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* In Finale Part 2, Mike offers Jerry five dollars for sticking his face into a chocolate cake. Jerry happily obliges, noting it would've happened anyway.
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* Any of the eliminations include MiKe and Jerry's quite humorous distractions.
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* Any of the eliminations include MiKe Mike and Jerry's quite humorous distractions.
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* Any of the eliminations include MiKe and Jerry's quite humorous distractions.
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* Mike: "[[spoiler:Katie]]. Really. What is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after [[spoiler:Katie]] was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.
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* Mike: "[[spoiler:Katie]]. Really. What is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after [[spoiler:Katie]] was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.
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'''Mike:''' [[CurbStompBattle No, it doesn't]].
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'''Mike:''' [[CurbStompBattle No, it doesn't]].doesn't]].
* Episode #28/Elimination #9
-->'''Mike:''' [[spoiler:Lexxy]] Is there someone who loves you?\\
'''[[spoiler:Lexxy]]:''' Yes... He ''says'' he loves me.\\
'''[[spoiler:Maki]]:''' SPOILERS! IT MEANS NOTHING!!
* Episode #28/Elimination #9
-->'''Mike:''' [[spoiler:Lexxy]] Is there someone who loves you?\\
'''[[spoiler:Lexxy]]:''' Yes... He ''says'' he loves me.\\
'''[[spoiler:Maki]]:''' SPOILERS! IT MEANS NOTHING!!
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* Mike: "[[spoiler:Katie]]. Really. What is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after [[spoiler:she]] was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.
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* Mike: "[[spoiler:Katie]]. Really. What is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after [[spoiler:she]] [[spoiler:Katie]] was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.
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-->'''Jerry:''' [[spoiler:Ty]]: in five words or less, how did you come to be with us here tonight?\\
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-->'''Jerry:''' [[spoiler:Ty]]: [[spoiler:Ty [Halley][==]]]: in five words or less, how did you come to be with us here tonight?\\
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[''[[OverlyLongGag cut back to [[spoiler:Ty]], the artist, giving up on his first attempt and counting words again for a second]]'']\\
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* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, wait a minute, Robert's[[labelnote:*]]Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager[[/labelnote]] being a troll. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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* Monica [[spoiler:Monica]] in Episode 18: "Then I realized, wait a minute, Robert's[[labelnote:*]]Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager[[/labelnote]] being a troll. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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You get a spolier! And you get a spoiler! I considered just adding a spoiler warning on top, but I\'m not so sure how to do that.
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* Mike: "Katie. Really. What is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after she was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.
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* Mike: "Katie."[[spoiler:Katie]]. Really. What is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after she [[spoiler:she]] was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.
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-->'''Jerry:''' Ty: in five words or less, how did you come to be with us here tonight?\\
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-->'''Jerry:''' Ty: [[spoiler:Ty]]: in five words or less, how did you come to be with us here tonight?\\
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* Erika in Episode 19: "We're bros. These are our wieners touching."
* Also, Abby in episode 19. Her banter with Mike and Jerry had them both laughing hysterically. Especially this exchange:
--->'''Mike:''' Do you think Erika deserves to go home tonight?\\
'''Abby:''' No.\\
* Also, Abby in episode 19. Her banter with Mike and Jerry had them both laughing hysterically. Especially this exchange:
--->'''Mike:''' Do you think Erika deserves to go home tonight?\\
'''Abby:''' No.\\
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* Erika [[spoiler:Erika]] in Episode 19: "We're bros. These are our wieners touching."
* Also,Abby [[spoiler:Abby]] in episode 19. Her banter with Mike and Jerry had them both laughing hysterically. Especially this exchange:
--->'''Mike:''' Do you thinkErika [[spoiler:Erika]] deserves to go home tonight?\\
'''Abby:''' '''[[spoiler:Abby]]:''' No.\\
* Also,
--->'''Mike:''' Do you think
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'''Abby:''' Why don't you just... go suck a dick?
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* The Ambassador of Sass in Episode 22? Monica. Full stop.
--->'''Mike:''' Monica, do you feel like you pissed away the first 30 minutes of this competition?\\
'''Monica:''' Get fucked. No!
--->'''Mike:''' Monica, do you feel like you pissed away the first 30 minutes of this competition?\\
'''Monica:''' Get fucked. No!
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* The Ambassador of Sass in Episode 22? Monica.[[spoiler:Monica]]. Full stop.
--->'''Mike:'''Monica, [[spoiler:Monica]], do you feel like you pissed away the first 30 minutes of this competition?\\
'''Monica:''' '''[[spoiler:Monica]]:''' Get fucked. No!
--->'''Mike:'''
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'''Abby:''' So that I can get all of the men. Men love cartoonists. That's the only reason I got into it.\\
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'''Abby:''' For the "D".
* Also, Abby's Elimination #8 ''[[http://penny-arcade.com/strip-search/spoilers/day-8#elimination comic.]]'' Seriously, Mike was still laughing at it after he swapped with Jerry to read ''Tavis's''. It's not that Tavis did a bad job -- he turned out a good, funny strip, and the judges said so -- but Abby ''knocked it out of the park.''
* Also, Abby's Elimination #8 ''[[http://penny-arcade.com/strip-search/spoilers/day-8#elimination comic.]]'' Seriously, Mike was still laughing at it after he swapped with Jerry to read ''Tavis's''. It's not that Tavis did a bad job -- he turned out a good, funny strip, and the judges said so -- but Abby ''knocked it out of the park.''
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* Also,
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* Also from Elim #2:
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_YfJ3Z3Wzlk#t=115s Also from Elim #2:#2:]]
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* Also, Abby's Elimination #8 ''comic''. Seriously, Mike was still laughing at it after he swapped with Jerry to read ''Tavis's''. It's not that Tavis did a bad job -- he turned out a good, funny strip, and the judges said so -- but Abby ''knocked it out of the park.''
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* Also, Abby's Elimination #8 ''comic''. ''[[http://penny-arcade.com/strip-search/spoilers/day-8#elimination comic.]]'' Seriously, Mike was still laughing at it after he swapped with Jerry to read ''Tavis's''. It's not that Tavis did a bad job -- he turned out a good, funny strip, and the judges said so -- but Abby ''knocked it out of the park.''
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'''Abby:''' So that I can get all of the men.\\
'''Mike:''' For the... for the men?\\
'''Mike:''' For the... for the men?\\
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'''Abby:''' So that I can get all of the men. Men love cartoonists. That's the only reason I got into it.\\
'''Mike:''' For the... for themen?\\''men?''\\
'''Mike:''' For the... for the
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'''Abby:''' So that I can get all of the men\\
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'''Abby:''' So that I can get all of the men\\men.\\
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* Also, Abby's Elimination #8 ''comic''. Seriously, Mike was still laughing at it after he swapped with Jerry to read ''Tavis's''.
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* Also, Abby's Elimination #8 ''comic''. Seriously, Mike was still laughing at it after he swapped with Jerry to read ''Tavis's''. It's not that Tavis did a bad job -- he turned out a good, funny strip, and the judges said so -- but Abby ''knocked it out of the park.''
-->'''Jerry:''' Oh, jeez, but ... we're supposed -- this part right here is supposed to have a lot of back-and-forth...\\
'''Mike:''' [[CurbStompBattle No, it doesn't]].
-->'''Jerry:''' Oh, jeez, but ... we're supposed -- this part right here is supposed to have a lot of back-and-forth...\\
'''Mike:''' [[CurbStompBattle No, it doesn't]].
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'''Abby:''' For the "D"
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'''Abby:''' For the "D"
"D".
* Also, Abby's Elimination #8 ''comic''. Seriously, Mike was still laughing at it after he swapped with Jerry to read ''Tavis's''.
* Also, Abby's Elimination #8 ''comic''. Seriously, Mike was still laughing at it after he swapped with Jerry to read ''Tavis's''.
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Someone who can write that last line better please do.
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'''Monica:''' Get fucked. No!
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'''Monica:''' Get fucked. No!No!
* Elimination #8:
--->'''Mike:''' Why did you wanna be a cartoonist?\\
'''Abby:''' So that I can get all of the men\\
'''Mike:''' For the... for the men?\\
'''Abby:''' For the "D"
* Elimination #8:
--->'''Mike:''' Why did you wanna be a cartoonist?\\
'''Abby:''' So that I can get all of the men\\
'''Mike:''' For the... for the men?\\
'''Abby:''' For the "D"
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* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, wait a minute, Robert's being a troll [[hottip:*:Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager]]. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, wait a minute, Robert's being a troll [[hottip:*:Robert Robert's[[labelnote:*]]Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager]].manager[[/labelnote]] being a troll. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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-->'''Jerry:''' You know, we got shit to do.\\
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[''cut back to Ty, giving up on his first attempt and counting words again for a second'']second'']\\
* During the Q&A at the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6nygxZGRfnY PAX East 2013 Strip Search Panel]], Mike mentions [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=6nygxZGRfnY#t=2565s someone coming up to him in the expo hall while things were being set up and saying]] "Hey, you're one of the judges on Strip Search!"[[note]]As opposed to, say, one of the two creators of ''[[Webcomic/PennyArcade the webcomic for which PAX is named]]''.[[/note]]
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'''Monica:''' Get fucked. No!
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'''Monica:''' Get fucked. No!
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'''Jerry:''' You know, we got shit to do.\\
[''general laughter'']]\\
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'''Jerry:''' You know, we got shit to do.\\
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inquisitive'']\\
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'''Jerry:'''second'']
-->'''Jerry:''' You know, we got shit to do.\\
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'''Jerry:'''
-->'''Jerry:''' You know, we got shit to do.\\
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* Mike: "Katie, what is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after she was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.
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* Mike: "Katie, what "Katie. Really. What is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after she was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.sequence.
* Also from Elim #2:
-->'''Jerry:''' Ty: in five words or less, how did you come to be with us here tonight?\\
[''{{beat}}'']\\
[''Ty begins counting words on his fingers'']\\
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'''Jerry:''' You know, we got shit to do.\\
[''general laughter'']]\\
'''Mike:''' You know, as many words as you need!
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-->'''Jerry:''' Ty: in five words or less, how did you come to be with us here tonight?\\
[''{{beat}}'']\\
[''Ty begins counting words on his fingers'']\\
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'''Jerry:''' You know, we got shit to do.\\
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'''Mike:''' You know, as many words as you need!
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--->'''Jerry:''' [[ManipulativeEditing Let's put a stunned reaction on the camera so they can put it there.]]
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--->'''Jerry:''' [[ManipulativeEditing Let's put a stunned reaction on the camera so they can put it there.]]]]
* The Ambassador of Sass in Episode 22? Monica. Full stop.
--->'''Mike:''' Monica, do you feel like you pissed away the first 30 minutes of this competition?\\
'''Monica:''' Get fucked. No!
* The Ambassador of Sass in Episode 22? Monica. Full stop.
--->'''Mike:''' Monica, do you feel like you pissed away the first 30 minutes of this competition?\\
'''Monica:''' Get fucked. No!
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'''Abby:''' Why don't you just... go suck a dick?
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'''Abby:''' Why don't you just... go suck a dick?dick?
** Plus, after the judges stopped laughing:
--->'''Jerry:''' [[ManipulativeEditing Let's put a stunned reaction on the camera so they can put it there.]]
** Plus, after the judges stopped laughing:
--->'''Jerry:''' [[ManipulativeEditing Let's put a stunned reaction on the camera so they can put it there.]]
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* Erika in Episode 19: "We're bros. These are our wieners touching."
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* Erika in Episode 19: "We're bros. These are our wieners touching.""
* Also, Abby in episode 19. Her banter with Mike and Jerry had them both laughing hysterically. Especially this exchange:
--->'''Mike:''' Do you think Erika deserves to go home tonight?\\
'''Abby:''' No.\\
'''Mike:''' So you should go home?\\
'''Abby:''' No.\\
'''Mike:''' Why don't you just quit now, then?\\
'''Abby:''' Why don't you just... go suck a dick?
* Also, Abby in episode 19. Her banter with Mike and Jerry had them both laughing hysterically. Especially this exchange:
--->'''Mike:''' Do you think Erika deserves to go home tonight?\\
'''Abby:''' No.\\
'''Mike:''' So you should go home?\\
'''Abby:''' No.\\
'''Mike:''' Why don't you just quit now, then?\\
'''Abby:''' Why don't you just... go suck a dick?
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* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, wait a minute, Robert's being a troll [[hottip:*:Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager]]. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, wait a minute, Robert's being a troll [[hottip:*:Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager]]. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
* Erika in Episode 19: "We're bros. These are our wieners touching."
* Erika in Episode 19: "We're bros. These are our wieners touching."
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* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, wait a minute, Robert's being a troll [Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager]. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, wait a minute, Robert's being a troll [Robert [[hottip:*:Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager].manager]]. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, Robert's being a troll [Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager]. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, wait a minute, Robert's being a troll [Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager]. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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* From Elimination #5: "Jerry's drinking my comic."
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* From Elimination #5: "Jerry's drinking my comic."
* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, Robert's being a troll [Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager]. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
* Monica in Episode 18: "Then I realized, Robert's being a troll [Robert Khoo, Penny Arcade's business manager]. So I drew a lovely dick on his abs."
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* Mike: "Katie, what is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after she was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.sequence.
* From Elimination #5: "Jerry's drinking my comic."
* From Elimination #5: "Jerry's drinking my comic."
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*A simple 2 word statement from Erika, used in the trailer and finally explained in episode six: "Butt virginity"
*Mike: "Katie, what is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after she was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.
*Mike: "Katie, what is it about you that people hate so goddamn much?" after she was up up for elimination twice. In sequence.
