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** Evulz was taunting Alice by saying [[BlasphemousBoast "Not even God can save you now!"]] This got God's attention.
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** Evulz was taunting Alice by saying [[BlasphemousBoast "Not "[[BlasphemousBoast Not even God God]] [[TemptingFate can save you now!"]] now!]]" This got God's attention.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz has Alice BoundAndGagged and locked in TheAlcatraz surrounded by 1000 {{Eldritch Abomination}}s, each of whom can easily defeat 10 trained soldiers, when {{God}} snaps a finger and transports Alice to safety.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz has Alice BoundAndGagged and locked in TheAlcatraz surrounded by 1000 {{Eldritch Abomination}}s, each of whom can easily defeat 10 1000 trained soldiers, soldiers at once, when {{God}} snaps a finger and transports Alice to safety.
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** Divine intervention didn't solve the main conflict of the work or even make everything worse.
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** Alice attempts to invoke a DeusExMachina by [[OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow stacking the odds impossibly high against herself]]. [[SubvertedTrope IT DOESN'T]] [[OhCrap WORK]].
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** Alice attempts to invoke a DeusExMachina by [[OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow stacking the odds impossibly high against herself]]. [[SubvertedTrope IT DOESN'T]] [[OhCrap WORK]].It doesn't work]].
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** See DiabolusExMachina. or roles of the protagonist and the would be DEM reversed.
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** See DiabolusExMachina. or roles of the protagonist and the would be DEM reversed.DiabolusExMachina
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice is hanging on a cliff. Her backpack, whose contents weren't revealed at any point but was used several times, happens to have a rope she can use.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice is hanging on a cliff. Her backpack, whose contents weren't revealed at any point but was were used several times, happens to have a rope she can use.
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Moved as there are two games called Earthbound on this wiki.
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** They're in an [[Videogame/EarthBound RPG where you can get God to smite evil people by praying really hard]]. Against bosses, it's usually a UselessUsefulSpell. The TrueFinalBoss, however, [[ReviveKillsZombie is susceptible to it]].
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** They're in an [[Videogame/EarthBound [[Videogame/EarthBound1994 RPG where you can get God to smite evil people by praying really hard]]. Against bosses, it's usually a UselessUsefulSpell. The TrueFinalBoss, however, [[ReviveKillsZombie is susceptible to it]].
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** Alice attempts to invoke a DeusExMachina by [[OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow stacking the odds impossibly high against herself]].
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** Alice attempts to invoke a DeusExMachina by [[OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow stacking the odds impossibly high against herself]]. [[SubvertedTrope IT DOESN'T]] [[OhCrap WORK]].
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-->[[AC: GOD: "HEY, I'M A GOD, I THINK THAT IS JUSTIFIED."]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz has Alice hanging on a cliff when {{God}} comes out of nowhere and zaps Evulz to dust.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz has Alice hanging on a cliff BoundAndGagged and locked in TheAlcatraz surrounded by 1000 {{Eldritch Abomination}}s, each of whom can easily defeat 10 trained soldiers, when {{God}} comes out of nowhere snaps a finger and zaps Evulz transports Alice to dust.safety.
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** The DeusExMachina was intentionally written by the author and will play a significant role in the rest of the series. There are other justifications, for example...
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** The DeusExMachina was intentionally written by the author and will play a significant role in the rest of the series. There are other justifications, for example...
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** Evulz was taunting Alice by saying "Not even God can save you now!" This got God's attention.
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** Evulz was taunting Alice by saying [[BlasphemousBoast "Not even God can save you now!" now!"]] This got God's attention.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': The eagle immediately drops Alice back onto the cliff, and she complains that she was hoping for something miraculous to happen, but it didn't. Before Evulz can kill Alice, the eagle comes by and grabs her again, apologizing for poor grip the first time around.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': The eagle immediately drops Alice back onto the cliff, and she complains that she was hoping for something miraculous to happen, but it didn't. Before Evulz can kill Alice, the eagle comes by and grabs her again, apologizing for poor grip the first time around. Then he tries to eat her. But she gets away, only to break her arm five feet away from Evulz...
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice is hanging on a cliff. Her backpack, which contents weren't revealed at any point but was used several times, happens to have a rope she can use.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice is hanging on a cliff. Her backpack, which whose contents weren't revealed at any point but was used several times, happens to have a rope she can use.
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** Evulz was taunting Alice by saying "Not even God can save you now!" This got God's attention.
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%%* '''Intended Audience Reaction''': ???
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Intended Audience Reaction''':???
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** It's actually a poorly set-up [[Chekhov'sGun.]]
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** It's actually a poorly set-up [[Chekhov'sGun.]]ChekhovsGun.
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** It's actually a poorly set-up [[Chekhov'sGun.]]
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** Alice realizes that no one is coming to save her and Evulz takes that into account as he [[BreakThemByTalking breaks her by talking]] on how ThisIsReality...
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** Alice realizes that no one is coming to save her and Evulz takes that into account as he [[BreakThemByTalking breaks her by talking]] on about how ThisIsReality...
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-->[[AC: GOD: "HEY, I'M A GOD I THINK THAT IS JUSTIFIED."]]
** They're in an [[Videogame/EarthBound RPG where you can get God to smite evil people by praying really hard]]. Against bosses, it's usually a UselessUsefulSpell. The TrueFinalBoss, however, [[ReviveKillsZombie is susceptible to it.]]
** Alice WAS god all along, but can only alter things subconsciously as she is unaware of her own divinity.
** They're in an [[Videogame/EarthBound RPG where you can get God to smite evil people by praying really hard]]. Against bosses, it's usually a UselessUsefulSpell. The TrueFinalBoss, however, [[ReviveKillsZombie is susceptible to it.]]
** Alice WAS god all along, but can only alter things subconsciously as she is unaware of her own divinity.
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-->[[AC: GOD: "HEY, I'M A GOD GOD, I THINK THAT IS JUSTIFIED."]]
** They're in an [[Videogame/EarthBound RPG where you can get God to smite evil people by praying really hard]]. Against bosses, it's usually a UselessUsefulSpell. The TrueFinalBoss, however, [[ReviveKillsZombie is susceptible toit.]]
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** Alice WAS a god all along, but can only alter things subconsciously as she is unaware of her own divinity.
** They're in an [[Videogame/EarthBound RPG where you can get God to smite evil people by praying really hard]]. Against bosses, it's usually a UselessUsefulSpell. The TrueFinalBoss, however, [[ReviveKillsZombie is susceptible to
** Alice WAS a god all along, but can only alter things subconsciously as she is unaware of her own divinity.
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** Alice realizes that no one is coming to save her and Evulz takes that into account as he gives her an BreakingSpeech on how ThisIsReality...
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** Alice realizes that no one is coming to save her and Evulz takes that into account as he gives [[BreakThemByTalking breaks her an BreakingSpeech by talking]] on how ThisIsReality...
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** The reality warper friend is also a FriendlyEnemy and thinks up {{Evil Plan}}s for fun. If something bad happens to their playmates (such as lossing story-breaking help) they will deliberately sabotage their own plan with a random out-of-nowhere miracle so the game can continue.
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** The reality warper friend is also a FriendlyEnemy and thinks up {{Evil Plan}}s for fun. If something bad happens to their playmates (such as lossing losing story-breaking help) they will deliberately sabotage their own plan with a random out-of-nowhere miracle so the game can continue.
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** They're in an [[EarthBound RPG where you can get God to smite evil people by praying really hard]]. Against bosses, it's usually a UselessUsefulSpell. The TrueFinalBoss, however, [[ReviveKillsZombie is susceptible to it.]]
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** They're in an [[EarthBound [[Videogame/EarthBound RPG where you can get God to smite evil people by praying really hard]]. Against bosses, it's usually a UselessUsefulSpell. The TrueFinalBoss, however, [[ReviveKillsZombie is susceptible to it.]]
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** The scene was written as a parody of DeusExMachina where afterward they lampshade the ridiculousness.
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** The scene was written as a parody of DeusExMachina where afterward they lampshade the ridiculousness.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Evulz put Alice in danger because he [[RageAgainstTheHeavens wants to kill God]] and this will surely draw Him out.
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** The author outright manipulates certain events in the story FromBeyondTheFourthWall, all while being a LargeHam.