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* BoyfriendBlockingDad: Igneous Rock. While his daughters can handle themselves in a fight, he's very wary of stallions seducing them. He only hires Cheese after he determines that the younger stallion is harmless and uninterested in pursuing a relationship with any of the girls, and even then Igneous still worries about a possible romance. This gets deconstructed when [[spoiler:he fires Cheese -- he caught Cheese kissing Pinkamena, and the suggestiveness and criminal smell of the letter from "Tomato" (actually a forged letter from a gang member Cortland hired) made him even more wary of both Sandwich brothers]]. Pinkamena [[CallingTheOldManOut calls him out]] for overreacting. Igneous later comes to the conclusion that his daughter is right and makes amends with Cheese.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Pinkamena calls out Igneous for being an OverprotectiveDad after [[spoiler:he fires Cheese]].
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Pinkamena calls out Igneous for being an OverprotectiveDad overprotective dad after [[spoiler:he fires Cheese]].
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* OverprotectiveDad: Igneous Rock. While his daughters can handle themselves in a fight, he's very wary of stallions seducing them. He only hires Cheese after he determines that the younger stallion is harmless and uninterested in pursuing a relationship with any of the girls, and even then Igneous still worries about a possible romance. This gets deconstructed when [[spoiler:he fires Cheese -- he caught Cheese kissing Pinkamena, and the suggestiveness and criminal smell of the letter from "Tomato" (actually a forged letter from a gang member Cortland hired) made him even more wary of both Sandwich brothers]]. Pinkamena [[CallingTheOldManOut calls him out]] for overreacting. Igneous later comes to the conclusion that his daughter is right and makes amends with Cheese.
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* TheyDo: [[spoiler:Cheese and Pinkamena get married at the end]].
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!!This Fan Fiction contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: All the Pie mares.
** ActionMom: Cloudy Quartz really shined in the fight against the Diamond Dogs.
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!!''The Rock Farmer's Daughters'' contains examples
* ActionGirl: All the Pie
** ActionMom: Cloudy Quartz really shined
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** PapaWolf: He outright threatened Cortland when the latter took his harassment of Pinkamena too far.
* AlternateUniverseFic
* AlternateUniverseFic
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* AlternateUniverseFic: ''The Rock Farmer's Daughters'' takes place in an alternate universe where Pinkamena
* AlternateUniverseFic
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: Inverted, then played straight. Pinkamena scares off stallions catcalling Maud, followed by Maud shooing an unwelcome Cortland away from Pinkamena by raising her voice.
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: BadassInDistress: [[spoiler:Igneous Rock is kidnapped and held in a barn after losing a fight against Cortland and his gang, thanks to a muscle tearing at the worst time]].
* BigSisterInstinct: Inverted, then playedstraight. straight.
** Pinkamena scares off stallions catcallingMaud, followed by Maud.
** Maudshooing later shoos away an unwelcome Cortland away from Pinkamena by raising her voice.
* BigSisterInstinct: Inverted, then played
** Pinkamena scares off stallions catcalling
** Maud
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-->"Leave... my brother... out of this."
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-->'''Igneous:''' A rock farmer's strength comes in handy for those situations.
-->'''Haralson:''' (jokingly) And for threatenin' any suitors of yer daughters?
-->'''Igneous:''' (dead serious) Yep.
* BrokenBird: The Pies have always had more subtle use of their emotions--but after [[spoiler:both Granny Pie and Nana Pinkie died suddenly in the same night]], they just became gloomy and reclusive. It's especially notable with Pinkamena, who had been a [[CheerfulChild little ball of sunshine]] before the tragedy. And since she missed the Rainboom, they never completely moved on until Cheese came along.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Pinkamena calls out Igneous for being overprotective after [[spoiler:he fires Cheese]].
-->'''Haralson:''' (jokingly) And for threatenin' any suitors of yer daughters?
-->'''Igneous:''' (dead serious) Yep.
* BrokenBird: The Pies have always had more subtle use of their emotions--but after [[spoiler:both Granny Pie and Nana Pinkie died suddenly in the same night]], they just became gloomy and reclusive. It's especially notable with Pinkamena, who had been a [[CheerfulChild little ball of sunshine]] before the tragedy. And since she missed the Rainboom, they never completely moved on until Cheese came along.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Pinkamena calls out Igneous for being overprotective after [[spoiler:he fires Cheese]].
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-->'''Igneous:''' A rock farmer's strength comes in handy for those situations.
-->'''Haralson:'''situations.\\
'''Haralson:''' (jokingly) And for threatenin' any suitors of yerdaughters?
-->'''Igneous:'''daughters?\\
'''Igneous:''' (dead serious) Yep.
* BrokenBird: The Pies have always had more subtle use of theiremotions--but emotions -- but after [[spoiler:both Granny Pie and Nana Pinkie died suddenly in the same night]], they just became gloomy and reclusive. It's especially notable with Pinkamena, who had been a [[CheerfulChild little ball of sunshine]] before the tragedy. And since she missed the Sonic Rainboom, they never completely moved on until Cheese came along.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Pinkamena calls out Igneous for beingoverprotective an OverprotectiveDad after [[spoiler:he fires Cheese]].
-->'''Haralson:'''
'''Haralson:''' (jokingly) And for threatenin' any suitors of yer
-->'''Igneous:'''
'''Igneous:''' (dead serious) Yep.
* BrokenBird: The Pies have always had more subtle use of their
* CallingTheOldManOut: Pinkamena calls out Igneous for being
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* CoolOldLady: Though she doesn't have much focus on her, Purple Prose is shown to be reasonable when her nephew Bluejinx tells her that [[spoiler:Cortland humiliated Pinkamena]].
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* CoolOldLady: CoolOldLady:
** Though she doesn't have much focus on her, Purple Prose is shown to be reasonable when her nephew Bluejinx tells her that [[spoiler:Cortland humiliated Pinkamena]]. She also calls out the townsfolk for their mistreatment of the Pies and how they handled the Cortland situation.
** Though she doesn't have much focus on her, Purple Prose is shown to be reasonable when her nephew Bluejinx tells her that [[spoiler:Cortland humiliated Pinkamena]]. She also calls out the townsfolk for their mistreatment of the Pies and how they handled the Cortland situation.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Cortland.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Cortland. Cortland is obsessed with Pinkamena and earning her affections. Despite Pinkamena (and her family) clearly not liking him, he refuses to take "No" for an answer. When Cheese Sandwich enteres the picture, he becomes increasingly deranged [[spoiler:which culminates in the house fire that nearly kills Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous]].
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* DeadpanSnarker: Pinkamena, which is a huge contrast to main 'verse Pinkie Pie.
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* DeadpanSnarker: DeadpanSnarker:
** Pinkamena, which is a huge contrast to [[GenkiGirl main 'verse PinkiePie.Pie]].
** Pinkamena, which is a huge contrast to [[GenkiGirl main 'verse Pinkie
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** Cloudy Quartz
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* DistressedDude: How Pinkamena meets Cheese, who was being bullied by gang members.
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* DistressedDude: How Pinkamena meets Cheese, who DistressedDude:
** Cheese was being bullied by gangmembers.members until Pinkamena saves him.
** Cheese was being bullied by gang
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** BadassInDistress: [[spoiler:Igneous Rock is kidnapped and held in a barn after losing a fight against those same gang members, thanks to a muscle tearing at the worst time]].
* DogsAreDumb: Well, Diamond Dogs, anyway. The biggest one ribbits [[spoiler:and was tricked by Cheese into running headfirst into a boulder]].
* DogsAreDumb: Well, Diamond Dogs, anyway. The biggest one ribbits [[spoiler:and was tricked by Cheese into running headfirst into a boulder]].
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* DroppedGlasses: Cheese, a few times. The worst time so far was when Diamond Dogs popped in on the farm.
** [[spoiler:He drops his glasses into a fire as he and Igneous save Pinkamena from falling into it. He has to latch onto Pinkamena's tail in order to get out of the burning house]].
** [[spoiler:He drops his glasses into a fire as he and Igneous save Pinkamena from falling into it. He has to latch onto Pinkamena's tail in order to get out of the burning house]].
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* DroppedGlasses: Cheese, a few times. The worst time so far was when Diamond Dogs popped in on the farm.
**farm. [[spoiler:He also drops his glasses into a fire as he and Igneous save Pinkamena from falling into it. He has to latch onto Pinkamena's tail in order to get out of the burning house]].
**
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* FarmersDaughter: Four of them.
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* FarmersDaughter: Four Pinkamena and her sisters, Maud, Limestone, and Marble, are daughters of the eponymous rock farmers, Igneous and his wife Cloudy Quartz. However, it's subverted as all four of them were emotionally closed-off due to suffering from a lot of emotional baggage from losing two close family members in the past, and Pinkamena never witnessing the Sonic Rainboom. It's not until Cheese Sandwich comes in that things get livelier for them.
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* FirstKiss: [[spoiler:Cheese and Pinkamena have theirs at the carnival. Igneous catches them in the act]].
* ForWantOfANail: Pinkamena simply went inside before the Rainboom happened. Results in neither she nor Cheese Sandwich becoming party ponies.
* ForWantOfANail: Pinkamena simply went inside before the Rainboom happened. Results in neither she nor Cheese Sandwich becoming party ponies.
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* FirstKiss: [[spoiler:Cheese and Pinkamena have theirs at the carnival. Igneous catches them in the act]].
act and, due to how things were set up, fires Cheese out of paranoia]].
* ForWantOfANail: Pinkamena simply went inside before the Rainboom happened.Results This results in neither she nor Cheese Sandwich becoming party ponies.
* ForWantOfANail: Pinkamena simply went inside before the Rainboom happened.
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* GenkiGirl: Sugar Glider.
* TheGhost: Granny Pie and Nana Pinkie. They died before the story began.
* TheGhost: Granny Pie and Nana Pinkie. They died before the story began.
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*
** Granny Pie and Nana
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* HappilyMarried: Igneous and Cloudy, though their serious demeanor had left some doubt in Cheese's mind.
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* HappilyMarried: HappilyMarried:
** Igneous and Cloudy, though their serious demeanor had left some doubt in Cheese's mind.
** Igneous and Cloudy, though their serious demeanor had left some doubt in Cheese's mind.
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* HeldGaze: Happens a couple of times with Pinkamena and Cheese.
** The most prominent one is after [[spoiler:their FirstKiss]]. Naturally, the moment is ruined seconds later.
* HeroicBSOD: PlayedForLaughs with Marble when [[spoiler:the house is overrun with mice]].
** The most prominent one is after [[spoiler:their FirstKiss]]. Naturally, the moment is ruined seconds later.
* HeroicBSOD: PlayedForLaughs with Marble when [[spoiler:the house is overrun with mice]].
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* HeldGaze: Happens a couple of times with Pinkamena and Cheese.
** TheCheese, with the most prominent one is after being [[spoiler:their FirstKiss]]. Naturally, the moment is ruined seconds later.
later by [[spoiler:Igneous, who fires Cheese in a fit of paranoia]].
*HeroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:
** PlayedForLaughs with Marble when [[spoiler:the house is overrun with mice]].
** The
*
** PlayedForLaughs with Marble when [[spoiler:the house is overrun with mice]].
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* IfICantHaveYou / MurderTheHypotenuse: [[spoiler:Motivations for the above trope]].
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* IfICantHaveYou / MurderTheHypotenuse: [[spoiler:Motivations IfICantHaveYou: [[spoiler:Part of the reason why he sets off a HouseFire is so he can kill Pinkamena for the above trope]].rejecting his advances]].
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich, Cheese's younger brother. It was a factor in Cheese leaving]].
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Deconstructed. [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich, Sandwich is Cheese's academically and socially successful younger brother. It brother, but while he genuinely loved Cheese, his actions (as well as their family and everyone else favoring him over Cheese) aggravated Cheese's social anxieties. The last straw was a factor in when Tomato accidentally broke Cheese's accordion, making Cheese leaving]]. decide to leave home and never come back. Cheese nursed a grudge against his brother over this for a long time, but seeing Tomato blame himself and verbally walk on eggshells around him out of fear of offending him causes Cheese to regret resenting him]].
* JerkassRealization:
** After being called out by Pinkamena [[spoiler:for firing Cheese]] and [[spoiler:being defeated and trapped by Cortland and his gang]], Igneous realizes that his overprotectiveness ended up hurting his family in the long run, especially since he broke Pinkamena's heart.
** [[spoiler:Cheese Sandwich held a grudge for years against his younger brother, Tomato Sandwich, for being both TheAce in their family as well as InnocentlyInsensitive towards his insecurities. But when Tomato visits him in the hospital and starts acting fearful of saying the wrong things for fear of ruining their relationship again, Cheese starts feeling bad for making his brother feel that way, and resolves to drop his grudge]].
* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler:After being defeated in a fight, Cortland sets the connected farm on fire... with Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous inside]].
* JerkassRealization:
** After being called out by Pinkamena [[spoiler:for firing Cheese]] and [[spoiler:being defeated and trapped by Cortland and his gang]], Igneous realizes that his overprotectiveness ended up hurting his family in the long run, especially since he broke Pinkamena's heart.
** [[spoiler:Cheese Sandwich held a grudge for years against his younger brother, Tomato Sandwich, for being both TheAce in their family as well as InnocentlyInsensitive towards his insecurities. But when Tomato visits him in the hospital and starts acting fearful of saying the wrong things for fear of ruining their relationship again, Cheese starts feeling bad for making his brother feel that way, and resolves to drop his grudge]].
* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler:After being defeated in a fight, Cortland sets the connected farm on fire... with Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous inside]].
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler:Bluejinx recognizes Cheese as his friend Tomato's brother.]]
** Igneous has a sister that he hasn't seen for years [[spoiler:because she ran away because she was humiliated by a stallion she liked. It's part of the reason why Igneous is so protective of his daughters. Pinkamena and Cheese meet her in her cabin in the woods later on]].
** Igneous has a sister that he hasn't seen for years [[spoiler:because she ran away because she was humiliated by a stallion she liked. It's part of the reason why Igneous is so protective of his daughters. Pinkamena and Cheese meet her in her cabin in the woods later on]].
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* LongLostRelative: LongLostRelative:
** [[spoiler:Bluejinx recognizes Cheese as the brother of his friendTomato's brother.Tomato.]]
** Igneous has a sister that he hasn't seen for years [[spoiler:becauseshe said sister, Sediment Rock, ran away because she was humiliated by a stallion she liked. It's part of the reason why Igneous is so protective of his daughters. Pinkamena and Cheese meet her in her cabin in the woods later on]].
** [[spoiler:Bluejinx recognizes Cheese as the brother of his friend
** Igneous has a sister that he hasn't seen for years [[spoiler:because
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* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler:After being defeated in a fight, Cortland sets the connected farm on fire... with Cheese, Pinkamena, and Igneous inside]].
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* NiceGuy: Cheese. He remains very sweet and polite when interacting with most ponies. The times he doesn't act very nice tend to be a bit startling.
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* NiceGuy: Cheese. He NiceGuy:
** Cheese Sandwich remains very sweet and polite when interacting with most ponies. The times he doesn't act very nice tend to be a bit startling.
** Cheese Sandwich remains very sweet and polite when interacting with most ponies. The times he doesn't act very nice tend to be a bit startling.
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-->'''Cheese:''' Squid hat is going to the hardware store...
-->'''Pinkamena:''' No, you're not.
-->'''Cheese:''' But I don't know what I'm singing!
-->'''Pinkamena:''' No, you're not.
-->'''Cheese:''' But I don't know what I'm singing!
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-->'''Cheese:''' Squid hat is going to the hardware store...
-->'''Pinkamena:'''store...\\
'''Pinkamena:''' No, you'renot.
-->'''Cheese:'''not.\\
'''Cheese:''' But I don't know what I'm singing!
-->'''Pinkamena:'''
'''Pinkamena:''' No, you're
-->'''Cheese:'''
'''Cheese:''' But I don't know what I'm singing!
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* NotGoodWithRejection: We're looking at you, Cortland.
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* NotGoodWithRejection: We're looking at you, Cortland.Cortland ''really'' wants Pinkamena and won't take no for an answer. When Pinkamena makes it very clear she doesn't want him, [[spoiler:he tries to kill her, Cheese, and Igneous by starting a HouseFire]].
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* OverprotectiveDad: Igneous Rock. While his daughters can handle themselves in a fight, he's very wary of stallions seducing them. He only hires Cheese after he determines that the younger stallion is harmless and uninterested in pursuing a relationship with any of the girls, and even then Igneous still worries about a possible romance.
** [[spoiler:He fires Cheese after catching him kissing Pinkamena, and the suggestiveness and criminal smell of the letter from "Tomato" (actually a forged letter from a gang member Cortland hired) made him even more wary of both Sandwich brothers]]. Pinkamena [[CallingTheOldManOut calls him out]] for overreacting.
** [[spoiler:He fires Cheese after catching him kissing Pinkamena, and the suggestiveness and criminal smell of the letter from "Tomato" (actually a forged letter from a gang member Cortland hired) made him even more wary of both Sandwich brothers]]. Pinkamena [[CallingTheOldManOut calls him out]] for overreacting.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Igneous Rock. While his daughters can handle themselves in a fight, he's very wary of stallions seducing them. He only hires Cheese after he determines that the younger stallion is harmless and uninterested in pursuing a relationship with any of the girls, and even then Igneous still worries about a possible romance.
** [[spoiler:Heromance. This gets deconstructed when [[spoiler:he fires Cheese after catching him -- he caught Cheese kissing Pinkamena, and the suggestiveness and criminal smell of the letter from "Tomato" (actually a forged letter from a gang member Cortland hired) made him even more wary of both Sandwich brothers]]. Pinkamena [[CallingTheOldManOut calls him out]] for overreacting. Igneous later comes to the conclusion that his daughter is right and makes amends with Cheese.
** [[spoiler:He
* PapaWolf: Igneous is very protective of his four daughters, which stems from personal tragedies such as his sister becoming a runaway after being humiliated by her crush. He outright threatened Cortland when the latter took his harassment of Pinkamena too far. It's deconstructed in how he [[spoiler:fired Cheese Sandwich out of paranoia when he caught the latter kissing Pinkamena]], leading to Pinkamena angrily calling him out on his actions.
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* ProducePelting: Cheese is a victim of this late in the fic, due to misconceptions about his character since [[spoiler:he went with the Pie sisters (sans Maud) without permission from their parents, and he ends up getting fired]]. The townsfolk end up switching to dirt clods and pebbles after a few minutes.
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* ProducePelting: Cheese is a victim of this late in the fic, due to misconceptions about his character since [[spoiler:he went with the Pie sisters (sans Maud) without permission from their parents, and he ends up getting fired]]. The townsfolk end up switching to dirt clods and pebbles after a few minutes. Sugar calls out the townsponies out on their behavior, saying what they think about Cheese and Bluejinx doesn't justify tormenting two innocent cults, and threatens to smack them all with a broom if they don't comply. Naturally, they do.
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: Cheese gives one to Cortland in the climax, especially the part where he points out that the latter's setting an awful example for his younger siblings.
** Haralson gives one to the townsfolk after he overhears [[spoiler:somepony pinning the blame for starting the fire on the Pies and/or Cheese--never mind that Igneous, Pinkamena, and Cheese nearly ''died'' in it and had to be hospitalized]]. Purple Prose joins him by asking [[ArmorPiercingQuestion what they did for the Pies besides gossip about them]].
* TheResenter: [[spoiler:Cheese holds resentment over being overlooked by nearly everypony in favor of his younger brother]].
** Haralson gives one to the townsfolk after he overhears [[spoiler:somepony pinning the blame for starting the fire on the Pies and/or Cheese--never mind that Igneous, Pinkamena, and Cheese nearly ''died'' in it and had to be hospitalized]]. Purple Prose joins him by asking [[ArmorPiercingQuestion what they did for the Pies besides gossip about them]].
* TheResenter: [[spoiler:Cheese holds resentment over being overlooked by nearly everypony in favor of his younger brother]].
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** Cheese gives one to Cortland in the climax, especially the part where he points out that the latter's setting an awful example for his younger siblings.
** Haralson gives one to the townsfolk after he overhears [[spoiler:somepony pinning the blame for starting the fire on the Pies and/or Cheese--never mind that Igneous, Pinkamena, and Cheese nearly ''died'' in it and had to be hospitalized]]. Purple Prose joins him by asking [[ArmorPiercingQuestion what they did for the Pies besides gossip about them]]. \n This shames the townsponies so much that they send Pinkamena extremely apologetic get-well cards while she's in the hospital.
* TheResenter: [[spoiler:Cheese holds resentment over being overlooked by nearly everypony in favor of his youngerbrother]].brother. He later drops it when he sees Tomato's guilt and fear over ruining things between them again, causing Cheese to feel bad for making him so jittery]].
** Cheese gives one to Cortland in the climax, especially the part where he points out that the latter's setting an awful example for his younger siblings.
** Haralson gives one to the townsfolk after he overhears [[spoiler:somepony pinning the blame for starting the fire on the Pies and/or Cheese--never mind that Igneous, Pinkamena, and Cheese nearly ''died'' in it and had to be hospitalized]]. Purple Prose joins him by asking [[ArmorPiercingQuestion what they did for the Pies besides gossip about them]].
* TheResenter: [[spoiler:Cheese holds resentment over being overlooked by nearly everypony in favor of his younger
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Cortland is ''terrifyingly'' possessive of Pinkamena, and is willing to get rid of Cheese over it]].
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* TheReveal: TheReveal:
** [[spoiler:Cortland is ''terrifyingly'' possessive of Pinkamena, and is willing to get rid of Cheese over it]].
** [[spoiler:Cortland is ''terrifyingly'' possessive of Pinkamena, and is willing to get rid of Cheese over it]].
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* TheRunaway: Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].
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* TheRunaway: TheRunaway:
** Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].
** Cheese, [[spoiler:due to feeling like the nopony of his family]].
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-->They broke the kiss and hugged. Cheese sighed and looked up at the sky, thankful for the day his life had changed.
-->The day when he met '''the rock farmer's daughters'''.
-->The day when he met '''the rock farmer's daughters'''.
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-->They broke the kiss and hugged. Cheese sighed and looked up at the sky, thankful for the day his life had changed.
-->Thechanged.\\
The day when he met '''the rock farmer's daughters'''.
-->The
The day when he met '''the rock farmer's daughters'''.
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* TheUnfavorite: [[spoiler:Cheese has referred to himself as the "nopony" of his family. Considering how his younger brother had surpassed him both socially and academically, it's not hard to see why he's so down about it]].
* UnresolvedSexualTension
** Until Chapter [[spoiler:30]].
* UnresolvedSexualTension
** Until Chapter [[spoiler:30]].
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* TheUnfavorite: TheUnfavourite: [[spoiler:Cheese has referred to himself as the "nopony" of his family. Considering how his younger brother had surpassed him both socially and academically, it's not hard to see why he's so down about it]].
*UnresolvedSexualTension
**UnresolvedSexualTension: Until Chapter [[spoiler:30]].[[spoiler:30]], for [[spoiler:Pinkamena and Cheese Sandwich]].
*
**
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* WhenSheSmiles: [[spoiler:Cheese is in awe when he sees Pinkamena smile for the first time.]]
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* WhenSheSmiles: [[spoiler:Cheese is in awe when he sees Pinkamena smile for the first time.]]]]
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** [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich--at least in this AU. He's actually quite TheComicallySerious GrumpyBear and DeadpanSnarker in the Main 'verse]].
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** [[spoiler:Tomato Sandwich--at least in this AU. He's actually quite TheComicallySerious GrumpyBear and DeadpanSnarker in the Main 'verse]].
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* {{Adorkable}}: Cheese.
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** The character of Cortland is suspiciously like [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast Gaston]], if only in the pursuit of the female lead.
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** The character of Cortland is suspiciously like [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast [[WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast Gaston]], if only in the pursuit of the female lead.
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* WeddingDay: [[spoiler:The epilogue is about Cheese and Pinkamena's wedding.]]
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* WeddingDay: WeddingFinale: [[spoiler:The epilogue is about Cheese and Pinkamena's wedding.]]
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* GiveAwayTheBride: [[spoiler:The wedding is in the point of view of Igneous, who is so amazed at the entire thing he's lost in thought as he walks Pinkamena down the aisle and pretty much misses the vows. He talks with Pinkamena later on to tell her [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming how much he loves her and that he's proud to have her as a daughter]]]].
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* GiveAwayTheBride: [[spoiler:The wedding is in the point of view of Igneous, who is so amazed at the entire thing he's lost in thought as he walks Pinkamena down the aisle and pretty much misses the vows. He talks with Pinkamena later on to tell her [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming how much he loves her and that he's proud to have her as a daughter]]]].daughter]].
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** Given that Cheese Sandwich is voiced by WeirdAlYankovic in the show, there were bound to be a few references in the fic. Most notably is when Cheese sits out in the rain and sings about living in a "Rock Farm Paradise."
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** Given that Cheese Sandwich is voiced by WeirdAlYankovic Music/WeirdAlYankovic in the show, there were bound to be a few references in the fic. Most notably is when Cheese sits out in the rain and sings about living in a "Rock Farm Paradise."