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* '''Straight''': Alice has a hairpin from her [[TragicKeepsake late]] grandmother. Bob has a set of leather armor crafted by his blacksmith friend Charlie. [[SpoonyBard Dave, being a comedian]], has a book full of old jokes, many of which are non-understandable by modern readers. And finally, Felicia loves her [[TrademarkFavoriteFood weird-tasting Troperian Chocolate bars]]. All of those are necessary to defeat [[TheUndead Lich]] [[EvilOverlord Emperor]] [[BigBad Evulz]]. Alice's hairpin opens the pyramid where Evulz bids his time; that pyramid was an elven fortress, and Alice's grandma was an elf. Bob's leather armor nullifies Evulz' world-renowned DeathRay, because [[HoYay Charlie's brotherly love for Bob]] is woven into it. Dave reads his book of obscure jokes, which makes Evulz laughs uncontrollably-- those are the ''best'' jokes from his living days. And while Evulz laugh, Felicia (with great hesitation) throws her Troperian Chocolate into Evulz' open mouth and he actually gulps it down... [[NiceJobFixingItVillain which is his undoing]], [[RefugeInAudacity those chocolates are so weird that they cancel Evulz' undeath]]. The world is saved from Evulz' undead menace!
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* '''Straight''': Alice has a hairpin from her [[TragicKeepsake late]] grandmother. Bob has a set of leather armor crafted by his blacksmith friend Charlie. [[SpoonyBard [[QuirkyBard Dave, being a comedian]], has a book full of old jokes, many of which are non-understandable by modern readers. And finally, Felicia loves her [[TrademarkFavoriteFood weird-tasting Troperian Chocolate bars]]. All of those are necessary to defeat [[TheUndead Lich]] [[EvilOverlord Emperor]] [[BigBad Evulz]]. Alice's hairpin opens the pyramid where Evulz bids his time; that pyramid was an elven fortress, and Alice's grandma was an elf. Bob's leather armor nullifies Evulz' world-renowned DeathRay, because [[HoYay Charlie's brotherly love for Bob]] is woven into it. Dave reads his book of obscure jokes, which makes Evulz laughs uncontrollably-- those are the ''best'' jokes from his living days. And while Evulz laugh, Felicia (with great hesitation) throws her Troperian Chocolate into Evulz' open mouth and he actually gulps it down... [[NiceJobFixingItVillain which is his undoing]], [[RefugeInAudacity those chocolates are so weird that they cancel Evulz' undeath]]. The world is saved from Evulz' undead menace!
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* '''Straight''': Alice has a hairpin from her [[TragicKeepsake late]] grandmother. Bob has a set of leather armor crafted by his blacksmith friend Charlie. [[SpoonyBard Dave, being a comedian]], has a book full of old jokes, many of which are non-understandable by modern readers. And finally, Felicia loves her [[TrademarkFavoriteFood weird-tasting Troperian Chocolate bars]]. All of those are necessary to defeat [[TheUndead Lich]] [[EvilOverlord Emperor]] [[BigBad Evulz]]. Alice's hairpin opens the pyramid where Evulz bids his time; that pyramid was an elven fortress, and Alice's grandma was an elf. Bob's leather armor nullifies Evulz' world-renowned DeathRay, because [[HoYay Charlie's brotherly love for Bob]] is woven into it. Dave reads his book of obscure jokes, which makes Evulz laughs uncontrollably-- those are the ''best'' jokes from his living days. And while Evulz laugh, Felicia (with great hesitation) throws her Troperian Chocolate into Evulz' open mouth and he actually gulps it down... [[WhatAnIdiot which is his undoing]], [[RefugeInAudacity those chocolates are so weird that they cancel Evulz' undeath]]. The world is saved from Evulz' undead menace!
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* '''Straight''': Alice has a hairpin from her [[TragicKeepsake late]] grandmother. Bob has a set of leather armor crafted by his blacksmith friend Charlie. [[SpoonyBard Dave, being a comedian]], has a book full of old jokes, many of which are non-understandable by modern readers. And finally, Felicia loves her [[TrademarkFavoriteFood weird-tasting Troperian Chocolate bars]]. All of those are necessary to defeat [[TheUndead Lich]] [[EvilOverlord Emperor]] [[BigBad Evulz]]. Alice's hairpin opens the pyramid where Evulz bids his time; that pyramid was an elven fortress, and Alice's grandma was an elf. Bob's leather armor nullifies Evulz' world-renowned DeathRay, because [[HoYay Charlie's brotherly love for Bob]] is woven into it. Dave reads his book of obscure jokes, which makes Evulz laughs uncontrollably-- those are the ''best'' jokes from his living days. And while Evulz laugh, Felicia (with great hesitation) throws her Troperian Chocolate into Evulz' open mouth and he actually gulps it down... [[WhatAnIdiot [[NiceJobFixingItVillain which is his undoing]], [[RefugeInAudacity those chocolates are so weird that they cancel Evulz' undeath]]. The world is saved from Evulz' undead menace!
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** Many random objects and characters are introduced, some being relevant, some being RedHerring.
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* '''Enforced''':'''Enforced''': The writer is WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants, and makes sure to make seemingly random plot elements he can make use of later.
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* '''Exploited''': ???Many seemingly random objects and unrelated plot points are introduced, most of them don't ever come into, play, and for those they do, they only do because TheHero is highly skilled at [[IndyPloy winging it]] with [[ImprovisedIndex what he has on hand]] and half-remembered knowledge he can use to spin a SeamlessSpontaneousLie on the spot, rooted in something that is at least partially true..
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* '''Straight''': Alice has a hairpin from her late grandmother. Bob has a set of leather armor crafted by his blacksmith friend Charlie. [[SpoonyBard Dave, being a comedian]], has a book full of old jokes, many of which are non-understandable by modern readers. And finally, Felicia loves her [[TrademarkFavoriteFood weird-tasting Troperian Chocolate bars]]. All of those are necessary to defeat [[TheUndead Lich]] [[EvilOverlord Emperor]] [[BigBad Evulz]]. Alice's hairpin opens the pyramid where Evulz bids his time; that pyramid was an elven fortress, and Alice's grandma was an elf. Bob's leather armor nullifies Evulz' world-renowned DeathRay, because [[HoYay Charlie's brotherly love for Bob]] is woven into it. Dave reads his book of obscure jokes, which makes Evulz laughs uncontrollably-- those are the ''best'' jokes from his living days. And while Evulz laugh, Felicia (with great hesitation) throws her Troperian Chocolate into Evulz' open mouth and he actually gulps it down... [[WhatAnIdiot which is his undoing]], [[RefugeInAudacity those chocolates are so weird that they cancel Evulz' undeath]]. The world is saved from Evulz' undead menace!
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* '''Straight''': Alice has a hairpin from her late [[TragicKeepsake late]] grandmother. Bob has a set of leather armor crafted by his blacksmith friend Charlie. [[SpoonyBard Dave, being a comedian]], has a book full of old jokes, many of which are non-understandable by modern readers. And finally, Felicia loves her [[TrademarkFavoriteFood weird-tasting Troperian Chocolate bars]]. All of those are necessary to defeat [[TheUndead Lich]] [[EvilOverlord Emperor]] [[BigBad Evulz]]. Alice's hairpin opens the pyramid where Evulz bids his time; that pyramid was an elven fortress, and Alice's grandma was an elf. Bob's leather armor nullifies Evulz' world-renowned DeathRay, because [[HoYay Charlie's brotherly love for Bob]] is woven into it. Dave reads his book of obscure jokes, which makes Evulz laughs uncontrollably-- those are the ''best'' jokes from his living days. And while Evulz laugh, Felicia (with great hesitation) throws her Troperian Chocolate into Evulz' open mouth and he actually gulps it down... [[WhatAnIdiot which is his undoing]], [[RefugeInAudacity those chocolates are so weird that they cancel Evulz' undeath]]. The world is saved from Evulz' undead menace!
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* '''Straight''': Alice has a hairpin from her late grandmother. Bob has a set of leather armor crafted by his blacksmith friend Charlie. [[SpoonyBard Dave, being a comedian]], has a book full of obscure jokes, many of which are non-understandable by modern readers. And finally, Felicia loves her [[TrademarkFavoriteFood weird-tasting Troperian Chocolate bars]]. All of those are necessary to defeat [[TheUndead Lich]] [[EvilOverlord Emperor]] [[BigBad Evulz]]. Alice's hairpin opens the pyramid where Evulz bids his time; that pyramid was an elven fortress, and Alice's grandma was an elf. Bob's leather armor nullifies Evulz' world-renowned DeathRay, because [[HoYay Charlie's brotherly love for Bob]] is woven into it. Dave reads his book of obscure jokes, which makes Evulz laughs uncontrollably-- those are the ''best'' jokes from his living days. And while Evulz laugh, Felicia (with great hesitation) throws her Troperian Chocolate into Evulz' open mouth and he actually gulps it down... [[WhatAnIdiot which is his undoing]], [[RefugeInAudacity those chocolates are so weird that they cancel Evulz' undeath]]. The world is saved from Evulz' undead menace!
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* '''Straight''': Alice has a hairpin from her late grandmother. Bob has a set of leather armor crafted by his blacksmith friend Charlie. [[SpoonyBard Dave, being a comedian]], has a book full of obscure old jokes, many of which are non-understandable by modern readers. And finally, Felicia loves her [[TrademarkFavoriteFood weird-tasting Troperian Chocolate bars]]. All of those are necessary to defeat [[TheUndead Lich]] [[EvilOverlord Emperor]] [[BigBad Evulz]]. Alice's hairpin opens the pyramid where Evulz bids his time; that pyramid was an elven fortress, and Alice's grandma was an elf. Bob's leather armor nullifies Evulz' world-renowned DeathRay, because [[HoYay Charlie's brotherly love for Bob]] is woven into it. Dave reads his book of obscure jokes, which makes Evulz laughs uncontrollably-- those are the ''best'' jokes from his living days. And while Evulz laugh, Felicia (with great hesitation) throws her Troperian Chocolate into Evulz' open mouth and he actually gulps it down... [[WhatAnIdiot which is his undoing]], [[RefugeInAudacity those chocolates are so weird that they cancel Evulz' undeath]]. The world is saved from Evulz' undead menace!
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???ChekhovsGun
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* '''Zig Zagged''': The items are destroyed by the Lich Emperor's disintergration ray during the final battle, only for the pile of dust to blind him in a sudden gust of wind, giving the heroes the perfect opportunity to defeat him.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': The items are destroyed by the Lich Emperor's disintergration disintegration ray during the final battle, only for the pile of dust to blind him in a sudden gust of wind, giving the heroes the perfect opportunity to defeat him.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Because of their insistance of carrying around a bunch of {{ChekhovsGun}}s, they are unable to carry the items that would have truly helped them.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Because of their insistance insistence of carrying around a bunch of {{ChekhovsGun}}s, they are unable to carry the items that would have truly helped them.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...because they are meant to be used against Evulz's boss, [[GreaterScopeVillain Progenitor of Dark Ages]]. (Yes, the local equivalent of God of Evil is defeated with mundane items such as ''chocolate''.)
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...because they are meant to be used against Evulz's boss, [[GreaterScopeVillain [[TheManBehindTheMan the Progenitor of Dark Ages]]. (Yes, the local equivalent of God of Evil is defeated with mundane items such as ''chocolate''.)
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...because they are meant to be used against Evulz's boss, [[BiggerBad Progenitor of Dark Ages]]. (Yes, the local equivalent of God of Evil is defeated with mundane items such as ''chocolate''.)
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...because they are meant to be used against Evulz's boss, [[BiggerBad [[GreaterScopeVillain Progenitor of Dark Ages]]. (Yes, the local equivalent of God of Evil is defeated with mundane items such as ''chocolate''.)
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': Because of their insistance of carrying around a bunch of {{ChekhovsGun}}s, they are unable to carry the items that would have truly helped them.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...but the heroes end up utilizing these seemingly useless items such that they become helpful after all.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...but the heroes end up utilizing these seemingly useless items such that they become helpful after all.
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* '''Discussed''': "So what if it's just leather armour? The friendship used to craft this is more powerful to me than any metal."
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* '''Discussed''': "So what if it's just leather armour? The friendship used to craft this is more powerful to me than any metal."metal".
* '''Deconstructed''': Because of their insistance of carrying around a bunch of {{ChekhovsGun}}s, they are unable to carry the items that would have truly helped them.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...but the heroes end up utilizing these seemingly useless items such that they become helpful after all.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...but the heroes end up utilizing these seemingly useless items such that they become helpful after all.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...because they are meant to be used against Evulz' CosmicHorror boss, [[BiggerBad Progenitor of Dark Ages]]. (Yes, the local equivalent of God of Evil is defeated with mundane items such as ''chocolate''.)
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...because they are meant to be used against Evulz' CosmicHorror Evulz's boss, [[BiggerBad Progenitor of Dark Ages]]. (Yes, the local equivalent of God of Evil is defeated with mundane items such as ''chocolate''.)
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* '''Enforced''': Forcing the audience to buy the [=DVDs=] where those items were first appearing.
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** Forcing the audience to buy the [=DVDs=] where those items were first appearing.
** Forcing the audience to buy the [=DVDs=] where those items were first appearing.
