in IJustShotMarvinInTheFace above. [[spoiler:There is also the matter of their rifles [[MadeOfExplodium blowing up in their faces when fired]]...a result of enemy sabotage, but apparently this sabotage was no more than intentional misassembly.]]
* StealthPun: The Steinbech capital is named Schwerpunkt. This is the German word for "Focal point", as a capital tends to be to a country's politics.
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable: [[spoiler: Zeppelin wakes up (after having being shot down) cocooned inside a steampunk-ish version of this.]]
* StealthPun: The Steinbech capital is named Schwerpunkt. This is the German word for "Focal point", as a capital tends to be to a country's politics.
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable: [[spoiler: Zeppelin wakes up (after having being shot down) cocooned inside a steampunk-ish version of this.]]
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* ShurFineGuns: The rifles used by the Steinbech military are ''incredibly'' sensitive and tend to misfire with the slightest jolt, as noted in IJustShotMarvinInTheFace above. [[spoiler:There is also the matter of their rifles [[MadeOfExplodium blowing up in their faces when fired]]...fired]]- a result of enemy sabotage, true, but apparently the fact that this sabotage was required no more effort than intentional misassembly.intentionally botched assembly speaks to the safety of the weapons.]]
* StealthPun: The Steinbech capital is named Schwerpunkt. This is the German word for"Focal "focal point", as a capital tends to be to a country's politics.
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable:[[spoiler: Zeppelin [[spoiler:Zeppelin wakes up (after having being shot down) cocooned inside a steampunk-ish version of this.]]
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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: Though already capable of flight well before the events of the comic started, Zeppelin learned a few new tricks [[spoiler:in desperation to escape her capture and torture in Zamora]], gaining the power to BlowYouAway.
* WalkOnWater: Anyone who's a volant is capable of this due to being buoyant enough not to sink. [[spoiler: Zeppelin uses this to CRUSH an enemy volant's head with her bare hands by forcing him down.]]
* WarIsHell: There are numerous atrocities, combat is brutal, many soldiers die in battle, and those who don't often develop PTSD.
* WalkOnWater: Anyone who's a volant is capable of this due to being buoyant enough not to sink. [[spoiler: Zeppelin uses this to CRUSH an enemy volant's head with her bare hands by forcing him down.]]
* WarIsHell: There are numerous atrocities, combat is brutal, many soldiers die in battle, and those who don't often develop PTSD.
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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: Though already capable of flight well before the events of the comic started, Zeppelin learned learns a few new tricks [[spoiler:in desperation to escape her capture and torture in Zamora]], gaining the power to BlowYouAway.
* WalkOnWater: Anyonewho's who is a volant is capable of this due to being buoyant enough not to sink. [[spoiler: Zeppelin [[spoiler:Zeppelin uses this property to CRUSH crush an enemy volant's head with her bare hands hands, by forcing him down.down into water.]]
* WarIsHell: One of the core themes of the comic. There are numerous atrocities, combat is brutal, many soldiers die in battle, and those who don't often develop PTSD.
* WalkOnWater: Anyone
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* WhamLine: Page 378. [[spoiler: "...Dad?"]]
* WhyWontYouDie: A frustrated Zeppelin on page 631 [[spoiler: to a thus far quite uncooperative Kurt.]]
* WhyWontYouDie: A frustrated Zeppelin on page 631 [[spoiler: to a thus far quite uncooperative Kurt.]]
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* WhamLine: Page 378. From Zeppelin: [[spoiler: "...Dad?"]]
* WhyWontYouDie: A frustrated Zeppelinon [[spoiler:on page 631 [[spoiler: 631, to a thus far quite uncooperative Kurt.]]
* WhyWontYouDie: A frustrated Zeppelin
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** Page 583 [[spoiler: shows a flashback of the first war. Specifically it shows a Boyarov Soldiers gunning down fleeing Zamoran Children in cold blood.]]
** [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/409-the-good-guys A riot breaks out into a fire fight, and many, including children, get caught in the crossfire.]]
** [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/409-the-good-guys A riot breaks out into a fire fight, and many, including children, get caught in the crossfire.]]
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** Page 583 [[spoiler: shows a flashback of the first war. Specifically it shows a Boyarov Soldiers soldiers gunning down fleeing Zamoran Children children in cold blood.]]
** [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/409-the-good-guys A riot breaks out into a fire fight, and many, including children, get caught in the crossfire.]]]]
* YourMom: A drunk Hertz and a drunk Zeppelin have one of these exchanges.
--> '''Zeppelin:''' Psh, what're you, my mom?
--> '''Hertz:''' Ha! No. If I was your mom... '''I''' wouldn't even '''be''' here.
** [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/409-the-good-guys A riot breaks out into a fire fight, and many, including children, get caught in the crossfire.
* YourMom: A drunk Hertz and a drunk Zeppelin have one of these exchanges.
--> '''Zeppelin:''' Psh, what're you, my mom?
--> '''Hertz:''' Ha! No. If I was your mom... '''I''' wouldn't even '''be''' here.
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* HeadInTheSandManagement: The Steinbech Chancellor tried to use diplomacy to prevent another war [[spoiler: even after the Zamoran Military attacked an extraction convoy and tortured three of his own soldiers. He ends up being assassinated by an assassin and control of the government is given over to the Steinbech military.]]
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* HeadInTheSandManagement: The Steinbech Chancellor tried to use diplomacy to prevent another war [[spoiler: even after the Zamoran Military attacked an extraction convoy and tortured three of his own soldiers. He ends up being assassinated by an assassin Zamoran Sniper and control of the government is given over to the Steinbech military.]]
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* HurricaneOfPuns: Page 351 is basically Roth and Hurtz making puns. [[LamePunReaction Even one of the captive Zamoran Guards]] begs them to stop.
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* HurricaneOfPuns: Page 351 is basically Roth and Hurtz Hertz making puns. [[LamePunReaction Even one of the captive Zamoran Guards]] begs them to stop.
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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to), and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of state) were all squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise, Hurtz was experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death and tried to vivisect Zeppelin. Finally Vogel (whom Fleisher injured and who Zeppelin's squad had to escort back to Zamora) is a cousin to Kurt Bosque (who tried to strangle Zeppelin to death).]]
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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to), and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of state) were all squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise, Hurtz Hertz was experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death and tried to vivisect Zeppelin. Finally Vogel (whom Fleisher injured and who Zeppelin's squad had to escort back to Zamora) is a cousin to Kurt Bosque (who tried to strangle Zeppelin to death).]]
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** Hurtz is an inversion [[spoiler: because his PTSD resulted from being experimented on as a child, long before he was ever in the military]].
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** Hurtz Hertz is an inversion [[spoiler: because his PTSD resulted from being experimented on as a child, long before he was ever in the military]].
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* WhyWontYouDie: A frustrated Zeppelin on page 631 [[spoiler: to a thus far quite uncooperative Kurt.]]
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* ArtisticLicensePhysics: Volents are said to be so buoyant that they can't sink, like a balloon. Zeppelin later uses this to crush a Volent by pressing them against the water. Anyone who has actually tried to hold a inflatable ball under water will know however that it's certainly ''possible'' to submerge something very buoyant (and it won't be harmed), it's just difficult.
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Updates every Wednesday and Friday.
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Updates every Wednesday Tuesday and Friday.
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* EveryoneIsRelated: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to, and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of state) were all squad-mates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise Villalobos preformed cruel experiments on both Hurtz and Zeppelin, and tortured Zeppelin's father Hemmel to death.]]
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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to, and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of state) were all squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise, Hurtz was experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death and tried to vivisect Zeppelin, and Vogel is a cousin to Kurt Bosque.]]
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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to, to), and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of state) were all squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise, Hurtz was experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death and tried to vivisect Zeppelin, and Zeppelin. Finally Vogel (whom Fleisher injured and who Zeppelin's squad had to escort back to Zamora) is a cousin to Kurt Bosque.Bosque (who tried to strangle Zeppelin to death).]]
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* WarIsHell: There are numerous atrocities, combat is brutal, many soldiers die in battle, and those who don't often develop PTSD.
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* EveryoneIsRelated: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to, and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of state) were all squad-mates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise Villalobos preformed cruel experiments on both Hurtz and Zeppelin, and tortured Zeppelin's father Hemmel to death.]]
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* AmusingInjuries: One of Roth's fingers gets shot off in a training accident, and it is treated as humorous (it gets reattached). Averted with most of the other injuries shown, which are treated seriously.
* AnArmAndALeg: The comic does not shy away from showing the horrific effects of military weaponry, resulting in...
* AnArmAndALeg: The comic does not shy away from showing the horrific effects of military weaponry, resulting in...
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* AmusingInjuries: Roth unnecessarily knees Schultz [[GroinAttack in the groin]] during a hand-to-hand exercise, which is naturally inherently funny. One of Roth's fingers gets shot off in a training accident, and it is treated as humorous (it gets reattached). Averted with most of the other injuries shown, which are treated seriously.
* AnArmAndALeg: The comic does not shy away from showing the horrific effects of militaryweaponry, resulting in...weaponry. Fortunately for Steinbach's soldiers, their ArtificialLimbs are top-notch.
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* ArtificialLimbs: Seemingly a speciality of Steinbech's technology, not counting their weapons tech. And they don't ''just'' do replacements. Vogel gets a "cast" over his broken arm which is basically a gauntlet, and he's shown being able to move it almost like normal while it's healing.
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* ArtificialLimbs: Seemingly a speciality specialty of Steinbech's technology, not counting their weapons tech. And they don't ''just'' do replacements. Vogel gets a "cast" over his broken arm which is basically a gauntlet, and he's shown being able to move it almost like normal while it's healing.
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* CerebusSyndrome: Even in its more violent and dramatic bits, the strip stays relatively lighthearted - until Zeppelin [[spoiler:is vivisected, then finds her father's corpse]], at which point [[TwoLinesNoWaiting all the plotlines]] start to get very dark, very fast.
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* CerebusSyndrome: Even in its more violent and dramatic bits, the strip stays relatively lighthearted - until Zeppelin [[spoiler:is vivisected, then finds her father's corpse]], at which point [[TwoLinesNoWaiting all the plotlines]] start to get very dark, very fast. The comic picks up with lightheartedness there after, but grimness sits alongside it very clearly.
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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou:
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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: [[spoiler:Hemmel was killed, possibly by vivisection, and his corpse remained in Marilyn Villalobos' laboratory.]]
* LastNameBasis: The characters being in the military, they usually refer to each other by last name.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: [[Steinbech and Zamora, actually. A flashback shows Steinbech defending a Zamoran town against Boyarov, ending with its citizens venerating Zeppelin's father Hemmel as a hero; Austerlitz also mentions having yearly visited a Zamoran summer camp as a child and that he can't understand why things have changed and caused the new war since then.]]
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: [[Steinbech [[spoiler:Steinbech and Zamora, actually. A flashback shows Steinbech defending a Zamoran town against Boyarov, ending with its citizens venerating Zeppelin's father Hemmel as a hero; Austerlitz also mentions having yearly visited a Zamoran summer camp as a child and that he can't understand why things have changed and caused the new war since then.]]
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* EveryoneIsRelated: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to, and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of state) were all squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise Hurtz was experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death. And who tried to vivisect Zeppelin.]]
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* HeadInTheSandManagement: The Steinbech Chancellor tried to use diplomacy to prevent another war [[spoiler: even after the Zamoran Military attacked an extraction convoy and tortured three of his own soldiers. He ends up being assassinated by a Zamoran Assassin and control of the government is given over to the Steinbech military.]]
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* HeadInTheSandManagement: The Steinbech Chancellor tried to use diplomacy to prevent another war [[spoiler: even after the Zamoran Military attacked an extraction convoy and tortured three of his own soldiers. He ends up being assassinated by a Zamoran Assassin an assassin and control of the government is given over to the Steinbech military.]]
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* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: A more accidental version though no less unpleasant - a Zamoran man the protagonists are escorting mentions his family is very scatterbrained, and elaborates with an anecdote of his mother struggling for three hours to find him after forgetting she strapped him to his back while he was young. Schultz states that he might actually be safer in Steinbach, and even Roth (who was a family-less ConMan that punched in the jaw so much he had to get a titanium replacement) seemed horrified.
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* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: A more accidental version though no less unpleasant - a Zamoran man the protagonists are escorting Vogel mentions his family is very scatterbrained, and elaborates with an anecdote of his mother struggling for three hours to find him after forgetting she strapped him to his back while he was young. Schultz states that he might actually be safer in Steinbach, and even Roth (who was a family-less ConMan that was punched in the jaw so much he had to get a titanium replacement) seemed horrified.
* MauveShirt: The Zamoran security forces that apprehend Hertz and Roth get names and a bit of characterization. [[spoiler:Then Zeppelin kills them all while she's in shock after seeing her father's dissected corpse.]]
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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Sergeant Major Austerlitz, Zeppelin's father, General Eckstein and the commander in charge of the squad's infiltration mission were all in the same squad together 14 years ago.
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** A Zamoran security guard understandably has this reaction after he watches [[spoiler:Zeppelin toss his comrade through ''a wall'' with her Volant powers. She makes good on his fears by spearing him to death using the dissection machine Hemmel was connected to.]]
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), MajorAusterlitz, Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's father, squad answers to, and General Eckstein and the commander in charge (the military's general of the squad's infiltration mission army and now current head of state) were all in squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise, Hurtz was experimented on as a child by the same squad together 14 years ago.scientist who tortured Hemmel to death and tried to vivisect Zeppelin, and Vogel is a cousin to Kurt Bosque.]]
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: A bystander comments that Zepplin's mom has seen better days in the 6th comic...because it's revealed she was a pinup girl for propaganda in the previous war 549 comics later.
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* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: A more accidental version though no less unpleasant - a Zamoran man the protagonists are escorting mentions his family is very scatterbrained, and elaborates with an anecdote of his mother struggling for three hours to find him after forgetting she strapped him to his back while he was young. Schultz states that he might actually be safer in Steinbach, and even Roth (who was a family-less ConMan that punched in the jaw so much he had to get a titanium replacement) seemed horrified.
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** Almost literally! After Ria expresses apprehension at having to kill a person, Zeppelin breaks the tension by humorously shaking the entire squad around the back of the truck they were in because she decided to drive on the ground instead of the road for a spell.
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** Going by the names and general behavior, the Steiners are obviously German in heritage, with some of them (including Zeppelin) spouting off a few phrases in German from time to time.
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** Going by the names and general behavior, the Steiners are obviously German in heritage, with some of them (including Zeppelin) [[PoirotSpeak spouting off a few phrases in German from time to time.time]].
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** When [[spoiler: Hurtz]] is in jail and falsely accused of treason and attempted murder, the soldier guarding him tries to murder him in cold blood because he keeps talking. [[LaserGuidedKarma The gun explodes immediately, killing said soldier]].
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** When [[spoiler: Hurtz]] Hertz]] is in jail and falsely accused of treason and attempted murder, the soldier guarding him tries to murder him in cold blood because he keeps talking. [[LaserGuidedKarma The gun explodes immediately, killing said soldier]].
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* PoliceState: When Steinebech enters a state of war, the civilian government steps down and the military takes full control of the country. When Steinebech went to war against Zamora, the first thing General Eckstein did was have any Zamoran or anyone of Zamoran descent arrested on suspicion of espionage.
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* PoliceState: When Steinebech Steinbech enters a state of war, the civilian government steps down and the military takes full control of the country. When Steinebech Steinbech went to war against Zamora, the first thing General Eckstein did was have any Zamoran or anyone of Zamoran descent arrested on suspicion of espionage.
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* ShurFineGuns: The rifles used by the Steinbech military are ''incredibly'' sensitive and tend to misfire with the slightest jolt, as noted in IJustShotMarvinInTheFace above. [[spoiler:There is also the matter of their rifles [[MadeOfExplodium blowing up in their faces when fired,]] but at least that one was a result of enemy sabotage.]]
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* ShurFineGuns: The rifles used by the Steinbech military are ''incredibly'' sensitive and tend to misfire with the slightest jolt, as noted in IJustShotMarvinInTheFace above. [[spoiler:There is also the matter of their rifles [[MadeOfExplodium blowing up in their faces when fired,]] but at least that one was fired]]...a result of enemy sabotage.sabotage, but apparently this sabotage was no more than intentional misassembly.]]
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Fantastic Racism means racism between humans and mythical/fictional creatures, or between said creatures and other fictional creatures. It is not an adjective describing how powerful one's racism is.
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* FantasticRacism: Both Steinbech and Zamora hold racist attitudes against each other.
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* ArtEvolution: The art style noticeably improves over time. Just compare one of the early strips with a later strip.
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* ArtEvolution: The art style noticeably improves over time. Just compare one of the early strips strips, such as in basic training arc, with a later strip.strip, such as the out to sea arc.
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* WalkOnWater: Anyone who's a volant is capable of this due to being buoyant enough not to sink. [[spoiler: Zeppelin uses this to [[NightmareFuel CRUSH an enemy volant's head with her bare hands by forcing him down.]]]]
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* WalkOnWater: Anyone who's a volant is capable of this due to being buoyant enough not to sink. [[spoiler: Zeppelin uses this to [[NightmareFuel CRUSH an enemy volant's head with her bare hands by forcing him down.]]]]]]
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* EveryoneIsRelated: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to, and General Eckstein (the current head of the government) were all squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise Hurtz was experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death. And who tried to vivisect Zeppelin.]]
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* EveryoneIsRelated: [[spoiler: Sergeant Austerlitz (the sergeant who trained Zeppelin), Major Hohenhut (the person Zeppelin's squad answers to, and General Eckstein (the military's general of the army and now current head of the government) state) were all squadmates and possibly friends with Zeppelin's father Hemmel. Likewise Hurtz was experimented on as a child by the same scientist who tortured Hemmel to death. And who tried to vivisect Zeppelin.]]
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** For a country that hates all machines, the Zamorans sure have a lot of guns.
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** For a country that hates all machines, the Zamorans sure have a lot of guns.guns and at least one radar station.
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** Fleischer have made one with Hertz's help, because she wanted one.
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** Fleischer have made one with Hertz's help, because she wanted one.
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** [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Jerks With A Heart Of Gold]]: Roth when Fleischer's around, Austerlitz due to actually wanting to create great soldiers ([[ComedicSociopathy doesn't stop him from taking amusement in other's pain.]])
* LensmanArmsRace: Looks it's heading this way with Zamoran volant super soldiers versus Steiner mechas.
* LensmanArmsRace: Looks it's heading this way with Zamoran volant super soldiers versus Steiner mechas.
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** [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Jerks With A Heart Of Gold]]: JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Roth when Fleischer's around, Austerlitz due to actually wanting to create great soldiers ([[ComedicSociopathy doesn't stop him from taking amusement in other's pain.]])
* LamePunReaction: When Hertz and Roth defeat two Zamoran guards, Roth tells them not to mess with them, or they'll get pain, because pain ''Hertz''. Hertz shoves a gun under Roth's chin.
* LensmanArmsRace:Looks it's heading this way with Zamoran volant super soldiers versus Steiner mechas.mechas.
* LoopholeAbuse: When Captain Nora has the crew catch wild boars for food and trade, Major Hohenut spears one and presents it to her. She admits she never specified they had be alive.
* LamePunReaction: When Hertz and Roth defeat two Zamoran guards, Roth tells them not to mess with them, or they'll get pain, because pain ''Hertz''. Hertz shoves a gun under Roth's chin.
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* LoopholeAbuse: When Captain Nora has the crew catch wild boars for food and trade, Major Hohenut spears one and presents it to her. She admits she never specified they had be alive.
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* TheMole: It becomes very clear early on that there is one on the training grounds. [[spoiler:It turns out to be Kurt Grunwald, who not only feigned being broken by the training, but is also secretly a volant like Zepplin.]]
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* TheMole: It becomes very clear early on that there is one on the training grounds. [[spoiler:It turns out to be Kurt Grunwald, who not only feigned being broken by the training, but is also secretly a volant like Zepplin.Zeppelin, albeit an artificial one.]]
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* MotivationalLie: Captain Nora orders everyone to bring back one wild boar from Schweinefleisch Island or get left behind. When Ria's team brings back one and is about to head back to their trap for more, she admits she doesn't really leave people behind. A bearded man in rags shows up on the beach demanding revenge, but Nora points out he had gotten lost and they waited two days for him, and it happened ''last month'' (meaning he already had a long beard). He settles for being rescued from the island.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Austerlitz admits that a big part of his DrillSergeantNasty training was supposed to do this for Zeppelin. Despite it failing, he grudgingly lets her graduate from training with the rest. Time will tell if this actually happens.
** [[spoiler: Her disastrous tour of Zamora and finding her father's butchered corpse]] have done a much better job of being this trope.
** [[spoiler: Her disastrous tour of Zamora and finding her father's butchered corpse]] have done a much better job of being this trope.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Austerlitz admits that a big part of his DrillSergeantNasty training was supposed to do this for Zeppelin. Despite it failing, he grudgingly lets her graduate from training with the rest. Time will tell if this actually happens.
**[[spoiler: Her disastrous tour of Zamora and finding her father's butchered corpse]] have done a much better job of being this trope.
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* AssholeVictim: The Zamoran farmer who the squad robs and who Zeppelin knocks out. While he was indeed defending his farm from robbers, [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/303-so-not-helping when he cornered three of them]] he was going to murder them in cold blood instead of simply holding them until the police arrive.
* ArtEvolution: The art style noticeably improves over time. Just compare one of the early strips with a later strip.
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Neither Steinbech nor Zamora are really upstanding countries, but the former is shown to be less brutal than the latter. [[spoiler: Steinbech holds racist attitudes towards Zamorans, used firebombs on Zamorian Cities during the last war, and during the current war handed power from a freely elected parliament to a military dictatorship. However the Zamorians perform grisly human experiments in an effort to produce super soldiers, assassinated the Steinbech Prime Minister, and attacked Steinbech cities.]]
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* AssholeVictim: The Zamoran farmer who the squad robs and who Zeppelin knocks out. While he was indeed defending his farm from robbers, [[http://www.lighterthanheir.com/comic/303-so-not-helping when he cornered three of them]] he was going to murder them in cold blood instead of simply holding them until the police arrive.
* BlackAndGreyMorality: Neither Steinbech nor Zamora are really upstanding countries, but the former is shown to be less brutal than the latter. [[spoiler: Steinbech holds racist attitudes towards Zamorans, used firebombs on Zamorian Cities during the last war, and during the current war handed power from a freely elected parliament to a military dictatorship. However the Zamorians perform grisly human experiments in an effort to produce super soldiers, assassinated the Steinbech Prime Minister, and attacked Steinbechcities.cities unprovoked.]]
* BlackAndGreyMorality: Neither Steinbech nor Zamora are really upstanding countries, but the former is shown to be less brutal than the latter. [[spoiler: Steinbech holds racist attitudes towards Zamorans, used firebombs on Zamorian Cities during the last war, and during the current war handed power from a freely elected parliament to a military dictatorship. However the Zamorians perform grisly human experiments in an effort to produce super soldiers, assassinated the Steinbech Prime Minister, and attacked Steinbech
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* AmusingInjuries: One of Roth's fingers gets shot off in a training accident, and it is treated as humorous. Averted with most of the other injuries shown, which are treated seriously.
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* AmusingInjuries: One of Roth's fingers gets shot off in a training accident, and it is treated as humorous.humorous (it gets reattached). Averted with most of the other injuries shown, which are treated seriously.
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* ArtificialLimbs: The Steiners use their mecha technology to replace the limbs that have been blown (or sliced, or burned) off of their soldiers.
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[[caption-width-right:350:From left to right: Ada Fleischer, Fritz Roth, Zeppelin von Schultheiss]], Emmerich Hertz, Ria Klein, and Mathis Schultz.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:From left to right: Ada Fleischer, Fritz Roth, Zeppelin von Schultheiss]], Schultheiss, Emmerich Hertz, Ria Klein, and Mathis Schultz.]]