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* SurpriseCreepy: Considering this was an episode centering around a normal play, it's kind of a shock when [[EldritchAbomination the windigos show up]]. Made creepier by the fact the first few times we see them there's ''no explanation at all'' and we don't get one until the climax.
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* SurpriseCreepy: SurprisinglyCreepyMoment: Considering this was an episode centering around a normal play, it's kind of a shock when [[EldritchAbomination the windigos show up]]. Made creepier by the fact the first few times we see them there's ''no explanation at all'' and we don't get one until the climax.
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IUEO now so the name needs to be called cool in-story
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Commander Hurricane. For a different variant of "awesome," Clover the Clever and Smart Cookie. It's like naming someone "Brilliant Mc-Rational the Calm-Headed."
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* NiceHat
** On the ride to the pageant, Rarity's basically wearing a full-blown Christmas tree on her head. She isn't certain if it's festive enough.
** Almost everypony involved gets one as part of her costume: crown (Rarity), Roman-style military helmet (Rainbow Dash), another one also heavily inspired by both ancient Macedonian and Renaissance-style helmets (Fluttershy), Tyrolean hat (Applejack), pudding bowl (Pinkie Pie). Twilight Sparkle, who has to make do with a ragged hood, is the only one left out.
** On the ride to the pageant, Rarity's basically wearing a full-blown Christmas tree on her head. She isn't certain if it's festive enough.
** Almost everypony involved gets one as part of her costume: crown (Rarity), Roman-style military helmet (Rainbow Dash), another one also heavily inspired by both ancient Macedonian and Renaissance-style helmets (Fluttershy), Tyrolean hat (Applejack), pudding bowl (Pinkie Pie). Twilight Sparkle, who has to make do with a ragged hood, is the only one left out.
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Starswirl's name is spelled as a single word in episode credits.
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One year, an inexplicable blizzard came to their land, and the ground was frozen so hard that the Earth Ponies could not cultivate. Neither the Pegasi nor the Unicorns could banish the storm, so the three clans held a summit, trying to figure out a solution. But with the storm raging outside reflecting the ponies' conflict inside, it didn't take long for the leaders to angrily give up and return home. The second-in-commands of each group -- Pegasus Private Pansy (Fluttershy), Unicorn vizier and student of Star Swirl the Bearded Clover the Clever (Twilight Sparkle), and Earth Pony secretary Smart Cookie (Applejack) -- were disappointed at the news.
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One year, an inexplicable blizzard came to their land, and the ground was frozen so hard that the Earth Ponies could not cultivate. Neither the Pegasi nor the Unicorns could banish the storm, so the three clans held a summit, trying to figure out a solution. But with the storm raging outside reflecting the ponies' conflict inside, it didn't take long for the leaders to angrily give up and return home. The second-in-commands of each group -- Pegasus Private Pansy (Fluttershy), Unicorn vizier and student of Star Swirl Starswirl the Bearded Clover the Clever (Twilight Sparkle), and Earth Pony secretary Smart Cookie (Applejack) -- were disappointed at the news.
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* CallBack: Clover the Clever was the student of Star Swirl the Bearded, who was first mentioned in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E4LunaEclipsed Luna Eclipsed]]."
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* CallBack: Clover the Clever was the student of Star Swirl Starswirl the Bearded, who was first mentioned in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E4LunaEclipsed Luna Eclipsed]]."
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* {{Fanfare}}: Princess Platinum and Commander Hurricane have theirs blown on trumpets as they enter; Chancellor Puddinghead's has hers blown on kazoos.
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* {{Fanfare}}: Princess Platinum and Commander Hurricane have theirs blown on trumpets as they enter; Chancellor Puddinghead's has hers blown [[KazoosMeanSilliness on kazoos.kazoos]].
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About forgetting previous episodes Aesops. How were they shown not to remember prior Aesop out of the play?
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* AesopAmnesia:
** Before the pageant with Rainbow Dash and the lesson of "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E8TheMysteriousMareDoWell The Mysterious Mare Do Well]]".
** The Mane Six forgetting the moral of the play that ''they just performed''. Good thing it did not last long.
** Before the pageant with Rainbow Dash and the lesson of "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E8TheMysteriousMareDoWell The Mysterious Mare Do Well]]".
** The Mane Six forgetting the moral of the play that ''they just performed''. Good thing it did not last long.
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** The mane six forgetting the moral of the play that ''they just performed''. Good thing it did not last long.
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** The mane six Mane Six forgetting the moral of the play that ''they just performed''. Good thing it did not last long.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: When the three assistants realize there's no escaping their fate, they decide to become friends before their end so they can at least die as friends instead of meaningless enemies. [[ThePowerOfFriendship This was a]] [[CircleOfFriendship very wise move.]]
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* GoOutWithASmile: When the three assistants realize there's no escaping their fate, they decide to become friends before their end so they can at least die as friends instead of meaningless enemies. [[ThePowerOfFriendship This was a]] [[CircleOfFriendship very wise move.]]
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* ThePowerOfHate: Windigos become more powerful the more hatred they consume.
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* AudienceParticipationSong: The ending song "The Heart Carol" is sung by everyone in the theater -- on and off the stage -- to create a choral harmony.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Princess Platinum, flustered over the failed negotiations, plops her crown on upside-down.
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* Narrator: Spike plays as one telling the story of how Equestria was originally made to the audience, including the viewers who are watching the episode.
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* Narrator: {{Narrator}}: Spike plays as one telling the story of how Equestria was originally made to the audience, including the viewers who are watching the episode.
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Trope is being cut.
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* EverythingIsBetterWithPrincesses: One of the six real characters present in the play is Princess Platinum, daughter of the king, who represents the unicorns as if she's as good as is their ruler. There's no explanation for why she's doing it instead of the king himself, who never shows up. It's either a case of [[RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething royals who actually do something]] vs. [[PiratesWhoDontDoAnything Royals who don't do anything]], vs. PoliticallyActivePrincess and it was [[TheFace her duty to go to the meeting as his representative.]]
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* {{Pluralses}}: Pinkie as Chancellor Puddinghead is confused about the plural for "Pegasus": "Pegasusususes".
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* {{Pluralses}}: Pinkie as Chancellor Puddinghead is confused about the plural for "Pegasus": "Pegasusususes"."Pegasuseseses".
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* AnAesop: Love and friendship are more powerful than hate.
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* ForegoneConclusion: A longer but less detailed version of the story of Equestria's founding had already been told in the [[IOSGames iOS app]] ''[[http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/my-little-pony-twilight-sparkle/id465213808?mt=8 Twilight Sparkle: Teacher for a Day]]''.
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* ForegoneConclusion: A longer but less detailed version of the story of Equestria's founding had already been told in the [[IOSGames [[UsefulNotes/IOSGames iOS app]] ''[[http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/my-little-pony-twilight-sparkle/id465213808?mt=8 Twilight Sparkle: Teacher for a Day]]''.
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Dramatic irony
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* Narrator: Spike plays as one telling the story of how Equestria was originally made to the audience, including the viewers who are watching the episode.
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* CrossCastRole: Commander Hurricane is addressed as male during the play.
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* CrossCastRole: CrossCastRole:
** Commander Hurricane is addressed as male during the play.
** Commander Hurricane is addressed as male during the play.
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** Clover the Clever is male and is played by the female Twilight Sparkle.
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* ChimneyEntry: Chancellor Puddinghead enters her own house via the chimney. Partly because the front door is snowed in, and partly because she's [[CloudCuckoolander strange like that.]]
-->'''Smart Cookie:''' Wouldn't it have been easier to use the door, Chancellor?
-->'''Puddinghead:''' Maybe for you, Smart Cookie. But ''I'' am a chancellor. I was elected because I know how to think outside the box. Which means I can also think ''inside the chimney''. Can you think inside a chimney?
-->'''Smart Cookie:''' Wouldn't it have been easier to use the door, Chancellor?
-->'''Puddinghead:''' Maybe for you, Smart Cookie. But ''I'' am a chancellor. I was elected because I know how to think outside the box. Which means I can also think ''inside the chimney''. Can you think inside a chimney?
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->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' I can't believe that Princess Celestia chose us to put on the most important play of the season! Do you guys know what an honor this is? For all of us?
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-->-- '''Twilight Sparkle'''
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That's not Deep Immersion Gaming. I'm not sure what it counts as, but it's some kind of Fantasy Sequence.
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* DeepImmersionGaming: To the viewer, the characters appear to be in a large open landscape or high in the air. Occasionally, it is shown they are still on a relatively small stage, with more conventional stage fixtures.
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* FantasySequence: The story cuts back and forth between the stage show with props and curtain, and the mythologised story being told in full environment with the full landscape (but with the mythical characters still being played by the Mane Six).
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* NothingIsScarier: Partial example; the Windigos appear very early on in the pageant, with no explanation as to what they are, where they came from, why they're causing the storm or if they're even supposed to be ''real'' and not simply a form of symbolism. It isn't until the climax that Clover the Clever explains to the characters and the viewers what these strange creatures are.
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* WhamShot: The first appearance of the Windigos. Their presence is completely unexpected and the first sign that there's more to the pony tribes' strife than just a little bad weather, not to mention that they aren't named or explained until the climax.
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!!Tropes present in this episode (YMMV tropes can be found [[YMMV/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve here]]):
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* LemonyNarrator: Spike occasionally goes off script during his narration of the play, making [[aside comment]]s and riffing on [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal alliterations]] describing how the Windigos had turned Equestria's [[ItsAlwaysSpring lovely weather]] into another frozen wasteland.
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* LemonyNarrator: Spike occasionally goes off script during his narration of the play, making [[aside comment]]s {{aside comment}}s and riffing on [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal alliterations]] describing how the Windigos had turned Equestria's [[ItsAlwaysSpring lovely weather]] into another frozen wasteland.
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* LemonyNarrator: Spike occasionally goes off script during his narration of the play, making [[aside comment]]s and riffing on [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal alliterations]] describing how the Windigos had turned Equestria's [[ItsAlwaysSpring lovely weather]] into another frozen wasteland.
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* LemonyNarrator: Spike occasionally goes off script during his narration of the play, making [[aside comment]]s and riffing on [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal alliterations]] describing how the Windigos had turned Equestria's [[ItsAlwaysSpring lovely weather]] into another frozen wasteland.
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* LiteralMinded: Chancellor Puddinghead as played by Pinkie Pie, such as her "thinking inside the chimney" bit. Difficult to tell if that's just Pinkie * LemonyNarrator: Spike occasionally goes off script during his narration of the play, making [[aside comment]]s and riffing on [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal alliterations]] describing how the Windigos had turned Equestria's [[ItsAlwaysSpring lovely weather]] into another frozen wasteland.
or part of the role itself.
or part of the role itself.
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* LiteralMinded: Chancellor Puddinghead as played by Pinkie Pie, such as her "thinking inside the chimney" bit. Difficult to tell if that's just Pinkie or part of the role itself.
* LemonyNarrator: Spike occasionally goes off script during his narration of the play, making [[aside comment]]s and riffing on [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal alliterations]] describing how the Windigos had turned Equestria's [[ItsAlwaysSpring lovely weather]] into another frozenwasteland.
or part of the role itself.wasteland.
* LemonyNarrator: Spike occasionally goes off script during his narration of the play, making [[aside comment]]s and riffing on [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal alliterations]] describing how the Windigos had turned Equestria's [[ItsAlwaysSpring lovely weather]] into another frozen
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* LiteralMinded: Chancellor Puddinghead as played by Pinkie Pie, such as her "thinking inside the chimney" bit. Difficult to tell if that's just Pinkie or part of the role itself.
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* LiteralMinded: Chancellor Puddinghead as played by Pinkie Pie, such as her "thinking inside the chimney" bit. Difficult to tell if that's just Pinkie * LemonyNarrator: Spike occasionally goes off script during his narration of the play, making [[aside comment]]s and riffing on [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal alliterations]] describing how the Windigos had turned Equestria's [[ItsAlwaysSpring lovely weather]] into another frozen wasteland.
or part of the role itself.
or part of the role itself.
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* GenderFlip: Commander Hurricane was portrayed by Rainbow Dash, but the Journal of the Two Sisters book states the real Commander Hurricane was ''male''.
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* StockSoundEffect: Twilight's scream of Pinkie's name early on in the episode is the exact same way she said it in "The Ticket Master".