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** Crosby's gear, including an FN P90 submachine gun with laser sighting, a [[HandCannon Desert Eagle sidearm]] and [[spoiler:a M32 MGL Grenade Launcher, aka the Staff of Destruction.]]
** [[spoiler: Lt. Gordon, aka the Heavy Trooper's]] [[{{BFG}} AA-12 automatic shotgun]] counts.
** Crosby's gear, including an FN P90 submachine gun with laser sighting, a [[HandCannon Desert Eagle sidearm]] and [[spoiler:a M32 MGL Grenade Launcher, aka the Staff of Destruction.]]
** [[spoiler: Lt. Gordon, aka the Heavy Trooper's]] [[{{BFG}} AA-12 automatic shotgun]] counts.
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* ChekhovsGun: The elf Tiffania uses a [[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsVSkyrim shout of Unstoppable Force]] against an assailant. Later, she uses the shout of [[spoiler: [[ItOnlyWorksOnce Dragon Rend]] against the BigBad's {{Dragon}} Nahkriin.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: The elf Tiffania uses a [[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsVSkyrim shout of Unstoppable Force]] against an assailant. Later, she uses the shout of [[spoiler: [[ItOnlyWorksOnce Dragon Rend]] against the BigBad's {{Dragon}} Nahkriin.]]
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** [[spoiler: Agent Daniels getting turned into a literal {{Dragon}} for the BigBad.]]
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** [[spoiler: Agent Daniels getting turned into a literal {{Dragon}} [[TheDragon Dragon]] for the BigBad.]]
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: The Weaver of Fate, natch. [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the [[spoiler: T-15 Armata's crew]] when she appears to them.
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[[caption-width-right:350: [[EliteMook Zulu Squad:]] final solution to any and all problems of the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine Damned 33rd]]...or [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero Tristain]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: [[EliteMook Zulu Squad:]] final solution to any and all problems of the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine Damned 33rd]]...or [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero [[Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero Tristain]].]]
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So what would happen if you took an enemy {{Mook}} from a military [[ThirdPersonShooter TPS]], and put him in an anime world full of {{Fanservice}}, {{cute witch}}es, {{Tsundere}} and {{Squee}}? You get a ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine''/''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover!
[[EliteMook Sgt. Crosby, leader of Zulu Squad]], was trying to stop the two [[YouBastard deranged Delta Force soldiers]] from killing the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine last remnants of the Damned 33rd at The Bridge in Dubai]], when suddenly he is [[CallToAdventure summoned]] to [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero a bizarre world of magic and familiars]]. With the help of a [[AngelicBeauty supernatural]] [[HerosMuse mentor]] he embarks on a RedemptionQuest to [[HerosJourney become the hero]]. And deal with bratty teenagers who possess magical abilities.
[[EliteMook Sgt. Crosby, leader of Zulu Squad]], was trying to stop the two [[YouBastard deranged Delta Force soldiers]] from killing the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine last remnants of the Damned 33rd at The Bridge in Dubai]], when suddenly he is [[CallToAdventure summoned]] to [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero a bizarre world of magic and familiars]]. With the help of a [[AngelicBeauty supernatural]] [[HerosMuse mentor]] he embarks on a RedemptionQuest to [[HerosJourney become the hero]]. And deal with bratty teenagers who possess magical abilities.
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So what would happen if you took an enemy {{Mook}} from a military [[ThirdPersonShooter TPS]], and put him in an anime world full of {{Fanservice}}, {{cute witch}}es, {{Tsundere}} and {{Squee}}? You get a ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine''/''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine''/''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover!
[[EliteMook Sgt. Crosby, leader of Zulu Squad]], was trying to stop the two [[YouBastard deranged Delta Force soldiers]] from killing the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine last remnants of the Damned 33rd at The Bridge in Dubai]], when suddenly he is [[CallToAdventure summoned]] to[[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero [[Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero a bizarre world of magic and familiars]]. With the help of a [[AngelicBeauty supernatural]] [[HerosMuse mentor]] he embarks on a RedemptionQuest to [[HerosJourney become the hero]]. And deal with bratty teenagers who possess magical abilities.
[[EliteMook Sgt. Crosby, leader of Zulu Squad]], was trying to stop the two [[YouBastard deranged Delta Force soldiers]] from killing the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine last remnants of the Damned 33rd at The Bridge in Dubai]], when suddenly he is [[CallToAdventure summoned]] to
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** Saito, since he is a teenager in a world [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero of beautiful women]].
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** Saito, since he is a teenager in a world [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero [[Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero of beautiful women]].
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* CerebusSyndrome: The fic starts out as a standard ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover, with the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine Damned 33rd]] [[FishOutOfWater soldier]] being [[LampshadeHanging bewildered]] by the inhabitants of an anime fantasy world with their brightly colored hair, [[TaremeEyes doe eyes]], and [[{{Tsundere}} mood swings]]; then during the Battle for Tristainia and it shifts solidly into ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' territory.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The fic starts out as a standard ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' ''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover, with the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine Damned 33rd]] [[FishOutOfWater soldier]] being [[LampshadeHanging bewildered]] by the inhabitants of an anime fantasy world with their brightly colored hair, [[TaremeEyes doe eyes]], and [[{{Tsundere}} mood swings]]; then during the Battle for Tristainia and it shifts solidly into ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' territory.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: Appropriate, given that it's a ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' crossover. Specifically it's a deconstruction of ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover fics, in that [[spoiler:Crosby doesn't become Louise's familiar, but her bodyguard.]]
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* {{Deconstruction}}: Appropriate, given that it's a ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' crossover. Specifically it's a deconstruction of ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' ''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover fics, in that [[spoiler:Crosby doesn't become Louise's familiar, but her bodyguard.]]
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* TheGlomp: This being a ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover fic, it's going to happen. A lot.
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* TheGlomp: This being a ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' ''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover fic, it's going to happen. A lot.
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** To start with, there are ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''.
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** To start with, there are ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''.''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero''.
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* TankGoodness: As a CallBack to the [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero Tristain manga]], Crosby and his companions pick up more Earth Tech from the Romalians. In this case it's [[spoiler: two T-55 tanks from the Afghanistan theater.]]
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* TankGoodness: As a CallBack to the [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero [[Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero Tristain manga]], Crosby and his companions pick up more Earth Tech from the Romalians. In this case it's [[spoiler: two T-55 tanks from the Afghanistan theater.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Since this is a ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover fic, Louise solidly represents the Type A.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Since this is a ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' ''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover fic, Louise solidly represents the Type A.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Princess Henrietta delivers one to [[spoiler: Konrad]], of all people, showing that she [[HiddenDepths understands]] what he is going through, and [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre calls him out on]] [[NoPlaceForMeThere his self-loathing]].
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** Played straight in that while his armor does protect him from serious injury it still doesn't protect him from [[spoiler: the effects of Louise's botched [[BalefulPolymorph transmutation spell]].]]
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** Played straight in that while his armor does protect him from serious injury it still doesn't protect him from [[spoiler: the effects of Louise's botched [[BalefulPolymorph [[ForcedTransformation transmutation spell]].]]
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* BalefulPolymorph:
** Happens to [[spoiler:The Radioman]] when he encounters the Weaver of Fate and [[spoiler: almost gets turned into a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic pony]].]]
** [[spoiler: Crosby getting turned into a [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]].]]
** [[spoiler: Agent Daniels getting turned into a literal {{Dragon}} for the BigBad.]]
** Happens to [[spoiler:The Radioman]] when he encounters the Weaver of Fate and [[spoiler: almost gets turned into a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic pony]].]]
** [[spoiler: Crosby getting turned into a [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]].]]
** [[spoiler: Agent Daniels getting turned into a literal {{Dragon}} for the BigBad.]]
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* ForcedTransformation:
** Happens to [[spoiler:The Radioman]] when he encounters the Weaver of Fate and [[spoiler: almost gets turned into a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic pony]].]]
** [[spoiler: Crosby getting turned into a [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]].]]
** [[spoiler: Agent Daniels getting turned into a literal {{Dragon}} for the BigBad.]]
** Happens to [[spoiler:The Radioman]] when he encounters the Weaver of Fate and [[spoiler: almost gets turned into a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic pony]].]]
** [[spoiler: Crosby getting turned into a [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]].]]
** [[spoiler: Agent Daniels getting turned into a literal {{Dragon}} for the BigBad.]]
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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** Specifically, the war starts out like most crossovers involving superior tech with MoreDakka, DeathFromAbove, and GatlingGood, but then shows [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome what happens]] when their barely tested guns fail and they [[ZergRush get overrun]].
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** Specifically, the war starts out like most crossovers involving superior tech with MoreDakka, DeathFromAbove, and GatlingGood, but then shows [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome what happens]] happens when their barely tested guns fail and they [[ZergRush get overrun]].
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Initially averted in the early arcs, as the OC, in spite of being an {{elite mook|s}} from ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'', still has to deal with the usual shenanigans of the anime's HaremGenre.
** When the soldiers of the 33rd [[GivingRadioToTheRomans reverse engineer their modern weapons]] to help the outnumbered Tristainian military against the war with the Reconquista, the new untested guns, while initially effective at the start of the battle, start [[CriticalFailure to misfire]] and cause the Tristainians [[ZergRush to get overwhelmed]].
** Initially averted in the early arcs, as the OC, in spite of being an {{elite mook|s}} from ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'', still has to deal with the usual shenanigans of the anime's HaremGenre.
** When the soldiers of the 33rd [[GivingRadioToTheRomans reverse engineer their modern weapons]] to help the outnumbered Tristainian military against the war with the Reconquista, the new untested guns, while initially effective at the start of the battle, start [[CriticalFailure to misfire]] and cause the Tristainians [[ZergRush to get overwhelmed]].
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** [[spoiler: Crosby getting turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} teen heartthrob]].]]
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** [[spoiler: Crosby getting turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]].]]
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** Also happens to [[spoiler: Crosby when he gets turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} teen heartthrob]].]]
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** Also happens to [[spoiler: Crosby when he gets turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]].]]
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* BreatherEpisode: The 'Extremely Silly' arc in which Crosby [[spoiler: gets turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} teen heartthrob]]]], serving as some comical relief before the story's darker tones set in.
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* BreatherEpisode: The 'Extremely Silly' arc in which Crosby [[spoiler: gets turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]]]], serving as some comical relief before the story's darker tones set in.
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** Taken UpToEleven during the 'Extremely Silly' arc of the story in which [[spoiler: Crosby gets turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} teen heartthrob]] and gets glomped pretty much by [[UnwantedHarem every female in the fic]], with special mention to Kirche glomping him and putting him in MarshmallowHell.]]. Crosby even lampshades it at the end of the arc.
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** Taken UpToEleven during In the 'Extremely Silly' arc of the story in which arc, [[spoiler: Crosby gets turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]] and gets glomped pretty much by [[UnwantedHarem every female in the fic]], with special mention to Kirche glomping him and putting him in MarshmallowHell.]]. Crosby even lampshades it at the end of the arc.
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** Happens to Crosby when [[spoiler: he gets [[FountainOfYouth turned into]] a [[{{Bishonen}} teenaged version of himself]].]]
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** Happens to Crosby when [[spoiler: he gets [[FountainOfYouth turned into]] a [[{{Bishonen}} [[PrettyBoy teenaged version of himself]].]]
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* LoverTugOfWar: Happens to [[spoiler: Crosby]] of all people when Louise and Kirche fight over him after [[spoiler: he gets turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} teen heartthrob]]]].
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* LoverTugOfWar: Happens to [[spoiler: Crosby]] of all people when Louise and Kirche fight over him after [[spoiler: he gets turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]]]].
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* RageAgainstTheAuthor: In the "Extremely Silly Arc", Crosby, who has been [[spoiler: turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} teen heartthrob]]]] outright says he owes the AuthorAvatar an ass-kicking for [[UnwantedHarem what]] [[LoverTugOfWar he's]] [[TheGlomp been]] [[MarshmallowHell through]].
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* RageAgainstTheAuthor: In the "Extremely Silly Arc", Crosby, who has been [[spoiler: turned into a [[{{Bishonen}} [[PrettyBoy teen heartthrob]]]] outright says he owes the AuthorAvatar an ass-kicking for [[UnwantedHarem what]] [[LoverTugOfWar he's]] [[TheGlomp been]] [[MarshmallowHell through]].
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* CerebusSyndrome: The fic starts out as a standard ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover, with the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine Damned 33rd]] [[FishOutOfWater soldier]] being [[LampshadeHanging bewildered]] by the inhabitants of an anime fantasy world with their [[AmazingTechnicolorHair brightly colored hair]], [[TaremeEyes doe eyes]], and [[{{Tsundere}} mood swings]]; then during the Battle for Tristainia and it shifts solidly into ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' territory.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The fic starts out as a standard ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' crossover, with the [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine Damned 33rd]] [[FishOutOfWater soldier]] being [[LampshadeHanging bewildered]] by the inhabitants of an anime fantasy world with their [[AmazingTechnicolorHair brightly colored hair]], hair, [[TaremeEyes doe eyes]], and [[{{Tsundere}} mood swings]]; then during the Battle for Tristainia and it shifts solidly into ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' territory.
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* ArtifactOfDoom: The school's Staff of Destruction, ultimately subverted when it turns out to be [[spoiler: An [=M-32=] revolver grenade launcher, as opposed to the [=M72=] [=LAW=] rocket launcher from the original work.]]
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* ArtifactOfDoom: The school's Staff of Destruction, ultimately subverted when it turns out to be [[spoiler: An an [=M-32=] revolver grenade launcher, as opposed to the [=M72=] [=LAW=] rocket launcher from the original work.]]
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** It also deconstructs most anime crossovers as the OC who is a soldier from a [[ThirdPersonShooter TPS]] is mystified by the various anime/manga cliches.
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** It also deconstructs most anime crossovers as the OC who is a soldier from a [[ThirdPersonShooter TPS]] is mystified by the various anime/manga cliches.clichés.
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* DeconstructionCrossover: The fic is another deconstruction of "crossover character X" becoming Louise's familiar, in that the [[EliteMooks Zulu Squad sergeant]] from ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' ended up in Halkeginia because Louise performed the summon familiar rite twice. He ends up being more of a bodyguard than a familiar/slave/romantic interest. Being a ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' crossover, it also deconstructs crossover fics by subverting the WarIsGlorious aspect by showing the real horrors of [[WarIsHell fighting a medieval war with modern weapons]].
* DeconstructorFleet: The fic is a Deconstructor Fleet for anime crossovers, and crossover fics in general. Appropriate, since it's a crossover with ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine''.
** Specifically it shows how characters from a non-anime world would react to all the cliches and tropes associated with anime or manga.
** Later in the story it deconstructs [[WarIsGlorious battles where modern or futuristic soldiers]] fight a technologically inferior army and win the day with little to no casualties.
* DeconstructorFleet: The fic is a Deconstructor Fleet for anime crossovers, and crossover fics in general. Appropriate, since it's a crossover with ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine''.
** Specifically it shows how characters from a non-anime world would react to all the cliches and tropes associated with anime or manga.
** Later in the story it deconstructs [[WarIsGlorious battles where modern or futuristic soldiers]] fight a technologically inferior army and win the day with little to no casualties.
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** Crosby almost quotes [[Film/ANewHope Obi-Wan Kenobi's Cantina spiel]] vebatim when they are undercover in Londinium to [[spoiler: spirit Prince Wales away from the Reconquista.]]
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** Crosby almost quotes [[Film/ANewHope Obi-Wan Kenobi's Cantina spiel]] vebatim verbatim when they are undercover in Londinium to [[spoiler: spirit Prince Wales away from the Reconquista.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Initially averted in the early arcs, as the OC, in spite of being an {{elite mook|s}} from ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'', still has to deal with the usual shenanigans of the anime's HaremGenre.
** When the soldiers of the 33rd [[GivingRadioToTheRomans reverse engineer their modern weapons]] to help the outnumbered Tristainian military against the war with the Reconquista, the new untested guns, while initially effective at the start of the battle, start [[CriticalFailure to misfire]] and cause the Tristainians [[ZergRush to get overwhelmed]].
** Initially averted in the early arcs, as the OC, in spite of being an {{elite mook|s}} from ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'', still has to deal with the usual shenanigans of the anime's HaremGenre.
** When the soldiers of the 33rd [[GivingRadioToTheRomans reverse engineer their modern weapons]] to help the outnumbered Tristainian military against the war with the Reconquista, the new untested guns, while initially effective at the start of the battle, start [[CriticalFailure to misfire]] and cause the Tristainians [[ZergRush to get overwhelmed]].
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A prequel called 'Of Princesses, Privates, and Dragons' (read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13195421/1/Of-Privates-Princesses-and-Dragons here.]]) was released shortly after ZSNT was completed in December of 2019. Tropes concerning OPPD will be outlined here in a separate section.
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* AlmostKiss: Later in the fic happens to Crosby and the Weaver of Fate, aka [[spoiler: [[Literature/TheSilmarillion Tinúviel]]]] after she heals him from the wounds he received. See RealityEnsues.
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* AlmostKiss: Later in the fic happens to Crosby and the Weaver of Fate, aka [[spoiler: [[Literature/TheSilmarillion Tinúviel]]]] after she heals him from the wounds he received. See RealityEnsues.
* CurbStompBattle: Happens to Crosby when he tries to take on an Earth Golem without his [[EliteMook modern armor or weapons]], the results aren't pretty.
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** [[RealityEnsues subverted]] in that late in the first battle the barely-tested weapons misfire and jam under pressure.
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** [[RealityEnsues subverted]] Subverted in that late in the first battle the barely-tested weapons misfire and jam under pressure.
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* RealityEnsues: Happens to Crosby when he tries to take on an Earth Golem without his [[EliteMook modern armor or weapons]], the [[CurbStompBattle results aren't pretty]].
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** Happens to [[spoiler:The Radioman]] when he encounters the Weaver of Fate and [[spoiler: almost gets turned into a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic pony]].]]
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** Happens to [[spoiler:The Radioman]] when he encounters the Weaver of Fate and [[spoiler: almost gets turned into a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic pony]].]]
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** Specifically, the war starts out like most crossovers involving superior tech with MoreDakka, DeathFromAbove, and GatlingGood, but then shows [[RealityEnsues what happens]] when their barely tested guns fail and they [[ZergRush get overrun]]. See WarIsHell.
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** Specifically, the war starts out like most crossovers involving superior tech with MoreDakka, DeathFromAbove, and GatlingGood, but then shows [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome what happens]] when their barely tested guns fail and they [[ZergRush get overrun]]. See WarIsHell.overrun]].
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** Happens to [[spoiler: the Radioman]] when the Weaver turns him into a [[spoiler: [[MyLittlePony pony]].]]
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** Happens to [[spoiler: the Radioman]] when the Weaver turns him into a [[spoiler: [[MyLittlePony [[Franchise/MyLittlePony pony]].]]
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** Another member of the 33rd, [[spoiler: Pvt. Pete Gobbi, ends up in another [[Disney/SwordInTheStone magical world]].]]
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** Another member of the 33rd, [[spoiler: Pvt. Pete Gobbi, ends up in another [[Disney/SwordInTheStone [[WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone magical world]].]]
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** She finds [[spoiler: Pvt. Gobbi's]] ogling and awkward compliments endearing, this might have more to with him being a WideEyedIdealist and {{Adorkable}}.
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** She finds [[spoiler: Pvt. Gobbi's]] ogling and awkward compliments endearing, this might have more to with him being a WideEyedIdealist and {{Adorkable}}.WideEyedIdealist
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** And [[spoiler: John Lugo]] has one for Siesta, [[spoiler: after rescuing her from Count Mott]].
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** And [[spoiler: John Lugo]] Lt. Gordon]] has one for Siesta, [[spoiler: after rescuing her from Count Mott]].Tiffania Westwood.
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** And [[spoiler: John Lugo]] has one for Siesta, [[spoiler: after rescuing her from Count Mott]].
** And [[spoiler: Private Alex Walker]] has this for Agnès de Milan.
** And [[spoiler: Private Alex Walker]] has this for Agnès de Milan.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Princess Henrietta delivers one to [[spoiler: Konrad]], of all people, showing that she [[HiddenDepths understands]] what he is going through, and [[YouAreBetterThanYouThink calls him out on]] [[NoPlaceForMeThere his self-loathing]].
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Princess Henrietta delivers one to [[spoiler: Konrad]], of all people, showing that she [[HiddenDepths understands]] what he is going through, and [[YouAreBetterThanYouThink [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre calls him out on]] [[NoPlaceForMeThere his self-loathing]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: The entire story arc is one long journey of the protagonist going from being an EliteMook adversary in a [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine video game]] to the hero of the story. See also HerosJourney. Given the [[NotEvilJustMisunderstood Damned 33rd's intentions]] in Dubai, this might more be a case of going from AntiHero to {{Hero}}.
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* HeelFaceTurn: The entire story arc is one long journey of the protagonist going from being an EliteMook adversary in a [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine video game]] to the hero of the story. See also HerosJourney. Given the [[NotEvilJustMisunderstood Damned 33rd's intentions]] in Dubai, this might more be a case of going from AntiHero to {{Hero}}.TheHero.
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** The achievements of the [[SpecOpsTheLine video game]] are used as chapter titles in the story.
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** The achievements of the [[SpecOpsTheLine [[VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine video game]] are used as chapter titles in the story.
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** Some of the soldiers of the Damned 33rd from ''SpecOpsTheLine'' are named, referenced and fleshed out with their own backstories. [[spoiler: And in the case of Konrad, The Radioman, a Little Bird crew, and a Heavy Trooper, also end up in Halkeginia.]]
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** Some of the soldiers of the Damned 33rd from ''SpecOpsTheLine'' ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' are named, referenced and fleshed out with their own backstories. [[spoiler: And in the case of Konrad, The Radioman, a Little Bird crew, and a Heavy Trooper, also end up in Halkeginia.]]
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* BootCampEpisode: Later in the story during the Gallian Intrigue, [[spoiler: SSG Forbes]] agrees to train up the [[NewMeat New Gallian Army]], and covers every boot camp cliche during the arc.
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** In the Battle for Brugues, when [[spoiler: SSG Forbes]] and Saito are fighting a Gallian K-Wagen crew, it resembles another time [[Film/IndianaJonesAndTheLastCrusade a hero fighting fascists on a tank]].
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** It is revealed late in the story that Country Ollman, the 'god' of this verse, is a [[spoiler: an [[Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration exiled Q]].]]
