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* TheBeard: Ditzy preemptively tries to fend off Trixie's unrequited affection by claiming that Time Turner is her boyfriend.
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Where others see an eccentric rural town, Ditzy sees [[AlienGeometries spatial anomalies]], [[TheFairFolk Fae creatures]], and {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. And she's committed to protecting her friends and neighbors--and their sanity--from all of the aforementioned. Ditzy eventually finds out that she isn't the only pony protecting Equestria from the shadows, and that the world is stranger than even she thinks.

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Where others see an eccentric rural town, Ditzy sees [[AlienGeometries spatial anomalies]], [[TheFairFolk Fae creatures]], and {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. And she's committed to protecting her friends and neighbors--and neighbors -- and their sanity--from sanity -- from all of the aforementioned. Ditzy eventually finds out that she isn't the only pony protecting Equestria from the shadows, and that the world is stranger than even she thinks.



* PunctuationShaker: Lampshaded:
-->[Twilight said,] “So then. Ditzy, how do you know about Th’cl’br’gh the Overpunctuated? The one you called the Eyeless King?”\\
[Ditzy said,] “Wait, wait, ‘the Overpunctuated’? Unicorn scholars ''actually'' called him that?”\\
“In that particular field, a sense of humor goes a long way towards fighting off the creeping madness.”

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* PunctuationShaker: Lampshaded:
Lampshaded in regards to a historic figure called Th'cl'br'gh, whom historians refer to as Th'cl'br'gh the Overpunctuated.
-->[Twilight said,] “So said] "So then. Ditzy, how do you know about Th’cl’br’gh Th'cl'br'gh the Overpunctuated? The one you called the Eyeless King?”\\
King?"\\
[Ditzy said,] “Wait, said] "Wait, wait, ‘the Overpunctuated’? 'the Overpunctuated'? Unicorn scholars ''actually'' called him that?”\\
“In
that?"\\
"In
that particular field, a sense of humor goes a long way towards fighting off the creeping madness."



-->[Constable Peeler said,] “It always starts with the little rules. Littering. Leash regulations. Curfews. But it never ends there, Ditzy. If we let those hooligans get away with this, what will we ultimately get?”\\
“Anarchy,” Ditzy answered, her voice flat.\\
“Anar-- Yes, precisely!” Peeler beamed with satisfaction.

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-->[Constable Peeler said,] “It said] "It always starts with the little rules. Littering. Leash regulations. Curfews. But it never ends there, Ditzy. If we let those hooligans get away with this, what will we ultimately get?”\\
“Anarchy,”
get?"\\
"Anarchy,"
Ditzy answered, her voice flat.\\
“Anar-- "Anar-- Yes, precisely!” precisely!" Peeler beamed with satisfaction.



* StoryboardingTheApocalypse: Ditzy dreams about the possible results if the Eyeless King returns. She sees a jagged wasteland under a yellow sky--a sky with cracks in it.

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* StoryboardingTheApocalypse: Ditzy dreams about the possible results if the Eyeless King returns. She sees a jagged wasteland under a yellow sky--a sky -- a sky with cracks in it.



* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Referenced. When Ditzy hears her radio playing exactly the same broadcast as yesterday, she quickly concludes that she's stuck in a GroundhogDayLoop, and fears that ''"I’ll go mad with power just before I go mad with insanity!"''

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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Referenced. When Ditzy hears her radio playing exactly the same broadcast as yesterday, she quickly concludes that she's stuck in a GroundhogDayLoop, and fears that ''"I’ll ''"I'll go mad with power just before I go mad with insanity!"''



-->[Ditzy said,] “How about we step into my place and talk it over?” [...]\\
[Twilight said,] “Yes, of course, Ditzy. But before you close that door, let me warn you that Princess Celestia answered my letter and ''authorized me to'' … Wait, did you say ‘talk it over’? Yes!”

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-->[Ditzy said,] “How said] "How about we step into my place and talk it over?” [...over?"[...]\\
[Twilight said,] “Yes, said] "Yes, of course, Ditzy. But before you close that door, let me warn you that Princess Celestia answered my letter and ''authorized me to'' … Wait, to'' ... wait, did you say ‘talk 'talk it over’? Yes!”over'? Yes!"



-->“''Golden Ink!'' Be quiet and listen to me this instant, or I will ''tell your parents'' about this when they get home!”\\
Ditzy wasn’t sure whether the ultimatum itself or the use of Dinky’s real name had the greater effect on the filly.

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-->“''Golden --->"''Golden Ink!'' Be quiet and listen to me this instant, or I will ''tell your parents'' about this when they get home!”\\
home!"\\
Ditzy wasn’t wasn't sure whether the ultimatum itself or the use of Dinky’s Dinky's real name had the greater effect on the filly.



-->''What?'' Ditzy thought. ''Has she ever called me by my real name before?''

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-->''What?'' --->''What?'' Ditzy thought. ''Has she ever called me by my real name before?''



* OrphanedPunchline: Every time Trixie or Ditzy tell each other a story, we see the very beginning and very end, with little indication of how they got from one point to the other. But one instance is a subversion:
-->“... And that’s why amending laws in the Equestrian government is so darn complicated.”\\
“What?” Ditzy said. “That has nothing to do with the story you were telling!”\\
“Yes. Trixie was [[SecretTest testing to see if you were paying attention]].”

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* OrphanedPunchline: Every time Trixie or Ditzy tell each other a story, we see the very beginning and very end, with little indication of how they got from one point to the other. But one One instance is a subversion:
-->“...
subversion, as Trixie deliberately ended a story on a note that made no sense to check if Ditzy was paying attention.
-->"...
And that’s that's why amending laws in the Equestrian government is so darn complicated.”\\
“What?”
"\\
"What?"
Ditzy said. “That "That has nothing to do with the story you were telling!”\\
“Yes.
telling!"\\
"Yes.
Trixie was [[SecretTest testing to see if you were paying attention]]."



-->“Well, Trixie’s rather more familiar than she’d prefer with getting chased out of towns by angry mobs. And angry wives. And angry husbands. Word of advice, Dizzy: don’t mess around with married ponies. It’s just not worth the extra headache.”

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-->“Well, Trixie’s -->"Well, Trixie's rather more familiar than she’d she'd prefer with getting chased out of towns by angry mobs. And angry wives. And angry husbands. Word of advice, Dizzy: don’t don't mess around with married ponies. It’s It's just not worth the extra headache."



-->“Dizzy, Dizzy, stop and think about what you’re saying to Trixie. You’re waving your butt at her and asking her to climb on … Is ''that'' the signal you want to send?”

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-->“Dizzy, -->"Dizzy, Dizzy, stop and think about what you’re you're saying to Trixie. You’re waving your butt at her and asking her to climb on … Is on... is ''that'' the signal you want to send?”send?"
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* IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow:
-->“And why else would [Pinkie] and Dash spend so much time alone?”\\
“Because they’re ''prank buddies''?”\\
“Ooooooohhh,” the Mayor said, winking at Ditzy, “is that what the kids are calling it these days? Say no more, Ditzy, say no more.”
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* OverlyLongName: ''Ditzy Doo'' is actually short for ''Detsella Renombrada Morningdew''. And her dad's full name is ''[=LaMontagne=] Burningspear Morningdew'', but he normally goes by [=LaMonte=] Doo.


* AwesomeMcCoolname: ''Ditzy Doo'' is actually short for ''Detsella Renombrada Morningdew''. And her dad's full name is ''[=LaMontagne=] Burningspear Morningdew'', but he normally goes by [=LaMonte=] Doo.
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* RantInducingSlight: Ditzy starts to flip out when she realizes her radio needs to be repaired. Carrot Top points out that it's really not that big a deal, and Ditzy agrees--and proceeds to mentally flip out over the fact that she was flipping out. Then she realizes she has a parasite influencing her brain chemistry, and ''that's'' the real reason she's flipping out.
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* TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday: Le Livres Perdus, a Canterlot bookstore in a secluded back alley where Twilight acquires the journal. It's got AlienGeometries; the owner is something ''else'' masquerading as a pony; and when Twi tries to return to the store at the very end, the entire alley is gone.

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* TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday: Le Les Livres Perdus, a Canterlot bookstore in a secluded back alley where Twilight acquires the journal. It's got AlienGeometries; the owner is something ''else'' masquerading as a pony; and when Twi tries to return to the store at the very end, the entire alley is gone.
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* InSeriesNickname: The story reconciles the multiple names for some of the characters by making some of them nicknames. Ditzy Doo is the real name; "Derpy Hooves" is a nickname. Carrot Top's legal name is Golden Harvest, and Bon Bon's legal name is Sweetie Drops--and both of them prefer their nicknames over their real names. And Dinky Doo's legal name is Golden Ink. This becomes a plot point when Dr. Hooves misses the point and thinks that those ponies are all spies, and their nicknames are their ''alternate identities''.

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* InSeriesNickname: The story reconciles the multiple names for some of the characters by making some of them nicknames. Ditzy Doo is (a shortening of) the real name; "Derpy Hooves" is a nickname. Carrot Top's legal name is Golden Harvest, and Bon Bon's legal name is Sweetie Drops--and both of them prefer their nicknames over their real names. And Dinky Doo's legal name is Golden Ink. This becomes a plot point when Dr. Hooves misses the point and thinks that those ponies are all spies, and their nicknames are their ''alternate identities''.

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* MysticalCityPlanning: Discovered twice.
** In ''Alarm Clock'', Ditzy discovers that Ponyville's Town Hall has the same floor plan as the ancient temple of an Eldritch Abomination. And that other ponies have accidentally completed the ritual to summon that monster.
** In the sequel ''Beauty Will Tear Us Apart'', Ditzy researches other buildings by the same architect, and finds that the Goggle Heights Art Museum has the same layout as a Hyperborean Echo Labyrinth, and is capable of creating monsters out of sound waves.
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* BackstoryInvader: Some force from another universe is altering the past to insert new characters, and altering everypony's memories to match. Only the ponies with [[FourthWallObserver fourth wall awareness]] retain RippleEffectProofMemory. When Maud Pie pops into existence, Pinkie is a bit disturbed at suddenly gaining an older sister. When [[BrokenMasquerade Twilight Sparkle learns of the fourth wall]], she abruptly regains memories of being an only child, from before her older brother Shining Armor was retconned in.



* RememberTheNewGuy: Happens in-universe. Neither Shining Armor nor Maud Pie were ever mentioned before their introductory episodes, because they ''literally didn't exist'' until immediately beforehand. When they did spring into existence, everypony's memories were altered to accommodate them.
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** (This was ''true'' in Gen 1, where they had a mirror that created a Baby version of the mare who stood in front of it.)

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* FantasyKeepsake: Resonius has vaguely disturbing dreams about another realm, with creatures resembling frogs and giant crabs. [[spoiler:He gets even more disturbed when he wakes up one morning with a crab-creature's leg sticking out of his mouth. Still alive.]]
* GoneHorriblyRight: Resonius experiments on his magic in hope of [[NextTierPowerUp boosting his raw spellcasting power]]. It works... but it gives him [[NoManShouldHaveThisPower power that nopony should have]].



* HeroicRROD: Resonius's experiment involves channelling higher-than-normal volumes of magic through his horn. When he pushes too much magic, his horn breaks, and he goes unconscious for three days.



* FantasyKeepsake: Resonius has vaguely disturbing dreams about another realm, with creatures resembling frogs and giant crabs. [[spoiler:He gets even more disturbed when he wakes up one morning with a crab-creature's leg sticking out of his mouth. Still alive.]]
* GoneHorriblyRight: Resonius experiments on his magic in hope of [[NextTierPowerUp boosting his raw spellcasting power]]. It works... but it gives him [[NoManShouldHaveThisPower power that nopony should have]].
* HeroicRROD: Resonius's experiment involves channelling higher-than-normal volumes of magic through his horn. When he pushes too much magic, his horn breaks, and he goes unconscious for three days.



* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:When the shop owner realizes that his plan to corrupt Twilight Sparkle has failed, he throws her out of the shop and trashes the whole place in a rage.]]

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* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:When When the villain[[spoiler:ous shop owner owner]] realizes that his [[spoiler:that his]] plan to [[spoiler:to corrupt Twilight Sparkle has has]] failed, he throws [[spoiler:throws her out of the shop and and]] trashes the whole place in a rage.]]
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* HeadDesk: [[spoiler:When the shop owner realizes that his plan to corrupt Twilight Sparkle has failed]], because he misunderstood her, [[spoiler:he starts his VillainousBreakdown with some]]:
--> He dropped his face onto the counter with a loud thud, kicking up another dust cloud.\\
“Oh!” Twilight said. “Are you—”\\
''“Get out,”'' the stallion hissed. He slammed his face several more times, until dust clouds completely obscured the room, until the wood cracked beneath him.
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* {{Paperworkaholic}}: Twilight is jealous of the top-secret classes that Ditzy Doo gets to attend. Ditzy tries to console her by mentioning how many of the courses involves boring paperwork, but that just makes Twilight even more jealous.
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* WillReturnCaption: The author's note on the final chapter ends with ''"Ditzy Doo and Doctor Hooves will return..."''

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* UnbelievableSourcePlot: Ditzy must save Ponyville from the Eyeless King--and help her friends with other higher-dimensional weirdness along the way--without revealing her TrueSight to ponies who will think she's crazy.

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* MeddlesomePatrolman: Constable Peeler interferes with Ditzy's world-saving, because he finds it awfully suspicious that she's out so late, and she can't explain what she's up to.
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* StartsStealthilyEndsLoudly: Ditzy sneaks into Fluttershy's henhouse in the dead of the night to steal an egg. She gets the egg without alerting anyone--then trips and makes enough noise to send the chickens into a frenzy, which wakes Fluttershy.


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* WrongRestaurant: Carrot Top messes with her waiter at the local diner by asking if she can order something from the "carnivore menu".

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** Second, Ditzy dreams that she's in a ska band, about to play a career-making live show, but she missed all the band's practice sessions and doesn't how to play the songs. [[NotWearingPantsDream And she's forgot to bring her suit, too.]]

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** Second, Ditzy dreams that she's in a ska band, about to play a career-making live show, but she missed all the band's practice sessions and doesn't remember how to play the songs. [[NotWearingPantsDream And she's forgot to bring her suit, too.]]


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* BrickJoke: The setup is a scene where Trixie steals Ditzy's letter and writes her own note to Ditzy's parents, narrating aloud as she writes. When Ditzy grabs the letter back, she has an odd reaction to Trixie's additions. The punchline comes in ''Split Eyes''.


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* BrickJoke: The setup from ''Black Magic Mare'' gets its punchline here: we see what Trixie actually writes to Ditzy's parents, and it's much nicer than what Trixie ''says'' she's writing.


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* HostileShowTakeover: The Great and Powerful Trixie briefly takes over as narrator, when she decides to add something to one of Trixie's letters.

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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: One draft of chapter 2 introduces Time Turner, who offers to take Pinkie back to the past so they can stop the events of the first chapter. The author abandons when he remembers [[MagicAIsMagicA time travel couldn't do that in previous stories]].

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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: One draft of chapter 2 introduces Time Turner, who offers to take Pinkie back to the past so they can stop the events of the first chapter. The author abandons drops this idea when he remembers [[MagicAIsMagicA time travel couldn't do that in previous stories]].
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: This fic was written to look as though Pinkie actually broke into ''our'' reality and convinced the RealLife Meta Four to cancel the story.

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* AssPull: One rejected draft for chapter 2 introduces brand-new medical technology--with absolutely zero foreshadowing--so Ditzy Doo and Nurse Redheart can make a full recovery, even though they literally died in the last chapter.

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* AssPull: One rejected draft for chapter 2 introduces brand-new medical technology--with absolutely zero foreshadowing--so Ditzy Doo and Nurse Redheart can make a full recovery, even though they literally died in the last chapter.
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/395761/the-hesperus-gate The Hesperus Gate]]''. Sequel to ''Den Fjerde Væg''. Something goes very, very wrong. Pinkie Pie must take desperate measures to set everything right.



* BalefulPolymorph: The curse subjects the Princess to a slow-acting version of this trope, where injuries she receives over the course of a day cause her body to supernaturally change. Sharp rocks cut her hooves, leaving her with permanent holes through her legs. Sharp tree branches tear her fur off, leaving her with black, chitinous skin. And so on.


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* TransformationHorror: The curse subjects the Princess to a slow-acting transformation, where injuries she receives over the course of a day cause her body to supernaturally change. Sharp rocks cut her hooves, leaving her with permanent holes through her legs. Sharp tree branches tear her fur off, leaving her with black, chitinous skin. And so on.


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* AssPull: One rejected draft for chapter 2 introduces brand-new medical technology--with absolutely zero foreshadowing--so Ditzy Doo and Nurse Redheart can make a full recovery, even though they literally died in the last chapter.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The author decides to take this series in a "new direction". So the prologue involves Twilight Sparkle transforming into a monster, then killing Ditzy Doo and Nurse Redheart. Fortunately, the author gets talked out of continuing in this direction.
* DeadFic: Played with. The surface-level story is abandoned, with only a prologue and a partial draft of chapter 2 written. The meta story concerns ''why'' the author abandoned this fic, and it does get something of a conclusion.
* TheGlomp: Upon confirming that Ditzy isn't actually dead, Twilight celebrates by tackle-hugging her.
* HostileShowTakeover: One "chapter" is just a string of gibberish, with an author's note that "I didn’t write any of that." That's because Pinkie broke through the FourthWall and tried to rewrite the story, but couldn't work the keyboard with her hooves.
* IJustWriteTheThing: In his first note, the author says Pinkie wouldn't follow his original outline for the chapter, and almost seemed to have a mind of her own. That second point is much more literally true than he suspects.
* ImmediateSelfContradiction: When asked how she's feeling, Nurse Redheart answers "Can't complain," then begins complaining.
* INeverSaidItWasPoison: What tips Twilight off that her "bad dream" was not actually a dream.
-->“Only the best for my friends! All the better for chasing away bad dreams about icky monsters, right?”\\
Twilight gulped her mouthful down. “Pinkie,” she said, setting her plate back on the mini-table. “I didn’t say anything about monsters. How did you know there was a monster in my dream?”\\
“Oh.” Pinkie’s eyes widened, and then her grin stretched so far, it seemed to extend beyond the sides of her face. “Lucky guess?”
* NestedStoryReveal: One draft for chapter 2 reveals that the prior chapter was actually a vision of what ''could'' happen, which Celestia is showing to Twilight.
* NoodleIncident:
-->... ever since the Pudding Incident, [Pinkie] was no longer allowed to bring her official Welcome Wagon inside Ponyville Hospital.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Pinkie Pie breaks through the fourth wall, befriends her own author, and convinces him to completely change the story. But since Pinkie left the narrative to do all of that, the readers can't see any of it. All they can see is Pinkie's effect on the published story.
* PaintingTheMedium: The "Author's Notes" are actually part of the narrative. For a brief while, the story was officially marked as "Cancelled" on Fimfic, but that scared away potential readers, so it was changed to "Complete".
* {{Planimal}}: Twilight gets transformed into a monstrous pony-plant hybrid, with sharp fangs and tentacle-like branches.
* RageAgainstTheAuthor: {{Downplayed|Trope}}. Pinkie has strenuous objections to the direction the story takes. But she convinces the author to write something different by befriending him, not by attacking.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: One draft of chapter 2 introduces Time Turner, who offers to take Pinkie back to the past so they can stop the events of the first chapter. The author abandons when he remembers [[MagicAIsMagicA time travel couldn't do that in previous stories]].
-->THIS IS BREAKING MY OWN RULES FOR TIME TRAVEL
* SmokeOut: Pinkie throws a ''cake'' on the floor, then disappears in the resulting explosion.
* ThatWasNotADream: When the events of the prologue get {{Cosmic Retcon}}ned out of existence, Twilight initially thinks her [[RippleEffectProofMemory memories]] were just a particularly vivid nightmare. Pinkie encourages that interpretation, but accidentally tips Twilight off that it wasn't a dream after all.
* TrivialTitle: Celestia [[TitleDrop mentions the Hesperus Gate]] in the prologue, implying that it's some kind of crucial MacGuffin for the author's original story outline. But the story goes completely off the rails immediately afterwards, so the Hesperus Gate never shows up or gets a proper explanation.
* VaguenessIsComing: Celestia and Luna's conversation at the end of the prologue.
-->Seated on her throne, Celestia closed her eyes and slowly nodded. “Indeed. I believe the situation is even more dire than you think.”\\
“Are you implying …”\\
“Yes, precisely that. ''It'' has returned.”
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: ''All'' of the plot points introduced in the first chapter are complete {{Red Herring}}s, and none of them get explained or resolved.
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* DividedWeFall: Twilight Sparkle, Dr. Hooves, and Constable Peeler are all well-intentioned, but all of them hinder Ditzy's quest to save Ponyville, because Ditzy can't say what she's doing, and they conclude she's up to something sinister.

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* BizarreBabyBoom: An aftereffect of the Great Bloop: "And, during the following June, July, and August, every foal born to Pasture citizens had red eyes and a silver mane. These “Bloop babies” were unusually long-lived, but otherwise normal ponies."

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* BizarreBabyBoom: An aftereffect of the Great Bloop: "And, Bloop:
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during the following June, July, and August, every foal born to Pasture citizens had red eyes and a silver mane. These “Bloop babies” were unusually long-lived, but otherwise normal ponies."



* MindRape: [[spoiler:Upon understanding his RealityWarper powers, Resonius uses it to change Pitch Drop's sexual orientation.]] Upon realizing what he's done, he changes her mind back immediately. And he's horrified at himself for stooping to that.

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* MindRape: [[spoiler:Upon understanding his RealityWarper powers, Resonius uses it to change Pitch Drop's sexual orientation.]] Upon realizing When he realizes what he's done, he he's appropriately horrified and changes her mind back immediately. And he's horrified at himself for stooping to that.



* RippleEffectProofMemory: Done half-way: characters with full fourth wall awareness retain memories from before various retcons, but they also "remember" the current version of their backstory as well. And in Twilight's case, discovering the fourth wall caused her to suddenly regain her memories of events that had been overwritten.

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* RippleEffectProofMemory: Done half-way: characters with full fourth wall awareness retain memories from before various retcons, but they also "remember" the current version of their backstory as well. And in Twilight's case, discovering the fourth wall caused causes her to suddenly regain her memories of events that had been overwritten.
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A series of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics by Tropers/MetaFour, mostly centering on Ditzy Doo (aka "Derpy Hooves")--a pegasus from Ponyville's weather patrol who sees the world a bit [[TrueSight differently]] than everyone around her.

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A series of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics by Tropers/MetaFour, mostly centering on Ditzy Doo (aka "Derpy Hooves")--a Hooves") -- a pegasus from Ponyville's weather patrol who sees the world a bit [[TrueSight differently]] than everyone around her.
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* NoiselessWalker: Ditzy Doo can walk silently, by employing magic and paper bags to channel the sounds of her hooves into another dimension.
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* BaconAddiction: Hay bacon, of course. The Muffin Emporium offers spinach-basil-and-hay-bacon muffins. And Ditzy improves a potato salad by adding hay bacon bits to it.
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which were Frank Belknap Long's, incidentally, not Lovecraft's


* ShoutOut: The ''tyndalocurrs'', interdimensional monsters from the “corners between universes” attracted by angles and lattices and that can be summoned by spilled salt (it’s the sound of crystals on a flat surface that calls them) are a pretty clear shout-out to Creator/HPLovecraft's Hounds of Tindalos.

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* ShoutOut: The ''tyndalocurrs'', interdimensional monsters from the “corners between universes” attracted by angles and lattices and that can be summoned by spilled salt (it’s the sound of crystals on a flat surface that calls them) are a pretty clear shout-out to Creator/HPLovecraft's Hounds of Tindalos.Literature/TheHoundsOfTindalos.

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