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* Name-checked at the beginning of the book, when an impassioned speaker says they must get rid of the Authority. Mannie thinks, "A fine idea. But who bells cat?"
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVilified: The PowerTrio is well aware that the Lunar Authority is not evil, but they do their damnedest to make sure the Loonies think it is, because the alternative to overthrowing it is starvation for everyone.

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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVilified: The PowerTrio is well aware that the Lunar Authority [[HanlonsRazor is not evil, evil]], but they do their damnedest to make sure the Loonies think it is, because the alternative to overthrowing it is starvation for everyone.
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** As mentioned in several other places, the Revolution is kicked off when a squad of Peace Dragoons rape and murder a Loonie woman.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Elimination (i.e. tossing someone outside an airlock) is a frighteningly common practice to deal with troublemakers. At one point in the book, this happens to someone for heckling a group of volunteers practicing drills. Though it did discourage anyone else from mocking them.
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*** There's never much hint of homo- or pansexual relationships occuring in the Moon. Though considering later Heinlein books are full of that kind of stuff, it's possible he felt that polygamous marriages was pushing the envelope far enough for the 60s.
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** The only real time it gets brought up is when Mike admits to Manny that watching his ColonyDrop land in exactly the right spot at exactly the right time gives him a feeling he equates with an orgasm. Mannie worries that this might encourage Mike to keep bombing Earth just for kicks. Mike assures him he wouldn't do that, [[EasilyForgiven and Mannie drops it]].
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* FutureImperfect: If Mannie is any indication, Loonies have a rather shaky grasp of history. He thought UsefulNotes/ThomasJefferson freed the slaves, and confused UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution with UsefulNotes/TheAmericanCivilWar. (Actually, this is done to hammer in that the Loonies are not Americans. Most non-Americans on present-day Earth would easily get the civil war and the revolution mixed up, but have no clue who Jefferson was.)

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* FutureImperfect: If Mannie is any indication, Loonies have a rather shaky grasp of history. He thought UsefulNotes/ThomasJefferson freed the slaves, and confused UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution with UsefulNotes/TheAmericanCivilWar. (Actually, this is done to hammer in that the Loonies are not Americans. Most non-Americans on present-day Earth would easily get the civil war and the revolution mixed up, but have no clue who Jefferson was.)) In choosing Mycroft's name, he also mixes up [[Literature/SherlockHolmes Dr. Watson]] with [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_J._Watson Thomas Watson]], the pioneering CEO of IBM.
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* EnergyWeapon: Wildly realistic versions, mostly used to burn out sensors and fry electronics; explicitly stated to work as effective weapons only in a vacuum. The rebels develop a crude laser rifle, but its power is limited to a few shots, and you can't swap in a new power pack either. Meanwhile the FN troops have rifles that fire explosive shells.



* FrickinLaserBeams: Wildly realistic versions, mostly used to burn out sensors and fry electronics; explicitly stated to work as effective weapons only in a vacuum. The rebels develop a crude laser rifle, but its power is limited to a few shots, and you can't swap in a new power pack either. Meanwhile the FN troops have rifles that fire explosive shells.
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* OverrideCommand: Vital government secret files are protected with passwords, and the computer is interdicted from revealing them without it. The lunar revolutionaries are able to read them because [[LoopholeAbuse no one interdicted the computer]] from revealing ''the passwords themselves''.

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* OverrideCommand: Vital government secret files are protected with passwords, and the computer is interdicted from revealing them without it. The lunar revolutionaries are able to read them because [[LoopholeAbuse no one interdicted the computer]] from revealing ''the passwords themselves''. The commands still have to come from outside; it's just that the computer can tell the revolutionaries what they are.
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** Mannie and Wyoh's relationship is completely ambiguous from about halfway in. She's obviously romantically interested in Mannie's co-husband Greg, but she spends her first married night in Mannie's bed. Mannie has Mike turn off all monitoring, but it could just as easily be a purely platonic visit.
** We're never given any real information on how Mannie's "line marriage" treats sex. Given Heinlein's [[AuthorAppeal propensities]], it's very possible that [[EverybodyHasLotsOfSex everybody has sex with everybody else]], but the narrative treats it almost exclusively as an emotional support system--an anxious Mannie spends the night with his "senior wife" but nothing sexual is ever implied to happen. On the other hand, younger "husbands" blush excitedly at the idea of Wyoh "opting in".

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** Mannie and Wyoh's relationship is completely ambiguous Wyoh have romantic feelings for each other from about halfway in. She's obviously romantically interested in Mannie's co-husband Greg, but she spends through . She begins her first married night in the oldest husband's bed, as tradition demands, but when he falls asleep ends up slipping into Mannie's bed. bed, with complicity of her oldest co-wife, as Mannie is about to head off on a dangerous mission to Earth the next day . Mannie has Mike turn off all monitoring, but it could just as easily be a purely platonic visit.monitoring.
** We're never given any real information on how Mannie's "line marriage" treats sex. Given Heinlein's [[AuthorAppeal propensities]], it's very possible that propensities]] [[EverybodyHasLotsOfSex everybody has sex with everybody else]], but the narrative treats it almost exclusively as an emotional support system--an anxious Mannie spends the night with his "senior wife" but nothing sexual is ever implied to happen.happen, as she's much older and both her and the oldest husband are implied to be past it.. On the other hand, younger "husbands" blush excitedly at the idea of Wyoh "opting in".
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* PayingForAir: Loonies have to pay for the oxygen they breathe, since, on the Moon, it is produced by devoted entities. New incomers will be loaned money for paying for air but nothing else.
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* BrickJoke: When first discussing how the largely-unarmed Loonies will resist Earth's armed forces, Mannie jokes that they will "throw rocks". Later the Loonies do exactly that - using a hundred-kilometer long magentic catapult to drop barge-sized rocks from orbit onto Earth with effects similar to that of nuclear bomb strikes.
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* BadassGrandpa: Professor de la Paz, who was old when Mannie was still a boy, yet can still break a soldier's neck and survive brutal g-force.

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* EveryManHasHisPrice: The Directorate of Chad is the first (and for a long time, only) nation to recognize Luna as a free state. This is due in no small part to a massive amount of money given to them by the Resistance (it's implied to be where the bulk of the Resistance's money went).

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The Directorate of Chad is the first (and for a long time, only) nation to recognize Luna as a free state. This is due in no small part to a massive amount of money given to them by the Resistance (it's implied to be where the bulk of the Resistance's money went).went).
** Averted when Man is offered the position of Governor of Luna if he gets the Loonies to accept a compromise deal which would establish direct FN control of Luna, in effect making him the new Warden. He pretends to be considering the plan, but everyone just gets the hell off Earth as quickly as possible.
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* OneSceneTwoMonologues: Mannie starts one when the subject was politics, which he doesn't want to talk about.
-->'''Mannie''': Now, Prof, what you think of pennant race? Got money says Yankees can't do it again?\\
'''Prof''': Manuel, what is your political philosophy?\\
'''Mannie''': With that new boy from Milwaukee I feel like investing.\\
'''Prof''': Sometimes a man doesn't have it defined but, under Socratic inquiry, knows where he stands and why.\\
'''Mannie''': I'll back 'em against field, three to two.\\
'''Prof''': ''What?'' You young idiot! How much?\\
'''Mannie''': Three hundred. Hong Kong.\\
'''Prof''': Done. For example, under what circumstances may the State justly place its welfare above that of a citizen?

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* NuclearOption: A plot point is that Earth could put down the Lunar rebellion with a single ship and six large nukes (said as much by Mannie)-but are actually ''very'' reluctant to do so unless they have other ways to do so, to the point their first attempt to forcefully suppress the rebellion is a dangerous armed invasion with no nuclear weaponry. To which the Loonies reply by hitting Earth with [[KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter kinetic payloads just as powerful as nukes]] because by now Earth has no other options and they need to break their will before they get a ship in range.

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* NuclearOption: A plot point is that Earth the Federated Nations could put down the Lunar rebellion with a single ship and six large nukes (said as much by Mannie)-but are actually ''very'' reluctant to do so unless they have other ways to do so, to the point their first attempt to forcefully suppress the rebellion is a dangerous armed invasion with no nuclear weaponry. To which the Loonies reply by hitting Earth with [[KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter kinetic payloads just as powerful as nukes]] because by now Earth has the Federated Nations have no other options and they need to break their will before they get a ship in range.
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* NuclearOption: A plot point is that Earth could put down the Lunar rebellion with a single ship and six large nukes (said as much by Mannie)-but are actually ''very'' reluctant to do so unless they have other ways to do so, to the point their first attempt to forcefully suppress the rebellion is a dangerous armed invasion with no nuclear weaponry. To which the Loonies reply by hitting Earth with [[KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter kinetic payloads just as powerful as nukes]] because by now Earth has no other options and they need to break their will before they get a ship in range.
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** As mentioned in other places, a group of earthworms decide to have a picnic at another ground zero. When people have the gall to blame the Loonies, Many asks if he was supposed to lead all the picnickers away by hand.

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** As mentioned in other places, a group of earthworms decide to have a picnic at another ground zero. When people have the gall to blame the Loonies, Many Mannie asks if he was supposed to lead all the picnickers away by hand.
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* TemptingFate:
** After threatening a ColonyDrop on Earth, one commentator mocks the Loonies by broadcasting from a location that he claims is the exact spot where one of the canisters will drop, and promises to broadcast from that location at zero hour. Mannie has no idea if the guy actually was dumb enough to do it, but notes that he never saw the commentator again after the first attack.
** As mentioned in other places, a group of earthworms decide to have a picnic at another ground zero. When people have the gall to blame the Loonies, Many asks if he was supposed to lead all the picnickers away by hand.

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* {{Hypocrisy}}: Could qualify as HypocriticalHumor if one choose to take it as BlackComedy -- Prof threatens to stop grain shipments to Terra, and Mannie narrates regarding Indian newspapers' reactions, "Gentlest proposal was to clean out Luna, exterminate us 'criminal troglodytes' and replace us with 'honest Hindu peasants' who understood sacredness of life and would ship grain and more grain." Later, after the kinetic bombardment kills a bunch of idiots who didn't stay out of the blast zones, "Indian government seemed as furious over fish as over fishermen--but principle of sacredness of life did not apply to us; they wanted our heads."



* OlderThanTheyLook: Loonies live way longer than Terrans because of the reduced strain on their bodies, and they age slower, too; Mannie, for example, points out to some Terrans that even though he looks twenty or thirty he's actually been ''married'' longer than that. At the time the story was written, [[ScienceMarchesOn this was one of the legitimate theories]] regarding the long-term effects of low gravity on biology. It wasn't firmly established that the opposite was the case (very low gravity is moderately bad for you and microgravity can outright kill you given long-term exposure) until several decades later.

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* OlderThanTheyLook: Loonies live way longer than Terrans because of the reduced strain on their bodies, and they age slower, too; Mannie, for example, points out to some Terrans that even though he looks twenty or thirty thirty, he's actually been ''married'' longer than that. At the time the story was written, [[ScienceMarchesOn this was one of the legitimate theories]] regarding the long-term effects of low gravity on biology. It wasn't firmly established that the opposite was the case (very low gravity is moderately bad for you and microgravity can outright kill you given long-term exposure) until several decades later.



* PhoneWord: The initial phone codes to contact Mycroft are actual words with nulls added to get them to the correct length. As the conspiracy grows they run out of memorable word codes and have to start using random codes.

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* PhoneWord: The initial phone codes to contact Mycroft are actual words with nulls added to get them to the correct length. As the conspiracy grows grows, they run out of memorable word codes and have to start using random codes.



** The conspirators decide to cut back on provoking the Authorities because everything isn't in place yet. Then the Dragoons murder two women and [[XanatosSpeedChess they have to start the revolution ahead of schedule]] because they know they've just got the catalyst that will spark an uprising.

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** The conspirators decide to cut back on provoking the Authorities Authority because everything isn't in place yet. Then the Dragoons murder two women and [[XanatosSpeedChess they have to start the revolution ahead of schedule]] because they know they've just got the catalyst that will spark an uprising.


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** A guy stands around loudly mocking a team while they run a drill in preparation for Terra attacking, setting up a temporary airlock around one that's been hypothetically damaged. They finish the drill, then grab the asshole and dump him in vacuum.


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** Many of the Loonies aren't much smarter. It's no good telling grain farmers that shipping grain will lead to food riots in 2082; they just want to get paid.


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** In 2075, Major League Baseball is apparently still running on the old system, in which the pennant in each league was simply awarded to the team with the best win/loss record. In real life, a mere three years after the book was published, the leagues split into two divisions each, and the teams with the best records out of each division would play a best of five series for the title. The playoffs further evolved into their current form over the years, and one can only imagine how it might change by 2075.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Strange in that it is left almost completely unaddressed. When Mike starts out pulling hurtful pranks to be funny, Mannie sidesteps trying to teach Mike morality by instead teaching him that his pranks are "only funny once." Mike quickly grows in power and influence, takes the highest position in the rebellion, and even starts imitating Mannie and speaking for him without Mannie's knowledge or permission. None of this worries Mannie. When Mike bombs Earth, he says that it feels like an orgasm. Mannie cautions Mike against feeling that way, not because it's wrong to take pleasure in violence, but because Mike might not get to do it again. Ultimately it never even occurs to Mannie to be concerned with putting so much power in an AI's hands. Toward the end, Mannie suspects that Mike has grown a conscience.

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* AIIsACrapshoot: Strange in that it is left almost completely unaddressed. When Mike starts out pulling hurtful pranks to be funny, Mannie sidesteps trying to teach Mike morality by instead teaching him that his pranks are "only funny once." Mike quickly grows in power and influence, takes the highest position in the rebellion, and even starts imitating Mannie and speaking for him without Mannie's knowledge or permission. None of this worries Mannie. When Mike bombs Earth, he says that it feels like an orgasm. Mannie cautions Mike against feeling that way, not because it's wrong to take pleasure in violence, but because Mike might not get to do it again. Ultimately Ultimately, it never even occurs to Mannie to be concerned with putting so much power in an AI's hands. Toward the end, Mannie suspects that Mike has grown a conscience.



* ArtisticLicenseStatistics: Heinlein ups the drama by having Mike the supercomputer constantly decreasing the plan's odds of success overall after each objective is successfully completed, stating that there are "more opportunities for failure" in the next objective, but this isn't the way overall probability is calculated; the only way odds can get worse is if something goes wrong, or new problems crop up. If Mike knew about the low odds of the later steps from the beginning, he should have factored them into the probability he gave at the beginning.[[note]]To put it in simple terms, the chance you'll flip a coin and have it come up heads is 0.50; the chance of getting heads twice in a row is 0.50 x 0.50 = 0.25. But once you flip that coin and get heads the first time, your chance is now 0.50, because that first successful flip is no longer 0.50 -- it's happened, so it now has a probability of 1.[[/note]]

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* ArtisticLicenseStatistics: Heinlein ups the drama by having Mike the supercomputer constantly decreasing the plan's odds of success overall after each objective is successfully completed, stating that there are "more opportunities for failure" in the next objective, but this isn't the way overall probability is calculated; the only way odds can get worse is if something goes wrong, or new problems crop up. If Mike knew about the low odds of the later steps from the beginning, he should have factored them into the probability he gave at the beginning.[[note]]To put it in simple terms, the chance you'll flip a coin and have it come up heads is 0.50; the chance of getting heads twice in a row is 0.50 x 0.50 = 0.25. But once you flip that coin and get heads the first time, your chance is now 0.50, because that first successful flip is no longer 0.50 -- it's happened, so it now has a probability of 1. The odds get better with each successfully completed step.[[/note]]



* BeleagueredBureaucrat: Mannie laments that Luna is ruled by one instead of an actual BadBoss; both because he feels guilty in making the man suffer and because it's difficult to inspire outrage against someone so ''dull''. The unfortunate Mort 'The Wart' Hobart is the Warden, and he's receiving the Earth government's ever-increasing demands on one hand, trying to cope with ever-increasing hostility from the Loonies, struggling to prevent his CowboyCop chief of security from triggering riots, ''and'' keeps suffering from mysterious mechanical breakdowns. And ''then'' the Revolution begins. His eventual fate is fittingly undramatic - he's [[spoiler: asphyxiated by accident during the revolution]].

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* BeleagueredBureaucrat: Mannie laments that Luna is ruled by one instead of an actual BadBoss; both because he feels guilty in making the man suffer and because it's difficult to inspire outrage against someone so ''dull''. The unfortunate Mortimer Mort 'The Wart' the Wart" Hobart is the Warden, and he's receiving the Earth government's ever-increasing demands on one hand, trying to cope with ever-increasing hostility from the Loonies, struggling to prevent his CowboyCop chief of security from triggering riots, ''and'' keeps suffering from mysterious mechanical breakdowns. And ''then'' the Revolution begins. His eventual fate is fittingly undramatic - he's [[spoiler: asphyxiated by accident during the revolution]].revolution and is rendered a vegetable]].



* CyberneticsEatYourSoul: Apparently believed of Cyborgs, as even Mannie refers to them as "ex-humans." It's never explained fully, but it's implied that cyborgs pretty much give up right-brain functioning in exchange for massive enhancement of raw computational ability.

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* CyberneticsEatYourSoul: Apparently believed of Cyborgs, cyborgs, as even Mannie refers to them as "ex-humans." It's never explained fully, but it's implied that cyborgs pretty much give up right-brain functioning in exchange for massive enhancement of raw computational ability.



* ExoticExtendedMarriage: Extended marriage as a common part of life on the moon, in large part because of a shortage of women. A marriage with one wife and two husbands is common. However, there are also "line marriages," involving multiple husbands and wives. The protagonist, Mannie, is part of a line marriage, and he's constantly singing its praises.

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* ExoticExtendedMarriage: Extended marriage as a common part of life on the moon, in Luna, in large part because of a shortage of women. A marriage with one wife and two husbands is common. However, there are also "line marriages," involving multiple husbands and wives. The protagonist, Mannie, is part of a line marriage, and he's constantly singing its praises.



* FreudianTrio: Mannie is the Ego, the Prof is the Superego and Wyoh is the Id.

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* FreudianTrio: Mannie is the Ego, the Prof is the Superego Superego, and Wyoh is the Id.



* ILikeThoseOdds: Mannie's reaction when Mike tells him the revolution has only a one in 7 chance of success. This is apparently a generic trait of Loonies -- anything better than 1 in 10 sounds like a worthwhile risk to them.

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* ILikeThoseOdds: Mannie's reaction when Mike tells him the revolution has only a one in 7 seven chance of success. This is apparently a generic trait of Loonies -- anything better than 1 one in 10 ten sounds like a worthwhile risk to them.



* ItsTheOnlyWay: Man and Prof being fired to Earth inside an improvised spaceship made from a wheat carrier. [[spoiler:After Man gets there, he discovers that they could have arranged a spaceship, but this way they get some free dramatic publicity for their cause.]]

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* ItsTheOnlyWay: Man and Prof being fired to Earth inside an improvised spaceship made from a wheat carrier. [[spoiler:After Man gets there, he discovers that they could have arranged a spaceship, but this way they get got some free dramatic publicity for their cause.cause, and it cut down the chance that the F.N. would just shoot them out of the sky.]]

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* AllUpToYou: Mannie finds himself manning the second secret catapult when contact has been cut off with the Prof and Mike, the main catapult and most of the radars have been knocked out, there's two Earth warships prowling above and the FN is announcing victory. There's a hint that China may be willing to negotiate, or maybe they're just holding out for better terms from the Loonies. Mannie is asked if they should go ahead with the strike on China or hold off? [[spoiler:Mannie decides to continue the attack as planned. It turns out to be the right decision as China decides to recognise the independence of Luna while the rocks are on their way; after that, all the other intended targets quickly do likewise.]]

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* AllUpToYou: Mannie finds himself manning the second secret catapult when contact has been cut off with the Prof and Mike, the main catapult and most of the radars have been knocked out, there's two Earth warships prowling above and the FN is announcing victory. There's a hint that China may be willing to negotiate, or maybe they're just holding out for better terms from the Loonies. Mannie is asked if they should go ahead with the strike on China or hold off? [[spoiler:Mannie decides to continue the attack as planned. It turns out to be the right decision as China decides to recognise recognize the independence of Luna while the rocks are on their way; after that, all the other intended targets quickly do likewise.]]



* ArtisticLicenseStatistics: Heinlein ups the drama by having Mike the supercomputer constantly decreasing the plan's odds of success overall after each objective is successfully completed, stating that there are "more opportunities for failure" in the next objective, but this isn't the way overall probability is calculated; the only way odds can get worse is if something goes wrong, or new problems crop up. If Mike knew about the low odds of the later steps from the beginning, he should have factored them into the probability he gave at the beginning.

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* ArtisticLicenseStatistics: Heinlein ups the drama by having Mike the supercomputer constantly decreasing the plan's odds of success overall after each objective is successfully completed, stating that there are "more opportunities for failure" in the next objective, but this isn't the way overall probability is calculated; the only way odds can get worse is if something goes wrong, or new problems crop up. If Mike knew about the low odds of the later steps from the beginning, he should have factored them into the probability he gave at the beginning.[[note]]To put it in simple terms, the chance you'll flip a coin and have it come up heads is 0.50; the chance of getting heads twice in a row is 0.50 x 0.50 = 0.25. But once you flip that coin and get heads the first time, your chance is now 0.50, because that first successful flip is no longer 0.50 -- it's happened, so it now has a probability of 1.[[/note]]



** The FN soldiers sent to put down the rebellion have been told that their only way of getting back to Earth is to retake the colonies, as their troopships don't have enough fuel to return. The soldiers are then wired up on drugs so they know no fear. Were it not for the equally-suicidal resistance by every available Loonie, Mike taking control of the defence without waiting for orders, and the soldiers unfamiliarity with manouvering in a low-gravity environment, they might have won--instead they're slaughtered to the last man.

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** The FN soldiers sent to put down the rebellion have been told that their only way of getting back to Earth is to retake the colonies, as their troopships don't have enough fuel to return. The soldiers are then wired up on drugs so they know no fear. Were it not for the equally-suicidal resistance by every available Loonie, Mike taking control of the defence defense without waiting for orders, and the soldiers soldiers' unfamiliarity with manouvering maneuvering in a low-gravity environment, they might have won--instead won--instead, they're slaughtered to the last man.



** People get married and sexually active much earlier. When Mannie points out a 12-year-old girl, one of his wives mistakes it for sexual interest. She has no objections other than that the girl still has a boyish figure (though she may be teasing him at the time, so it's hard to tell how seriously to take her words). In another instance, Mannie calls a 14-year-old girl "curvy" and states that there's little chance that she's still a virgin. As he tells Stuart, "Once a girl's nubile, she's her own boss."

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** People get married and are sexually active much earlier. When Mannie points out a 12-year-old girl, one of his wives mistakes it for sexual interest. She has no objections other than that the girl still has a boyish figure (though she may be teasing him at the time, so it's hard to tell how seriously to take her words). In another instance, Mannie calls a 14-year-old girl "curvy" and states that there's little chance that she's still a virgin. As he tells Stuart, "Once a girl's nubile, she's her own boss."



* FrickinLaserBeams: Wildly realistic versions, mostly used to burn out sensors and fry electronics; explicitly stated to work as effective weapons only in a vacuum. The rebels develop a crude laser rifle, but its power is limited to a few shots and you can't swap in a new power pack either. Meanwhile the FN troops have rifles that fire explosive shells.

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* FrickinLaserBeams: Wildly realistic versions, mostly used to burn out sensors and fry electronics; explicitly stated to work as effective weapons only in a vacuum. The rebels develop a crude laser rifle, but its power is limited to a few shots shots, and you can't swap in a new power pack either. Meanwhile the FN troops have rifles that fire explosive shells.



* GrammarNazi: One member of the Lunar congress wants to revise the Lunar Declaration of Independence (literally just the American Revolution version with the SerialNumbersFiledOff) due to a few grammar errors (including the famous "unalienable" vs "inalienable" issue). In a [[SubvertedTrope subversion]], he drops his argument quickly once Adam Selene entreats that it's more important to just get the damn thing ratified, and Mannie notes that he's actually good guy apart from his "fetish".

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* GrammarNazi: One member of the Lunar congress wants to revise the Lunar Declaration of Independence (literally just the American Revolution version with the SerialNumbersFiledOff) due to a few grammar errors (including the famous "unalienable" vs "inalienable" issue). In a [[SubvertedTrope subversion]], he drops his argument quickly once Adam Selene entreats that it's more important to just get the damn thing ratified, and Mannie notes that he's actually a good guy apart from his "fetish".



* KansasCityShuffle: The conspirators use a front company to build a second catapult under their control. As they can't hide the existence of this, they make it an entirely legitimate business venture, but bury the entire thing underground except for the entrance, then mislead everyone as to its true location, as all the workers and [=VIPs=] get there via underground tube or enclosed vehicle. The one person who smuggled in a locator had an 'accident'.

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* KansasCityShuffle: The conspirators use a front company to build a second catapult under their control. As they can't hide the existence of this, they make it an entirely legitimate business venture, but bury the entire thing underground except for the entrance, then mislead everyone as to its true location, as all the workers and [=VIPs=] get there via underground tube or enclosed vehicle. The one person who smuggled in a locator had an 'accident'."accident".



* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Happens to people who [[YouKnowTooMuch stumble on the wrong thing]]. Given that Authority doesn't care what the Lunatics do to each other, they have a lot of practise at arranging these.

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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Happens to people who [[YouKnowTooMuch stumble on the wrong thing]]. Given that Authority doesn't care what the Lunatics do to each other, they have a lot of practise practice at arranging these.these. It's actually given as the reason they're such a polite people; antagonizing people will earn you an "accident" sooner or later.



* MohsScaleOfScienceFictionHardness: Very hard sci-fi, even for Heinlein. The only "lies" are prevalent nuclear power, an electromagnetic catapult, and a sentient computer - all of which are extrapolated directly from real technology. ScienceMarchesOn, so several aspects of Loonie life turned out not to reflect reality (their long life and the inability to return to Earth after only a few months in Luna), but generally it's very grounded.

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* MohsScaleOfScienceFictionHardness: Very hard sci-fi, even for Heinlein. The only "lies" are prevalent nuclear power, an electromagnetic catapult, and a sentient computer - all of which are extrapolated directly from real technology. ScienceMarchesOn, so several aspects of Loonie life turned out not to reflect reality (their long life and the inability to return to Earth after only a few months in Luna), but generally it's very grounded.


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* WritersCannotDoMath: Unusual for Heinlein, he conflates one chance in seven with seven to one odds. One chance in seven is equivalent to ''six'' to one odds.

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* AllUpToYou: Mannie finds himself manning the second secret catapult when contact has been cut off with the Prof and Mike, the main catapult and most of the radars have been knocked out, there's two Earth warships prowling above and the FN is announcing victory. There's a hint that China may be willing to negotiate, or maybe they're just holding out for better terms from the Loonies. Mannie is asked if they should go ahead with the strike on China or hold off? [[spoiler:Mannie decides to continue the attack as planned. It turns out to be the right decision as China decides to recognise the independence of Luna while the rocks are on their way; after that, all the other intended targets quickly do likewise.]]



* ItsAllUpToYou: Mannie finds himself manning the second secret catapult when contact has been cut off with the Prof and Mike, the main catapult and most of the radars have been knocked out, there's two Earth warships prowling above and the FN is announcing victory. There's a hint that China may be willing to negotiate, or maybe they're just holding out for better terms from the Loonies. Mannie is asked if they should go ahead with the strike on China or hold off? [[spoiler:Mannie decides to continue the attack as planned. It turns out to be the right decision as China decides to recognise the independence of Luna while the rocks are on their way; after that, all the other intended targets quickly do likewise.]]
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* ItsAllUpToYou: Mannie finds himself manning the second secret catapult when contact has been cut off with the Prof and Mike, the main catapult and most of the radars have been knocked out, there's two Earth warships prowling above and the FN is announcing victory. There's a hint that China may be willing to negotiate, or maybe they're just holding out for better terms from the Loonies. Mannie is asked if they should go ahead with the strike on China or hold off? [[spoiler:Mannie decides to continue the attack as planned. It turns out to be the right decision as China decides to recognise the independence of Luna while the rocks are on their way; after that, all the other intended targets quickly do likewise.]]


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* StealthInSpace.
** Even Mike gets taken by surprise when the FN finally launches an attack, as the spaceships take the long way round so they approach from behind the Moon where they can't be picked up by radar, coordinating the attack so that all ships appear above the horizon at the same time.
** After all the other radars are destroyed, Mannie can't risk turning on his remaining radar to search for the Earth spaceships in orbit, so he has to station people in p-suits on the Moon's surface to [[BoringButPractical use the Mark One eyeball]] so they know when it's safe to fire their hidden catapult.


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* WhoWillBellTheCat: Since the previous Warden is not longer fit for his post, Prof asks the Lunar Authority which one of them plans to replace him, which would mean a virtual life sentence (as it turns out [[WeCanRuleTogether they offer the position to Mannie]], figuring the rebellious Loonies would be more willing to accept one of their own).
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* LibertariansInSpace: Mannie has to explain to some journalists that they've really no need for the Big Government that is seen as compulsory on Earth, as the Loonies have all the social needs already. Later he's offered a carrot-and-stick deal with the carrot being a whole bunch of 'free' services that the Loonies have anyway, at the cost of increased government intrusion and oppression. TINSTAAFL, as they say. The Prof isn't happy when the first thing the new Luna Congress does is start making laws and raising taxes.

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* LibertariansInSpace: Mannie has to explain to some journalists that they've really no need for the Big Government that is seen as compulsory on Earth, as the Loonies have all the social needs already. Later he's offered a carrot-and-stick deal with the carrot being a whole bunch of 'free' services that the Loonies have anyway, at the cost of increased government intrusion and oppression. TINSTAAFL, Tanstaafl, as they say. The Prof isn't happy when the first thing the new Luna Congress does is start making laws and raising taxes.
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* FrickinLaserBeams: Wildly realistic versions, mostly used to burn out sensors and fry electronics; explicitly stated to work as effective weapons only in a vacuum.

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* FrickinLaserBeams: Wildly realistic versions, mostly used to burn out sensors and fry electronics; explicitly stated to work as effective weapons only in a vacuum. The rebels develop a crude laser rifle, but its power is limited to a few shots and you can't swap in a new power pack either. Meanwhile the FN troops have rifles that fire explosive shells.
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* BurningTheShips:
** The FN soldiers sent to put down the rebellion have been told that their only way of getting back to Earth is to retake the colonies, as their troopships don't have enough fuel to return. The soldiers are then wired up on drugs so they know no fear. Were it not for the equally-suicidal resistance by every available Loonie, Mike taking control of the defence without waiting for orders, and the soldiers unfamiliarity with manouvering in a low-gravity environment, they might have won--instead they're slaughtered to the last man.
** When it's all over, Man wonders whether Prof deliberately encouraged Earth to knock out the catapults instead of the warrens, not just to preserve lives but to ensure the Loonies stopped exporting grain.

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* LibertariansInSpace: Mannie has to explain to some journalists that they've really no need for the Big Government that is seen as compulsory on Earth, as the Loonies have all the social needs already. Later he's offered a carrot-and-stick deal with the carrot being a whole bunch of 'free' services that the Loonies have anyway, at the cost of increased government intrusion and oppression. TINSTAAFL, as they say. The Prof isn't happy when the first thing the new Luna Congress does is start making laws and raising taxes.



* PretextForWar: The conspirators decide to cut back on provoking the Authorities because everything isn't in place yet. Then the Dragoons murder two women and [[XanatosSpeedChess they have to start the revolution ahead of schedule]] because they know they've just got the catalyst that will spark an uprising.

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The conspirators decide to cut back on provoking the Authorities because everything isn't in place yet. Then the Dragoons murder two women and [[XanatosSpeedChess they have to start the revolution ahead of schedule]] because they know they've just got the catalyst that will spark an uprising.uprising.
** The Professor deliberately provokes the Lunar Authority into making an unacceptable deal, because a reasonable deal (such as local autonomy and increased prices for grain) would still lead to the same food shortages down the track. He then manipulates Congress into an embargo (and spreads rumors on Earth that the Loonies are weak and divided) to provoke Earth into attacking sooner rather than later, when the Loonies won't be so enthusiastic for conflict.

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* IgnoredExpert: Alvarez, the chief of the Lunar Authority police, is a villainous example: he knows ''exactly'' how to keep the Loonies from rebelling and what he needs to do it, but his superiors on Earth won't give him the resources he needs because it would be too expensive. As a result, the rebellion is successful. Alvarez dies shortly after his IWarnedYou to the officer in charge.



* IgnoredExpert: Alvarez, the chief of the Lunar Authority police, is a villainous example: he knows ''exactly'' how to keep the Loonies from rebelling and what he needs to do it, but his superiors on Earth won't give him the resources he needs because it would be too expensive. As a result, the rebellion is successful. Alvarez dies shortly after his IWarnedYou to the officer in charge.


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* ItsTheOnlyWay: Man and Prof being fired to Earth inside an improvised spaceship made from a wheat carrier. [[spoiler:After Man gets there, he discovers that they could have arranged a spaceship, but this way they get some free dramatic publicity for their cause.]]

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