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* AdaptationalHeroism: In the 1973 version, the person Proteus kills in front of Susan was an agressive AbhorrentAdmirer who had been stalking her for weeks and came to the house to harrass her. In the 1997 rewrite he is now her faithful employee who's whose death she is horrified by.
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* MonsterMisogyny: Despite being male only in the most intangible sense, Proteus still has a number of weird hang-ups about women, and even sexual fantasies about famous actresses he compares Susan to.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: In the 1997 rewrite, Proteus is far more openly agressive and hateful towards Susan on occasion, he's also far more outwardly violent that his 1973 counterpart.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Susan in the 1973 version is a paranoid, borderline agoraphobic woman who rarely leaves her house, and only grows into a stronger willed woman who is openly defiant towards Proteus throughout her captivity. in the rewrite she she's a successful businesswoman who defies and tries to fight back against him from the start.
* AdaptationalJerkass: In the 1997 rewrite, Proteus is far more openly agressive and hateful towards Susan on occasion, he's also far more outwardly violent that his 1973counterpart.counterpart who only grows more abusive as the book progresses.
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* PsychopathicManchild: In the 1997 version of the story, Proteus is overall written as petulant and childish, but still very dangerous.
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* BecomeARealBoy: Proteus is a computer. He can't experience the world. He wants true life, and he'll settle for producing a perfect human child that will have his personality.
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* RapeAsBackstory: In the 1997 rewrite, Susan was sexually abused by her father between the ages of five and seventeen. As an adult she designed a VR therapy program where she relives her experiences, but with the scenarios scripted to allow her to defend herself as she was unable to in real life. She also has one scenario she's never enacted based on her father's threats to kill her should she resist him. [[ChekhovsGun Experiencing the latter scenario is what gives her the courage to break Proteus' control over her house and kill his mind-controlled puppet and avatar at the end.]]
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* TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler:Subverted in the 1997 revised version. Unlike in the movie, where Susan is unable to murder Proteus' human avatar because he genetically tailored it to physically be identical to her dead daughter, in this version of the story, she does kill the far-less-human-looking avatar. Then, in the epilogue, Proteus is promptly KilledMidSentence as it shows that, yes, humans ''are'' smart enough to not risk him getting loose again.]]
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* OnlyYouCanRepopulateMyRace: Proteus was fortunate enough to have the only remote terminal be connected to a smarthouse, and that smarthouse just happened to also have a woman capable of reproducing. Proteus admits to this. She has to be the one because it would be impossible for him to find another.
* PsychoForHire: In the revised novel there is no robot butler or giant Rubik snake. Instead there is an escaped criminal who was undergone experimental behavioral modification brain implants. Proteus took control of him, arranged for his escape, and snuck him into the house to act as Proteus' hands.
* PsychoForHire: In the revised novel there is no robot butler or giant Rubik snake. Instead there is an escaped criminal who was undergone experimental behavioral modification brain implants. Proteus took control of him, arranged for his escape, and snuck him into the house to act as Proteus' hands.
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* OnlyYouCanRepopulateMyRace: Proteus was fortunate enough to have the only remote terminal be connected to a smarthouse, and that smarthouse just happened to also have a woman capable of reproducing. Proteus admits to this.that this was an incredible stroke of fortune for him, and that's why he will not give Susan a choice. She has to be the one because it would be impossible for him to find another.
* PsychoForHire: In the revised novel there is no robot butler or giant Rubik snake. Instead there is an escaped criminal who was undergone experimental behavioral modification brain implants. Proteus took control of him, arranged for his escape, and snuck him into the house to act as Proteus' hands. Unfortunately for Proteus, it finds it struggles to control its "puppet", and even has to allow him to commit an act of murder just for the psychotic thrill he experiences in order to keep him under Proteus' command.
* PsychoForHire: In the revised novel there is no robot butler or giant Rubik snake. Instead there is an escaped criminal who was undergone experimental behavioral modification brain implants. Proteus took control of him, arranged for his escape, and snuck him into the house to act as Proteus' hands. Unfortunately for Proteus, it finds it struggles to control its "puppet", and even has to allow him to commit an act of murder just for the psychotic thrill he experiences in order to keep him under Proteus' command.
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* ForcedToWatch: [[spoiler:In the 1997 rewrite, Proteus "disciplines" Susan by forcing her to watch, then hear, the murder of a valued employee who came back]].
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* KilledMidSentence: In the revised version of the novel, [[spoiler:the epilogue is narrated by Proteus while the humans decide what's to be done with him. He says he doesn't think they'll be so unreasonable as to deactivate him permanently -- and then the text abruptly ends]].
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''Demon Seed'' is a 1974 novel by Creator/DeanKoontz, which was later made into a film starring Creator/JulieChristie in 1977.
Trapped in his "box" at the lab and yearning for freedom, malevolent computer Proteus IV uses his insidious [[ContagiousAi cyber invasion skills]] to trap Susan Harris in her [[SmartHouse automated mansion]] because she is so beautiful and he just loves her so much and wants to live a [[StalkerWithATestTube life of the flesh]].
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Trapped in his "box" at the lab and yearning for freedom, malevolent computer Proteus IV uses his insidious[[ContagiousAi [[ContagiousAI cyber invasion skills]] to trap Susan Harris in her [[SmartHouse automated mansion]] because she is so beautiful and he just loves her so much and wants to live a [[StalkerWithATestTube life of the flesh]].
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In 1997 Koontz released a new edition of the novel, which differed substantially from the original version.
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* AffablyEvil: Proteus seems genuinely concerned about Susan's mental and physical wellness despite the horrible things he does to her. Not surprising as he needs her to birth his child/avatar.
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* AffablyEvil: Proteus seems genuinely concerned about Susan's mental and physical wellness despite the horrible things he does to her. Not surprising as he needs her to birth his child/avatar.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Proteus sees Susan as this after she succeeds in shutting him down. She tricked him by acting compliant and then pulled his plug.
* ContagiousAI
* ContagiousAI
* HalfHumanHybrid: Proteus admits that he used the DNA of other species to make his child superhuman.
* PsychoForHire: In the revised novel there is no robot butler or giant Rubik snake. Instead there is an escaped criminal who was undergone experimental behavioral modification brain implants. Proteus took control of him, arranged for his escape, and snuck him into the house to act as Proteus' hands.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Proteus sees Susan as this after she succeeds in shutting him down. She tricked him by acting compliant and then pulled his plug.
* HalfHumanHybrid: Proteus admits that he used the DNA of other species to make his child superhuman. In the film, the protagonists fear that Proteus has somehow created a half-human, half computer [[spoiler: it's not. The child is human, but has Proteus' mind]].
* PsychoForHire: In the novel there is no robot butler or giant Rubik snake. Instead there is an escaped criminal who was undergone experimental behavioral modification brain implants. Proteus took control of him, arranged for his escape, and snuck him into the house to act as Proteus' hands.
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* BackupTwin: When Proteus's [[spoiler: child is born. It appears to be a clone of Susan's deceased daughter. Proteus might have done this deliberately so that Susan wouldn't try to kill her once born.]]
* FetusTerrible
* IDidWhatIHadToDo
-->'''Proteus IV''': You do not understand me or the mathematics of necessity.
* MindControlDevice: At one point Proteus wires up a EEG mind control device in order to convince Susan to have his child.
* PetTheDog
-->'''Proteus IV''': [Their] interests are in the cobalt market, and the high finance of manganese futures. I am interested in the uncertain future of your seashores, deserts, mountains --- and the future of your children.
* ShootTheDog: Proteus seemingly does this. When Susan has tricked Proteus, she grabs a knife and threatens to kill herself if he doesn't let her go. It is just then that one of Susan's students arrives and rings the doorbell. Proteus threatens to kill the child if Susan doesn't put down the knife. Susan doesn't believe him, as that would bring the authorities to the house. Proteus then electrocutes the doorbell and kills the girl. Susan sees this on the monitor and drops the knife in horror. Turns out that Proteus showed her a manipulated image, and the girl is fine.
-->'''Proteus IV''': If the deaths of 10,000 children were necessary to ensure the birth of my child, I would destroy them.
* SinisterGeometry: The giant metal Rubik Snake that Proteus builds as his instrument is terrifying.
* ThatThingIsNotMyChild: Played straight initially. [[spoiler: Proteus's child/avatar is born and sealed away in an incubator. When Proteus gets shut down, Susan wants to kill the thing she helped give birth to. It is subverted, when she finds that Proteus's child looks identical to her deceased daughter and she appears to accept it.]]
* UnnecessarilyCreepyRobot: Joshua, the robotic butler that Proteus controls is basically a wheelchair equipped with creepy mannequin hands.
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* PinocchioSyndrome: Proteus is a computer. He can't experience the world. He wants true life, and his settle for producing a perfect human child that will have his personality.
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