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* OddNameOut: Kyle Nolan and Corporal Timothy Michaels (the latter of whom was the [[NominalImportance only Marine named]] in the original fanfic) are the only ([[MultiethnicName purely]]) anglophone names among a BadassCrew with names like Tu'uta Tangilanu, Julianne Engelbrektsson and Asha Beckett.
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* OddNameOut: Kyle Nolan and Corporal Timothy Michaels (the latter of whom was the [[NominalImportance only Marine named]] in the original fanfic) are the only ([[MultiethnicName purely]]) purely anglophone names among a BadassCrew with names like Tu'uta Tangilanu, Julianne Engelbrektsson and Asha Beckett.
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Now fandom trends, not specific fanworks. And TALIJ about changing in work so Miranda is just adaptational.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: In the games, Miranda, though [[KnightTemplar being a part of Cerberus]], and having both a few KickTheDog moments and an [[IceQueen frosty]] exterior, is still a [[GoodIsNotNice good person deep down]] and a JerkWithAHeartOfGold who at the end of 2 [[DefectorFromDecadence leaves Cerberus]] [[NotWhatISignedUpFor after at last seeing that they go too far]]. This version on the other hand, is a full-blown KnightTemplar and just another evil Cerberus agent, as well as something of a SmugSnake. To be fair though, it could be said that it's Miranda pre CharacterDevelopment. The author's admitting to not liking Miranda [[RonTheDeathEater may have also influenced his approach to the character.]]]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: In the games, Miranda, though [[KnightTemplar being a part of [[NebulousEvilOrganization Cerberus]], and having both a few KickTheDog moments and an [[IceQueen frosty]] exterior, is still a [[GoodIsNotNice good person deep down]] and a JerkWithAHeartOfGold who at the end of 2 [[DefectorFromDecadence leaves Cerberus]] after [[NotWhatISignedUpFor after at last seeing that they go too far]]. This version on the other hand, is a full-blown KnightTemplar and just another evil Cerberus agent, as well as something of a SmugSnake. To be fair though, SmugSnake, though it could be said that it's Miranda her pre CharacterDevelopment. The author's admitting admitted to not liking Miranda [[RonTheDeathEater may have also influenced his approach to the disliking of character.]]]]]]
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** The Chief takes ''several'' in chapters 26 through 29, then realizes (somewhat) what a jerk he's being in chapter 32 when talking with Liara.
** [[spoiler: Miranda [[AdaptationalVillainy compared to her mainstream counterpart]], though also likely due to being her pre CharacterDevelopment and because of the [[RonTheDeathEater author's admitted dislike of the character.]]]]
** [[spoiler: Miranda [[AdaptationalVillainy compared to her mainstream counterpart]], though also likely due to being her pre CharacterDevelopment and because of the [[RonTheDeathEater author's admitted dislike of the character.]]]]
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** [[spoiler: Miranda [[AdaptationalVillainy compared to her mainstream counterpart]], though also likely due to being her pre CharacterDevelopment and because of the [[RonTheDeathEater author's admitted dislike of the character.]]]]
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** Saren to The Prophet of Truth. Both villains lead armies of religious fanatics whilst nursing a hatred of humanity and a penchant for lying. However, Truth was a NonActionBigBad and a DirtyCoward who simply threw waves of Covenant at The Chief and fled him. Saren on the other hand, is [[AuthorityEqualsAssKicking more than capable of throwing down with The Chief in a one-on-one fight]]. Also, despite his campaign of genocide, Truth was a rather distant figure as far as The Chief is concerned, while Saren [[TheGadfly does everything he can]] [[ItsPersonal to get under John's skin]].
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** Saren to The Prophet of Truth. Both villains lead armies of religious fanatics whilst nursing a hatred of humanity and a penchant for lying. However, Truth was a NonActionBigBad and a DirtyCoward who simply threw waves of Covenant at The Chief and fled him. Saren Saren, on the other hand, is [[AuthorityEqualsAssKicking [[RankScalesWithAsskicking more than capable of throwing down with The Chief in a one-on-one fight]]. Also, despite his campaign of genocide, Truth was a rather distant figure as far as The Chief is concerned, while Saren [[TheGadfly does everything he can]] [[ItsPersonal to get under John's skin]].
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Wrex teaches this aspect of Krogan culture to N'tho, via headbutt during the battle against the Thorian, after N'tho had been particularly mouthy to him.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Ever wondered what happened to Rtas 'Vadum? He's an ''Imperial Admiral'' now. Though this tends to be the case for Sangheli culture in general...
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Ever wondered what happened to Rtas 'Vadum? He's an ''Imperial Admiral'' now. Though this tends to be the case for Sangheli culture in general...
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* AlienArtsAreAppreciated: Not so much art as a whole culture, but a Mormon Church features at least one Sangheili and one Elcor in its congregation.
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* AlienArtsAreAppreciated: Not so much art as a whole culture, but a Mormon Church
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* POVSequel: Chapters 3-6 are actually the second and third chapters of The Last Spartan from the point of view of the Marines who personally thawed out The Master Chief.
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** On the trip to Feros, Liara is skeptical of becoming TheMedic given how little time she has to learn. Ashley [[GallowsHumor reassures]] her that she doesn't have to learn enough to save lives but that her job is to [[Machinima/RedVsBlue make people feel more comfortable...while they die]].
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** On the trip to Feros, Liara is skeptical of becoming TheMedic given how little time she has to learn. Ashley [[GallowsHumor reassures]] her that she doesn't have to learn enough to save lives but that her job is to [[Machinima/RedVsBlue [[WebAnimation/RedVsBlue make people feel more comfortable...while they die]].
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''"Everything is so...different." Chief said. "It's like the war never even happened."''\\
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5939286/1/The_Last_Spartan The Last Spartan]]'' is an AlternateUniverse ''Franchise/{{Halo}}''[=/=]''Franchise/MassEffect'' crossover FusionFic. After the prologue, a novelization of Halo 3's ending, a turian patrol discovers the remains of the ''Forward Unto Dawn'' floating in deep space...131 years after the events of the last game. In a historic moment, the [[SealedBadassInACan Master Chief]] is thawed out of his Cryo Pod and [[FishOutOfTemporalWater awakens to a whole new galaxy]], one where humanity has not only made peace with most of the former Covenant races, but has since joined [[TheFederation The Citadel Council]].
While initially nonplussed about some decisions humanity has made about joining the Citadel races, Spartan-117 and Cortana both overcome their culture shock while the former grudgingly overcomes decades of wartime xenophobia to secure humanity's place in the galaxy...by becoming a Spectre.
While initially nonplussed about some decisions humanity has made about joining the Citadel races, Spartan-117 and Cortana both overcome their culture shock while the former grudgingly overcomes decades of wartime xenophobia to secure humanity's place in the galaxy...by becoming a Spectre.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5939286/1/The_Last_Spartan The Last Spartan]]'' is an AlternateUniverse ''Franchise/{{Halo}}''[=/=]''Franchise/MassEffect'' crossover FusionFic. After the prologue, a novelization of Halo 3's ending, a turian patrol discovers the remains of the ''Forward Unto Dawn'' floating in deep space... 131 years after the events of the last game. In a historic moment, the [[SealedBadassInACan Master Chief]] is thawed out of his Cryo Pod and [[FishOutOfTemporalWater awakens to a whole new galaxy]], one where humanity has not only made peace with most of the former Covenant races, but has since joined [[TheFederation The the Citadel Council]].
While initially nonplussed about some decisions humanity has made about joining the Citadel races, Spartan-117 and Cortana both overcome their culture shock while the former grudgingly overcomes decades of wartime xenophobia to secure humanity's place in the galaxy... by becoming a Spectre.
While initially nonplussed about some decisions humanity has made about joining the Citadel races, Spartan-117 and Cortana both overcome their culture shock while the former grudgingly overcomes decades of wartime xenophobia to secure humanity's place in the galaxy... by becoming a Spectre.
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The simplest way to describe this crossover is [[JustForFun/XMeetsY Master Chief put in Commander Shepard's boots]], and for such a simple premise, it is ''awesome.''
It has also spawned two Spinoff fanfics, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8817206/1/Desperate-Measures Desperate Measures]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9116551/1/Last-of-An-Ancient-Breed-A-Side-Story-to-The-Last-Spartan Last of An Ancient Breed: A Side Story to The Last Spartan]]. Tropes for them go at the bottom of the page.
It has also spawned two Spinoff fanfics, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8817206/1/Desperate-Measures Desperate Measures]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9116551/1/Last-of-An-Ancient-Breed-A-Side-Story-to-The-Last-Spartan Last of An Ancient Breed: A Side Story to The Last Spartan]]. Tropes for them go at the bottom of the page.
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The simplest way to describe this crossover is [[JustForFun/XMeetsY Master Chief put in Commander Shepard's boots]], and for such a simple premise, it is ''awesome.''
boots]].
It has also spawned twoSpinoff spinoff fanfics, [[http://www.''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8817206/1/Desperate-Measures Desperate Measures]] Measures]]'' and [[http://www.''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9116551/1/Last-of-An-Ancient-Breed-A-Side-Story-to-The-Last-Spartan Last of An Ancient Breed: A Side Story to The Last Spartan]].Spartan]]''. Tropes for them go at the bottom of the page.
It has also spawned two
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* ActorAllusion: While walking around in a Marine uniform, the Chief introduces himself to Charles Saraccino as "Petty Officer Steven Downes," which happens to be the name of his voice actor.
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** While walking around in a Marine uniform, the Chief introduces himself to Charles Saraccino as "Petty Officer Steven Downes," which happens to be the name of his voice actor.
** While walking around in a Marine uniform, the Chief introduces himself to Charles Saraccino as "Petty Officer Steven Downes," which happens to be the name of his voice actor.
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* SuperReflexes: More significant than Chief's strength or toughness or speed, ''this'' is the main edge he has in the ''Mass Effect'' setting, usually accompanied by the recurring phrase "Spartan time kicked in". While there are plenty of big, scary alien races who are strong enough to tangle with a SPARTAN-II, none of them can match his thinking speed and reaction time (except sometimes the Geth). He can do things like pummel and execute a Krogan in a handful of seconds just by fighting so fast and precise it doesn't have the reflexes to defend itself, or [[spoiler:save a man who has a gun to his own head]].
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* PoliticallyIncorrectHero: Possibly The Arbiter. He doesn't approve of Kaidon Tyrannai's training Vorcha to be proper soldiers, but it's unclear if it's because of FantasticRacism or a more pragmatic reason.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectHero: PoliticallyIncorrectHero:
** Chief is ''mostly'' professional enough to not let it get in the way, but coming fresh out of the Human-Covenant War (when the rest of humanity has had over a century to bury the hatchet) means that his opinions lean somewhat xenophobic by galactic standards, towards aliens in general but especially the former Covenant species. In particular, he has the habit of referring to the latter by their old marine-given nicknames, which is very much not the preferred nomenclature anymore.
** Possibly The Arbiter. He doesn't approve of Kaidon Tyrannai's training Vorcha to be proper soldiers, but it's unclear if it's because of FantasticRacism or a more pragmatic reason.
** Chief is ''mostly'' professional enough to not let it get in the way, but coming fresh out of the Human-Covenant War (when the rest of humanity has had over a century to bury the hatchet) means that his opinions lean somewhat xenophobic by galactic standards, towards aliens in general but especially the former Covenant species. In particular, he has the habit of referring to the latter by their old marine-given nicknames, which is very much not the preferred nomenclature anymore.
** Possibly The Arbiter. He doesn't approve of Kaidon Tyrannai's training Vorcha to be proper soldiers, but it's unclear if it's because of FantasticRacism or a more pragmatic reason.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Ever wondered what happened to Rtas 'Vadum? He's an ''ImperialAdmiral'' now. Though this tends to be the case for Sangheli culture in general...
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Ever wondered what happened to Rtas 'Vadum? He's an ''ImperialAdmiral'' ''Imperial Admiral'' now. Though this tends to be the case for Sangheli culture in general...
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: During a tour of the Citadel, Ops Chief Beckett talks to Avina about the Relay Monument and notes how no one knows for sure the meaning the Protheans imposed on it. Beckett assumes the Protheans must have been "the original trolls of the galaxy." Come MassEffect3...
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: During a tour of the Citadel, Ops Chief Beckett talks to Avina about the Relay Monument and notes how no one knows for sure the meaning the Protheans imposed on it. Beckett assumes the Protheans must have been "the original trolls of the galaxy." Come MassEffect3...''VideoGame/MassEffect3'''...
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A DeadFic for almost two years, the first update in many months came on the 1st of January, 2017. After another seventeen months of inactivity though, the author announced on May 2, 2018 [[KilledOffForReal that he was ending the story for real this time]]. However, [[http://dinojakeswordworks.tumblr.com/post/176473639677/the-swirling-flames-and-dancing-lights-of-a-dying a July 31, 2018 post]] on DinoJake's Tumblr announced new chapters would be uploaded for both The Last Spartan and Last of An Ancient Breed by the latter story's author Zgamer.
The story was brought BackFromTheDead on December 31st, 2018 with three new chapters from Zgamer and an announcement that he would be taking over writing duties on the story under DinoJake's supervision.
The story was brought BackFromTheDead on December 31st, 2018 with three new chapters from Zgamer and an announcement that he would be taking over writing duties on the story under DinoJake's supervision.
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A DeadFic for almost two years, the first update in many months came on the 1st of January, 2017. After another seventeen months of inactivity though, the author announced on May 2, 2018 [[KilledOffForReal that he was ending the story for real this time]]. However, [[http://dinojakeswordworks.tumblr.com/post/176473639677/the-swirling-flames-and-dancing-lights-of-a-dying a July 31, 2018 post]] on DinoJake's [=DinoJake's=] Tumblr announced new chapters would be uploaded for both The Last Spartan and Last of An Ancient Breed by the latter story's author Zgamer.
The story was brought BackFromTheDead on December 31st, 2018 with three new chapters from Zgamer and an announcement that he would be taking over writing duties on the story underDinoJake's [=DinoJake's=] supervision.
The story was brought BackFromTheDead on December 31st, 2018 with three new chapters from Zgamer and an announcement that he would be taking over writing duties on the story under
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** Ashley calls Tali her [[StarWars "Dark Apprentice."]] Tali has no idea what she's talking about, claiming that they (the Migrant Fleet) didn't get many videos.
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** Ashley calls Tali her [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars "Dark Apprentice."]] Tali has no idea what she's talking about, claiming that they (the Migrant Fleet) didn't get many videos.
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* NotSoDifferent: After reaching the ExoGeni building and clearing it of Geth, the Chief muses on how much his otherwise rag-tag party has in common with his wartime squadmates.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: After reaching the ExoGeni building and clearing it of Geth, the Chief muses on how much his otherwise rag-tag party has in common with his wartime squadmates.
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* StartOfDarkness: Explicitly referred to as such in the author's notes for Chapter 19. When Garrus corners Dr. Saleon in his lab (after seeing [[MoralEventHorizon footage of a turian being turned into a combat form and catching him over a dead Asari he did the same to]]), [[spoiler: he locks him in a testing chamber and [[HoistByHisOwnPetard lets a Flood Infection form loose in it]].]]
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* StartOfDarkness: Explicitly referred to as such in the author's notes for Chapter 19. When Garrus corners Dr. Saleon in his lab (after seeing [[MoralEventHorizon footage of a turian being turned into a combat form and catching him over a dead Asari he did the same to]]), to), [[spoiler: he locks him in a testing chamber and [[HoistByHisOwnPetard lets a Flood Infection form loose in it]].]]
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* AintNoRule: While Hackett admits the idea of putting a revived Master Chief forward as a Spectre candidate is ridiculous on paper ([[CrazyAwesome in a manner of speaking]]), he immediately and eagerly {{Hand Wave}}s the issue by citing this trope. The Chief hasn't even been [[HumanPopsicle thawed]] by the time he gets behind the idea.
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* AintNoRule: While Hackett admits the idea of putting a revived Master Chief forward as a Spectre candidate is ridiculous on paper ([[CrazyAwesome ([[CrazyEnoughToWork in a manner of speaking]]), he immediately and eagerly {{Hand Wave}}s the issue by citing this trope. The Chief hasn't even been [[HumanPopsicle thawed]] by the time he gets behind the idea.
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** In true Franchise/MassEffect fashion, these hats come off quite often, and with the Covenant races to boot. Most prominent is N'tho, a Sangheili Spec Ops warrior who acts unusually informal and CrazyAwesome compared to the Elites we've seen in Halo canon. Likewise, while the few other hats have come off prominently, Kig-Yar, the GoddamnedBats of the Halo franchise, have settled into more benign mercantile professions...such as [[EvilLawyerJoke lawyers]].
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** In true Franchise/MassEffect fashion, these hats come off quite often, and with the Covenant races to boot. Most prominent is N'tho, a Sangheili Spec Ops warrior who acts unusually informal and CrazyAwesome awesome compared to the Elites we've seen in Halo canon. Likewise, while the few other hats have come off prominently, Kig-Yar, the GoddamnedBats of the Halo franchise, have settled into more benign mercantile professions...such as [[EvilLawyerJoke lawyers]].
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*** [[spoiler: And we see the next episode he was wrong- Chief released the Queen.]]
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** In practice however, they're still fighting "the peace." They're exponentially more aggressive in their efforts to become a Council race in TLS, with the stated goal of re-introducing AI and Slipspace once they gain the Council seat(which coincidentally would permit them to [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Treaty_of_Farixen triple their fleet size.]]).
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** In practice however, they're still fighting "the peace." They're exponentially more aggressive in their efforts to become a Council race in TLS, with the stated goal of re-introducing AI and Slipspace once they gain the Council seat(which coincidentally would permit them to [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Treaty_of_Farixen triple their fleet size.]]).]]) Further, they're helping to sponsor groups like "Slip To The Future," which advocate for aliens and alien governments to elect pro-Slipspace representatives, as well as advocate for governments that would support Slipspace Legalization to get Council Seats alongside humanity.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: [[spoiler: Invoked by Miranda when speaking to Kai Leng, asking him if all of the ODSTs were as bad as him or if he was just an exception]]
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* TokenEvilTeammate: [[spoiler: Invoked by Miranda when speaking to Kai Leng, asking him if all of the ODSTs [=ODSTs=] were as bad as him or if he was just an exception]]
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** N'tho speculates one is afoot with the Chief at its center, pointing out rumors that the Chief is dating either Liara or Ashley, speculating that [[BiTheWay Kaidan]] may have a crush on him, and that even Tali might see something in him. [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend The Chief and Kaidan insist otherwise]].
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** N'tho speculates one is afoot with the Chief at its center, pointing out rumors that the Chief is dating either Liara or Ashley, speculating that [[BiTheWay Kaidan]] Kaidan may have a crush on him, and that even Tali might see something in him. [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend The Chief and Kaidan insist otherwise]].
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* {{Adorkable}}: Liara; she can't even order food without Cortana's help when she visits a human restaurant.
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** Ashley mentions that there are biotball teams called the [[Franchise/DragonAge Gray Wardens and the Blood Mages]].
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* TheNeedsOfTheMany: The reason that the Assembly gives for [[spoiler: encouraging mankind to join the Citadel, giving up some fleet power, slipspace, and AI. While a war between Turians and the UNSC would ultimately lead to a human victory, it would also pull in the former Covenant allies and the other Citadel races. This would lead to decades or centuries of border wars against polities who have turned guerrilla warfare into an ''artform,'' costing countless lives.]]
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** Tali is, for the most part, kind, friendly, and a good soldier willing to put herself in harm's way to save others... but when it comes to Cortana or other AI, she's not afraid to be the first one to point out that AI could turn on them, or that the Geth are responsible for her current situation.
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* AuthorAppeal: "So yeah. I just invented [[spoiler: Mgalekgolo Vanguards]]. Why? [[RuleOfCool Fuck you, that's why]]."
%%* AxCrazy[=/=]PsychoForHire: [[spoiler: Kai Leng, [[UpToEleven and even moreso than in the actual game!]]]]
* BadassGrandpa:
** [[spoiler: The Arbiter. Even for a species as long-lived as Sangheili, he admits he's in the Twilight of his life. However, he still singlehandedly assaults a mercenary compound, and even after reuniting with Chief and Garrus, continues to hold his own and sends enemies fleeing in terror.]]
** Technically, the Chief counts as this as well, but Cryo-freezing has a lot to do with it. Even counting that, he's still pushing fifty.
%%* AxCrazy[=/=]PsychoForHire: [[spoiler: Kai Leng, [[UpToEleven and even moreso than in the actual game!]]]]
* BadassGrandpa:
** [[spoiler: The Arbiter. Even for a species as long-lived as Sangheili, he admits he's in the Twilight of his life. However, he still singlehandedly assaults a mercenary compound, and even after reuniting with Chief and Garrus, continues to hold his own and sends enemies fleeing in terror.]]
** Technically, the Chief counts as this as well, but Cryo-freezing has a lot to do with it. Even counting that, he's still pushing fifty.
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* BadassGrandpa:
** [[spoiler: The Arbiter. Even for a species as long-lived as Sangheili, he admits he's in the Twilight of his life. However, he still singlehandedly assaults a mercenary compound, and even after reuniting with Chief and Garrus, continues to hold his own and sends enemies fleeing in terror.]]
** Technically, the Chief counts as this as well, but Cryo-freezing has a lot to do with it. Even counting that, he's still pushing fifty.
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* BerserkButton:
** John [[TranquilFury doesn't appreciate]] Saren [[spoiler: calling him by his real name]].
** A meta example is the author launching into a rant over how he's angry the Jackals don't have their signature beaks in Halo4.
** John [[TranquilFury doesn't appreciate]] Saren [[spoiler: calling him by his real name]].
** A meta example is the author launching into a rant over how he's angry the Jackals don't have their signature beaks in Halo4.
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** A meta example is the author launching into a rant over how he's angry the Jackals don't have their signature beaks in Halo4.
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** Also averted with Terra Firma, as they think that spread of alien arts and cultures will erode human cultures and render them weak against potential threats.
** After the revelations and stress and broken pedistals of Eletania, N'tho is found with a pile of burritos. Apparently, Sangheli love burritos- their tube shape and their mouths work well together.
* DontYouDarePityMe: Tali has this as a pretty strong character trait. She gets angry at the Chief (not letting him explain himself) when he notes that the chief engineer shouldn't have given her the access code for the ship's accounts (thinking that she's a civilian and those are military resources) and accuses him of not trusting her because she's a Quarian. It does drive her to prove herself to be worthy of the Ground Team, and absolutely ''refuses'' to take any aid from Cortana after TheReveal.
** While on the Citadel (and Reach) several squad members partake in activities that normally, Shepard takes care of as sidequests, such as scanning Keepers, investigating a murder threat, getting an undercover cop out of Chora's Den, and so on.
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** Brutes are cannibalistic, huge, berserk monsters. One does not expect one to have a Quarian fetish, nor to have a friend tell him point blank that "You need help."
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* WillfullyWeak: Essentially humanity's strategy when it comes to the Council. While giving up a large portion of its fleet, Slipspace, and AI would seem to be massive disadvantages- and they are- the humans are playing the long game. By joining the Council, they avoid another massive war like the Human-Covenant War, and gain access to a large number of new technologies. It might take a while, but eventually humanity is going to gain a Council Seat- they are exponentially more aggressive in this goal than in canon. This will allow them to triple the size of their fleets and put them in a position to start negotiating AI and Slipspace technology back, as well as give them a say in galactic politics to possibly prevent future wars.
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** One soldier that Chief talks to is ODST Vanderloo. Mark Vanderloo is the model whom Male Shepard's default appearance is based on.
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* CreatorProvincialism: As a "Squidhead," N'tho is fascinated with human culture, though much of the knowledge he shares focuses on Irish culture specifically. The author, incidentally, has mentioned being Irish. [[WriteWhatYouKnow Hmm...]]
** Are you talking about the parts where he said he was "Pour and Irish?" I always thought that was just a [[VideoGame/TeamFortress2 reference to something.]]
** Are you talking about the parts where he said he was "Pour and Irish?" I always thought that was just a [[VideoGame/TeamFortress2 reference to something.]]
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%* DeadpanSnarker: ''Saren'' of all people has a few moments
%* DeadpanSnarker: ''Saren'' of all people has a few moments
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* DeadpanSnarker: ''Saren'' of all people has a few
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* DisastrousDemonstration: The first Turian slipspace-capable ship (which the Alliance helped construct) was lost in an effort by the Alliance to validate slipspace as a viable form of FTL travel, [[AuthorsSavingThrow explaining why slipspace is illegal.]]
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* DisastrousDemonstration: The first Turian slipspace-capable ship (which the Alliance helped construct) was lost in an effort by the Alliance to validate slipspace as a viable form of FTL travel, [[AuthorsSavingThrow explaining why slipspace is illegal.]] [[spoiler: It is later revealed that the ship was deliberately sabotaged.]]
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** When Jondam Bau requests the aid of the Arbiter, he specifies that they should only take ''one'' ship to search for Halo. The Arbiter responds by indeed only taking one ship. The type of ship, however, is the same class of supercarrier that was used in Halo: Reach, namely, a ''twenty-seven kilometer long supercarrier'' which has enough soldiers and firepower to subjugate an entire planet.
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** When Jondam Bau requests the aid of the Arbiter, he specifies that they should only take ''one'' ship to search for Halo. The Arbiter responds by indeed only taking one ship. The type of ship, however, is the same class of supercarrier that was used in Halo: Reach, namely, a ''twenty-seven kilometer long supercarrier'' which has enough soldiers and firepower to subjugate an entire planet.planet, and is roughly three-quarters the size of the Citadel.
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* HiddenDepths: N'tho 'Sraom: Ascended Fanboy of the Master Chief, irreverant mid-battle singer, conspiracy theorist ([[TheCuckoolanderWasRight of sorts]])...and WarriorPoet (knowing human poetry--in N'tho's case, Shakespeare--is practically mandatory if you want to call yourself a [[{{Otaku}} Squidhead]] with a straight face). He's also written several thesis papers about alien cultures, and is able to hold a relatively sophisticated conversation about the sociological ramifications of the end of the Human-Covenant War, how it affected his species, and similar parallels in other races.
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* HiddenDepths: N'tho 'Sraom: Ascended Fanboy of the Master Chief, irreverant irreverent mid-battle singer, conspiracy theorist ([[TheCuckoolanderWasRight of sorts]])...and WarriorPoet (knowing human poetry--in N'tho's case, Shakespeare--is practically mandatory if you want to call yourself a [[{{Otaku}} Squidhead]] with a straight face). He's also written several thesis papers about alien cultures, and is able to hold a relatively sophisticated conversation about the sociological ramifications of the end of the Human-Covenant War, how it affected his species, and similar parallels in other races.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Used in an interesting way. The Arbiter, while on route to a mission, notes how ''strange'' the Sangheli are behaving with their squads of Unggoy compared to how they would act in the original trilogy (where the Unggoy were little more than slaves). He specifically spots one Sangheli acting as a DrillSergeantNasty to his Unggoy, but doing it in a humorous way (rather than just beating them or demanding that they do something), and another playing poker with his squad (and actually ''losing'' to one of his underlings).
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** There's a sitcom called "My Life With Bipbap," about an Asari and her bondmate, an Unggoy named Bipbap.
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per Trope Repair Shop, Jerkass Facade is being cut in favor of Hidden Heart Of Gold / Jerk With A Heart Of Gold.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: In the games, Miranda, though [[KnightTemplar being a part of Cerberus]], and having both a few KickTheDog moments and an [[IceQueen frosty]] [[JerkassFacade exterior]], is still a [[GoodIsNotNice good person deep down]] and a JerkWithAHeartOfGold who at the end of 2 [[DefectorFromDecadence leaves Cerberus]] [[NotWhatISignedUpFor after at last seeing that they go too far]]. This version on the other hand, is a full-blown KnightTemplar and just another evil Cerberus agent, as well as something of a SmugSnake. To be fair though, it could be said that it's Miranda pre CharacterDevelopment. The author's admitting to not liking Miranda [[RonTheDeathEater may have also influenced his approach to the character.]]]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: In the games, Miranda, though [[KnightTemplar being a part of Cerberus]], and having both a few KickTheDog moments and an [[IceQueen frosty]] [[JerkassFacade exterior]], exterior, is still a [[GoodIsNotNice good person deep down]] and a JerkWithAHeartOfGold who at the end of 2 [[DefectorFromDecadence leaves Cerberus]] [[NotWhatISignedUpFor after at last seeing that they go too far]]. This version on the other hand, is a full-blown KnightTemplar and just another evil Cerberus agent, as well as something of a SmugSnake. To be fair though, it could be said that it's Miranda pre CharacterDevelopment. The author's admitting to not liking Miranda [[RonTheDeathEater may have also influenced his approach to the character.]]]]
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->''"Penny for you thoughts, Chief?" Cortana asked, breaking the silence.''
->''"Everything is so...different." Chief said. "It's like the war never even happened."''
->''"It's definitely an adjustment." Cortana condeded. Chief turned back to the memorial, to all the names on that wall. That's when it truly dawned on him.''
->''"I'm the last one." he stated. "I'm the last Spartan."''
->''"Everything is so...different." Chief said. "It's like the war never even happened."''
->''"It's definitely an adjustment." Cortana condeded. Chief turned back to the memorial, to all the names on that wall. That's when it truly dawned on him.''
->''"I'm the last one." he stated. "I'm the last Spartan."''
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->''"Penny for you thoughts, Chief?" Cortana asked, breaking the silence.''
->''"Everything''\\
''"Everything is so...different." Chief said. "It's like the war never even happened."''
->''"It's"''\\
''"It's definitely an adjustment." Cortana condeded. Chief turned back to the memorial, to all the names on that wall. That's when it truly dawned on him.''
->''"I'm''\\
''"I'm the last one." he stated. "I'm the last Spartan."''
->''"Everything
''"Everything is so...different." Chief said. "It's like the war never even happened.
->''"It's
''"It's definitely an adjustment." Cortana condeded. Chief turned back to the memorial, to all the names on that wall. That's when it truly dawned on him.
->''"I'm
''"I'm the last one." he stated. "I'm the last Spartan."''
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