10th Apr '17 8:43:21 AM AgentKyles
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** ...which is hilarious!
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7th Apr '17 7:46:08 AM AgentKyles
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* '''Conversed''': "You know, [[DontTryThisAtHome if anyone actually did this in real life]], they might end up in a police interrogation room, charged with passive-aggressive abuse and borderline assault.,,"
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* '''Conversed''': "You know, [[DontTryThisAtHome if anyone actually did this in real life]], they might end up in a police interrogation room, charged with passive-aggressive abuse and borderline assault.,,""
7th Apr '17 7:41:17 AM AgentKyles
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** The fall is hilarious at first, but then Bob doesn't get up. [[JerkassRealization Dan is then racked]] [[NeverLiveItDown with guilt over his prank]] while Bob spends several days in a coma, followed by months of recovery and physiotherapy. Infinitely more angst points for Dan [[IDidntMeanToKillHim if the prank led to Bob's untilmely death]].
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** The fall is hilarious at first, but then Bob doesn't get up. [[JerkassRealization Dan is then racked]] [[NeverLiveItDown with guilt over his prank]] while Bob spends several days in a coma, followed by months of recovery and physiotherapy. Infinitely more angst points for Dan [[IDidntMeanToKillHim if the prank led to Bob's untilmely untimely death]].
7th Apr '17 7:40:36 AM AgentKyles
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* '''Justified''': Dan and Bob are actually mortal enemies, involved in a fight to the death. Dan's just evil enough to use such a dirty tactic as tripping, and then laughing at Bob's fall.
* '''Inverted''': Dan trips Bob, who lands on his nose, causing it to bleed. While Dan panics, [[TearsOfRemorse hardly keeping himself from crying]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone and trying to call the hospital in horror]], Bob stands up, sighs, and grabs a tissue.
* '''Inverted''': Dan trips Bob, who lands on his nose, causing it to bleed. While Dan panics, [[TearsOfRemorse hardly keeping himself from crying]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone and trying to call the hospital in horror]], Bob stands up, sighs, and grabs a tissue.
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* '''Justified''': Dan and Bob are actually mortal enemies, involved in a fight to the death. Dan's just evil vicious enough to use such a dirty tactic as tripping, and then laughing at Bob's fall.
* '''Inverted''': Dan trips Bob, who lands on his nose, causing it to bleed. While Dan panics, [[TearsOfRemorse hardly keeping himself from crying]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone and trying to call the hospital in horror]],Bob [[TheStoic Bob]] stands up, sighs, and grabs a tissue.
* '''Inverted''': Dan trips Bob, who lands on his nose, causing it to bleed. While Dan panics, [[TearsOfRemorse hardly keeping himself from crying]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone and trying to call the hospital in horror]],
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* '''Double Subverted''': ... Which then leads to Dan falling over himself.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ... Which then leads to Dan falling over himself.himself. Cue everyone around laughing.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Dan very nearly trips Bob, but then at the very last second Bob catches his balances, and rights himself, shoving Dan, who nearly falls. Dan then grabs Bob for balance, and both of them start to wobble. They both stop each other from going over, and thank their lucky stars, before Claire pushes them both over.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Dan very nearly trips Bob, but then at the very last second Bob catches his balances, and rights himself, shoving Dan, who nearly falls. Dan then grabs Bob for balance, and both of them start to wobble. They both stop each other from going over, and thank their lucky stars, before Claire [[TheKlutz Claire]] pushes them both over.over...
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* '''Defied''': Dan considers harming Bob for fun, realizes what an [[WhatTheHellHero outraged lecture]] he'll get from Alice afterward, and doesn't do it.
* '''Discussed''': "Bob's... well. He's the kind who would trip you, step on your back with soccer cleats, and then laugh about it." "[[ActuallyPrettyFunny Hehehe...]]"
* '''Conversed''': "You know, [[DontTryThisAtHome if anyone actually did this in real life]], it would be passive-aggressive abuse and borderline assault."
* '''Discussed''': "Bob's... well. He's the kind who would trip you, step on your back with soccer cleats, and then laugh about it." "[[ActuallyPrettyFunny Hehehe...]]"
* '''Conversed''': "You know, [[DontTryThisAtHome if anyone actually did this in real life]], it would be passive-aggressive abuse and borderline assault."
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* '''Defied''': Dan considers harming Bob for fun, realizes what an [[WhatTheHellHero outraged outraged]] [[DudeNotFunny lecture]] he'll get from Alice afterward, and doesn't do it.
* '''Discussed''': "Bob's...well.well, a strange guy. He's the kind who would trip you, step on your back with soccer cleats, and then laugh about it." "[[ActuallyPrettyFunny Hehehe...]]"
* '''Conversed''': "You know, [[DontTryThisAtHome if anyone actually did this in real life]],it would be they might end up in a police interrogation room, charged with passive-aggressive abuse and borderline assault.",,"
* '''Discussed''': "Bob's...
* '''Conversed''': "You know, [[DontTryThisAtHome if anyone actually did this in real life]],
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** The fall is hilarious at first, but then Bob doesn't get up. [[JerkassRealization Dan is then racked]] [[NeverLiveItDown with guilt over his prank]] while Bob spends several days in a coma, followed by months of recovery and physiotherapy.
** Alternative: Dan is a diagnosed {{Sociopath}} and is savvy enough to do actions when it's comically appropriate. Soon Bob and others find this out and seek to have him institutionalized.
** [[MonsterClown Dan]] invokes several comedic sociopathy tropes that both [[DissonantSerenity run counter to the setting's established tone]] and avert ToonPhysics. [[RealityEnsues The result]] is [[NightmareFuel horrifying]] and the [[DudeNotFunny failed comedy only makes it sicker]].
** Alternative: Dan is a diagnosed {{Sociopath}} and is savvy enough to do actions when it's comically appropriate. Soon Bob and others find this out and seek to have him institutionalized.
** [[MonsterClown Dan]] invokes several comedic sociopathy tropes that both [[DissonantSerenity run counter to the setting's established tone]] and avert ToonPhysics. [[RealityEnsues The result]] is [[NightmareFuel horrifying]] and the [[DudeNotFunny failed comedy only makes it sicker]].
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** The fall is hilarious at first, but then Bob doesn't get up. [[JerkassRealization Dan is then racked]] [[NeverLiveItDown with guilt over his prank]] while Bob spends several days in a coma, followed by months of recovery and physiotherapy.
physiotherapy. Infinitely more angst points for Dan [[IDidntMeanToKillHim if the prank led to Bob's untilmely death]].
** Alternative: Dan is a diagnosed {{Sociopath}} and is savvy enough to do actions when it's comically appropriate. Soon Bob and others find this out and seek to have himinstitutionalized.
institutionalized and put into a [[BedlamHouse place most appropriate for such people]].
** [[MonsterClown Dan]] invokes several comedic sociopathy tropes that both [[DissonantSerenity run counter to the setting's established tone]] and avert ToonPhysics. [[RealityEnsues Theresult]] is results]] [[NightmareFuel are horrifying]] and the [[DudeNotFunny and the failed comedy only makes it sicker]].
** Alternative: Dan is a diagnosed {{Sociopath}} and is savvy enough to do actions when it's comically appropriate. Soon Bob and others find this out and seek to have him
** [[MonsterClown Dan]] invokes several comedic sociopathy tropes that both [[DissonantSerenity run counter to the setting's established tone]] and avert ToonPhysics. [[RealityEnsues The
2nd Jan '17 5:38:25 AM VPhantom
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Dan is the story's HateSink and he's supposed to be detestable but just funny enough that his presence in the work is tolerable (so as not to turn into TheScrappy). He's meant to be perceived as cruel and evil.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': '''Plot Foundation''': Dan is the story's HateSink and he's supposed to be detestable but just funny enough that his presence in the work is tolerable (so as not to turn into TheScrappy). He's meant to be perceived as cruel and evil.
31st Dec '16 7:12:55 PM AgentKyles
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Dan is the story's HateSink and he's supposed to be detestable but just funny enough that his presence in the work is tolerable. He's meant to be perceived as cruel and evil.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Dan is the story's HateSink and he's supposed to be detestable but just funny enough that his presence in the work is tolerable.tolerable (so as not to turn into TheScrappy). He's meant to be perceived as cruel and evil.
13th Dec '16 2:28:24 AM AgentKyles
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* '''Inverted''': Dan trips Bob, who lands on his nose, causing it to bleed. While Dan panics and tries to call the hospital in horror, Bob stands up, sighs, and grabs a tissue.
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* '''Inverted''': Dan trips Bob, who lands on his nose, causing it to bleed. While Dan panics panics, [[TearsOfRemorse hardly keeping himself from crying]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone and tries trying to call the hospital in horror, horror]], Bob stands up, sighs, and grabs a tissue.
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* '''Parodied''': Dan's pranks regularly cripple or even outright ''kill'' Bob, but thanks to NegativeContinuity, Bob is always back and in good health by the start of the next episode.
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* '''Parodied''': Dan's pranks regularly cripple [[IronButtMonkey cripple]] or even outright ''kill'' ''[[TheyKilledKennyAgain kill]]'' Bob, but thanks to NegativeContinuity, Bob is always back and in good health by the start of the next episode.
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* '''Conversed''': "You know, if anyone actually did this in real life, it would be passive-aggressive abuse and borderline assault."
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* '''Conversed''': "You know, [[DontTryThisAtHome if anyone actually did this in real life, life]], it would be passive-aggressive abuse and borderline assault."
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** The fall is hilarious at first, but then Bob doesn't get up. Dan is then racked with guilt over his prank while Bob spends several days in a coma, followed by months of recovery and physiotherapy.
** Alternative: Dan is a diagnosed Sociopath and is savvy enough to do actions when its comically appropriate. Soon Bob and others find this out and seek to have him institutionalized.
** Alternative: Dan is a diagnosed Sociopath and is savvy enough to do actions when its comically appropriate. Soon Bob and others find this out and seek to have him institutionalized.
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** The fall is hilarious at first, but then Bob doesn't get up. [[JerkassRealization Dan is then racked racked]] [[NeverLiveItDown with guilt over his prank prank]] while Bob spends several days in a coma, followed by months of recovery and physiotherapy.
** Alternative: Dan is a diagnosedSociopath {{Sociopath}} and is savvy enough to do actions when its it's comically appropriate. Soon Bob and others find this out and seek to have him institutionalized.
** Alternative: Dan is a diagnosed
29th Jun '16 12:59:40 AM CLT009
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** [[MonsterClown Dan]] invokes several comedic sociopathy tropes that both [[DissonantSerenity run counter to the setting's established tone]] and avert ToonPhysics. [[RealityEnsues The result]] is [[NightmareFuel horrifying]] and the [[DudeNotFunny failed comedy only makes it sicker]].
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** [[BreatherEpisode It's still hilarious]], giving the audience a brief release of tension [[MoodWhiplash before something even worse happens]].
15th Jan '16 6:22:04 AM Anddrix
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Back to [[ViewersAreMorons Comedic Sociopathy]]. [[ComedicSociopathy Psych]].
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Back to [[ViewersAreMorons Comedic Sociopathy]].Sociopathy. [[ComedicSociopathy Psych]].
1st Apr '14 8:52:10 PM SKJAM
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Emperor Evulz realizes from his behavior that Dan is a sociopath, and recruits him as a minion.
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