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* YuriGenre: Again, this could apply to basically 80% of the ships between the Louds, minus Lucy's obsession with Lincoln and Lisa's affection towards Lincoln.
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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: The last helmet [[spoiler: doesn't have a chip, rather the mind control parts are built into the set]].
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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 9, Lana and Lola introduce themselves with, [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} "Get ready for trouble, we'll make it double!"]]
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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 9, Lana and Lola introduce themselves with, [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} [[Anime/PokemonTheSeries "Get ready for trouble, we'll make it double!"]]
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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: What seems to be the reachable level in the progress bar in the sim date game. [[spoiler: This isn't a good thing]].
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After Lincoln brings a prototype virtual reality helmet home, the sisters end up playing a dating sim based on their family. If that’s not weird enough, the helmets seem to cause behavioral changes in the sisters, causing problems for everyone to deal with… And from there on, things get crazy.
Surprisingly enough though, there isn’t an incest harem involved, despite what other fics tend to entail. Overall, a good read for the curious. You can read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12149549/1/The-Loud-Sim-Date here]].
Surprisingly enough though, there isn’t an incest harem involved, despite what other fics tend to entail. Overall, a good read for the curious. You can read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12149549/1/The-Loud-Sim-Date here]].
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After Lincoln brings a prototype virtual reality helmet home, the sisters end up playing a dating sim based on their family. If that’s that's not weird enough, the helmets seem to cause behavioral changes in the sisters, causing problems for everyone to deal with… with... And from there on, things get crazy.
Surprisingly enough though, thereisn’t isn't an incest harem involved, despite what other fics tend to entail. Overall, a good read for the curious. You can read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12149549/1/The-Loud-Sim-Date here]].
Surprisingly enough though, there
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* [[spoiler: OurGhoulsAreDifferent]]: They are created using a serum, and seem to be based on the [[Anime/TokyoGhoul Tokyo Ghoul]] anime:
** [[spoiler: Leni]], the first ghoul, can morph her arms into weapons or defensive equipment. She also feels no pain, though it's implied [[spoiler: Cristina did that]].
** [[spoiler: Lori]], the second ghoul, has wings and can shoot sharp feathers. Which explode.
** [[spoiler: Cristina]], the third ghoul, has four tentacles coming from her back that can let her shoot electricity, morph into things to protect her, and be remade from scratch should they be destroyed. This isn't including the ensuing healing factor she gets [[spoiler: which can be nullified with Ronnie's tail]].
** [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]], the fourth and seemingly final ghoul, barely seems to suffer any changes besides gaining a tail [[spoiler: that lets her override Cristina's healing factor]].
** It can also be inferred that they can get stronger through cannibalism, since [[spoiler: once Cristina cannibalizes Leni, she gains her powers]].
** [[spoiler: Leni]], the first ghoul, can morph her arms into weapons or defensive equipment. She also feels no pain, though it's implied [[spoiler: Cristina did that]].
** [[spoiler: Lori]], the second ghoul, has wings and can shoot sharp feathers. Which explode.
** [[spoiler: Cristina]], the third ghoul, has four tentacles coming from her back that can let her shoot electricity, morph into things to protect her, and be remade from scratch should they be destroyed. This isn't including the ensuing healing factor she gets [[spoiler: which can be nullified with Ronnie's tail]].
** [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]], the fourth and seemingly final ghoul, barely seems to suffer any changes besides gaining a tail [[spoiler: that lets her override Cristina's healing factor]].
** It can also be inferred that they can get stronger through cannibalism, since [[spoiler: once Cristina cannibalizes Leni, she gains her powers]].
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* [[spoiler: OurGhoulsAreDifferent]]: OurGhoulsAreDifferent: They are created using a serum, and seem to be based on the [[Anime/TokyoGhoul Tokyo Ghoul]] anime:
''Manga/TokyoGhoul'':
**[[spoiler: Leni]], [[spoiler:Leni]], the first ghoul, can morph her arms into weapons or defensive equipment. She also feels no pain, though it's implied [[spoiler: Cristina that [[spoiler:Cristina did that]].
**[[spoiler: Lori]], [[spoiler:Lori]], the second ghoul, has wings and can shoot sharp feathers. Which explode.
**[[spoiler: Cristina]], [[spoiler:Cristina]], the third ghoul, has four tentacles coming from her back that can let her shoot electricity, morph into things to protect her, and be remade from scratch should they be destroyed. This isn't including the ensuing healing factor she gets [[spoiler: which [[spoiler:which can be nullified with Ronnie's tail]].
**[[spoiler: Ronnie [[spoiler:Ronnie Anne]], the fourth and seemingly final ghoul, barely seems to suffer any changes besides gaining a tail [[spoiler: that [[spoiler:that lets her override Cristina's healing factor]].
** It can also be inferred that they can get stronger through cannibalism, since[[spoiler: once [[spoiler:once Cristina cannibalizes Leni, she gains her powers]].
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** It can also be inferred that they can get stronger through cannibalism, since
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The entire plot happens because Lincoln was [[WhatAnIdiot stupid enough]] to bring a weird VR game without asking anything about it first.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The entire plot happens because Lincoln was [[WhatAnIdiot stupid enough]] enough to bring a weird VR game home without asking anything about it first.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: After [[spoiler: electrocuting herself and being sent to the hospital]], [[spoiler: Cristina]]'s internal organs are now in an erratic state, and she needs to be electrocuted every once in a while, or else something bad will happen.
** Even before then, she shows many notable signs of [[TheSociopath sociopathy]], yet nothing is ever explicitly stated.
** Even before then, she shows many notable signs of [[TheSociopath sociopathy]], yet nothing is ever explicitly stated.
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Removing leftovers from Getting Crap Past The Radar cleanup.
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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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** Lana and Lola: While Lana is more laid back towards their relationship, Lola is much more protective. Taken UpToEleven after the "Lynn" incident.
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** Lana and Lola: While Lana is more laid back towards their relationship, Lola is much more protective. Taken UpToEleven Exaggerated after the "Lynn" incident.
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* KnifeNut: [[spoiler: After her obsession takes hold, Lucy starts spending more time around knives]].
** In chapter 33, [[spoiler: Lisa becomes this while under the control of Agape]].
** In chapter 33, [[spoiler: Lisa becomes this while under the control of Agape]].
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* AdultFear: [[spoiler: A [[TheSociopath sociopathic]] girl uses mind-controlling helmets and a game to play god with the feelings of your children, only leaving out a specific child-Lincoln-while the rest get manipulated and emotionally damaged by the experience]]. Feel terrified yet?
** In fact, [[spoiler: Cristina]] is one massive case of this. Your unsupervised child [[spoiler: discovers rule 34]] and is not only driven mad by it's existence, but completely determined to [[spoiler: break some people related to it]] all in revenge for the kid of their crush, and not only did you not see this coming, but as you try to find out more about it, the kid continues to do heinous actions just to reach their end goal.
** [[spoiler: Towards the end, every single character gets injured in some way, shape, or form and ends up in the hospital.]]
** In fact, [[spoiler: Cristina]] is one massive case of this. Your unsupervised child [[spoiler: discovers rule 34]] and is not only driven mad by it's existence, but completely determined to [[spoiler: break some people related to it]] all in revenge for the kid of their crush, and not only did you not see this coming, but as you try to find out more about it, the kid continues to do heinous actions just to reach their end goal.
** [[spoiler: Towards the end, every single character gets injured in some way, shape, or form and ends up in the hospital.]]
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* PolarOppositeTwins/OppositesAttract: Shown with the pairings:
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* PolarOppositeTwins/OppositesAttract: PolarOppositeTwins[=/=]OppositesAttract: Shown with the pairings:
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Virtual!Lincoln and Virtual!Lynn's little comedic conversation leaves Lynn laughing on the floor.
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* NotSoDifferent: Literally: [[spoiler: In the final battle Lori, Leni, Ronnie Anne and Cristina all take Ghoul Serum. HeWhoFightsMonsters much?]]
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* HoldingItForAFriend: When the Luna and Luan realize what the first helmet has installed, Lincoln shouts that it wasn’t his.
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: As Lisa reveals, [[spoiler: it's possible to reach a negative progress bar in the sim date game itself]], which signifies how much [[spoiler: the virtual girls hate you]].
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* HatedByAll: As Lisa reveals, [[spoiler: it's possible to reach a negative progress bar in the sim date game itself]], which signifies how much [[spoiler: the virtual girls hate you]].
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnFemale: During the Resort arc, Lynn starts molesting Lana [[spoiler: thanks to the chip's effects]], but luckily enough, Lola and Lori stop before it gets any worse. [[AvertedTrope This is not shown to be okay]] and [[RealityEnsues not only is Lynn left terribly guilty over the whole incident, but Lana is particularly left shaken and traumatized from the ordeal]].
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnFemale: During the Resort arc, Lynn starts molesting Lana [[spoiler: thanks to the chip's effects]], but luckily enough, Lola and Lori stop before it gets any worse. [[AvertedTrope This is not shown to be okay]] and [[RealityEnsues [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone not only is Lynn left terribly guilty over the whole incident, but Lana is particularly left shaken and traumatized from the ordeal]].
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* NotADate: Luna tries to pass this off to the other neighbors as she and Luan go to their date, since [[RealityEnsues them being discovered as a lesbian couple would bring them unwanted attention]].
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* NotADate: Luna tries to pass this off to the other neighbors as she and Luan go to their date, since [[RealityEnsues them being discovered as a lesbian couple would bring them unwanted attention]].attention.
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* OnlyOneName: Cristina is like this for most of the story. [[RealityEnsues And because she doesn't know her surname either, Lisa can't justify her search across the park to the park ranger, and is promptly kicked out]].
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* OnlyOneName: Cristina is like this for most of the story. [[RealityEnsues And because she doesn't know her surname either, Lisa can't justify her search across the park to the park ranger, and is promptly kicked out]].out.
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* RealityEnsues: Getting stabbed doesn't end well. Hospitals leave you alone for some time. Incest rarely works out.
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''The Loud Sim Date'' is a Drama/Mystery ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' Fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3916495/Exotos135 Exotos135]]. It started in September 14th, 2016 and ended in January 21st, 2017, with 51 chapters.
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''The Loud Sim Date'' is a Drama/Mystery ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' Fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3916495/Exotos135 Exotos135]].Creator/{{Exotos135}}. It started in September 14th, 2016 and ended in January 21st, 2017, with 51 chapters.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Surprisingly enough, early on the fic implies [[spoiler: lesbian sex]] between the sisters. Though, justified since until chapter 20, this fic was rated T.
** Example: Chapter 9 has Leni whisper to Lori that they should sleep together in the hotel room
** Later, Lori wakes up in her room without her clothes on with Leni sleeping next to her and no recollection of what happened the night before. This happens much later, however.
** Example: Chapter 9 has Leni whisper to Lori that they should sleep together in the hotel room
** Later, Lori wakes up in her room without her clothes on with Leni sleeping next to her and no recollection of what happened the night before. This happens much later, however.
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%% * GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Surprisingly enough, early on the fic implies [[spoiler: lesbian sex]] between the sisters. Though, justified since GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until chapter 20, 01 June 2021. If you are reading this fic was rated T.
** Example: Chapter 9 has Leni whisper to Lori that they should sleep togetherin the hotel room
** Later, Lori wakes up in her room without her clothes on with Leni sleeping next to her and no recollection of what happenedfuture, please check the night before. This happens much later, however.trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
** Example: Chapter 9 has Leni whisper to Lori that they should sleep together
** Later, Lori wakes up in her room without her clothes on with Leni sleeping next to her and no recollection of what happened
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* YourCheatingHeart: It takes Lori a while to figure it out, but once she realizes she's technically cheating on Bobby with Virtual Leni, she's ''mortified''.
** Taken UpToEleven when she [[spoiler: then goes, dumps him and then starts dating the real Leni]].
** Taken UpToEleven when she [[spoiler: then goes, dumps him and then starts dating the real Leni]].