Follow TV Tropes

Following

History Fanfic / TheSuccessors

Go To

OR

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
The Lost Woods has been split between a video game level of the same name and Enchanted Forest. Cutting non-examples, zero-context potholes and ZCEs.


%%* TheLostWoods: The Everfree Forest, even more so than usual.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


Set [[ExtyYearsFromNow one thousand years after the conclusion of the series]], the story deals with the adventures of two earth pony sisters, Blue Moon and Summer Sun, who are transformed into alicorns by the Elements of Harmony and appointed to rule Equestria after the deaths of the former princesses. Renamed Aurora and Corona, respectively, the sisters are forced to adapt to their new lives quickly in order to deal with a grave new threat.

to:

Set [[ExtyYearsFromNow [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo one thousand years after the conclusion of the series]], the story deals with the adventures of two earth pony sisters, Blue Moon and Summer Sun, who are transformed into alicorns by the Elements of Harmony and appointed to rule Equestria after the deaths of the former princesses. Renamed Aurora and Corona, respectively, the sisters are forced to adapt to their new lives quickly in order to deal with a grave new threat.



* ExtyYearsFromNow: Takes place one thousand years in Equestria's future.

to:

* ExtyYearsFromNow: ExactlyExtyYearsAgo: Takes place one thousand years in Equestria's future.

Added: 170

Changed: 2

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Commented out zces


%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample entries are not allowed on wiki pages. All such entries have been commented out. Add context to the entries before uncommenting them.



* FaceYourFears: [[spoiler: Aurora defeating a changeling disguised as Nightmare Moon.]]

to:

* %%* FaceYourFears: [[spoiler: Aurora defeating a changeling disguised as Nightmare Moon.]]



* InsufferableGenius: Aurora thinks her mentor Lord Stargazer is one.
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: Aurora thinks so, due to the [[ComesGreatResponsibility awesome responsibility]] it brings.
* TheLostWoods: The Everfree Forest, even more so than usual.

to:

* %%* InsufferableGenius: Aurora thinks her mentor Lord Stargazer is one.
* %%* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: Aurora thinks so, due to the [[ComesGreatResponsibility awesome responsibility]] it brings.
* %%* TheLostWoods: The Everfree Forest, even more so than usual.



* YouCantGoHomeAgain: …once you’ve become an Equestrian princess.

to:

* %%* YouCantGoHomeAgain: …once you’ve become an Equestrian princess.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
misuse; does not fit trope description


* BadDreams: Aurora suffers from these after she hears that Ponyville is being plagued by [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added: 250

Changed: 164

Removed: 258

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Not an example of Distinction Without A Difference. It's By No I Mean Yes. Commented out examples with insufficient context. Don't list two tropes together.


* [[TheChosenOne The Chosen Two]]: Aurora and Corona.

to:

* [[TheChosenOne The Chosen Two]]: ByNoIMeanYes: Corona, when asked how her flying lessons went:
--> '''Corona:''' Um... awesome! Yeah, they were great. I, uh... Well, I’m still having trouble taking off... and staying airborne... and, uh... landing... ''({{beat}})'' Okay, so I’m not really doing all that great.
* TheChosenOne:
Aurora and Corona.



* DontGoInTheWoods

to:

* %%* DontGoInTheWoods



* ForegoneConclusion: Anyone who follows Valkyrie-Girl's art [[spoiler: will know "Nightmare Moon" is really a changeling and the sisters adopted her.]]

to:

* ForegoneConclusion: Anyone who follows Valkyrie-Girl's art [[spoiler: will know "Nightmare that [[spoiler:"Nightmare Moon" is really a changeling and the sisters adopted her.]]her]].



* MysteriousMist / OminousFog: Both occur in the swamp in Chapter 4. In addition to causing Aurora and Corona to get lost, they [[spoiler: herald the arrival of the [[WillOTheWisp Will O’ the Wisps]].]]

to:

* MysteriousMist / OminousFog: MysteriousMist: Both this and OminousFog occur in the swamp in Chapter 4. In addition to causing Aurora and Corona to get lost, they [[spoiler: herald the arrival of the [[WillOTheWisp Will O’ the Wisps]].]]



* NoExceptYes: Corona, when asked how her flying lessons went:
--> '''Corona''': Um…awesome! Yeah, they were great. I, uh…well, I’m still having trouble taking off…and staying airborne…and, uh…landing…. ({{beat}}) Okay, so I’m not really doing all that great.



--> “Leave. Her. ''Alone!''”
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: The new princesses.

to:

--> “Leave."Leave. Her. ''Alone!''”
*
''Alone!''"
%%*
RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: The new princesses.



* [[ThisWasHisTrueForm This Was Her True Form]]: After Aurora defeats her, [[spoiler: “Nightmare Moon” is revealed to be a changeling]].

to:

* [[ThisWasHisTrueForm This Was Her True Form]]: ThisWasHisTrueForm: After Aurora defeats her, [[spoiler: “Nightmare Moon” is revealed to be a changeling]].



Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ForegoneConclusion: Anyone who follows Valkyrie-Girl's art [[spoiler: Will know "Nightmare Moon" is really a changeling and the sisters adopted her.]]

to:

* ForegoneConclusion: Anyone who follows Valkyrie-Girl's art [[spoiler: Will will know "Nightmare Moon" is really a changeling and the sisters adopted her.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* MysteriousMist / OminousFog: Both occur in the swamp in Chapter 4. In addition to causing Aurora and Corona to get lost, they [[spoiler: herald the arrival of the Will O’ the Wisps]].

to:

* MysteriousMist / OminousFog: Both occur in the swamp in Chapter 4. In addition to causing Aurora and Corona to get lost, they [[spoiler: herald the arrival of the [[WillOTheWisp Will O’ the Wisps]].]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


The fic is currently ongoing and can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45201/The-Successors here]].

to:

The fic is currently ongoing now complete and can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45201/The-Successors here]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ForegoneConclusion: Anyone who follows Valkyrie-Girl's art [[spoiler: Will know "Nightmare Moon" is really a changeling and the sisters adopted her.]]



----

to:

----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


.
.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

.
.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None





Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:


Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:


Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* EdibleThemeNaming: Like her ancestors, Pink Pearl is named after a variety of apple.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* NotAGame: When the sisters are entering the Everfree Forest, Corona makes a joke to lighten the mood; Aurora tells her that their mission is nothing to joke about.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* DeerInTheHeadlights: Aurora initially has this reaction when confronted with what appears to be [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]] in Chapter 4.

to:

* DeerInTheHeadlights: Aurora initially has this reaction when confronted with what appears to be [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]] in Chapter 4.Moon]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* DeerInTheHeadlights: Aurora initially has this reaction when confronted with what appears to be [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]] in Chapter 4.

Added: 118

Changed: 4

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BadDreams: Aurora suffers from these after she hears that Ponyville is being plagued by [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]].



* Flashback: Every chapter begins with a scene from Blue Moon and Summer Sun's foalhood.

to:

* Flashback: {{Flashback}}: Every chapter begins with a scene from Blue Moon and Summer Sun's foalhood.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* Flashback: Every chapter begins with a scene from Blue Moon and Summer Sun's foalhood.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* FaceYourFears: Aurora defeating [[spoiler: a changeling disguised as]] Nightmare Moon.

to:

* FaceYourFears: Aurora defeating [[spoiler: Aurora defeating a changeling disguised as]] as Nightmare Moon.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* [[ThisWasHisTrueForm This Was Her True Form]]: After Aurora defeats her, [[spoiler: “Nightmare Moon” is revealed to be a changeling]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* FaceYourFears: Aurora defeating [[spoiler: a changeling disguised as]] Nightmare Moon.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* MuckingInTheMud: The muddy bog in Chapter 4 makes moving difficult, and eventually starts to [[QuicksandSucks suck down its victims like quicksand]].


Added DiffLines:

* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Aurora in Chapter 4:
--> “Leave. Her. ''Alone!''”
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* MysteriousMist / OminousFog: Both occur in the swamp in Chapter 4. In addition to causing Aurora and Corona to get lost, they [[spoiler: herald the arrival of the Will O’ the Wisps]].


Added DiffLines:

* SwampsAreEvil: The swamp in the Everfree Forest is quite sinister.

Added: 73

Changed: 22

Removed: 65

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


Set [[TimeSkip one thousand years after the conclusion of the series]], the story deals with the adventures of two earth pony sisters, Blue Moon and Summer Sun, who are transformed into alicorns by the Elements of Harmony and appointed to rule Equestria after the deaths of the former princesses. Renamed Aurora and Corona, respectively, the sisters are forced to adapt to their new lives quickly in order to deal with a grave new threat.

to:

Set [[TimeSkip [[ExtyYearsFromNow one thousand years after the conclusion of the series]], the story deals with the adventures of two earth pony sisters, Blue Moon and Summer Sun, who are transformed into alicorns by the Elements of Harmony and appointed to rule Equestria after the deaths of the former princesses. Renamed Aurora and Corona, respectively, the sisters are forced to adapt to their new lives quickly in order to deal with a grave new threat.



* ExtyYearsFromNow: Takes place one thousand years in Equestria's future.



* TimeSkip: Takes place one thousand years in Equestria's future.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* GhostTown: There are several such town in the Everfree Forest, remnants of a past attempt by Ponyville to “tame” the woods.

to:

* GhostTown: There are several such town towns in the Everfree Forest, remnants of a past attempt by Ponyville to “tame” the woods.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


''The Successors'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{fanfic}} written by [[http://portmeirion.deviantart.com/ Portmeirion]] and based on a storyline and artwork by [[http://valkyrie-girl.deviantart.com/ Valkyrie-Girl]].

to:

''The Successors'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{fanfic}} written by [[http://portmeirion.deviantart.com/ Portmeirion]] Portmeirion and based on a storyline and artwork by [[http://valkyrie-girl.deviantart.com/ Valkyrie-Girl]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

[[quoteright:350:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/Rise_of_the_Successors_Edit_8904.png]]

''The Successors'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{fanfic}} written by [[http://portmeirion.deviantart.com/ Portmeirion]] and based on a storyline and artwork by [[http://valkyrie-girl.deviantart.com/ Valkyrie-Girl]].

Set [[TimeSkip one thousand years after the conclusion of the series]], the story deals with the adventures of two earth pony sisters, Blue Moon and Summer Sun, who are transformed into alicorns by the Elements of Harmony and appointed to rule Equestria after the deaths of the former princesses. Renamed Aurora and Corona, respectively, the sisters are forced to adapt to their new lives quickly in order to deal with a grave new threat.

The fic is currently ongoing and can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45201/The-Successors here]].
----
!! This ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Fanfic}} contains examples of the following tropes:

* BigFancyCastle: Canterlot Palace. Corona gets lost in it in Chapter 2.
* BigSisterInstinct: Aurora has this towards Corona, even though the two are twins.
* [[TheChosenOne The Chosen Two]]: Aurora and Corona.
* DontGoInTheWoods
* FamilyBusiness: Sweet Apple Acres, still owned and operated by the Apple family.
* GhostTown: There are several such town in the Everfree Forest, remnants of a past attempt by Ponyville to “tame” the woods.
* HighClassGlass: [[MeaningfulName Glass Eye]], the princesses’ chief advisor, wears a monocle.
* InsufferableGenius: Aurora thinks her mentor Lord Stargazer is one.
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: Aurora thinks so, due to the [[ComesGreatResponsibility awesome responsibility]] it brings.
* TheLostWoods: The Everfree Forest, even more so than usual.
* MedievalStasis: Equestria has changed relatively little in the past thousand years.
* MythologyGag: According to Lantern Jaw, members of the Apple family are renowned for their honesty.
* NoExceptYes: Corona, when asked how her flying lessons went:
--> '''Corona''': Um…awesome! Yeah, they were great. I, uh…well, I’m still having trouble taking off…and staying airborne…and, uh…landing…. ({{beat}}) Okay, so I’m not really doing all that great.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: The new princesses.
* TimeSkip: Takes place one thousand years in Equestria's future.
* ToughActToFollow: InUniverse, Aurora is afraid she’ll never match the legacy left behind by Celestia and Luna.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: …once you’ve become an Equestrian princess.

----

Top