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* ''Comments'': It is a very sweet and adorable fic, as many of the reviews on Website/FimfictionDotNet state. It's quite a hefty read, at over 75 Chapters (and still ongoing!) but very much well worth it.
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* ''Comments'': It is a very sweet and adorable fic, as many of the reviews on Website/FimfictionDotNet Platform/FimfictionDotNet state. It's quite a hefty read, at over 75 Chapters (and still ongoing!) but very much well worth it.
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* ''Pairings'': [[TriangRelations Type 11]] Rainbow Dash<>Fluttershy<>Rarity>Rainbow Dash love triangle, along with some unrequited Applejack>Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle>Applejack.
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* ''Pairings'': [[TriangRelations [[LoveTriangle Type 11]] Rainbow Dash<>Fluttershy<>Rarity>Rainbow Dash love triangle, along with some unrequited Applejack>Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle>Applejack.
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* ''Comments'': Despite the setting depicting a FantasticCasteSystem endorsed by Celestia and having an unpopular ship as the main focus, the story expertly manages to evade the pitfalls associated with those developments. The caste system isn't anywhere near GrimDark levels and makes an interesting obstacle for the main couple to overcome, with an obvious light at the end of their tunnel. Celestia remains a sympathetic, complex character who honestly believes the Order is vital to keeping her ponies safe and harmonious despite her own feelings on the matter, avoiding a huge case of RonTheDeathEater. Next, the story develops Flash Sentry into a likeable character struggling with his feelings versus his duties, and the budding romance between him and Twilight Sparkle is both well-paced, believeable, and refuses to descend into descend into TastesLikeDiabetes.
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* ''Comments'': Despite the setting depicting a FantasticCasteSystem endorsed by Celestia and having an unpopular ship as the main focus, the story expertly manages to evade the pitfalls associated with those developments. The caste system isn't anywhere near GrimDark levels and makes an interesting obstacle for the main couple to overcome, with an obvious light at the end of their tunnel. Celestia remains a sympathetic, complex character who honestly believes the Order is vital to keeping her ponies safe and harmonious despite her own feelings on the matter, avoiding a huge case of RonTheDeathEater. Next, the story develops Flash Sentry into a likeable character struggling with his feelings versus his duties, and the budding romance between him and Twilight Sparkle is both well-paced, believeable, and refuses to descend into descend into TastesLikeDiabetes.sickening sweetness.
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* [[spoiler: BreakingTheFourthWall: Taken UpToEleven by Twilight in chapter 5. She researches Pinkie Pie's ability to sense the fourth wall. She constructs a MagiTek machine that breaks the ''fifth'' wall: a window into TheMultiverse. [[SerialEscalation Things get crazier]] from there.]]
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* [[spoiler: BreakingTheFourthWall: Taken UpToEleven Exaggerated by Twilight in chapter 5. She researches Pinkie Pie's ability to sense the fourth wall. She constructs a MagiTek machine that breaks the ''fifth'' wall: a window into TheMultiverse. [[SerialEscalation Things get crazier]] from there.]]
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''Fanfic/{{Aurora}}'' by [=PonyholicsAnonymous=]
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''Fanfic/AddressUnknown'' by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Remedy Remedy]].
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* ''Comments'': It is a very sweet and adorable fic, as many of the reviews on the FIMFiction website state. It's quite a hefty read, at over 75 Chapters (and still ongoing!) but very much well worth it.
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* ''Comments'': It is a very sweet and adorable fic, as many of the reviews on the FIMFiction website Website/FimfictionDotNet state. It's quite a hefty read, at over 75 Chapters (and still ongoing!) but very much well worth it.
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* ''Pairings'': Fluttershy/Discord, Rarity/Fancy Pants, Rainbow Dash/Soarin', Pinkie Pie/Cheese Sandwich, AppleJack/Spike, and Twilight/Flash Sentry, Celestia/Sombra
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* ''Pairings'': Fluttershy/Discord, Rarity/Fancy Pants, Rainbow Dash/Soarin', Pinkie Pie/Cheese Sandwich, AppleJack/Spike, Applejack/Spike, and Twilight/Flash Sentry, Celestia/Sombra
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* Comments: An excellent story, and a great read all around. The characterization of Twilight and Fluttershy is spot-on. The author takes great pains not to rush the romance - the progression of their relationship is both realistic and has excellent pacing. The characters' speaking style is a bit off, as the author is British, but the spelling, grammar, and overall style is sound. The plot is a bit too 'convenient' at times, (such as Fluttershy being able to talk to and understand animals, and Twilight's magic being superpowered when she's in mortal danger) but it's a very good fic nonetheless, and definitely worth a read for any TwiShy fan, especially if you like the adventure genre.
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* Comments: An excellent story, and a great read all around. The characterization of Twilight and Fluttershy is spot-on. The author takes great pains not to rush the romance - the progression of their relationship is both realistic and has excellent pacing. The characters' speaking style is a bit off, as the author is British, but the spelling, grammar, and overall style is sound. The plot is a bit too 'convenient' at times, (such as Fluttershy being able to talk to and understand animals, and Twilight's magic being superpowered when she's in mortal danger) but it's a very good fic nonetheless, and definitely worth a read for any TwiShy [=TwiShy=] fan, especially if you like the adventure genre.
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* ''Synopsis'': It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping. Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Someone. What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.
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* ''Synopsis'': It's "It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping. Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Someone. What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely."
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* '''Synopsis:''' A one-shot SoulmateAUFic where people, after making physical contact with their soulmate for the first time, become stuck in a GroundHogDayLoop that will only end if either A) they find their soulmate or B) the day repeats itself for 25 days. And, wouldn't you know it, Fluttershy's Soulmate Day is also the same day that Discord escapes from his stone prison and tries to take over all of Equestria. Surely that's just a coincidence, though. ...Right?
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* '''Synopsis:''' A one-shot SoulmateAUFic where people, after making physical contact with their soulmate for the first time, become stuck in a GroundHogDayLoop that will only end if either A) they find their soulmate or B) the day repeats itself for 25 days.times. And, wouldn't you know it, Fluttershy's Soulmate Day is also the same day that Discord escapes from his stone prison and tries to take over all of Equestria. Surely that's just a coincidence, though. ...Right?
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''Fanfic/{{Guppy Love}}'' by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/111840/PaulAsaran PaulAsaran]]
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* '''Synopsis:''' A one-shot SoulmateAUFic where people, after making physical contact with their soulmate for the first time, become stuck in a GroundHogDayLoop that will only end if either A) the soulmates find each other or B) the day repeats itself for 25 days. And, wouldn't you know it, Fluttershy's Soulmate Day is also the same day that Discord escaped from his stone prison and tried to take over all of Equestria. Surely that's just a coincidence, though. ...Right?
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* '''Synopsis:''' A one-shot SoulmateAUFic where people, after making physical contact with their soulmate for the first time, become stuck in a GroundHogDayLoop that will only end if either A) the soulmates they find each other their soulmate or B) the day repeats itself for 25 days. And, wouldn't you know it, Fluttershy's Soulmate Day is also the same day that Discord escaped escapes from his stone prison and tried tries to take over all of Equestria. Surely that's just a coincidence, though. ...Right?
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* Pairings: Twilight Sparkle/Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy/Bic Mac
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* Comments: An AU in which [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E3LessonZero 'the Smarty Pants incident']] was the product of a deeper problem. The interesting premise is fleshed out with consistently good dialogue and writing, and [[ShownTheirWork demonstrates a thorough understanding of the real illness which Twilight's fantastical/magical-pony affliction is based upon]]. One reviewer has noted that the story (intentionally or not) sets the reader up to expect and fear another relapse - just as Twilight does, effectively putting them in her (horse?)shoes. Largely WAFF, but has some drama and hurt feelings.
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* Comments: An AU in which [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E3LessonZero 'the Smarty Pants incident']] was the product of a deeper problem. The interesting premise is fleshed out with consistently good dialogue and writing, and [[ShownTheirWork demonstrates a thorough understanding of the real illness which Twilight's fantastical/magical-pony affliction is based upon]]. One reviewer has noted that the story (intentionally or not) sets the reader up to expect and fear another relapse - just as Twilight does, effectively putting them in her (horse?)shoes. Largely WAFF, but has some drama and hurt feelings.feelings.
''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21235328 time is taller than space is wide]]'' by Dott
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* '''Status:''' Complete
* '''Pairing(s):''' Fluttershy/Discord, minor Rarity/Applejack
* '''Synopsis:''' A one-shot SoulmateAUFic where people, after making physical contact with their soulmate for the first time, become stuck in a GroundHogDayLoop that will only end if either A) the soulmates find each other or B) the day repeats itself for 25 days. And, wouldn't you know it, Fluttershy's Soulmate Day is also the same day that Discord escaped from his stone prison and tried to take over all of Equestria. Surely that's just a coincidence, though. ...Right?
''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21235328 time is taller than space is wide]]'' by Dott
* '''Recommended by:''' [=BookCat=]
* '''Status:''' Complete
* '''Pairing(s):''' Fluttershy/Discord, minor Rarity/Applejack
* '''Synopsis:''' A one-shot SoulmateAUFic where people, after making physical contact with their soulmate for the first time, become stuck in a GroundHogDayLoop that will only end if either A) the soulmates find each other or B) the day repeats itself for 25 days. And, wouldn't you know it, Fluttershy's Soulmate Day is also the same day that Discord escaped from his stone prison and tried to take over all of Equestria. Surely that's just a coincidence, though. ...Right?
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** [[spoiler: [[BigNameFan Sethisto]]]]/Trixie in Chapter 10
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** [[spoiler: [[BigNameFan [[FandomVIP Sethisto]]]]/Trixie in Chapter 10
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''Twilight's Home For Reformed Unicorns'' by Der_Fur_Shur
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''Fanfic/Guppy Love'' by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/111840/PaulAsaran PaulAsaran]]
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''Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony'' by Chengar Qordath
* Begins with ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25698/The-Incredibly-Dense-Mind-of-Rainbow-Dash The Incredibly Dense Mind of Rainbow Dash]]''
* Recommended by {{Tropers/Qaianna}}
* Begins with ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25698/The-Incredibly-Dense-Mind-of-Rainbow-Dash The Incredibly Dense Mind of Rainbow Dash]]''
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* ''Pairings'': Applejack/Rarity
* ''Synopsis'': It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping. Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Someone. What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.
* ''Note'': All the characters are humanised.
[=[[reviews:Guppy Love]]=]
''Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony'' by Chengar Qordath
* Begins with ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25698/The-Incredibly-Dense-Mind-of-Rainbow-Dash The Incredibly Dense Mind of Rainbow Dash]]''
* Recommended by {{Tropers/Qaianna}}
* ''Status'': Complete
* ''Synopsis'': It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping. Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Someone. What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.
* ''Note'': All the characters are humanised.
[=[[reviews:Guppy Love]]=]
''Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony'' by Chengar Qordath
* Begins with ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25698/The-Incredibly-Dense-Mind-of-Rainbow-Dash The Incredibly Dense Mind of Rainbow Dash]]''
* Recommended by {{Tropers/Qaianna}}
* ''Status'': Complete
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* ''Pairings'': Applejack/Rarity
* ''Synopsis'': It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping. Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Someone. What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.
* ''Note'': All the characters are humanised.
[=[[reviews:Guppy Love]]=]
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/23176/A-Helping-Hoof A Helping Hoof]]'' by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Drifter Drifter]]
* Recommended by {{@/Nightelf37}}
* ''Status'': Complete
* ''Synopsis'': It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping. Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Someone. What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.
* ''Note'': All the characters are humanised.
[=[[reviews:Guppy Love]]=]
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/23176/A-Helping-Hoof A Helping Hoof]]'' by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Drifter Drifter]]
* Recommended by {{@/Nightelf37}}
* ''Status'': Complete
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* ''Synopsis'': It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping. Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Someone. What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.
* ''Note'': All the characters are humanised.
[=[[reviews:Guppy Love]]=]
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/23176/A-Helping-Hoof A Helping Hoof]]'' by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Drifter Drifter]]
* Recommended by {{@/Nightelf37}}
* ''Status'': Complete
* ''Synopsis'': It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping. Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Someone. What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.
* ''Note'': All the characters are humanised.
[=[[reviews:Guppy Love]]=]
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/23176/A-Helping-Hoof A Helping Hoof]]'' by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Drifter Drifter]]
* Recommended by {{@/Nightelf37}}
* ''Status'': Complete
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/147875/even-in-other-worlds Cancelled sequel]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/451442/the-archmages-last-bow new sequel]]
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