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** FunnyBackgroundEvent: During the Dean's announcement about the cold weather affecting the puppies, [[{{Squick}} Pierce is trying to eat the Slim Jim.]]
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Right after Pierce brags about outbiding four hospitals for his motorized wheelchair, it starts malfunctioning.
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** Britta tries and flubs one of the group's rhyming celebrity name jokes (my oh my, Mike Ty... son), which Pierce pulls off successfully (nice try, Stephen Fry) a minute later, to Britta's chagrin.
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* LockedRoomMystery: The situation plays out like this, [[SeriousBusiness despite the mystery being over who has Annie's pen.]]
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-->'''Jeff''': Here. ''Be careful''. That's the last pair we have. ''[as an afterthought]'' Also, dont cut his legs.
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* SkewedPriorities: The whole episode. Also, this exchange regarding cutting into Pierce's casts:
-->'''Troy''': Dammit. Broke the scissors.
-->'''Jeff''': Here. ''Be careful''. That's the last pair we have. ''[as an afterthought]'' Also, dont cut his legs.
-->'''Troy''': Dammit. Broke the scissors.
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** Abed gives Annie a chocolate in the first two minutes of the episode, long before his menstrual charts are revealed.
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Strangely, each time I\'ve done this, it\'s been Edit Tip #14, which features the word \"spoiler\" three times, the most of any edit tip I\'ve seen. SO MANY SPOILERS
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* AllThereInTheManual: The DVD case for the first half of Season 2 is styled after Abed's notebook. You can read Abed's notes on the [[spoiler:menstrual cycles]] so that you can see exactly what he wrote without having to freeze-frame the episode.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The DVD case for the first half of Season 2 is styled after Abed's notebook. You can read Abed's notes on the [[spoiler:menstrual cycles]] menstrual cycles so that you can see exactly what he wrote without having to freeze-frame the episode.
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* BrickJoke[=/=]ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler: Annie's Boobs the monkey]], introduced in Season 1.
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* BrickJoke[=/=]ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler: Annie's Boobs the monkey]], monkey, introduced in Season 1.1, is the real culprit.
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** [[Recap/CommunityS1E21ContemporaryAmericanPoultry Annie's Boobs, Annie's backpack, the gum in the hair, and the stolen boyfriend.]]
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** [[Recap/CommunityS1E21ContemporaryAmericanPoultry Annie's Boobs, Annie's backpack, the gum in the hair, and the stolen boyfriend.]]]] Doubles as {{Foreshadowing}}, since it brings Annie's Boobs back into the viewer's consciousness after a long absence.
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** Abed points out that [[spoiler:Shirley could have only conceived during Halloween, referring back to [[Recap/CommunityS2E06Epidemiology "Epidemiology."]]]]
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** Abed points out that [[spoiler:Shirley Shirley could have only conceived during Halloween, referring back to [[Recap/CommunityS2E06Epidemiology "Epidemiology."]]]]"]]
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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: The pen turns out to have been stolen by [[spoiler:Annie's Boobs, Troy's monkey.]]
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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: The pen turns out to have been stolen by [[spoiler:Annie's Annie's Boobs, Troy's monkey.]]
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** You also notice at the beginning of the episode that when Annie starts to get upset, Abed has a chocolate for her -- hinting at the reveal later in the episode about [[spoiler:his tracking the girls' menstrual cycles.]]
** If you pay very close attention to the beginning of the episode, you can actually see the pen being stolen.
** If you pay very close attention to the beginning of the episode, you can actually see the pen being stolen.
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** You also notice at the beginning of the episode that when Annie starts to get upset, Abed has a chocolate for her -- hinting at the reveal later in the episode about [[spoiler:his his tracking the girls' menstrual cycles.]]
cycles.
** If you pay very close attention to the beginning of theepisode, episode while the Dean gives his non-violent verbal reminder, you can actually see the pen being stolen.stolen.
** Later, as Jeff and Troy trash the Library, the camera lingers on the vent where Annie's Boobs will later emerge.
** If you pay very close attention to the beginning of the
** Later, as Jeff and Troy trash the Library, the camera lingers on the vent where Annie's Boobs will later emerge.
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* ICanExplain: Abed, when the group discovers [[spoiler:his charts on the female group members' menstrual cycles]]. Double-subverted in that while he didn't expect them to actually give him a chance to explain, he's prepared with an explanation when they do.
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* ICanExplain: Abed, when the group discovers [[spoiler:his his charts on the female group members' menstrual cycles]].cycles. Double-subverted in that while he didn't expect them to actually give him a chance to explain, he's prepared with an explanation when they do.
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* MeaningfulBackgroundEvent: You can see [[spoiler:Annie's Boobs take the pen in the back of one of Troy and Abed's shots early on.]]
* [[spoiler:[[TheDogWasTheMastermind The Monkey Was The Mastermind]]]]
* [[spoiler:NoPeriodsPeriod]]: Averted.
* [[spoiler:[[TheDogWasTheMastermind The Monkey Was The Mastermind]]]]
* [[spoiler:NoPeriodsPeriod]]: Averted.
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* MeaningfulBackgroundEvent: You can see [[spoiler:Annie's Annie's Boobs take the pen in the back of one of Troy and Abed's shots early on.]]
on, during the Dean's visit.
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* PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad[=/=]TastesLikeDiabetes: One of the floats in the puppy parade features a puppy and a kitten with the caption, "Equality and Togetherness". Even the Dean finds it sanctimonious.
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* PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad[=/=]TastesLikeDiabetes: One of the floats in the puppy parade features a puppy and a kitten with the caption, "Equality and Togetherness". [[HypocriticalHumor Even the Dean finds it sanctimonious.]]
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** [[spoiler:StealthPun: In the end, Annie's Boobs ''did'' have the pen]]
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** [[spoiler:StealthPun: StealthPun: In the end, Annie's Boobs ''did'' have the pen]]pen.
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* AWizardDidIt:[[spoiler: The group concludes that a ghost did it.]]
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* AWizardDidIt:[[spoiler: The AWizardDidIt:The group concludes that a ghost did it.]]
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* WordOfGod: According to Dan Harmon on the DVD commentary, Gwynnifer doesn't exist and Jeff wasn't really making a phone call. Gwynnifer was his code for [[spoiler:hooking up with Britta]].
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* ShipTease: Jeff and Annie, using another one of their customary {{HeldGaze}}s.
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* ShipTease: Jeff and Annie, using another one of their customary {{HeldGaze}}s.{{Held Gaze}}s.
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-->'''Dean:''' Okay, now this float feels a liiiiittle preachy. BOOOO! BOOOOOOO!
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** The collection of items amassed by Annie's Boobs contains numerous callbacks to previous episodes.
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'''Dean Pelton:''' I expect to see you all at the puppy parade. Except you, Jeffrey -- I know you've got a catch to date.
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'''Dean Pelton:''' I expect to see you all at the puppy parade. Except you, Jeffrey -- I know you've got a catch to date.\\
'''Jeff:''' ''[off Britta's look]'' Oh, like you're famous for your wit.
'''Jeff:''' ''[off Britta's look]'' Oh, like you're famous for your wit.
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* {{Fanservice}}: Everybody strips down to their underwear. There's something for everyone!
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* {{Fanservice}}: Everybody strips down to their underwear.underwear in order to find the pen. There's something for everyone!
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* {{Anvilicious}}: The Equality and Togetherness float at the puppy parade. The Dean, [[PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad of all people]], lampshades it.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: The InUniverse, the Equality and Togetherness float at the puppy parade. The Dean, [[PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad of all people]], lampshades it.
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*ShipTease: Jeff and Annie, using another one of their customary {{HeldGaze}}s.
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* HeldGaze: Jeff and Annie have a very {{UST}}-y moment of holding each other's gaze as their anger ignites after Annie tries to calm down Jeff with the line: "It's just a pen!" The HeldGaze continues even as Britta butts in and Jeff keeps staring at Annie's chest. Once again, the HeldGAze is used to establish that Jeff and Annie's {{UST}} is off the charts!
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* HeldGaze: Jeff and Annie have a very {{UST}}-y moment of holding each other's gaze as their anger ignites after Annie tries to calm down Jeff with the line: "It's just a pen!" The HeldGaze continues even as Britta butts in and Jeff keeps staring at Annie's chest. Once again, the HeldGAze HeldGaze is used to establish that Jeff and Annie's {{UST}} is off the charts!
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*HeldGaze: Jeff and Annie have a very {{UST}}-y moment of holding each other's gaze as their anger ignites after Annie tries to calm down Jeff with the line: "It's just a pen!" The HeldGaze continues even as Britta butts in and Jeff keeps staring at Annie's chest. Once again, the HeldGAze is used to establish that Jeff and Annie's {{UST}} is off the charts!
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* {{Anvilicious}}: The Equality and Togetherness float at the puppy parade. {{Lampshade|Hanging}}g. [[invoked]]
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* {{Anvilicious}}: The Equality and Togetherness float at the puppy parade. {{Lampshade|Hanging}}g. [[invoked]]The Dean, [[PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad of all people]], lampshades it.
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** [[spoiler:[[StealthPun: In the end, Annie's Boobs ''did'' have the pen]]]]
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** [[spoiler:[[StealthPun: [[spoiler:StealthPun: In the end, Annie's Boobs ''did'' have the pen]]]]pen]]
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* AllThereInTheManual: The DVD case for the first half of Season 2 is styled after Abed's notebook. You can read Abed's notes on the menstrual cycles so that you can see exactly what he wrote without having to freeze-frame the episode.
* {{Anvilicious}}: The Equality and Togetherness float at the puppy parade. {{Lampshaded}}. [[invoked]]
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* {{Anvilicious}}: The Equality and Togetherness float at the puppy parade.
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** Abed points out that [[spoiler: Shirley could have only conceived during Halloween, referring back to [[Recap/CommunityS2E06Epidemiology "Epidemiology."]]]]
* CollectiveGroan: The group's response to [[SoapBoxSadie Britta]]'s complaining about "invasion of civil liberties".
* CollectiveGroan: The group's response to [[SoapBoxSadie Britta]]'s complaining about "invasion of civil liberties".
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** Abed points out that [[spoiler: Shirley [[spoiler:Shirley could have only conceived during Halloween, referring back to [[Recap/CommunityS2E06Epidemiology "Epidemiology."]]]]
* CollectiveGroan: The group's response to[[SoapBoxSadie [[SoapboxSadie Britta]]'s complaining about "invasion of civil liberties".
* CollectiveGroan: The group's response to
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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: The pen turns out to have been stolen by [[spoiler: Annie's Boobs, Troy's monkey.]]
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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: The pen turns out to have been stolen by [[spoiler: Annie's [[spoiler:Annie's Boobs, Troy's monkey.]]
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** When removing Pierce's casts to find the pen, Abed expresses uncertainty that they should be doing that, noting that "this is how supervillains get created." [[spoiler: Throughout the second half of the series, Pierce's increasingly erratic, {{Jerkass}} and cruel behaviour has been an ongoing subplot, culminating in his revenge scheme in "Intermediate Documentary Filmmaking".]]
** You also notice at the beginning of the episode that when Annie starts to get upset, Abed has a chocolate for her - hinting at the reveal later in the episode about [[spoiler: his tracking the girls' menstrual cycles.]]
** If you pay real close attention to the beginning of the episode, you can actually see the pen being stolen
** Britta comments that Jeff "usually" wears Beetlejuice boxers - only Abed notices, setting up his realization in "Paradigms of Memory" that [[spoiler: they have been sleeping together.]]
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** You also notice at the beginning of the episode that when Annie starts to get upset, Abed has a chocolate for her - hinting at the reveal later in the episode about [[spoiler: his tracking the girls' menstrual cycles.]]
** If you pay real close attention to the beginning of the episode, you can actually see the pen being stolen
** Britta comments that Jeff "usually" wears Beetlejuice boxers - only Abed notices, setting up his realization in "Paradigms of Memory" that [[spoiler: they have been sleeping together.]]
* FreezeFrameBonus:
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** When removing Pierce's casts to find the pen, Abed expresses uncertainty that they should be doing that, noting that "this is how supervillains get created." [[spoiler: "[[spoiler: Throughout the second half of the series, Pierce's increasingly erratic, {{Jerkass}} and cruel behaviour has been an ongoing subplot, culminating in his revenge scheme in "Intermediate "[[Recap/CommunityS2E16IntermediateDocumentaryFilmmaking Intermediate Documentary Filmmaking".Filmmaking]]".]]
** You also notice at the beginning of the episode that when Annie starts to get upset, Abed has a chocolate for her- -- hinting at the reveal later in the episode about [[spoiler: his [[spoiler:his tracking the girls' menstrual cycles.]]
** If you payreal very close attention to the beginning of the episode, you can actually see the pen being stolen
stolen.
** Britta comments that Jeff "usually" wearsBeetlejuice Film/{{Beetlejuice}} boxers - -- only Abed notices, setting up his realization in "Paradigms "[[Recap/CommunityS2E21ParadigmsOfHumanMemory Paradigms of Memory" Human Memory]]" that [[spoiler: they [[spoiler:they have been sleeping together.]]
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** If you pay
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* ICanExplain: Abed, when the group discovers his charts on the female group members' menstrual cycles. Double-subverted in that while he didn't expect them to actually give him a chance to explain, he's prepared with an explanation when they do.
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* ICanExplain: Abed, when the group discovers his [[spoiler:his charts on the female group members' menstrual cycles.cycles]]. Double-subverted in that while he didn't expect them to actually give him a chance to explain, he's prepared with an explanation when they do.
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* MacGuffin: The pen
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* MacGuffin: The penpen.
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* [[TheDogWasTheMastermind The Monkey Was The Mastermind]]
* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted.
* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted.
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*NoPeriodsPeriod: [[spoiler:NoPeriodsPeriod]]: Averted.
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'''Dean Pelton:''' I expect to see you all at the puppy parade. Except you, Jeffrey - I know you've got a catch to date.
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'''Dean Pelton:''' I expect to see you all at the puppy parade. Except you, Jeffrey - -- I know you've got a catch to date.
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* SassyBlackWoman: Shirley
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-->'''Jeff:''' I have a date to catch, or, should I say, a catch to date.\\
'''Britta:''' Oof, I hope you just came up with that.\\
''(later)''\\
'''Dean Pelton:''' I expect to see you all at the puppy parade. Except you, Jeffrey - I know you've got a catch to date.
-->'''Jeff:''' I have a date to catch, or, should I say, a catch to date.\\
'''Britta:''' Oof, I hope you just came up with that.\\
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-->'''Jeff:''' I have a date to catch, or, should I say, a catch to date.\\
'''Britta:''' [[LamePunReaction Oof, I hope you just came up with that]].\\
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'''Dean Pelton:''' I expect to see you all at the puppy parade. Except you, Jeffrey - I know you've got a catch to date.
-->'''Jeff:''' I have a date to catch, or, should I say, a catch to date.\\
'''Britta:''' [[LamePunReaction Oof, I hope you just came up with that]].\\
''(later)''\\
'''Dean Pelton:''' I expect to see you all at the puppy parade. Except you, Jeffrey - I know you've got a catch to date.
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** [[Recap/CommunityS2E08CooperativeCalligraphy Abed points out that ]][[spoiler: Shirley could have only conceived during Halloween, referring back to [[Recap/CommunityS2E06Epidemiology "Epidemiology."]]]]
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** [[Recap/CommunityS2E08CooperativeCalligraphy Abed points out that ]][[spoiler: [[spoiler: Shirley could have only conceived during Halloween, referring back to [[Recap/CommunityS2E06Epidemiology "Epidemiology."]]]]
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-->'''Annie:''' ''It's not a pen; it's a principle!''
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-->'''Annie:''' ''It's It's not a pen; it's a principle!''''principle''!
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** [[Recap/CommunityS1E21ContemporaryAmericanPoultry Annie's Boobs, Annie's backpack, the gum in the hair, and stolen boyfriend.]]
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** [[Recap/CommunityS1E21ContemporaryAmericanPoultry Annie's Boobs, Annie's backpack, the gum in the hair, and the stolen boyfriend.]]