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'''Mike:''' ''(after he and Jerry stopped laughing)'' Crank it up! Crank up the "C", crank up the "D".
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'''[[spoiler:Abby]]:''' For the "D"... And cats. I want more cats, and all the "D" I can get.
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'''[[spoiler:Abby]]:''' For the "D"... And cats. I want more cats, and all the "D" I can get.\\
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'''[[spoiler:Abby]]:''' For the "D"... And cats. I want more cats, and all the "D" I can get.
'''Mike:''' ''(after he and Jerry stopped laughing)'' Crank it up! Crank up the "C", crank up the "D".
'''Mike:''' ''(after he and Jerry stopped laughing)'' Crank it up! Crank up the "C", crank up the "D".
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'''Mike:''' You seriously don't remember saying [[spoiler:you wanted all the cats and all the D]]?\\
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'''Mike:''' You seriously don't remember saying [[spoiler:you wanted all the cats and all the D]]?\\"D"]]?\\
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-->'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' Would I just win? Would they make me win, posthumously?
-->'''Mike:''' No. No, it would have narrowed our field down considerably.
-->'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' So it would have been a favor for these two.
-->'''Mike:''' We would have [[spoiler:[[RunningGag brought Lexxy back]]]].
-->'''Mike:''' No. No, it would have narrowed our field down considerably.
-->'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' So it would have been a favor for these two.
-->'''Mike:''' We would have [[spoiler:[[RunningGag brought Lexxy back]]]].
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-->'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' Would I just win? Would they make me win, posthumously?
-->'''Mike:'''posthumously?\\
'''Mike:''' No. No, it would have narrowed our field downconsiderably.
-->'''[[spoiler:considerably.\\
'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' So it would have been a favor for thesetwo.
-->'''Mike:'''two.\\
'''Mike:''' We would have [[spoiler:[[RunningGag brought Lexxyback]]]].back]]]].
* Also in Finale Part 1, when Mike and Jerry ask the obvious followup question about [[spoiler:Abby's comment in Elimination #8]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Abby''']]: I don't remember this!\\
'''Mike:''' You seriously don't remember saying [[spoiler:you wanted all the cats and all the D]]?\\
'''Jerry:''' It's one of the funniest things I have ever heard!\\
'''Mike:''' Erika still says it!\\
'''Jerry:''' No, that has ... that has ''currency'' in our office! That is a ... that's a ''[[MemeticMutation saying]]'', now!
-->'''Mike:'''
'''Mike:''' No. No, it would have narrowed our field down
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'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' So it would have been a favor for these
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'''Mike:''' We would have [[spoiler:[[RunningGag brought Lexxy
* Also in Finale Part 1, when Mike and Jerry ask the obvious followup question about [[spoiler:Abby's comment in Elimination #8]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Abby''']]: I don't remember this!\\
'''Mike:''' You seriously don't remember saying [[spoiler:you wanted all the cats and all the D]]?\\
'''Jerry:''' It's one of the funniest things I have ever heard!\\
'''Mike:''' Erika still says it!\\
'''Jerry:''' No, that has ... that has ''currency'' in our office! That is a ... that's a ''[[MemeticMutation saying]]'', now!
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* A couple in [[http://penny-arcade.com/strip-search/artist/ahoward Abby Howard's introduction video:]]
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* A couple in [[http://penny-arcade.com/strip-search/artist/ahoward Abby Howard's introduction video:]]video]] (both of which are quoted in the first episode):
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* A couple in [[http://penny-arcade.com/strip-search/artist/ahoward Abby Howard's introduction video:]]
-->'''Abby:''' I'm nervous that in the first competition I'm just going to blow it. And then everyone is going to think I'm an idiot. On the entire Internet. I don't want the Internet to think I'm an idiot.
-->'''Abby:''' I'm worried I might have to work in a group. I really hate working in groups, especially on creative projects, because there's just ... too many people who are creative and think that their idea is the best when, in fact, it is ''my'' idea that is the best.
-->'''Abby:''' I'm nervous that in the first competition I'm just going to blow it. And then everyone is going to think I'm an idiot. On the entire Internet. I don't want the Internet to think I'm an idiot.
-->'''Abby:''' I'm worried I might have to work in a group. I really hate working in groups, especially on creative projects, because there's just ... too many people who are creative and think that their idea is the best when, in fact, it is ''my'' idea that is the best.
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* In Finale Part 1, [[spoiler:Maki]] muses about what would happen if he died before reaching the final episode.
-->'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' Would I just win? Would they make me win, posthumously?
-->'''Mike:''' No. No, it would have narrowed our field down considerably.
-->'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' So it would have been a favor for these two.
-->'''Mike:''' We would have [[spoiler:[[RunningGag brought Lexxy back]]]].
-->'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' Would I just win? Would they make me win, posthumously?
-->'''Mike:''' No. No, it would have narrowed our field down considerably.
-->'''[[spoiler: Maki]]:''' So it would have been a favor for these two.
-->'''Mike:''' We would have [[spoiler:[[RunningGag brought Lexxy back]]]].
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** ...and right after, when the judges are done laughing:
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** ...and right after, the followup when the judges are done they finished laughing:
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* Also, [[spoiler:Abby]] in episode 19. Her banter with Mike and Jerry had them both laughing hysterically. Especially this exchange:
-->'''Mike:''' Do you think [[spoiler:Erika]] deserves to go home tonight?\\
-->'''Mike:''' Do you think [[spoiler:Erika]] deserves to go home tonight?\\
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* Also, [[spoiler:Abby]] in episode 19. Her banter with Mike and Jerry had them both laughing hysterically. hysterically.
** Especially funny was this exchange:
-->'''Mike:''' --->'''Mike:''' Do you think [[spoiler:Erika]] deserves to go home tonight?\\
** Especially funny was this exchange:
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-->'''[[spoiler:Abby]]:''' We still have [[spoiler:two fucking months]]! [[spoiler:Two more months]] until we know [[spoiler:who wins this goddamn competition]]! God dammit!
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'''[[spoiler:Maki]]:''' SPOILERS! IT MEANS NOTHING!! NOTHING!!
* In [[http://penny-arcade.com/strip-search/episode/a-kick-in-the-pants Episode #29]], [[spoiler:Abby]]'s reaction after it is revealed that [[spoiler:the final challenge is "spend two months creating a comic pitch"]].
* In [[http://penny-arcade.com/strip-search/episode/a-kick-in-the-pants Episode #29]], [[spoiler:Abby]]'s reaction after it is revealed that [[spoiler:the final challenge is "spend two months creating a comic pitch"]].
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** In the next elimination round, Mike and Jerry flat-out told [[spoiler:Lexxy and Maki]] that Abby had drawn one of the funniest comics they had ever seen.
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** In the next elimination round, Mike and Jerry flat-out told [[spoiler:Lexxy and Maki]] that Abby [[spoiler:Abby]] had drawn one of the funniest comics they had ever seen.
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* During the Q&A at the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6nygxZGRfnY PAX East 2013 Strip Search Panel]], Mike mentions [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=6nygxZGRfnY#t=2565s someone coming up to him in the expo hall while things were being set up and saying]] "Hey, you're one of the judges on Strip Search!"[[note]]As opposed to, say, one of the two creators of ''[[Webcomic/PennyArcade the webcomic for which PAX is named]]''.[[/note]]
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* During the Q&A at the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6nygxZGRfnY PAX East 2013 Strip Search Panel]], Mike mentions [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=6nygxZGRfnY#t=2565s com/watch?v=6nygxZGRfnY#t=42m44s someone coming up to him in the expo hall while things were being set up and saying]] "Hey, you're one of the judges on Strip Search!"[[note]]As opposed to, say, one of the two creators of ''[[Webcomic/PennyArcade the webcomic for which PAX is named]]''.[[/note]]
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** Also, [[spoiler:Monica's]] response to Mike continually asking her why she wants to be a cartoonist:
--->"Because I wanna fuck your mom!"
--->"Because I wanna fuck your mom!"
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** In the next elimination round, Mike and Jerry flat-out told [[spoiler:Lexxy and Maki]] that Abby had drawn one of the funniest comics they had ever seen.
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* In Finale Part 2, Mike offers Jerry five dollars for sticking his face into a chocolate cake. Jerry happily obliges, noting it would've happened anyway.
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* In Finale Part 2, Mike offers Jerry five dollars for sticking his face into a chocolate cake. Jerry happily obliges, noting it would've happened anyway. (And then it turns out Mike doesn't even have the five dollars.)
