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** Shakuntala proceeds to inform him, the legendary Panther of Majarashtra and the Wind of the Great Country, should perhaps better be called the Pant of Majarashtra and the Gust (or even the Puff) of the Great Country.
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** Shakuntala proceeds to inform him, the legendary Panther of Majarashtra Maharashtra and the Wind of the Great Country, should perhaps better be called the Pant of Majarashtra Maharashtra and the Gust (or even the Puff) of the Great Country.
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** Shakuntala proceeds to inform him, the legendary Panther of Majarshthra and the Wind of the Great Country, should perhaps better be called the Pant of Majarshthra and the Gust (or even the Puff) of the Great Country.
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** Shakuntala proceeds to inform him, the legendary Panther of Majarshthra Majarashtra and the Wind of the Great Country, should perhaps better be called the Pant of Majarshthra Majarashtra and the Gust (or even the Puff) of the Great Country.
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'''Valentinian:''' *mutters angrily*
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'''Valentinian:''' *mutters angrily*angrily*
* Shakuntala marries Ragunhath Rao, and on their wedding night, the night they have both secretly longed for for years...
-->'''Shakuntala:''' I thought it would--I don't know. Take longer.
-->'''Rao:''' I can't believe it. I haven't done that since I was fourteen. Well...well. Well. It ''should'' have, actually. Much longer.
** Shakuntala proceeds to inform him, the legendary Panther of Majarshthra and the Wind of the Great Country, should perhaps better be called the Pant of Majarshthra and the Gust (or even the Puff) of the Great Country.
* Shakuntala marries Ragunhath Rao, and on their wedding night, the night they have both secretly longed for for years...
-->'''Shakuntala:''' I thought it would--I don't know. Take longer.
-->'''Rao:''' I can't believe it. I haven't done that since I was fourteen. Well...well. Well. It ''should'' have, actually. Much longer.
** Shakuntala proceeds to inform him, the legendary Panther of Majarshthra and the Wind of the Great Country, should perhaps better be called the Pant of Majarshthra and the Gust (or even the Puff) of the Great Country.
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--->'''Antonina:''' (deadpan) My tits are ''not'' that big.
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--->'''Anastasius:''' You know, if you ever get tired of being a soldier, I'm sure you could make a good living as a miracle worker. Turning wine into vinegar. [...] Wine into vinegar. Yes, yes. And then—! The possibilities are endless! Turn fresh milk sour. Make puppies grim. Kittens, indolent. Oh, yes! Valentinian of Thrace, they'll be calling you. The miracle worker! Everybody'll avoid you like the plague, of course. Probably be entire villages chasing you with stones, even. But you'll be famous! I'll be able to say: 'I knew him when he was just a simple nasty ill-tempered disgruntled soldier.' Oh, yes! I'll be able—\\
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---'''Valentinian:''' *mutters angrily*
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--->'''Anastasius:''' You know, if you ever get tired of being a soldier, I'm sure you could make a good living as a miracle worker. Turning wine into vinegar. [...] Wine into vinegar. Yes, yes. And then—! The possibilities are endless! Turn fresh milk sour. Make puppies grim. Kittens, indolent. Oh, yes! Valentinian of Thrace, they'll be calling you. The miracle worker! Everybody'll avoid you like the plague, of course. Probably be entire villages chasing you with stones, even. But you'll be famous! I'll be able to say: 'I knew him when he was just a simple nasty ill-tempered disgruntled soldier.' Oh, yes! I'll be able—
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--->'''Anastasius:''' You know, if you ever get tired of being a soldier, I'm sure you could make a good living as a miracle worker. Turning wine into vinegar. [...] Wine into vinegar. Yes, yes. And then—! The possibilities are endless! Turn fresh milk sour. Make puppies grim. Kittens, indolent. Oh, yes! Valentinian of Thrace, they'll be calling you. The miracle worker! Everybody'll avoid you like the plague, of course. Probably be entire villages chasing you with stones, even. But you'll be famous! I'll be able to say: 'I knew him when he was just a simple nasty ill-tempered disgruntled soldier.' Oh, yes! I'll be able—able—\\
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--->'''Antonina:''' (deadpan) My tits are ''not'' that big.
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--->'''Antonina:''' (deadpan) My tits are ''not'' that big.big.
* Anastasius' poking fun at Valentinian's angry muttering about everything.
--->'''Anastasius:''' You know, if you ever get tired of being a soldier, I'm sure you could make a good living as a miracle worker. Turning wine into vinegar. [...] Wine into vinegar. Yes, yes. And then—! The possibilities are endless! Turn fresh milk sour. Make puppies grim. Kittens, indolent. Oh, yes! Valentinian of Thrace, they'll be calling you. The miracle worker! Everybody'll avoid you like the plague, of course. Probably be entire villages chasing you with stones, even. But you'll be famous! I'll be able to say: 'I knew him when he was just a simple nasty ill-tempered disgruntled soldier.' Oh, yes! I'll be able—
---'''Valentinian:''' *mutters angrily*
* Anastasius' poking fun at Valentinian's angry muttering about everything.
--->'''Anastasius:''' You know, if you ever get tired of being a soldier, I'm sure you could make a good living as a miracle worker. Turning wine into vinegar. [...] Wine into vinegar. Yes, yes. And then—! The possibilities are endless! Turn fresh milk sour. Make puppies grim. Kittens, indolent. Oh, yes! Valentinian of Thrace, they'll be calling you. The miracle worker! Everybody'll avoid you like the plague, of course. Probably be entire villages chasing you with stones, even. But you'll be famous! I'll be able to say: 'I knew him when he was just a simple nasty ill-tempered disgruntled soldier.' Oh, yes! I'll be able—
---'''Valentinian:''' *mutters angrily*
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-->"I must inform you, lord Prince, that [[SomethingElseAlsoRises one of your provinces]] is in revolt."
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--->"Indeed so! Most insolent uprising! Prince do well to beat rebel down!" Then, with a flourish: "Here! Use my spear!"
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--->"Indeed so! Most insolent uprising! Prince do well to beat rebel down!" Then, with a flourish: "Here! Use my spear!"spear!"
* Antonina's response on having her specially-ordered bronze cuirass delivered to her.
--->'''Antonina:''' (deadpan) My tits are ''not'' that big.
* Antonina's response on having her specially-ordered bronze cuirass delivered to her.
--->'''Antonina:''' (deadpan) My tits are ''not'' that big.
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-->"I must inform you, lord Prince, that [[SomethingElseAlsoRises one of your provinces]] [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean is in revolt]]."
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-->"I must inform you, lord Prince, that [[SomethingElseAlsoRises one of your provinces]] [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean is in revolt]].revolt."
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** Ousanas didn't help readers with catching their breath, either, with his follow-up to Shakuntala's comment.
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** Ousanas didn't help readers with catching their breath, either, with his grinning follow-up to Shakuntala's comment.comment.
--->"Indeed so! Most insolent uprising! Prince do well to beat rebel down!" Then, with a flourish: "Here! Use my spear!"
--->"Indeed so! Most insolent uprising! Prince do well to beat rebel down!" Then, with a flourish: "Here! Use my spear!"
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* After the notorious FakeOutMakeOut in the first book; Prince Eon jumped off Princess Shakuntala, helped her to her feet, and apologied profusely about the nessessity of the indignity and so forth. Shakuntala for her part accepted the apologies and reassured Eon that she held nothing against him in terms of his gentlemanliness and so forth... but then felt obliged to add:
-->"I must inform you, lord Prince, that [[SomethingElseAlsoRises one of your provinces]] [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean is in revolt]]."
-->"I must inform you, lord Prince, that [[SomethingElseAlsoRises one of your provinces]] [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean is in revolt]]."
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* After the notorious FakeOutMakeOut in the first book; Prince Eon jumped off Princess Shakuntala, helped her to her feet, and apologied apologized profusely about the nessessity necessity of the indignity and so forth. Shakuntala for her part accepted the apologies and reassured Eon that she held nothing against him in terms of his gentlemanliness and so forth... but then felt obliged to add:
-->"I must inform you, lord Prince, that [[SomethingElseAlsoRises one of your provinces]] [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean is in revolt]].""
** Ousanas didn't help readers with catching their breath, either, with his follow-up to Shakuntala's comment.
-->"I must inform you, lord Prince, that [[SomethingElseAlsoRises one of your provinces]] [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean is in revolt]].
** Ousanas didn't help readers with catching their breath, either, with his follow-up to Shakuntala's comment.
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When Phoetius said,"It's not fair. I didn't ask to be made emperor of Rome."
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* When Phoetius said,"It's not fair. I didn't ask to be made emperor of Rome.""
* After the notorious FakeOutMakeOut in the first book; Prince Eon jumped off Princess Shakuntala, helped her to her feet, and apologied profusely about the nessessity of the indignity and so forth. Shakuntala for her part accepted the apologies and reassured Eon that she held nothing against him in terms of his gentlemanliness and so forth... but then felt obliged to add:
-->"I must inform you, lord Prince, that [[SomethingElseAlsoRises one of your provinces]] [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean is in revolt]]."
* After the notorious FakeOutMakeOut in the first book; Prince Eon jumped off Princess Shakuntala, helped her to her feet, and apologied profusely about the nessessity of the indignity and so forth. Shakuntala for her part accepted the apologies and reassured Eon that she held nothing against him in terms of his gentlemanliness and so forth... but then felt obliged to add:
-->"I must inform you, lord Prince, that [[SomethingElseAlsoRises one of your provinces]] [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean is in revolt]]."
