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* MasterApprenticeChain: Here it is revealed that [[spoiler:Melinda May]] trained Sharon in her Academy days, then Sharon being level 7 of Agent is [[spoiler:assigned a level 1 girl, Briar Rose Toussaint. In addition, Clint Barton also receives an apprentice, who is revealed as [[Characters/HawkeyeKateBishop Kate Bishop]].
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* MasterApprenticeChain: Here it is revealed that [[spoiler:Melinda May]] trained Sharon in her Academy days, then Sharon being level 7 of Agent is [[spoiler:assigned a level 1 girl, Briar Rose Toussaint. In addition, Clint Barton also receives an apprentice, who is revealed as [[Characters/HawkeyeKateBishop [[Characters/MarvelComicsKateBishop Kate Bishop]].
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* FakeOutMakeOut: As in the movie, but almost, [[spoiler: because Sharon just put her head on Steve's neck. Later in a covert mission in chapter 24 of Part II, it really happens (plus [[NotAgain Steve's funny reaction)]]]].
* FemaleGaze: Sharon says openly to Steve why people always look at him, [[EvenTheGuysWantHim no matter who]], even [[EatingtheEyeCandy she has moments like that with him]]. Natasha also does.
* FemaleGaze: Sharon says openly to Steve why people always look at him, [[EvenTheGuysWantHim no matter who]], even [[EatingtheEyeCandy she has moments like that with him]]. Natasha also does.
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* FakeOutMakeOut: As in the movie, but almost, [[spoiler: because [[spoiler:because Sharon just put her head on Steve's neck. Later in a covert mission in chapter 24 of Part II, it really happens (plus [[NotAgain [[OhNoNotAgain Steve's funny reaction)]]]].
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** Sharon says openly to Steve why people always look at him, [[EvenTheGuysWantHim no matter who]], even [[EatingtheEyeCandy she has moments like that with him]]. Natasha alsodoes.does.
** This is shown when Thor is described, also sometimes Steve when he exercises [[spoiler:and when Bucky takes off his shirt for a wound]].
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** Sharon says openly to Steve why people always look at him, [[EvenTheGuysWantHim no matter who]], even [[EatingtheEyeCandy she has moments like that with him]]. Natasha also
** This is shown when Thor is described, also sometimes Steve when he exercises [[spoiler:and when Bucky takes off his shirt for a wound]].
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* MrFanservice: this is shown when Thor is described, also sometimes Steve when he exercises [[spoiler: and when Bucky takes off his shirt for a wound]].
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* MasterApprenticeChain: Here it is revealed that [[spoiler:Melinda May]] trained Sharon in her Academy days, then Sharon being level 7 of Agent is [[spoiler:assigned a level 1 girl, Briar Rose Toussaint. In addition, Clint Barton also receives an apprentice, who is revealed as ComicBook/KateBishop.]][[Characters/HawkeyeKateBishop Kate Bishop]].
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** Catherine's fiance is named "Jessie" who shares the same first name as the [[Creator/JesseWilliams actor]] fancast to play him. Jessie is also a [[Series/GreysAnatomy surgeon]].
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** Catherine's fiance fiancé is named "Jessie" Jessie, who shares the same first name as the [[Creator/JesseWilliams actor]] fancast to play him. Jessie is also a [[Series/GreysAnatomy surgeon]].
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* AffectionateNickname: Sharon has several with Sam[[spoiler:, Trip, and Natasha]]. But mainly Share-Bear and Kit-Kat with [[HeterosexualLifePartners her best friend of all time Catherine]].
* AllForNothing: With the revelation of [[invoked]][[FanNickname HydraGate]] all of Peggy's work and the career of Sharon in SHIELD turns to dust.
* AllForNothing: With the revelation of [[invoked]][[FanNickname HydraGate]] all of Peggy's work and the career of Sharon in SHIELD turns to dust.
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* AffectionateNickname: Sharon has several with Sam[[spoiler:, Trip, and Natasha]]. But mainly Share-Bear "Share-Bear" and Kit-Kat "Kit-Kat" with [[HeterosexualLifePartners her best friend of all time time, Catherine]].
* AllForNothing: With the revelation of [[invoked]][[FanNicknameHydraGate]] HydraGate]], all of Peggy's work and the Sharon's career of Sharon in SHIELD turns to dust.
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** In Part I of the story, Catherine says that if Sharon will truly fall in love with someone, then she would be the first one to whom she would tell her. [[spoiler:This happens in part II]].
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** In Part I of the story, Catherine says that if Sharon will were to truly fall in love with someone, then she Catherine would be the first one to whom she would tell her. [[spoiler:This happens in part II]].
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-->'''Catherine:''' “Yeah! That guy. The douche from that male acapella group, the Chimes. He was such a tool.”
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* {{Workaholic}}: Trying to get over her frustration, Sharon gets into her CIA job like hell. [[spoiler:[[WhatTheHellHero Because of that, she almost misses Catherine's wedding.]]]].
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* {{Workaholic}}: Trying to get over her frustration, Sharon gets into her CIA job like hell. [[spoiler:[[WhatTheHellHero Because of that, she almost misses Catherine's wedding.]]]].]]]]
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* SpottingTheThread: Taking the place of Natasha, [[spoiler: Sharon knowing that Steve [[BadLiar is a terrible liar]] goes to investigate the Winter Soldier in the SHIELD Archives and receive the video of him in the elevator. In a complex web of ideas she comes to the conclusion that he received the drive from Fury and the only place where he could hide it in a short time was the hospital.]]
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* SpottingTheThread: Taking the place of Natasha, [[spoiler: Sharon [[spoiler:Sharon knowing that Steve [[BadLiar is a terrible liar]] goes to investigate the Winter Soldier in the SHIELD Archives and receive the video of him in the elevator. In a complex web of ideas she comes to the conclusion that he received the drive from Fury and the only place where he could hide it in a short time was the hospital.]]
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* WithholdingTheirName: When Sharon is first assigned to work with Steve, she refuses to give her actual name, telling Steve to refer to her as Agent 13. Steve eventually tries throwing random names at her to see if he can guess what her real name is with Sharon [[TheBet agreeing to answer truthfully if one of his guesses is correct]]. In ''You and I Were Fireworks'', she gives Steve her first name [[spoiler: and Zola informs Steve of Sharon's surname and thus relation to [[FirstLove Peggy Carter]]. When Steve confronts Sharon about why she didn't tell him who she was, Sharon explains that she kept her relation to Peggy a secret to most of SHIELD want her career to be based on being the founder's great niece and that she didn't tell Steve out of fear of it ruining their partnership.]]
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* WithholdingTheirName: When Sharon is first assigned to work with Steve, she refuses to give her actual name, telling Steve him to refer to her as Agent 13. Steve eventually tries throwing random names at her to see if he can guess what her real name is with Sharon [[TheBet agreeing to answer truthfully if one of his guesses is correct]]. In ''You and I Were Fireworks'', she gives Steve her first name [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and Zola informs Steve of Sharon's surname and thus relation to [[FirstLove Peggy Carter]]. When Steve confronts Sharon about why she didn't tell him who she was, Sharon explains that she kept her relation to Peggy a secret to most of SHIELD want SHIELD, not wanting her career to be based on being the founder's great niece great-niece and that she didn't tell Steve out of fear of it ruining their partnership.]]
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* WithholdingTheirName: When Sharon is first assigned to work with Steve, she refuses to give her actual name, telling Steve to refer to her as Agent 13. Steve eventually tries throwing random names at her to see if he can guess what her real name is with Sharon [[TheBet agreeing to answer truthfully if one of his guesses is correct]]. In ''You and I Were Fireworks'', she gives Steve her first name [[spoiler: and Zola informs Steve of Sharon's surname and thus relation to [[FirstLove Peggy Carter]]. When Steve confronts Sharon about why she didn't tell him who she was, Sharon explains that she kept her relation to Peggy a secret to most of SHIELD want her career to be based on being the founder's great niece and that she didn't tell Steve out of fear of it ruining their partnership.]]
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* ADatewithRosiePalms: [[spoiler: reasonable for someone who hadn't sex in almost a year]].
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* MasterApprenticeChain: Here it is revealed that [[spoiler:Melinda May]] trained Sharon in her Academy days, then Sharon being level 7 of Agent is [[spoiler:assigned a level 1 girl, Briar Rose Toussaint. In addition, Clint Barton also receives an apprentice, which is revealed as ComicBook/KateBishop.]]
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* MasterApprenticeChain: Here it is revealed that [[spoiler:Melinda May]] trained Sharon in her Academy days, then Sharon being level 7 of Agent is [[spoiler:assigned a level 1 girl, Briar Rose Toussaint. In addition, Clint Barton also receives an apprentice, which who is revealed as ComicBook/KateBishop.]]
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Like the rest of the MCU, a little bit of the reality smash:
** In Part I, Steve's depression and complex guilt over Bucky's death are given among other problems of trust that brings about being a [[FishoutofTemporalWater man out of time]].
** Having been a big part of her life, Sharon losing her job at SHIELD has a couple of existential crises.
** On her first mission, Sharon's apprentice, Bri, has an almost fatal mistake by hesitating a shoot, but as Sharon said; her first mission did not end perfect too, and one always improves with time.
** Also, in some special chapters we can have an idea of hidden traumas that focus on Sam (in his period in the Army), Nat (The Red Room) [[spoiler:and Bucky (due to the Winter Soldier brainwashing).]]
** After the missions, we are given precise descriptions of the bruises, wounds and bleeding that the characters can get, plus the consequences of that.
** In Part I, Steve's depression and complex guilt over Bucky's death are given among other problems of trust that brings about being a [[FishoutofTemporalWater man out of time]].
** Having been a big part of her life, Sharon losing her job at SHIELD has a couple of existential crises.
** On her first mission, Sharon's apprentice, Bri, has an almost fatal mistake by hesitating a shoot, but as Sharon said; her first mission did not end perfect too, and one always improves with time.
** Also, in some special chapters we can have an idea of hidden traumas that focus on Sam (in his period in the Army), Nat (The Red Room) [[spoiler:and Bucky (due to the Winter Soldier brainwashing).]]
** After the missions, we are given precise descriptions of the bruises, wounds and bleeding that the characters can get, plus the consequences of that.
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''The Fourth of July'' is a Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse fanfic series written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Agent25/pseuds/Agent25 Agent25]] and hosted on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn, with the first part serving as a direct sequel of ''Film/TheAvengers2012'' and prequel to ''Film/CaptainAmericaTheWinterSoldier'', and stars [[ComicBook/Agent13 Sharon Carter, aka Agent 13]], showing her life and story while she develops her relationship with [[Characters/MCUCaptainAmerica Steve Rogers]], who's adapting to this brand new world and at first does not trust her very much.
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''The Fourth of July'' is a Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse fanfic series written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Agent25/pseuds/Agent25 Agent25]] org/users/gogentledarknight/pseuds/gogentledarknight gogentledarknight]] and hosted on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn, with the first part serving as a direct sequel of ''Film/TheAvengers2012'' and prequel to ''Film/CaptainAmericaTheWinterSoldier'', and stars [[ComicBook/Agent13 Sharon Carter, aka Agent 13]], showing her life and story while she develops her relationship with [[Characters/MCUCaptainAmerica Steve Rogers]], who's adapting to this brand new world and at first does not trust her very much.
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** Catherine's fiance is named "Jessie" who shares the same first name as the [[Creator/JesseWilliams actor]] [[HypotheticalCasting fancast to play him]]. Jessie is also a [[Series/GreysAnatomy surgeon]].
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** Catherine's fiance is named "Jessie" who shares the same first name as the [[Creator/JesseWilliams actor]] [[HypotheticalCasting fancast to play him]].him. Jessie is also a [[Series/GreysAnatomy surgeon]].
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* HypotheticalCasting: The author always gives pictures with descriptions of every new character introduced in the story.
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** The second chapter of Part I gives the background of the Battle of New York, and show what Sharon did during the event. It's mentioned too that Christine Everhart was reporting for W-Hih World News.
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** The second chapter of Part I gives the background of the Battle of New York, and show what Sharon did during the event. It's mentioned too that Christine Everhart was reporting for W-Hih WHIH World News.
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* ActorAllusion: One of the guesses Steve gives to Sharon while trying to figure out what her name is "{{Creator/Emily|VanCamp}}". Hilariously, he comments that she doesn't look like an Emily.
** The boyfriend of Catherine is named suspiciously "Jessie", but his profile it's like the [[Creator/JesseWilliams actor]] and his also a surgeon.
** The boyfriend of Catherine is named suspiciously "Jessie", but his profile it's like the [[Creator/JesseWilliams actor]] and his also a surgeon.
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* ActorAllusion: ActorAllusion:
** One of the guesses Steve gives to Sharon while trying to figure out what her name is "{{Creator/Emily|VanCamp}}". Hilariously, he comments that she doesn't look like an Emily.
**The boyfriend of Catherine Catherine's fiance is named suspiciously "Jessie", but his profile it's like "Jessie" who shares the same first name as the [[Creator/JesseWilliams actor]] and his [[HypotheticalCasting fancast to play him]]. Jessie is also a surgeon.[[Series/GreysAnatomy surgeon]].
** One of the guesses Steve gives to Sharon while trying to figure out what her name is "{{Creator/Emily|VanCamp}}". Hilariously, he comments that she doesn't look like an Emily.
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** On a mission in London, [[spoiler: SHIELD has to work with the MI-5 and the agent Brian Braddock to capture a terrorist named Ross Horton who wants to copy the attempt of UsefulNotes/GuyFawkes on November 5th]]. [[spoiler:Brian Braddock is the alias of the ComicBook/CaptainBritain and Ross Horton is one of his enemies in the comics]].
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** On a mission in London, [[spoiler: SHIELD has to work with the MI-5 and the agent Brian Braddock to capture a terrorist named Ross Horton who wants to copy the attempt of UsefulNotes/GuyFawkes on November 5th]]. [[spoiler:Brian 5th. Brian Braddock is the alias of the ComicBook/CaptainBritain and Ross Horton is one of his enemies in the comics]].
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* CallBack: Some gestating:
** In Part I of the story, Catherine says that if Sharon will truly fall in love with someone, then she would be the first one to whom she would tell her. [[spoiler: It happens exactly in part II]].
** Once Natasha and Steve did a mission pretending to be a married couple. On a future mission, she says it can be just as fun as "Turk and Caicos".
** Steve and Sharon come to an agreement in which he would teach her to practice with his shield. A few chapters later they prove that tactic.
** In Part I of the story, Catherine says that if Sharon will truly fall in love with someone, then she would be the first one to whom she would tell her. [[spoiler: It happens exactly in part II]].
** Once Natasha and Steve did a mission pretending to be a married couple. On a future mission, she says it can be just as fun as "Turk and Caicos".
** Steve and Sharon come to an agreement in which he would teach her to practice with his shield. A few chapters later they prove that tactic.
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* CallBack: Some gestating:
** In Part I of the story, Catherine says that if Sharon will truly fall in love with someone, then she would be the first one to whom she would tell her. [[spoiler: It happens exactly in part II]].
**Once Natasha and Steve did a mission pretending to be a married couple. On a future mission, she says it can be just as fun as "Turk and Caicos".
** Steve and Sharon come to an agreement in which he would teach her to practice with his shield. A few chapters later they prove that tactic.Caicos".
** In Part I of the story, Catherine says that if Sharon will truly fall in love with someone, then she would be the first one to whom she would tell her. [[spoiler: It happens exactly in part II]].
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** Steve and Sharon come to an agreement in which he would teach her to practice with his shield. A few chapters later they prove that tactic.
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** Sharon in Part I has interactions with [[Series/AgentsofSHIELD several agents at that time of SHIELD, like Victoria Hand, Bobbi Morse, Melinda May, most were in the "funeral" of Phil Coulson. Fitz-Simmons, John Garret and Grant Ward]] are also mentioned.
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** Sharon in Part I has interactions with [[Series/AgentsofSHIELD several agents at that time of SHIELD, like Victoria Hand, Bobbi Morse, Melinda May, most of whom were in attending the "funeral" of Phil Coulson. Fitz-Simmons, John Garret and Grant Ward]] are also mentioned.
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** In Part I of the story, Catherine says that if Sharon will truly fall in love with someone, then she would be the first one to whom she would tell her. [[spoiler:This happens in part II]].
** Steve and Sharon come to an agreement in which he would teach her to practice with his shield. A few chapters later they prove that tactic.
** In Part I of the story, Catherine says that if Sharon will truly fall in love with someone, then she would be the first one to whom she would tell her. [[spoiler:This happens in part II]].
** Steve and Sharon come to an agreement in which he would teach her to practice with his shield. A few chapters later they prove that tactic.
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* MomentKiller: When Sharon and her FWB were on a steamy session in her office, [[spoiler:Steve shows up to ask for a moment]].
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* MomentKiller: When Sharon and her FWB were on having a steamy session in her office, [[spoiler:Steve shows up to ask for a moment]].
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: For her reasons and those of the plot, Sharon in SHIELD is only known as the [[YouAreNumber6 Agent 13]]. Steve in all of Part I and the beginning of Part II only calls her "13".
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: For her reasons and those of the plot, Sharon in SHIELD is only known as the [[YouAreNumber6 Agent 13]]. Steve in all of Part I and the beginning of Part II only calls her "13"."Thirteen".
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* TheScream: While Catherine and Jessie are sleeping at 2:00 a.m. they heard something trying to get into the apartment, so they go to investigate, and when the door it's about to open, they only react by screaming... [[spoiler: to Sharon, who was only removing the lock to sneak in]].
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* TheScream: While Catherine and Jessie are sleeping at 2:00 a.m. when they heard hear something trying to get into the apartment, so they go to investigate, and when the door it's about to open, they only react by screaming... [[spoiler: to Sharon, who was only removing the lock to sneak in]].
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* SpottingTheThread: Taking the place of Natasha, [[spoiler: Sharon knowing that Steve [[BadLiar is a terrible liar]] goes to investigate the Winter Soldier in the SHIELD Archives and receive the video of him in the elevator]]. [[spoiler:In a complex web of ideas she comes to the conclusion that he received the drive from Fury and the only place where he could hide it in a short time was the hospital.]]
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* SpottingTheThread: Taking the place of Natasha, [[spoiler: Sharon knowing that Steve [[BadLiar is a terrible liar]] goes to investigate the Winter Soldier in the SHIELD Archives and receive the video of him in the elevator]]. [[spoiler:In elevator. In a complex web of ideas she comes to the conclusion that he received the drive from Fury and the only place where he could hide it in a short time was the hospital.]]
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight: [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy After some drinks]] [[spoiler:during the bachelorette party of Catherine]], Sharon is found in this situation.
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight: [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy After some drinks]] [[spoiler:during the Catherine's bachelorette party of Catherine]], party]], Sharon is found in this situation.
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** [[spoiler:This also results in his relationship with Sam]].
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** [[spoiler:This also results in his her relationship with Sam]].
