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Created by Prof Charles, the story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50298/twilights-voyage here]] at Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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Created by Prof Charles, the story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50298/twilights-voyage here]] at Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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* KingInTheMountain: An in-universe example, Celestia was spent a century in a century-long coma after the Exodus due to the strain of holding back the Sun from going fully red giant for 15 years.
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* AllPlanetsAreEarthlike: Averted. For ponies Planets are all [[DeathWorld Death Worlds]]. Hence why they live in space stations and only go down for resources.
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* KingInTheMountain: A In-universe example, Celestia was in a Century Long Coma After the Exodus due to the Strain of Holding Back the Sun from going fully Red Giant for 15 years.
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* KingInTheMountain: A In-universe An in-universe example, Celestia was in a Century Long Coma After century-long coma after the Exodus due to the Strain strain of Holding Back holding back the Sun from going fully Red Giant red giant for 15 years.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: A near Species Wide Example. Due to living in enclosed spaces for so long, most ponies are Agoraphobic
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: A near Species Wide Example. species-wide example. Due to living in enclosed spaces for so long, most ponies are Agoraphobicagoraphobic.
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* AllPlanetsAreEarthlike: Averted. Hard. For ponies Planets are all [[DeathWorld Death Worlds]]. Hence why they live in space stations and only go down for resources.
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Created by Prof Charles, can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50298/twilights-voyage here.]]
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Created by Prof Charles, the story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50298/twilights-voyage here.]]
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Sci-fi AU. Twilight Sparkle has lived on the Canterlot Space Station, capital of the Solar Empire, all her life. But can she adapt and make friends when her teacher, Princess Celestia, sends her away to be the new science officer of the spaceship Ponyville on its voyage to explore the galaxy for much needed resources for the war against the Confederacy of Species?
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Twilight Sparkle has lived on the Canterlot Space Station, capital of the Solar Empire, all her life. But can she adapt and make friends when her teacher, Princess Celestia, sends her away to be the new science officer of the spaceship Ponyville on its voyage to explore the galaxy for much needed resources for the war against the Confederacy of Species?
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Created by ProfCharles, Prof Charles, can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50298/twilights-voyage here.]]
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Sci-fi AU. Twilight Sparkle has lived on the Cantalot Canterlot Space Station, capital of the Solar Empire, all her life. But can she adapt and make friends when her teacher, Princess Celestia, sends her away to be the new science officer of the spaceship Ponyville on its voyage to explore the galaxy for much needed resources for the war against the Confederacy of Species?
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Sci-fi AU. Twilight Sparkle has lived on the Cantalot Space Station, capital of the Solar Empire, all her life. But can she adapt and make friends when her teacher, Princess Celestia, sends her away to be the new science officer of the spaceship Ponyville on its voyage to explore the galaxy for much needed resources for the war against the Confederacy of Species?
Created by ProfCharles, can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50298/twilights-voyage Here]]
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Created by ProfCharles, can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50298/twilights-voyage Here]]
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