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* SlashedThroat: This happen to dwen in [[http://dwenhero.com/episode_6.html episode 6 part 2]]
* SuperSpeed: The white ninja has this ablilty
* ThemeTune: The intro music is sung by [[http://www.spiritofoya.com/ Oya]] and its catchy
* VerySpecialEpisode: The series has a [[http://blip.tv/dwen/dwen-4th-of-july-special-5344481 4th of july special]] showing scenes of each issue of the comic.
* SuperSpeed: The white ninja has this ablilty
* ThemeTune: The intro music is sung by [[http://www.spiritofoya.com/ Oya]] and its catchy
* VerySpecialEpisode: The series has a [[http://blip.tv/dwen/dwen-4th-of-july-special-5344481 4th of july special]] showing scenes of each issue of the comic.
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%% * SuperSpeed: The white ninja has this ablilty
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%% * VerySpecialEpisode: The series has a [[http://blip.tv/dwen/dwen-4th-of-july-special-5344481 4th of july special]] showing scenes of each issue of the comic.
%% * SuperSpeed: The white ninja has this ablilty
%% * ThemeTune: The intro music is sung by [[http://www.spiritofoya.com/ Oya]] and its catchy
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[[http://dwenhero.com/ DWEN]] is a independent 14 issue military comic book created by Tim Clark
The series is like Webcomic/AxeCop meets Franchise/GIJoe meets Franchise/{{Rambo}} meets WesternAnimation/{{MASK}} meets the politcal Iran Contra affair but the comic series is both written and illustrated by tim clark during 1985 in his 5th grade year in elementary school around math class who decades(circa 2011) later rediscover his series as an adult and remade it as a animated motion comic the first episode debut at June 14,2011 flagday
The story follows a brave military leader named DWEN who leads a {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}} to battle against a terrorist organization called the D.O.D lead by Zarring and Qwen who have been hellbent on destroying DWEN's forces.
as there battles travel from California to Minasota, Russia, Antarctica and even outer space
The series is like Webcomic/AxeCop meets Franchise/GIJoe meets Franchise/{{Rambo}} meets WesternAnimation/{{MASK}} meets the politcal Iran Contra affair but the comic series is both written and illustrated by tim clark during 1985 in his 5th grade year in elementary school around math class who decades(circa 2011) later rediscover his series as an adult and remade it as a animated motion comic the first episode debut at June 14,2011 flagday
The story follows a brave military leader named DWEN who leads a {{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}} to battle against a terrorist organization called the D.O.D lead by Zarring and Qwen who have been hellbent on destroying DWEN's forces.
as there battles travel from California to Minasota, Russia, Antarctica and even outer space
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[[http://dwenhero.com/ DWEN]] is a an independent 14 issue military comic book created by Tim Clark
Clark.
The series islike Webcomic/AxeCop ''Webcomic/AxeCop'' meets Franchise/GIJoe ''Franchise/GIJoe'' meets Franchise/{{Rambo}} ''Franchise/{{Rambo}}'' meets WesternAnimation/{{MASK}} ''WesternAnimation/{{MASK}}'' meets the politcal Iran Contra affair but the comic series is both written and illustrated by tim clark Tim Clark during 1985 in his 5th grade year in elementary school around math class who decades(circa 2011) class. Decades later rediscover (circa 2011), Tim rediscovered his series as an adult and remade it as a an animated motion comic the comic. The first episode debut debuted at June 14,2011 flagday
14, 2011, Flagday.
The story follows a brave military leader named DWEN who leads a{{Ragtag Bunch of Misfits}} RagtagBunchOfMisfits to battle against a terrorist organization called the D.O.D lead D, led by Zarring and Qwen who have been hellbent on destroying DWEN's forces.
as there battles travel from California to Minasota, Russia, Antarctica and even outer space
forces.
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The series is
The story follows a brave military leader named DWEN who leads a
as there battles travel from California to Minasota, Russia, Antarctica and even outer space
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** IranContra: Smuggling or stealing weapons
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* TheDogShotFirst: Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door
-->'''KGB officer:''' would you come here,sir? .\\
''he trys to shoot him he missed deathman shot KGB officer''\\
'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
-->'''KGB officer:''' would you come here,sir? .\\
''he trys to shoot him he missed deathman shot KGB officer''\\
'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
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The series is like Webcomic/AxeCop meets Franchise/GIJoe meets {{Rambo}} meets WesternAnimation/{{MASK}} meets the politcal Iran Contra affair but the comic series is both written and illustrated by tim clark during 1985 in his 5th grade year in elementary school around math class who decades(circa 2011) later rediscover his series as an adult and remade it as a animated motion comic the first episode debut at June 14,2011 flagday
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The series is like Webcomic/AxeCop meets Franchise/GIJoe meets {{Rambo}} Franchise/{{Rambo}} meets WesternAnimation/{{MASK}} meets the politcal Iran Contra affair but the comic series is both written and illustrated by tim clark during 1985 in his 5th grade year in elementary school around math class who decades(circa 2011) later rediscover his series as an adult and remade it as a animated motion comic the first episode debut at June 14,2011 flagday
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-->'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
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-->'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
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-->'''KGB officer:''' would you come here,sir? .
-->''hehere,sir? .\\
''he trys to shoot him he missed deathman shot KGBofficer''
-->'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.officer''\\
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The series is like Webcomic/AxeCop meets Franchise/GIJoe meets {{Rambo}} meets {{MASK}} WesternAnimation/{{MASK}} meets the politcal Iran Contra affair but the comic series is both written and illustrated by tim clark during 1985 in his 5th grade year in elementary school around math class who decades(circa 2011) later rediscover his series as an adult and remade it as a animated motion comic the first episode debut at June 14,2011 flagday
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[[index]]
* {{ArtEvolution}}:the artstyle improves in later issues.
* {{limited animation}}:the first three episodes used camera pans but the animation improves in episode 4
* {{cutout animation}}
* {{ExcitedShowTitle}}
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* {{SHOUT OUT}},the series was said to be inspired by a list of popular things in 80s for example:
** {{GIJOE}}:it pays homage to the 80s comic series aswell including the MARVEL logo,and some lookalike characters
** Franchise/{{RAMBO}}: white ninja and black ninja based from the [[WesternAnimation/RamboTheForceOfFreedom animated series]] and a badguy version of Rambo named Zambo
** {{MASK}}:Zarring wears a mask similar to the cartoon but only because he got disfigured by a bomb
** {{iRAN CONTRA}}:smuggling or stealing weapons
** Film/RedDawn1984:russia gets involved in the comic as well
[[index]]
* {{The Dog Shot First}}:Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door
** '''KGB officer:''' would you come here,sir? .
** ->"he trys to shoot him he missed deathman shot KGB officer"
** '''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
* {{slashed throat}}:this happen to dwen in [[http://dwenhero.com/episode_6.html episode 6 part 2]]
* {{knife nut}}:Zeberi
* {{super speed}}:the white ninja has this ablilty
* {{BattleEpic}}:the comic has a lot of epic battles exploding across the world even outerspace
* {{Overly Long Gag}}:dwen dialing the radio to contact backup
* {{recap episode}}:which [[http://blip.tv/dwen/dwen-previously-on-53839760 recaps what happen in episode 1-3]]
* {{theme tune}} the intro music is sung by [[http://www.spiritofoya.com/ Oya]] and its catchy
* {{narrator}}:Jim sevin narrates all the dwen episodes while the creator chracterized the voices of the characters
* {{Very Special Episode}}:the series has a [[http://blip.tv/dwen/dwen-4th-of-july-special-5344481 4th of july special]] showing scenes of each issue of the comic.
* {{Casual Danger Dialog}}:dwen before taking impact from a missle that hit a leaking barrel of gas
** '''DWEN:''' well, here goes my christmas vacation.
* {{ArtEvolution}}:the artstyle improves in later issues.
* {{limited animation}}:the first three episodes used camera pans but the animation improves in episode 4
* {{cutout animation}}
* {{ExcitedShowTitle}}
[[/index]]
* {{SHOUT OUT}},the series was said to be inspired by a list of popular things in 80s for example:
** {{GIJOE}}:it pays homage to the 80s comic series aswell including the MARVEL logo,and some lookalike characters
** Franchise/{{RAMBO}}: white ninja and black ninja based from the [[WesternAnimation/RamboTheForceOfFreedom animated series]] and a badguy version of Rambo named Zambo
** {{MASK}}:Zarring wears a mask similar to the cartoon but only because he got disfigured by a bomb
** {{iRAN CONTRA}}:smuggling or stealing weapons
** Film/RedDawn1984:russia gets involved in the comic as well
[[index]]
* {{The Dog Shot First}}:Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door
** '''KGB officer:''' would you come here,sir? .
** ->"he trys to shoot him he missed deathman shot KGB officer"
** '''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
* {{slashed throat}}:this happen to dwen in [[http://dwenhero.com/episode_6.html episode 6 part 2]]
* {{knife nut}}:Zeberi
* {{super speed}}:the white ninja has this ablilty
* {{BattleEpic}}:the comic has a lot of epic battles exploding across the world even outerspace
* {{Overly Long Gag}}:dwen dialing the radio to contact backup
* {{recap episode}}:which [[http://blip.tv/dwen/dwen-previously-on-53839760 recaps what happen in episode 1-3]]
* {{theme tune}} the intro music is sung by [[http://www.spiritofoya.com/ Oya]] and its catchy
* {{narrator}}:Jim sevin narrates all the dwen episodes while the creator chracterized the voices of the characters
* {{Very Special Episode}}:the series has a [[http://blip.tv/dwen/dwen-4th-of-july-special-5344481 4th of july special]] showing scenes of each issue of the comic.
* {{Casual Danger Dialog}}:dwen before taking impact from a missle that hit a leaking barrel of gas
** '''DWEN:''' well, here goes my christmas vacation.
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*
*
* {{cutout animation}}
* {{ExcitedShowTitle}}
[[/index]]
* {{SHOUT OUT}},the series was said to be inspired by a list of popular things in 80s for example:
** {{GIJOE}}:it pays homage to the 80s
** Franchise/{{RAMBO}}: white ninja and black ninja based
* CasualDangerDialog: DWEN before taking impact from
**
** {{iRAN CONTRA}}:smuggling or stealing weapons
** Film/RedDawn1984:russia gets involved in the comic as well
[[index]]
*
* TheDogShotFirst: Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door
** '''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
-->'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
*
* KnifeNut: Zeberi
* LimitedAnimation: The first three episodes used camera pans but the animation improves in
*
* {{super speed}}:the white ninja has this ablilty
* {{BattleEpic}}:the comic has a lot of epic battles exploding across
*
*
*
** Franchise/GIJoe: It pays homage to the 80s comic series as well including the MARVEL logo,and some lookalike characters
** Franchise/{{Rambo}}: white ninja and black ninja based from the [[WesternAnimation/RamboTheForceOfFreedom animated series]] and a badguy version of Rambo named Zambo
** WesternAnimation/{{MASK}}: Zarring wears a mask similar to the cartoon but only because he got disfigured by a bomb
** IranContra: Smuggling or stealing weapons
** ''Film/RedDawn1984'': Russia gets involved in the comic as well
* SlashedThroat: This happen to dwen in [[http://dwenhero.com/episode_6.html episode 6 part 2]]
* SuperSpeed: The white ninja has this ablilty
* ThemeTune: The intro music is sung by [[http://www.spiritofoya.com/ Oya]] and its catchy
*
* {{Very Special Episode}}:the
** '''DWEN:''' well, here goes my christmas vacation.
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->-Jim sevins at the beginning of each episodes
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** {{RAMBO}}:white Franchise/{{RAMBO}}: white ninja and black ninja based from the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WesternAnimation/RamboTheForceOfFreedom [[WesternAnimation/RamboTheForceOfFreedom animated series]] and a badguy version of Rambo named Zambo
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** {{Red Dawn}}:russia Film/RedDawn1984:russia gets involved in the comic as well
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The series is like {{AXE COP}} meets {{GIJOE}} meets {{Rambo}} meets {{MASK}} meets the politcal Iran Contra affair but the comic series is both written and illustrated by tim clark during 1985 in his 5th grade year in elementary school around math class who decades(circa 2011) later rediscover his series as an adult and remade it as a animated motion comic the first episode debut at June 14,2011 flagday
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The series is like {{AXE COP}} Webcomic/AxeCop meets {{GIJOE}} Franchise/GIJoe meets {{Rambo}} meets {{MASK}} meets the politcal Iran Contra affair but the comic series is both written and illustrated by tim clark during 1985 in his 5th grade year in elementary school around math class who decades(circa 2011) later rediscover his series as an adult and remade it as a animated motion comic the first episode debut at June 14,2011 flagday
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* {{The Dog Shot First}}:Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door door
** '''KGB officer:''' would you comehere,sir? .**"he here,sir? .
**->"he trys to shoot him he missed deathman shot KGBofficer" **'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.officer"
'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
** '''KGB officer:''' would you come
**->"he trys to shoot him he missed deathman shot KGB
'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
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* {{The Dog Shot First}}:Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door ** '''KGB officer:''' would you come here,sir? .->**"he **"he trys to shoot him he missed deathman shot KGB officer" **'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
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* {{The Dog Shot First}}:Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door ** '''KGB officer:''' would you come here,sir? . ->"he ->**"he trys to shoot him he missed deathman shot KGB officer" '''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.**'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
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* {{The Dog Shot First}}:Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door ** '''KGB officer:''' would you come here,sir? . ->"he trys to shoot he missed deathman shot KGB officer officer" '''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.
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* {{The Dog Shot First}}:Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door and shot him he missed then deathman shot the officer killing him
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* {{The Dog Shot First}}:Deathman before becoming A D.o.D recruit, was home listen to music then the KGB officer kicks down his door and shot him ** '''KGB officer:''' would you come here,sir? . ->"he trys to shoot he missed then deathman shot the KGB officer killing him'''DEATHMAN:'''YEAH.