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* '''Averted''': Luna can change from human to wolf and vice versa with no pain.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** Luna can change from human to wolf and vice versa with nopain.pain.
** Nobody ever transforms.
** Luna can change from human to wolf and vice versa with no
** Nobody ever transforms.
** "I don't think the audience will believe it if transformations are completely painless, considering the extreme changes that the body has to go through."
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* '''Invoked''': The villain keeps Luna in a confined space too small for her werewolf form as she transforms in order to cause as much pain as possible.
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* '''Invoked''': '''Invoked''':
** The villain keeps Luna in a confined space too small for her werewolf form as she transforms in order to cause as much pain as possible.
** The curse placed upon Luna is intentionally supposed to be as painful as possible.
** The villain keeps Luna in a confined space too small for her werewolf form as she transforms in order to cause as much pain as possible.
** The curse placed upon Luna is intentionally supposed to be as painful as possible.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Luna [[ThisIsGonnaSuck always winces before she has to transform,]] and rather than bloodcurdling howls, she lets loose [[ClusterFBomb a trail of expletives]] when shifting to wolf form.
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* '''Implied''': Luna is never seen transforming, but she does mention that it isn't a pleasant experience.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Luna [[ThisIsGonnaSuck always winces before she has to transform,]] and rather than bloodcurdling howls, she lets loose [[ClusterFBomb a trail of expletives]] (or at the very least, {{Angrish}}) when shifting to wolf form.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Luna [[ThisIsGonnaSuck always winces before she has to transform,]] and rather than bloodcurdling howls, she lets loose [[ClusterFBomb a trail of expletives]] (or at the very least, {{Angrish}}) when shifting to wolf form.
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* '''Subverted''': Luna braces herself for her first transformation, but when it happens, it doesn't hurt at all.
* '''Double Subverted''': That's only the first stage. The next is very painful.
* '''Double Subverted''': That's only the first stage. The next is very painful.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Luna braces herself for her first transformation, but when it happens, it doesn't hurt at all.
** Pain is what ''triggers'' Luna's transformation, but the pain doesn't last through her transformation.
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** That's only the first stage. The next is verypainful.painful.
** Pain triggers the transformation, and it only gets ''worse''.
** Luna braces herself for her first transformation, but when it happens, it doesn't hurt at all.
** Pain is what ''triggers'' Luna's transformation, but the pain doesn't last through her transformation.
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** That's only the first stage. The next is very
** Pain triggers the transformation, and it only gets ''worse''.
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** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time. After her body adjusts, subsequent transformations are much easier...
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** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time. After her body adjusts, subsequent transformations are much easier...unless it's a full moon, when it's ''always'' painful no matter how many times she's done it before.
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** '''Played For Laughs''': Luna [[ThisIsGonnaSuck always winces before she has to transform,]] and rather than bloodcurdling howls, she lets loose [[ClusterFBomb a trail of expletives]] when shifting to wolf form.
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** '''Played For Laughs''': Luna [[ThisIsGonnaSuck always winces before she has to transform,]] and rather than bloodcurdling howls, she lets loose [[ClusterFBomb a trail of expletives]] when shifting to wolf form.
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** The change is slow, [[BodyHorror her body distorts horribly]], and [[{{Squick}} we hear all the squishing and crunching that goes with it]].
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** The change is slow, [[BodyHorror her body distorts horribly]], and [[{{Squick}} we hear all the squishing and crunching that goes with it]].her bones shifting around]].
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* '''Downplayed''': Luna's transformation leaves her with a mild chestache.
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* '''Downplayed''': Luna's transformation leaves her with a mild chestache.is mildly uncomfortable.
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* '''Inverted''': Luna's transformations [[EvilFeelsGood feel good]].
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* '''Inverted''': Luna's transformations [[EvilFeelsGood feel transformation [[TheImmodestOrgasm feels good]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': That's only the first stage. The next is pure BodyHorror.
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* '''Double Subverted''': That's only the first stage. The next is pure BodyHorror.very painful.
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** While Luna's transformations are painful, other werewolves in the story appear to shapeshift painlessly.
** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time. Her body adjusts, and subsequent transformations are much easier... But after forcing her body to transform on several consecutive occasions, the pain becomes even worse than during her first time.
** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time. Her body adjusts, and subsequent transformations are much easier... But after forcing her body to transform on several consecutive occasions, the pain becomes even worse than during her first time.
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** While Luna's transformations are transformation is painful, other werewolves in the story appear to shapeshift painlessly.
** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time.Her After her body adjusts, and subsequent transformations are much easier... But after forcing her body to transform on several consecutive occasions, the pain becomes even worse than during her first time.easier...
** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time.
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** "This show needs as much NightmareFuel as possible."
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** "This "We need to show needs why Luna will only transform as much NightmareFuel as possible.a last resort."
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** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends hide her as best they can until she can [[BigDamnHeroes reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter]].
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** Luna learns to handle the pain and stops losing consciousness during her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends hide her as best they can until she can [[BigDamnHeroes reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter]]. transformations.
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* '''Exaggerated''': The change is slow, [[BodyHorror her body distorts horribly]], and [[{{Squick}} we hear all the squishing and crunching that goes with it]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** The change is slow, [[BodyHorror her body distorts horribly]], and [[{{Squick}} we hear all the squishing and crunching that goes withit]].it]].
** The transformation isn't only excruciatingly painful, but also fatal.
** The change is slow, [[BodyHorror her body distorts horribly]], and [[{{Squick}} we hear all the squishing and crunching that goes with
** The transformation isn't only excruciatingly painful, but also fatal.
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** The transformation is fatal.
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** In a world where TranshumanTreachery and other {{Jerkass}} behavior spreads like rabies amongst those with lycanthropy, Luna's situation strikes the right balance between getting the support from her friends to help her out of her self-loathing that threatens every time she feels the pain and not getting too big a metaphorical head from the power she has.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Luna's particular lycanthropy means each transformation is essentially a battle of her HeroicWillpower against the more base and savage tendencies of her wolf form; if her willpower were ever to be completely overwhelmed, she would [[ModeLock remain in her savage wolf form forever]]. The pain of her body shifting forms is one of the big things that saps her mental strength as she tries to maintain control of herself each night...and full moons are when the wolf howls strongest...
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* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Conversed''': ???"Hmm...I'm not so sure being a werewolf's actually that awesome anymore now that I've seen ''that''. Ouch."
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Whenever werewolves evolve to transform without pain, it'll be a miracle..."
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
** "Whenever werewolves evolve to transform without pain, it'll be a miracle..."
** "Whenever werewolves evolve to transform without pain, it'll be a miracle..."
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** "Whoever said 'Change is good' was a ''lying bastard!''"
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* '''Enforced''': "This show needs as much NightmareFuel as possible."
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "This show needs as much NightmareFuel as possible."
** "This show needs as much NightmareFuel as possible."
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** This, potentially among other reasons, is used to avoid someone with lycanthropy becoming CursedWithAwesome.
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** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time. Her body adjusts, and subsequent transformations are much easier.
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** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time. Her body adjusts, and subsequent transformations are much easier.easier... But after forcing her body to transform on several consecutive occasions, the pain becomes even worse than during her first time.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': While Luna's transformations are painful, other werewolves in the story appear to shapeshift painlessly.
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** While Luna's transformations are painful, other werewolves in the story appear to shapeshiftpainlessly.painlessly.
** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time. Her body adjusts, and subsequent transformations are much easier.
** While Luna's transformations are painful, other werewolves in the story appear to shapeshift
** Luna's transformation was painful because it was her first time. Her body adjusts, and subsequent transformations are much easier.
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** The pain, among other reasons, contributes to Luna's self-loathing about being a werewolf, especially once it proved too much for her HeroicWillpower to overcome and she hurt her friends from losing control.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Luna slowly goes crazy from her transformations.
** Luna passes out in mid-transformation, and is killed while unconscious.
* '''Reconstructed''': Luna is a hero, and her transformations, though painful, are worth it because they let her fight evil.
** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends hide her as best they can until she can [[BigDamnHeroes reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter]].
** Luna passes out in mid-transformation, and is killed while unconscious.
* '''Reconstructed''': Luna is a hero, and her transformations, though painful, are worth it because they let her fight evil.
** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends hide her as best they can until she can [[BigDamnHeroes reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter]].
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* '''Exploited''': One of Luna's potential victims takes advantage of Luna's crippling agony in order to get away safely.
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** Luna slowly goes crazy from her transformations.
** Luna passes out in mid-transformation, and is killed while unconscious.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Luna is a hero, and her transformations, though painful, are worth it because they let her fight evil.
** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends hide her as best they can until she can [[BigDamnHeroes reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter]].
** Luna slowly goes crazy from her transformations.
** Luna passes out in mid-transformation, and is killed while unconscious.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Luna is a hero, and her transformations, though painful, are worth it because they let her fight evil.
** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends hide her as best they can until she can [[BigDamnHeroes reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter]].
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Whenever werewolves evolve to transform without pain,it'll be a miracle..."
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Whenever werewolves evolve to transform without pain,it'll pain, it'll be a miracle..."
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** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends hide her as best they can until she can reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter.
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** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends hide her as best they can until she can [[BigDamnHeroes reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter.platter]].
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* '''Enforced''': "This show needs as much HighOctaneNightmareFuel as possible."
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* '''Enforced''': "This show needs as much HighOctaneNightmareFuel NightmareFuel as possible."
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* '''Straight''': When [[MeaningfulName Luna]] the [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolf]] transforms, she goes through agony.
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* '''Straight''': When [[MeaningfulName [[WerewolfThemeNaming Luna]] the [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolf]] transforms, she goes through agony.
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** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends protect her as best they can until she can reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter.
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** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends protect hide her as best they can until she can reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter.
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* '''Justified''': Her muscles, bones and organs shifting around have got to affect her nerves somewhat.
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* '''Justified''': Her muscles, bones bones, and organs shifting around have got to affect her nerves somewhat.
** Luna and her friends are being pursued by another werewolf, and her friends protect her as best they can until she can reawaken and hand the other werewolf's ass on a silver platter.
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* '''Defied''': Luna takes a large dose of painkillers evey full moon before the transformation.
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* '''Defied''': Luna takes a large dose of painkillers evey every full moon before the transformation.
* '''Discussed''':???"Oh, God, I am not looking forward to seeing the full moon tonight."
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* '''Downplayed''': Luna's transformation leaves her with a mild chestache.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Luna is a heroe, and her transformations, though painful, are worth it because they let her fight evil.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Luna is a heroe, hero, and her transformations, though painful, are worth it because they let her fight evil.
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???"Whenever werewolves evolve to transform without pain,it'll be a miracle..."
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???Luna is a heroe, and her transformations, though painful, are worth it because they let her fight evil.
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** Luna passes out in mid-transformation, and is killed while unconscious.
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* '''Parodied''': ???By the time she reaches wolf form, she limps away with her tail between her legs, whimpering like a sad puppy, as her transformation has left her incapable of being any danger to anyone. Her friends decide to take her to a vet.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???While Luna's transformations are painful, other werewolves in the story appear to shapeshift painlessly.
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The villain keeps Luna in a confined space too small for her werewolf form as she transforms in order to cause as much pain as possible.
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One of Luna's potential victims takes advantage of Luna's crippling agony in order to get away safely.
* '''Defied''':???Luna takes a large dose of painkillers evey full moon before the transformation.
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