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** Izzard Vayne slaughters ''[[KillEmAll the entire]]'' Band of the Falcon save for Bob, who is NotWorthKilling at that time.
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** Izzard Vayne slaughters ''[[KillEmAll the entire]]'' entire Band of the Falcon save for Bob, who is NotWorthKilling at that time.
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* '''Straight''': In the DarkFantasy manga ''Songs of Troperia'', the kid Bob is a member of [[BadassArmy Band of the Falcon]], led by the charismatic [[LadyOfWar Lady Alice Flameheart]]. Later in the story, Lady Alice Flameheart is slaughtered by [[MagnificentBastard Sorceror]] [[WhiteHairBlackHeart Izzard Vayne]]. Things are about to get serious.
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* '''Straight''': In the DarkFantasy manga ''Songs of Troperia'', the kid Bob is a member of [[BadassArmy Band of the Falcon]], led by the charismatic [[LadyOfWar Lady Alice Flameheart]]. Later in the story, Lady Alice Flameheart is slaughtered by [[MagnificentBastard Sorceror]] Sorcerer]] [[WhiteHairBlackHeart Izzard Vayne]]. Things are about to get serious.
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'''Basic Trope''': Character is set up as important, then killed partway through the story to show AnyoneCanDie.
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'''Basic Trope''': Character is set up as important, then killed partway through the story to show AnyoneCanDie.AnyoneCanDie or how evil/dangerous the villain is.
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Was the "falls in love" part really necessary- especially when this Bob is called a kid earlier?
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* '''Defied''': [[TakingTheBullet Bob pushes Lady Alice aside as Izzard Vayne throws a huge fireball at her]]. Amazingly, both of them survive and the rest of the Falcons finish the stunned Izzard Vayne. Lady Alice falls in love with Bob.
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* '''Defied''': [[TakingTheBullet Bob pushes Lady Alice aside as Izzard Vayne throws a huge fireball at her]]. Amazingly, both of them survive and the rest of the Falcons finish the stunned Izzard Vayne. Lady Alice falls in love with Bob.
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** A {{badass}} villain is killed early on to show how tough the heroes are.
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** A {{badass}} badass villain is killed early on to show how tough the heroes are.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Izzard Vayne slaughters ''[[KillEmAll the entire]]'' Band of the Falcon save for Bob, who is NotWorthKilling at that time.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Izzard Vayne slaughters ''[[KillEmAll the entire]]'' Band of the Falcon save for Bob, who is NotWorthKilling at that time.
** Izzard Vayne slaughters ''[[KillEmAll the entire]]'' Band of the Falcon save for Bob, who is NotWorthKilling at that time.
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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**TheHeroDies [[DecoyProtagonist in the beginning of the third act,]] leading his sidekicks to pick up the pieces.
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* '''Downplayed''': SacrificialLamb
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* '''Downplayed''': SacrificialLamb'''Downplayed''':
** SacrificialLamb
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** SacrificialLamb
** TheWorfEffect
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** Alternatively: Sorcerer Izzard Vayne sees how important Lady Alice Flameheart is to the group, and so deliberately kills her to strike a blow against the group's stability.
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** Alternatively: Sorcerer Izzard Vayne sees how important Lady Alice Flameheart is to the group, and so deliberately targets and kills her to strike a blow against the group's stability.
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** Bob's final battle versus [[BigBad Emperor Izzard Vayne]] has him [[BackupFromOtherworld summoning the soul of the deceased members of Band of the Falcon, who are now Einherjar]]. CurbStompBattle ensues.
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** Bob's final battle versus [[BigBad Emperor Izzard Vayne]] has him [[BackupFromOtherworld summoning the soul of the deceased members of Band of the Falcon, who are now Einherjar]]. A CurbStompBattle ensues.
** Lady Alice's actress is leaving, and the writers have to write her character out as a result.
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* '''Defied''': Bob push Lady Alice aside as Izzard Vayne throws a huge fireball at her. Amazingly, both of them survive and the rest of the Falcons finish the stunned Izzard Vayne. Lady Alice falls in love with Bob.
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* '''Defied''': [[TakingTheBullet Bob push pushes Lady Alice aside as Izzard Vayne throws a huge fireball at her.her]]. Amazingly, both of them survive and the rest of the Falcons finish the stunned Izzard Vayne. Lady Alice falls in love with Bob.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The SacrificialLion is, duh, someone ''really'' important for LaResistance. His[=/=]her death severely impairs the rebellion as a whole.
* '''Reconstructed''': the death of the SacrificialLion fuels the drives of the other members of LaResistance, who fight valiantly to compensate for their loss.
* '''Reconstructed''': the death of the SacrificialLion fuels the drives of the other members of LaResistance, who fight valiantly to compensate for their loss.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The SacrificialLion Lady Alice is, duh, well, someone ''really'' important for LaResistance. His[=/=]her the Band of the Falcon. Her death severely impairs the rebellion Falcons as a whole.
* '''Reconstructed''':the But her death of the SacrificialLion ultimately fuels the drives of the other members of LaResistance, members, who fight valiantly to compensate for their loss.
* '''Reconstructed''':
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* '''Enforced''': "DeathIsDramatic, even more so when it happens to someone who seems invincible and is on the hero's side. Let's kill Alice."
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "DeathIsDramatic, even more so when it happens to someone who seems invincible and is on the hero's side. Let's kill Alice."
** "DeathIsDramatic, even more so when it happens to someone who seems invincible and is on the hero's side. Let's kill Alice."
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Lady Alice, your death shall not be in vain! Your ideals we shall carry!"
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** "[[LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt Yes, we really]] ''[[LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt would]]'' [[LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt do it]]."
* '''Lampshaded''': "Lady Alice, your death shall not be in vain! [[PresentAbsence Your ideals we shallcarry!"carry]]!"
* '''Lampshaded''': "Lady Alice, your death shall not be in vain! [[PresentAbsence Your ideals we shall
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* '''Straight''': In the DarkFantasy manga ''Songs of Troperia'', the kid Bob is a member of [[BadassArmy Band of the Falcon]], led by the charismatic [[LadyOfWar Lady Alice Flameheart]]. Later in the story, Lady Alice Flameheart is slaughtered by [[MagnificentBastard Sorceror]] [[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy Izzard Vayne]]. Things are about to get serious.
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* '''Straight''': In the DarkFantasy manga ''Songs of Troperia'', the kid Bob is a member of [[BadassArmy Band of the Falcon]], led by the charismatic [[LadyOfWar Lady Alice Flameheart]]. Later in the story, Lady Alice Flameheart is slaughtered by [[MagnificentBastard Sorceror]] [[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy [[WhiteHairBlackHeart Izzard Vayne]]. Things are about to get serious.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???SacrificialLamb
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* '''Justified''': Lady Alice Flameheart has some sort of ThanatosGambit going on.
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* '''Justified''': '''Downplayed''': ???
* '''Justified''':
** Lady Alice Flameheart has some sort of ThanatosGambit going on.
* '''Justified''':
** Lady Alice Flameheart has some sort of ThanatosGambit going on.
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* '''Inverted''': Bob's final battle versus [[BigBad Emperor Izzard Vayne]] has him [[BackupFromOtherworld summoning the soul of the deceased members of Band of the Falcon, who are now Einherjar]]. CurbStompBattle ensues.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Bob's final battle versus [[BigBad Emperor Izzard Vayne]] has him [[BackupFromOtherworld summoning the soul of the deceased members of Band of the Falcon, who are now Einherjar]]. CurbStompBattle ensues.
** Bob's final battle versus [[BigBad Emperor Izzard Vayne]] has him [[BackupFromOtherworld summoning the soul of the deceased members of Band of the Falcon, who are now Einherjar]]. CurbStompBattle ensues.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The SacrificialLion is, duh, someone ''really'' important for LaResistance. His/her death severely impairs the rebellion as a whole.
* '''Reconstructed''': the death of the SacrificialLion fuels the drives of the other members of LaResistance, who fight valiently to compensate for their loss.
* '''Reconstructed''': the death of the SacrificialLion fuels the drives of the other members of LaResistance, who fight valiently to compensate for their loss.
* '''Deconstructed''': The SacrificialLion is, duh, someone ''really'' important for LaResistance. His[=/=]her death severely impairs the rebellion as a whole.
* '''Reconstructed''': the death of the SacrificialLion fuels the drives of the other members of LaResistance, who fight valiantly to compensate for their loss.
* '''Reconstructed''': the death of the SacrificialLion fuels the drives of the other members of LaResistance, who fight valiantly to compensate for their loss.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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'''Basic Trope''': Character is set up as important, then killed partway through the story to show Anyone Can Die.
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'''Basic Trope''': Character is set up as important, then killed partway through the story to show Anyone Can Die.AnyoneCanDie.
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** A {{badass}} villain is killed early on to show how tough the heroes are.
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* '''Subverted''': [[IGotBetter Lady Alice gets better]].
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* '''Subverted''': [[IGotBetter [[DisneyDeath Lady Alice gets better]].comes back.]]
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* '''Defied''': Bob push Lady Alice aside as Izzard Vayne throws a huge fireball at her. Amazingly, both of them survive and the rest of the Falcons finish the stunned Izzard Vayne. [[CakeEater Lady Alice fall in love with Bob]].
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* '''Defied''': Bob push Lady Alice aside as Izzard Vayne throws a huge fireball at her. Amazingly, both of them survive and the rest of the Falcons finish the stunned Izzard Vayne. [[CakeEater Lady Alice fall falls in love with Bob]].Bob.
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** Alternatively: Sorceror Izzard Vayne sees how important Lady Alice Flameheart is to the group, and so deliberately kills her to strike a blow against the group's stability.
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** Alternatively: Sorceror Sorcerer Izzard Vayne sees how important Lady Alice Flameheart is to the group, and so deliberately kills her to strike a blow against the group's stability.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The SacrificialLion is, duh, someone ''really'' important for LaResistance. His/her death severely impair the rebellion as a whole.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The SacrificialLion is, duh, someone ''really'' important for LaResistance. His/her death severely impair impairs the rebellion as a whole.
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* '''Exploited''': Lady Alice knows someone is likely to die in the upcoming battle with Izzard Vayne. She plans things ahead of times so that she's the most likely casualty.
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* '''Exploited''': Lady Alice knows someone that ''someone'' is likely to die in the upcoming battle with Izzard Vayne. She plans things ahead of times so that [[SelfSacrificeScheme she's the most likely casualty.casualty]].
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Lady Alice knows someone is likely to die in the upcoming battle with Izzard Vayne. She plans things ahead of times so that she's the most likely casualty.
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* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': "Uh-oh, the story's getting more intense; it's usually around now the writers kill off a well-developed charqacter just to prove that AnyoneCanDie."
* '''Conversed''': "Uh-oh, the story's getting more intense; it's usually around now the writers kill off a well-developed charqacter just to prove that AnyoneCanDie."
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* '''Discussed''': ???
"OhCrap. This is where someone important dies, isn't it?"
* '''Conversed''': "Uh-oh, the story's getting more intense; it's usually around now the writers kill off a well-developedcharqacter character just to prove that AnyoneCanDie."
* '''Conversed''': "Uh-oh, the story's getting more intense; it's usually around now the writers kill off a well-developed
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Back to SacrificialLion
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Back to SacrificialLionSacrificialLion. Just [[SchmuckBait don't get too attached]].
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* '''Straight''': In the GrimDark [[TheDungAges Fantasy]] manga ''Songs of Troperia'', the kid Bob is a member of [[BadassArmy Band of the Falcon]], led by the charismatic [[LadyOfWar Lady Alice Flameheart]]. Later in the story, Lady Alice Flameheart is slaughtered by [[MagnificentBastard Sorceror]] [[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy Izzard Vayne]]. Things are about to get serious.
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* '''Straight''': In the GrimDark [[TheDungAges Fantasy]] DarkFantasy manga ''Songs of Troperia'', the kid Bob is a member of [[BadassArmy Band of the Falcon]], led by the charismatic [[LadyOfWar Lady Alice Flameheart]]. Later in the story, Lady Alice Flameheart is slaughtered by [[MagnificentBastard Sorceror]] [[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy Izzard Vayne]]. Things are about to get serious.
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* '''Averted''': The only characters to die are SacrificialLambs and RedShirts.
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* '''Averted''': The only characters to die are SacrificialLambs {{Sacrificial Lamb}}s and RedShirts.
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* '''Straight''': In the GrimDark [[TheDungAges Fantasy]] manga ''Songs of Troperia'', the kid Bob is a member of [[BadassArmy Band of the Falcon]], led by the charismatic [[LadyOfWar Lady Alice Flameheart]]. Later in the story, Lady Alice Flameheart is slaughtered by [[MagnificentBastard Sorceror]] [[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy Izzard Vayne]] [[AnyoneCanDie along with a good 2/3 of the Band of the Falcon]]. Things are about to get serious.
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* '''Straight''': In the GrimDark [[TheDungAges Fantasy]] manga ''Songs of Troperia'', the kid Bob is a member of [[BadassArmy Band of the Falcon]], led by the charismatic [[LadyOfWar Lady Alice Flameheart]]. Later in the story, Lady Alice Flameheart is slaughtered by [[MagnificentBastard Sorceror]] [[WhiteHairedPrettyBoy Izzard Vayne]] [[AnyoneCanDie along with a good 2/3 of the Band of the Falcon]].Vayne]]. Things are about to get serious.
** Alternatively: Sorceror Izzard Vayne sees how important Lady Alice Flameheart is to the group, and so deliberately kills her to strike a blow against the group's stability.
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???the death of the SacrificialLion fuels the drives of the other members of LaResistance, who fight valiently to compensate for their loss.
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* '''Averted''': Every single member of the Band of Falcon know their occupational hazard, no death will faze them (or the audience).
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* '''Averted''': Every single member of the Band of Falcon know their occupational hazard, no death will faze them (or the audience).The only characters to die are SacrificialLambs and RedShirts.
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* '''Invoked''': Lady Alice, having studied psychological warfare, decides to fight Izzard Vayne even though she can't win-- because she knows that her death is exactly what will motivate the Falcons for the rest of their life.
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* '''Invoked''': Lady Alice, having studied psychological warfare, decides to fight Izzard Vayne even though she can't win-- win -- because [[ThanatosGambit she knows that her death is exactly what will motivate the Falcons Falcons]] for the rest of their life.lives.
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* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Conversed''': ???"Uh-oh, the story's getting more intense; it's usually around now the writers kill off a well-developed charqacter just to prove that AnyoneCanDie."