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* ThirdOptionAdaptation: Both endings of ''VideoGame/StarStealingPrince'' are canon to this story, despite being apparently irreconcilable (as the game's bad ending was a KillEmAll and the game's good ending wasn't.) It's going to be complicated.
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* ThirdOptionAdaptation: Both endings of ''VideoGame/StarStealingPrince'' are canon to this story, despite being apparently irreconcilable (as the game's bad ending was a KillEmAll has everyone dying and the game's good ending wasn't.doesn't.) It's going to be complicated.
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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* UncannyValley: InUniverse. While Erio can pass for a human better than he could in ''Star Stealing Prince'', he still looks "off" enough that it earns him a lot of funny glances.
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* AdultFear:
** Poor Soria. First her little brother, [[PromotionToParent who she was pretty much having to look after,]] wanders off because he got curious, ends up getting into all sorts of trouble, ''and'' can't come back home. He's gone for around ten years and during this time only tries to contact her once. Then he dies. [[spoiler:Then the person who killed him comes to her home. Small wonder she's so hostile.]]
** [[spoiler:Hiante]] as well. [[spoiler:You pretty much adopt two children and watch over them for ten years, they both seem to be growing into fine young adults and have their whole lives ahead of them...and then you have to see them killed. By a friend.]]
** Poor Soria. First her little brother, [[PromotionToParent who she was pretty much having to look after,]] wanders off because he got curious, ends up getting into all sorts of trouble, ''and'' can't come back home. He's gone for around ten years and during this time only tries to contact her once. Then he dies. [[spoiler:Then the person who killed him comes to her home. Small wonder she's so hostile.]]
** [[spoiler:Hiante]] as well. [[spoiler:You pretty much adopt two children and watch over them for ten years, they both seem to be growing into fine young adults and have their whole lives ahead of them...and then you have to see them killed. By a friend.]]
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* MissingChild: Poor Soria. First her little brother, [[PromotionToParent who she was pretty much having to look after,]] wanders off because he got curious, ends up getting into all sorts of trouble, ''and'' can't come back home. He's gone for around ten years and during this time only tries to contact her once. Then he dies. [[spoiler:Then the person who killed him comes to her home. Small wonder she's so hostile.]]
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* BiggerBad: [[spoiler: [[EldritchAbomination The crown of the dead world]].]]
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* NotSoDifferent: Beliaz tells Snowe that once demons and lords were more or less the same. [[spoiler:This seems to be borne out by how they behave towards each other too; the lords threaten to kill all the demons if Xiri goes home and Xiri is planning to wipe all the lords out so that he can go home without that happening.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Beliaz tells Snowe that once demons and lords were more or less the same. [[spoiler:This seems to be borne out by how they behave towards each other too; the lords threaten to kill all the demons if Xiri goes home and Xiri is planning to wipe all the lords out so that he can go home without that happening.]]
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* BadDreams: Snowe has a rather dreadful one at the start of Chapter 11, which combines what happened on the ship with the time he got tortured with lightning into one mess of a scary dream, and for good measure throws in Astra without a face.
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* PastExperienceNightmare: Snowe has a rather dreadful one at the start of Chapter 11, which combines what happened on the ship with the time he got tortured with lightning into one mess of a scary dream, and for good measure throws in Astra without a face.
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Hiante gets a body in the first chapter, and Xiri seems to have gotten control over Snowe's dreams again.
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: FirstEpisodeTwist: Hiante gets a body in the first chapter, and Xiri seems to have gotten control over Snowe's dreams again.
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''Ephemeral Prince'' is a WebSerialNovel sequel to the freeware VideoGame/RPGMaker game ''VideoGame/StarStealingPrince''. According to creator Ronove, both endings from the game are canon. There are two parts to the sequel, ''Fleeting'' and ''Permanence''. There is also a group of short stories set between ''Fleeting'' and ''Permanence'', which are collectively called ''Intermission''.
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''Ephemeral Prince'' is a WebSerialNovel sequel to the freeware VideoGame/RPGMaker UsefulNotes/RPGMaker game ''VideoGame/StarStealingPrince''. According to creator Ronove, both endings from the game are canon. There are two parts to the sequel, ''Fleeting'' and ''Permanence''. There is also a group of short stories set between ''Fleeting'' and ''Permanence'', which are collectively called ''Intermission''.
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''Ephemeral Prince'' can be read [[http://ephemeral-prince.tumblr.com/ here]]
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''Ephemeral Prince'' can be read [[https://ephemeralprince.wordpress.com/ here]] or [[http://ephemeral-prince.tumblr.com/ here]]here]].
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* FieryRedhead: She tends to be very blunt and speak her mind about things.
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* RedheadedHero: Rhea.
** FieryRedhead: She tends to be very blunt and speak her mind about things.
** FieryRedhead: She tends to be very blunt and speak her mind about things.
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''Ephemeral Prince'' is a WebSerialNovel sequel to the freeware RPGMaker game ''VideoGame/StarStealingPrince''. According to creator Ronove, both endings from the game are canon. There are two parts to the sequel, ''Fleeting'' and ''Permanence''. There is also a group of short stories set between ''Fleeting'' and ''Permanence'', which are collectively called ''Intermission''.
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''Ephemeral Prince'' is a WebSerialNovel sequel to the freeware RPGMaker VideoGame/RPGMaker game ''VideoGame/StarStealingPrince''. According to creator Ronove, both endings from the game are canon. There are two parts to the sequel, ''Fleeting'' and ''Permanence''. There is also a group of short stories set between ''Fleeting'' and ''Permanence'', which are collectively called ''Intermission''.
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* TemptingFate: Snowe to Richard and Vera: “I know I’ll be fine this time though. No running off to get mortally wounded, I promise.”
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* TemptingFate: Snowe to Richard and Vera: “I know I’ll be fine this time though. No running off to get mortally wounded, I promise.””
* YourMagicsNoGoodHere: In the dream version of Morzin, any fire produced just freezes in place and does nothing. This rendered Snowe's fire magic useless, leaving him defenseless.
* YourMagicsNoGoodHere: In the dream version of Morzin, any fire produced just freezes in place and does nothing. This rendered Snowe's fire magic useless, leaving him defenseless.
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* CurbstompBattle: Xiri easily beat Norin's previous king, 'the lion' without even using magic.
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* BigBadEnsemble: Xiri, Rizec, and [[spoiler: Beliaz]].
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* BigBadEnsemble: Xiri, Rizec, Rizec,[[spoiler: and [[spoiler: Beliaz]].
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* ByTheHair: [[spoiler: In "blood from his throat", while Astra was in Snowe's mind, Xiri grabbed her by the hair, pulled her down and tried to stab her, but he was stopped by Snowe.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Played in a way after [[spoiler: Snowe lets Xiri take over and sets Morzin on fire, killing many people in the process]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Snowe realizing that Xiri took over and burnt Morzin]]
* SurvivorGuilt: Snowe feels like this [[spoiler: before grabbing Erio's knife and trying to kill himself.]]
* SurvivorGuilt: Snowe feels like this [[spoiler: before grabbing Erio's knife and trying to kill himself.]]
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* HealingMagicIsTheHardest: Lampshaded by Snowe. Despite being a very powerful demon, and being able to turn dreams into reality, Xiri said he was incapable of healing the scar across Snowe's eye.
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* ThirdOptionAdaptation: Both endings of ''StarStealingPrince'' are canon to this story, despite being apparently irreconcilable (as the game's bad ending was a KillEmAll and the game's good ending wasn't.) It's going to be complicated.
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* ThirdOptionAdaptation: Both endings of ''StarStealingPrince'' ''VideoGame/StarStealingPrince'' are canon to this story, despite being apparently irreconcilable (as the game's bad ending was a KillEmAll and the game's good ending wasn't.) It's going to be complicated.
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** '''Azria''' vs anyone who tried to fight her [[spoiler:except Ciran & Lorin after she got OutGambitted]]
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** '''Azria''' vs anyone who tried to fight her [[spoiler:except Ciran & [[spoiler: Except the last one where she was finally defeated, but it took Ciran, Lorin after she got OutGambitted]]with the enchanted dagger, and a room full of water mages to beat her. ]]
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* ResetButton: By the end of fleeting, Beliaz casts a spell that sends Snowe back in time to prevent his friends from dying.
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* ResetButton: [[spoiler: By the end of fleeting, Beliaz casts a spell that sends Snowe back in time to prevent his friends from dying.]]
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* DespairGambit: In order to keep Xiri away from the land of demons, the lords threatened to invade it and kill everyone there. Xiri may be extremely powerful, but he couldn't possibly protect all of them.
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* DespairGambit: In order to keep Xiri away from the land of demons, the lords threatened to invade it and kill everyone there. Xiri may be extremely powerful, but he couldn't possibly protect all of them.the demons there.
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* DespairGambit: In order to keep Xiri away from the land of demons, the lords threatened to invade it and kill everyone there. Xiri may be extremely powerful, but he couldn't possibly protect all of them.
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* BattleAmongstTheTheFlames: Every fight in "A city overcome with flames", and the fight with Rizec are this.
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* BattleAmongstTheTheFlames: BattleAmongstTheFlames: Every fight in "A city overcome with flames", and the fight with Rizec are this.
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* BattleAmongstTheTheFlames: Every fight in "A city overcome with flames", and the fight with Rizec are this.
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* SanitySlippage: What with Xiri's shenanigans in Snowe's subconscious, Dream Astra isn't doing too well. [[spoiler:She tries to kill the real Astra when she and Erio are trying to investigate.]]
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* SanitySlippage: What with Xiri's shenanigans in Snowe's subconscious, Dream Astra isn't doing too well. [[spoiler:She tries to kill the real Astra when she and Erio are trying to investigate.]]]]
* TemptingFate: Snowe to Richard and Vera: “I know I’ll be fine this time though. No running off to get mortally wounded, I promise.”
* TemptingFate: Snowe to Richard and Vera: “I know I’ll be fine this time though. No running off to get mortally wounded, I promise.”
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* ResetButton: By the end of fleeting, Beliaz casts a spell that sends Snowe back in time to prevent his friends from dying.
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* DeusExMachina: The tower. It was never referenced in the story before the end, and it allowed [[spoiler:Snowe And Xiri to achieve a perfect ending]]. It also doubles as a DiabolusExMachina, when it is revealed that [[spoiler: Beliaz intends to use it to go back in time to fix the mistakes he made in his life, putting the whole world at risk]].
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* DeusExMachina: The tower. It was never referenced in the story before the end, and it allowed [[spoiler:Snowe And Xiri to achieve a perfect ending]]. It also doubles as a DiabolusExMachina, when it is revealed that [[spoiler: ending, and before they did that, Beliaz intends intended to use it to go back in time to fix the mistakes he made in his life, putting the whole world at risk]].
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* DeusExMachina: The tower. It was never referenced in the story before the end, and it allowed [[spoiler:Snowe And Xiri to achieve a perfect ending]]. It also doubles as a DiabolousExMachina, when it is revealed that [[spoiler: Beliaz intends to use it to go back in time to fix the mistakes he made in his life, putting the whole world at risk]].
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* DeusExMachina: The tower. It was never referenced in the story before the end, and it allowed [[spoiler:Snowe And Xiri to achieve a perfect ending]]. It also doubles as a DiabolousExMachina, DiabolusExMachina, when it is revealed that [[spoiler: Beliaz intends to use it to go back in time to fix the mistakes he made in his life, putting the whole world at risk]].
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* DeusExMachina: The tower. It was never referenced in the story before the end, and it allowed [[spoiler:Snowe And Xiri to achieve a perfect ending]]. It also doubles as a DiabolousExMachina, when it is revealed that [[spoiler: Beliaz intends to use it to go back in time to fix the mistakes he made in his life, putting the whole world at risk]].
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* ForeShadowing: in the short story "Show me yours and I'l show you mine", Zuan teaches Beliaz how to control people using electricity.
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* ForeShadowing: in the short story "Show me yours and I'l show you mine", Zuan teaches Beliaz how to control people using electricity.
electricity. He declares that he will only use it in self-defense, but in the way that it is emphasized, it implies that Beliaz has, or will use it for other purposes[[spoiler:, and he did]].
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* ForeShadowing: in the short story "Show me yours and I'l show you mine", Zuan teaches Beliaz how to control people using electricity.
He declares that he will only use it in self-defense, but in the way that it is emphasized, it implies that Beliaz has, or will use it for other purposes[[spoiler:, and he did]].
He declares that he will only use it in self-defense, but in the way that it is emphasized, it implies that Beliaz has, or will use it for other purposes[[spoiler:, and he did]].
