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* While Gilgamesh and Shinji are taunting Archer and Rin, Shinji accidentally puts his foot in his mouth by being insulted that Archer is telling him what to do, as he's quickly forced to clarify that he means Emiya and not Gilgamesh.
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--> ''Shirou''': ...'''Shirou''': ... was the past just, like, anime? Was history just anime? Is the present anime?
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** All of Rin's reactions to Shinji's advances and [[RapeIsaSpecialKindOfEvil attempt at having his way with her]] honestly amount to less being horrified by the creep and more [[DeathSeeker waiting to cash her check out]] as she is [[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe just increasingly exasperated and exhausted]], especially when he tries to resume after Kirei's dead.
--> '''Rin''': (groaning after being pushed over) ''Whhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyy''.
--> '''Rin''': (groaning after being pushed over) ''Whhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyy''.
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* The reveal that the RunningGags with Lancer address himself as "Mario Mario" and speaking occasionally in {{Limerick}} is because Kirei ''deliberately'' burned two Command Seals prior to the series to make Lancer do it in the first place, [[ForTheEvulz for no other reason than he could]], and Lancer actually ''hates'' it immensely.
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* The reveal that the RunningGags with Lancer address addressing himself as "Mario Mario" and speaking occasionally in {{Limerick}} is because Kirei ''deliberately'' burned two Command Seals prior to the series to make Lancer do it in the first place, [[ForTheEvulz for no other reason than he could]], and Lancer actually ''hates'' it immensely.
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* The reveal that the RunningGags with Lancer address himself as "Mario Mario" and speaking occasionally in {{Limerick}} is because Kirei ''deliberately'' burned two Command Seals prior to the series to make Lancer do it in the first place, [[ForTheEvulz for no other reason than he could]], and Lancer actually ''hates'' it immensely.
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** Also how Shirou opens up how he deduced Archer's identity as his future self, by referring to Artoria's lack of understanding what "[[CallBack Hiroshima'd]]" was catches Archer ''[[DidntSeeThatComing completely]]'' [[DidntSeeThatComing off guard and genuinely befuddled]].
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** He also sidesteps mentioning the second Archer.
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** He also sidesteps mentioning the second Archer.Archer... [[TheyKilledKennyAgain all while getting a dig in on how badly Lancer got screwed over while sidestepping mentioning Gilgamesh]].
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* When looking for Rin, Lancer uses a runestone to "seek out the greatest source of sass" in the building.
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* When Saber and Archer are comparing their regrets.
--> '''Archer''': Oh, you have a wish to rewrite your foolish origins, Saber? How quaint.\\
'''Saber''': Don't you start, this is different! I led a country to its demise!\\
'''Archer''': And I've killed enough people to FILL a country.\\
'''Saber''': I killed my son!\\
'''Archer''': I killed Kennedy.\\
'''Shirou''': ''We do WHAT''?!\\
'''Archer''': You heard me, [[WhoShotJFK I killed Kennedy]]. I even found I was responsible for celebrity deaths that had devastated me in life.\\
'''Shirou''': Wait, even-\\
'''Archer''': Yes, even that one you're thinking of right now. That one you really liked.\\
'''Shirou''': No! But for why?!
* When Archer asks Shirou how he worked out his identity, Shirou goes on a long spiel about how Archer kept making World War 2 references when the Servants didn't have that knowledge... and also he straight-up called himself "Shirou Fucking Emiya" when fighting Caster. Archer admits he thought Shirou didn't hear that.
* When looking for Rin, Lancer uses a runestone to "seek out the greatest source of sass" in the building. It wavers a bit before heading in Rin's direction, possibly due to how many sass sources there are.
--> '''Archer''': Oh, you have a wish to rewrite your foolish origins, Saber? How quaint.\\
'''Saber''': Don't you start, this is different! I led a country to its demise!\\
'''Archer''': And I've killed enough people to FILL a country.\\
'''Saber''': I killed my son!\\
'''Archer''': I killed Kennedy.\\
'''Shirou''': ''We do WHAT''?!\\
'''Archer''': You heard me, [[WhoShotJFK I killed Kennedy]]. I even found I was responsible for celebrity deaths that had devastated me in life.\\
'''Shirou''': Wait, even-\\
'''Archer''': Yes, even that one you're thinking of right now. That one you really liked.\\
'''Shirou''': No! But for why?!
* When Archer asks Shirou how he worked out his identity, Shirou goes on a long spiel about how Archer kept making World War 2 references when the Servants didn't have that knowledge... and also he straight-up called himself "Shirou Fucking Emiya" when fighting Caster. Archer admits he thought Shirou didn't hear that.
* When looking for Rin, Lancer uses a runestone to "seek out the greatest source of sass" in the building. It wavers a bit before heading in Rin's direction, possibly due to how many sass sources there are.
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--> '''Shinji''': Hey, uh Priest? [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil Didn't you say I could...?]]
--> '''Kirei''': [[ILoveTheDead You can have the body]].
--> '''Shinji''': [[ComedicSociopathy HOT DOG!]]
--> '''Rin''': [[EveryoneHasStandards OH MY GOD!!!]] [[ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels YOU'RE DISGUSTING!!!]]
--> '''Kirei''': [[ILoveTheDead You can have the body]].
--> '''Shinji''': [[ComedicSociopathy HOT DOG!]]
--> '''Rin''': [[EveryoneHasStandards OH MY GOD!!!]] [[ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels YOU'RE DISGUSTING!!!]]
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--> '''Shinji''': Hey, uh Priest? [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil Didn't you say I could...?]]
-->?]]\\
'''Kirei''': [[ILoveTheDead You can have thebody]].
-->body]].\\
'''Shinji''': [[ComedicSociopathy HOTDOG!]]
-->DOG!]]\\
'''Rin''': [[EveryoneHasStandards OH MY GOD!!!]] [[ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels YOU'RE DISGUSTING!!!]]
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'''Kirei''': [[ILoveTheDead You can have the
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'''Shinji''': [[ComedicSociopathy HOT
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'''Rin''': [[EveryoneHasStandards OH MY GOD!!!]] [[ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels YOU'RE DISGUSTING!!!]]
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* When Shirou learns about Excalibur shooting a magic laser beam:
--> ''Shirou''': ... was the past just, like, anime? Was history just anime? Is the present anime?
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--> ''Shirou''': ... was the past just, like, anime? Was history just anime? Is the present anime?
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* As EMIYA is revealing the truth about his identity and documenting his past (which is just a recap of the Fate route), he admits in passing his love for Saber at the time... which immediately catches both Shirou and Saber with disgust and shock [[LikeASonToMe given their relationship]] in this route. EMIYA visibly ''[[NotGoodWithRejection seethes]]'' momentarily in silence before he dispassionately continues on with his autobiography, even more exasperated now after his genuine confession is blown off.
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* [[BlackComedy This exchange]], where [[SmugSnake Shinji]] and [[SinisterMinister Kirei]] practically try to [[SerialEscalation one up each other]] in who can [[CrossesTheLineTwice LEAP FROG]] over the [[MoralEventHorizon Moral Event Horizon]] before the other regarding Rin:
--> '''Shinji''': Hey, uh Priest? [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil Didn't you say I could...?]]
--> '''Kirei''': [[ILoveTheDead You can have the body]].
--> '''Shinji''': [[ComedicSociopathy HOT DOG!]]
--> '''Rin''': [[EveryoneHasStandards OH MY GOD!!!]] [[ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels YOU'RE DISGUSTING!!!]]
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* Lancer offers to team up with Rin and Shiro, but says that his master won't be joining the effort since he is "the actual worst person alive".
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* Lancer shows up. Shirou and Rin ''immediately start freaking out'' and rapidly bickering about what they should do. Lancer just takes it in stride and watches with amusement. "I can wait."
* Lancer offers to team up with Rin andShiro, Shirou, but says that his master won't be joining the effort since he is "the actual worst person alive".
* Lancer offers to team up with Rin and
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* Rin helpfully informs Lancer that Archer is [[CaptainObviousReveal not, in fact, Satan]]. Shiro comments that he never thought Archer was Satan but just went along with it because of Rin.
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* Rin helpfully informs Lancer that Archer is [[CaptainObviousReveal not, in fact, Satan]]. Shiro Shirou comments that he never thought Archer was Satan but just went along with it because of Rin.
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* Everyone gets irritated that Archer keeps speaking cryptically. Saber eventually yells at him to speak in plain English (even commenting that ''she's the one saying it''), but he does not comply.
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--> '''Saber''': For once in your life, can you speak like a human being?! I'm saying that! ME!
--> '''Saber''': For once in your life, can you speak like a human being?! I'm saying that! ME!
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* Everyone gets irritated that Archer keeps speaking cryptically. Saber eventually yells at him to speak in plain English, but he does not comply.
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* Everyone gets irritated that Archer keeps speaking cryptically. Saber eventually yells at him to speak in plain English, English (even commenting that ''she's the one saying it''), but he does not comply.
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* The code Archer is forced to say in order to get near Shirou.
-->'''[[ShoutOut xVx_3m1y@_]][[FunWithSubtitles xVx_KillMeee]]:''' ''(gritted teeth)'' [[BabyTalk Mista Shiwou, big tuff muscle myan,]] [[EmbarrassingPassword would it be okay if wittle ole' me mosey'd on over dere for a byit?]][[labelnote:*]]Pipe: I am *so* glad I could be here for this...[[/labelnote]]
* What surprises Archer more than anything about this timeline is the fact that [[ShipSinking Shirou doesn't have romantic interest in Saber]]. Ironically, Saber is horrified at the thought of dating Shirou, but seems to have formed a begrudging crush on Archer.
--->'''[[FunWithSubtitles Tiger Mom]]:''' Shirou is like a son to me, good sir![[labelnote:*]]'''Mordred:''' Da fuck, Mom?![[/labelnote]]
-->'''[[ShoutOut xVx_3m1y@_]][[FunWithSubtitles xVx_KillMeee]]:''' ''(gritted teeth)'' [[BabyTalk Mista Shiwou, big tuff muscle myan,]] [[EmbarrassingPassword would it be okay if wittle ole' me mosey'd on over dere for a byit?]][[labelnote:*]]Pipe: I am *so* glad I could be here for this...[[/labelnote]]
* What surprises Archer more than anything about this timeline is the fact that [[ShipSinking Shirou doesn't have romantic interest in Saber]]. Ironically, Saber is horrified at the thought of dating Shirou, but seems to have formed a begrudging crush on Archer.
--->'''[[FunWithSubtitles Tiger Mom]]:''' Shirou is like a son to me, good sir![[labelnote:*]]'''Mordred:''' Da fuck, Mom?![[/labelnote]]
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-->'''Saber:''' What's the catch?\\
'''Archer:''' Rin used a Seal and... kinda... she made it so I can't go near
-->'''[[ShoutOut xVx_3m1y@_]][[FunWithSubtitles
'''Shirou:''' O-kay...\\
'''[[FunWithSubtitles xVx_3m1y@_]][[WebVideo/SwordArtOnlineAbridged xVx_KillMeee]]:'''
(''StunnedSilence'')\\
'''Shirou:''' [[SarcasmFailure Yeah. Yeah, it's uh, it's okay.]]
*
-->'''Shirou:''' Alone?\\
'''Saber:''' Why would we want that?\\
'''Archer:''' Be-cause the
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'''Shirou:''' [[UnequalPairing Oh my god, that's inappropriate!]]\\
'''[[FunWithSubtitles Tiger Mom]]:''' Shirou is like a son to me, good sir![[labelnote:*]]'''Mordred:''' Da fuck,
'''Archer:''' Are you kidding? [[MetaGuy W-what kind of messed-up world is this]] where ''Shirou Emiya doesn't even''- (''deep breath'') Alright, alright, alright, not worth it, not worth it. This isn't worth it. Neither of you is worth this. You two sit here and platonically hold hands or whatever, I'm done with you. (''vanishes'')\\
'''Shirou:''' I am ''incapable'' of understanding that man!\\
'''Saber:''' [[ShipTease Abs for days, though.]]
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* Shirou is fiercely against Rin moving into his house, until she says she'll be sharing a bed with Saber.
-->[[GirlOnGirlIsHot "You may stay."]]
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* Shirou is fiercely against Shirou's ready to send Rin moving into his house, until she says she'll home, only to be corrected.
-->'''Rin:''' Oh, sorry, did I not tell you? I'm living here now.\\
'''Shirou:''' No you're not!\\
'''Rin:''' So is Archer.\\
'''Shirou:''' No ''he's'' not!\\
'''Rin:''' And I'm sharing a room with Saber.\\
'''Shirou:''' Go on...\\
'''Rin:''' And a bed withSaber.
-->[[GirlOnGirlIsHot "YouSaber.\\
'''Shirou:''' [[GirlOnGirlIsHot You may stay."]]
]]\\
'''Rin:''' It's cute that you pretend that you had permission to give. This is gonna work out.\\
'''Shirou:''' ...I have no control over my life, do I?\\
'''Rin:''' (''offscreen'') I'm taking your Servant on a date tomorrow! You'll be required to carry our things!\\
'''Shirou:''' Nope.
-->'''Rin:''' Oh, sorry, did I not tell you? I'm living here now.\\
'''Shirou:''' No you're not!\\
'''Rin:''' So is Archer.\\
'''Shirou:''' No ''he's'' not!\\
'''Rin:''' And I'm sharing a room with Saber.\\
'''Shirou:''' Go on...\\
'''Rin:''' And a bed with
-->[[GirlOnGirlIsHot "You
'''Shirou:''' [[GirlOnGirlIsHot You may stay.
'''Rin:''' It's cute that you pretend that you had permission to give. This is gonna work out.\\
'''Shirou:''' ...I have no control over my life, do I?\\
'''Rin:''' (''offscreen'') I'm taking your Servant on a date tomorrow! You'll be required to carry our things!\\
'''Shirou:''' Nope.
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* Shirou, Rin, Shinji and Gilgamesh fall into a [[MexicanStandoff "good old-fashioned Grail War stand-off,"]] with Rin threatening to kill Shinji if Gilgamesh moves. Gilgamesh ''gives them permission'' to kill his supposed "master." Rin instead spares him out of pure spite.
-->'''Shinji:''' Sh-shooting me won't stop Gilgamesh, of course-\\
'''Gilgamesh:''' (''casually'') Oh, but it might make you feel better. He's right there. Offer going once...\\
'''Shinji:''' GILGAMESH?!\\
'''Gilgamesh:''' (''mockingly'') ''Gilgamesh, please don't let them shoot me to death!'' That is what your obnoxious squawking sounds like, Shinji.\\
'''Rin:''' Whatever, leave. It's obvious you don't need Shinji. [[CruelMercy You can enjoy keeping him around as your court jester, or boyfriend, or... whatever this is.]]\\
'''Shinji:''' How ''dare'' you!\\
'''Gilgamesh:''' I ''want'' to empathize that "how dare you," but agreeing with Shinji leaves the taste of vomit in my mouth.
* At the end of another brutal episode...
-->'''Shirou:''' (''voice cracking'') Well ''now'' what do we do?!\\
'''Rin:''' Heckin'... (''sigh'') I dunno, man.
-->'''Shinji:''' Sh-shooting me won't stop Gilgamesh, of course-\\
'''Gilgamesh:''' (''casually'') Oh, but it might make you feel better. He's right there. Offer going once...\\
'''Shinji:''' GILGAMESH?!\\
'''Gilgamesh:''' (''mockingly'') ''Gilgamesh, please don't let them shoot me to death!'' That is what your obnoxious squawking sounds like, Shinji.\\
'''Rin:''' Whatever, leave. It's obvious you don't need Shinji. [[CruelMercy You can enjoy keeping him around as your court jester, or boyfriend, or... whatever this is.]]\\
'''Shinji:''' How ''dare'' you!\\
'''Gilgamesh:''' I ''want'' to empathize that "how dare you," but agreeing with Shinji leaves the taste of vomit in my mouth.
* At the end of another brutal episode...
-->'''Shirou:''' (''voice cracking'') Well ''now'' what do we do?!\\
'''Rin:''' Heckin'... (''sigh'') I dunno, man.
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* Archer tries to clue Lancer in to using his Noble Phantasm. When it doesn't work, he switches to insults:
--> '''Archer:''' Hey, Hound! How does it feel being someone's attack poodle?\\
'''Lancer:''' ''(raises his spear at Archer)'' [[TranquilFury What]] did you call me, Archer?\\
'''Archer:''' Also, heroes are stupid, pride is worthless, and potatoes are a compromise, not a food.
--> '''Archer:''' Hey, Hound! How does it feel being someone's attack poodle?\\
'''Lancer:''' ''(raises his spear at Archer)'' [[TranquilFury What]] did you call me, Archer?\\
'''Archer:''' Also, heroes are stupid, pride is worthless, and potatoes are a compromise, not a food.
