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** Other StockDinosaurs to appear include ''Spinosaurus'', ''Carnotaurus'', ''Allosaurus'', and ''Tylosaurus''. A ''Plesiosaurus'' also makes a cameo in Episode 3.

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** Other StockDinosaurs to appear include ''Apatosaurus'', ''Triceratops'', ''Stegosaurus'', ''Archaeopteryx'', ''Dilophosaurus'', ''Spinosaurus'', ''Carnotaurus'', ''Allosaurus'', and ''Tylosaurus''. A ''Plesiosaurus'' also makes a cameo in Episode 3.
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* DeusExMachina: [[spoiler:The Cretaceous lily, complete with a ''{{Tangled}}'' reference. Though to be fair, [[ChekhovsGun it did make one previous appearance,]] in which Vi had sent it to Adam as a bouquet.]]

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* DeusExMachina: [[spoiler:The Cretaceous lily, complete with a ''{{Tangled}}'' ''Disney/{{Tangled}}'' reference. Though to be fair, [[ChekhovsGun it did make one previous appearance,]] in which Vi had sent it to Adam as a bouquet.]]

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* FootFocus:
** A lot of the characters take their shoes off from time to time, and much attention is paid to their feet by other characters as well as the narrative.
** For the intimidating kind, every time a large theropod [[GiantFootOfStomping steps on someone]] (usually Adam).



* GiantFootOfStomping: See FootFocus above.

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* AnimalsHateHim: [[spoiler:Ludlow, [[OmnicidalManiac appropriately enough.]] Taken to its logical conclusion with a BigDamnHeroes moment involving every animal in the history of animation... and a CruelAndUnusualDeath that would put Syndrome's CapeSnag to shame.]]



* AuthorAvatar: Adam/Terrordactyl, as outright stated by WordOfGod. He does diverge into his own character later on, however.

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* AuthorAvatar: Adam/Terrordactyl, Adam/Terrordactyl at first, as outright stated by WordOfGod. He does diverge into his own character later on, however.



** [[spoiler:Violet gets one in Episode 4, on a meta level no less. She becomes fiercely protective of the remnants of the plot and all the characters participating, and when the BigBad attempts to take over the story and kill everyone on board, she slowly and brutally breaks him and eventually ''[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath brutally kills him onscreen]]'' to make sure it survives.]]

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** [[spoiler:Violet gets one in Episode 4, on a meta level no less. She becomes fiercely protective of the remnants of the plot and all the characters participating, and when the BigBad attempts Let this much be known, do NOT attempt to take over the story and kill everyone on board, or she will slowly and brutally breaks him break you and eventually ''[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath brutally kills him onscreen]]'' to make sure it survives.]]kill you onscreen.]]'']]



* EvenTheDogIsAshamed: See AnimalsHateHim above.



* HumiliationConga: Takes up most of Episode 4. [[spoiler:Ludlow's plans, which are implied to have taken up over 15 years' preparation, are slowly and painfully unraveled through the course of ten chapters by the RoaringRampageOfRevenge of ''a single teenage girl, in a single night.'' Oh, and at the end of it all she has him killed in a ''brutally'' horrific manner, in front of all the cast members he'd been treating like dirt up to this point.]]

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* HumiliationConga: Takes up most of Episode 4. [[spoiler:Ludlow's plans, which are implied to have taken up over 15 years' preparation, are slowly and painfully unraveled through the course of ten chapters by the RoaringRampageOfRevenge of ''a single teenage girl, in a single night.'' Oh, and at the end of it all she has him killed in a ''brutally'' horrific truly horrifying manner, in front of all the cast members he'd been treating like dirt up to this point.]]



* MightyRoar: By none other than the king ([[spoiler:and later, [[ScaledUp queen]]]]) of Hollywood roars, ''TyrannosaurusRex.''

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* MightyRoar: By none other than the king ([[spoiler:and later, [[ScaledUp queen]]]]) of Hollywood roars, ''TyrannosaurusRex.'''' It's even used to cap off the epilogue after a partial TitleDrop.
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** Splashdown is ComicBook/{{Aquaman}} as voiced by AshtonKutcher, and Kate is [[{{Gen13}} Freefall]] as played by KatherineHeigl. Both of them also played a married couple in ''{{Killers}}''.

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** Splashdown is ComicBook/{{Aquaman}} as voiced by AshtonKutcher, Creator/AshtonKutcher, and Kate is [[{{Gen13}} Freefall]] as played by KatherineHeigl. Both of them also played a married couple in ''{{Killers}}''.
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** [[spoiler:Poor [[EldritchAbomination Dynacide]] gets Worfed by [[ThoseTwoGuys Splashdown and Thunderhead]], though with a little help from DonkeyKong and [[RhinoRampage Rambi]] on the side. And again by T-rex!Violet in Chapter 24.]]

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** [[spoiler:Poor [[EldritchAbomination Dynacide]] gets Worfed by [[ThoseTwoGuys Splashdown and Thunderhead]], though with a little help from DonkeyKong Franchise/DonkeyKong and [[RhinoRampage Rambi]] on the side. And again by T-rex!Violet in Chapter 24.]]
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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: DonkeyKong and friends, naturally.

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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: DonkeyKong Franchise/DonkeyKong and friends, naturally.
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[[TheIncredibles Violet and Dash Parr]], sibling Supers in training, recieve a call from [[VideoGame/{{Portal}} Aperture Science and Technology]] about an important project downtown. What the find is a discovery that will change their life forever -- a cloning facility housing the late Supers from the Golden Era. Narrowly escaping from the lab with their lives, they meet one of the clones, Sarah Squall a.k.a. Stratogale, and help her reunite with the rest of her family.

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[[TheIncredibles Violet and Dash Parr]], sibling Supers in training, recieve a call from [[VideoGame/{{Portal}} Aperture Science and Technology]] about an important project downtown. What the they find is a discovery that will change their life lives forever -- a cloning facility housing the late Supers from the Golden Era. Narrowly escaping from the lab with their lives, they meet one of the clones, Sarah Squall a.k.a. Stratogale, and help her reunite with the rest of her family.
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** In a probable TakeThat against ''JurassicPark III'', [[spoiler:T.rex!Violet brutally kills the ''Spinosaurus'' for trying to eat Jack-Jack, Tony, and Kari.]]

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** In a probable TakeThat against ''JurassicPark III'', ''Film/JurassicParkIII'', [[spoiler:T.rex!Violet brutally kills the ''Spinosaurus'' for trying to eat Jack-Jack, Tony, and Kari.]]
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** Thunderhead is [[TheMightyThor Thor]], only [[DumbMuscle dumber.]] He also smacks of [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove Kronk]] in that he is not very smart, is well-chested, and is voiced by PatrickWarburton.

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** Thunderhead is [[TheMightyThor Thor]], only [[DumbMuscle dumber.]] He also smacks of [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove Kronk]] in that he is not very smart, is well-chested, and is voiced by PatrickWarburton.Creator/PatrickWarburton.

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** "I saw the yellow eyes with their [[HellishPupils reptilian slits for pupils,]] and felt a chill of horror running down my spine."
** In general, any EldritchAbomination that turns up to fight the heroes is BOUND to elicit this reaction from everyone in the immediate vicinity, [[spoiler:Dynacide]] being a recurring example.
** [[spoiler:When Apogee first appears, she's already been possessed by Aperture (and it takes a little while for the Parrs to restore her back to normal). Naturally, this causes Colonel Pluck to respond with an understandably frightened, "Oh, ''no!'' [[CaptainObvious It's already started to sink in!"]]]]
** [[spoiler:Both Ripper and Ludlow get a few in later episodes. The most obvious being when Ludlow is confronted by the baby T-rexes. He apparently thinks they are angels about to take him off to the next life, [[KillerRabbit until they reveal their]] [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily teeth...]]]]

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** "I saw the yellow eyes with their [[HellishPupils reptilian slits for pupils,]] and felt a chill of horror running down my spine.Chapter 8: Adam gets this when he realizes that his old enemy has returned. "Hello, brother."
** In general, any EldritchAbomination that turns up to fight the heroes is BOUND to elicit this reaction from everyone Bob, David, and Dash gets one in the immediate vicinity, Chapter 13 when [[spoiler:Dynacide]] being a recurring example.
shows up.
--> '''Bob:''' My God... WHAT HAVE THEY DONE?!
** [[spoiler:When Apogee first appears, At the start of Chapter 17, Violet has a nightmare in which she's already been possessed by Aperture (and it takes in the scene in the first ''JurassicPark'' movie when the ''TyrannosaurusRex'' breaks out of its pen; she only has a little while moment to scream in terror when she sees the [[RedEyesTakeWarning blood-red eyes]] staring straight at her. She gets another OhCrap moment later in the same chapter [[GutPunch when a]] ''[[GutPunch real]]'' [[GutPunch T. rex shows up]].
** There's a MassOhCrap moment in Chapter 19 and Chapter 24, both times after the heroes are reunited... just in time
for the Parrs ''Spinosaurus'' to restore her show up.
** Another T-rex elicits this reaction from Violet, Helen, and Dash in Chapter 20, when they realize that it's smack in the middle of their campsite. From the same chapter, Vi gets a minor one when she discovers that [[spoiler:Velociripper has found his way
back to normal). Naturally, Isla Nublar.]]
** Chapter 21: [[PteroSoarer "It's a bird cage."]]
** Chapter 22: "Carnotaurus! EVERYONE, RUN FOR THE HILLS!" [[spoiler:And then the rest of the family get
this causes Colonel Pluck to respond when Violet is captured.]]
** Chapter 23: [[spoiler:Violet ''again'' gets this right before she gets injected
with an understandably frightened, "Oh, ''no!'' [[CaptainObvious It's already started to sink in!"]]]]
** [[spoiler:Both Ripper
dinosaur serum... and Ludlow get mutated into a few in later episodes. The most obvious being when Ludlow is confronted by T. rex.]]
** Chapter 28: Sarah and Vi upon meeting
the baby T-rexes. Dilophosaurus, in a ShoutOut to ''JurassicPark.'' Then again after Vi's fingers are [[FinGore melted to the bone]] by its acidic spit.
** Chapter 29, when the dinosaur army bursts out of the ''HMS BP'''s cargo hold:
--> '''David:''' "Oh ''[[PrecisionFStrike FUCK!]] '''EVERYONE OFF THE BOAT!!!'''''"
** Chapter 30: Tony and Kari get this when the Spinosaurus attacks the house. From the same chapter, there's also a MassOhCrap from the adult Supers as Kate [[UnstoppableRage goes berserk.]]
--> '''Frozone:''' [[JurassicPark Hold on to your butts...]]
** Chapter 31: A bunch of mooks get this after messing with the wrong character, resulting in a BringMyBrownPants moment. Helen puts it this way:
--> But then I noticed that the gang leader wasn't looking at me. His gaze was, very, very slowly, turning upwards. That was when we heard a snort behind us. I noticed that I'd been backed into the rock in the middle of the clearing.
--> ''[[ThatsNoMoon It was]] [[HollywoodChameleons not a]] [[TyrannosaurusRex rock.]]''
** Also from Chapter 31: Kari, when [[spoiler:Velociripper breaks into her house.]] Then Terrordactyl when a bunch of ''Kronosaurus'' turn up in the middle of the harbor fight. Then Splashdown upon seeing [[spoiler:Ludlow's]] army.
** Chapter 34: Helen actually utters the trope name upon seeing [[spoiler: GlaDOS.]] Everyone else is quick to join in the MassOhCrap moment [[spoiler: until Neo reveals that he managed to [[HeelFaceTurn turn the robot around.]]]] Then [[spoiler:Sarah and Dash get this when the HMS Bubonic Plague blows up, and Adam when Ripper reveals himself to be NotQuiteDead. And Ripper himself only has enough time to let out a BigNo when he is finally KilledOffForReal.]]
** Chapter 35: First Sarah, then Adam let out an anguished BigWordShout when they think that [[spoiler:Violet has been killed off. And in the end, Ludlow lets out "a long, loud, high-pitched, piercing scream of complete and absolute terror" before and while he really ''is'' [[KilledOffForReal killed off.]]
He apparently thinks they are angels about to take him off to the next life, [[KillerRabbit until they reveal their]] [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily teeth...]]]]
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* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:Ludlow goes through a rather disturbing one after Violet forces him through an epic HumiliationConga in Episode 4. After all of his contingency plans fail, he shoots her in the back, and when she is revived, he sings "Rock of Ages" and starts hallucinating about going to heaven. Too disgusted with the guy to want anything to do with him at this point, Violet sics the baby tyrannosaurs on him, and the last thing he hears is his own terrified screaming as [[FedToTheBeast he is ripped to shreds and devoured alive.]]]]

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** [[spoiler:GlaDOS, of all characters, makes one later, courtesy of Neo.]]

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** [[spoiler:GlaDOS, of all characters, makes one later, pulls this trope later in Episode 4, courtesy of Neo.]]



* AuthorAvatar: [[DeadpanSnarker Adam]], [[BadassBookworm ADAM]], ''[[GiantFlyer ADAM]]'', '''[[SomewhereAPaleontologistIsCrying ADAM]]'''. SERIOUSLY, HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY NOT SEE THIS COMING?!

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* AuthorAvatar: [[DeadpanSnarker Adam]], [[BadassBookworm ADAM]], ''[[GiantFlyer ADAM]]'', '''[[SomewhereAPaleontologistIsCrying ADAM]]'''. SERIOUSLY, HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY NOT SEE THIS COMING?!Adam/Terrordactyl, as outright stated by WordOfGod. He does diverge into his own character later on, however.



** [[spoiler:Violet gets one in Episode 4, on a meta level no less. She becomes fiercely protective of the remnants of the plot and all the characters participating, and when the BigBad attempts to take over the story and kill everyone on board, she ''[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath brutally kills him onscreen]]'' to make sure it survives.]]

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** [[spoiler:Violet gets one in Episode 4, on a meta level no less. She becomes fiercely protective of the remnants of the plot and all the characters participating, and when the BigBad attempts to take over the story and kill everyone on board, she slowly and brutally breaks him and eventually ''[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath brutally kills him onscreen]]'' to make sure it survives.]]


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* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler:Ludlow.]] Described under HumiliationConga.

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* BullyingADragon: [[spoiler:Ludlow. Technically it was a [[DinosaursAreDragons tyrannosaur]] he was bullying, but still...]]

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* BreakTheCutie: Sarah early on in Episode 4, when [[spoiler:she is separated from her family and is forced to watch the plot spiraling off a cliff due to Ludlow's "intervention." Ludlow also tries to invoke the trope on Violet by turning her into a TyrannosaurusRex, [[BewareTheNiceOnes and predictably he fails miserably.]]]]
** Played straighter with the baby T. rexes, albeit with potentially deadly consequences. When the protagonists meet them, they have been separated from their parents and each other, and it's heavily implied that [[spoiler:Ludlow flat-out abused them before they were rescued. Then he shoots their father in the face, ''right in front of them,'' when he comes to their defense. Deconstructed in that this fills the babies with so much pent-up rage and hatred for Ludlow that the moment they're finally freed, [[TheDogBitesBack they promptly turn on him and tear him to pieces.]]]]
* BullyingADragon: [[spoiler:Ludlow. Technically it was a [[spoiler:Ludlow's abusive behavior towards the [[DinosaursAreDragons tyrannosaur]] he was bullying, but still...tyrannosaurs]] is a near-literal case of this trope. With deadly consequences, of course.]]


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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:Ludlow gets hit by this after revealing himself to be an OmnicidalManiac and an abusive JerkAss. First Stormicide, then Ripper, then Violet, then the baby T. rexes all turn on him in rapid succession - and the latter even play this trope [[FedToTheBeast in a horrifyingly literal fashion]], ''onscreen'' no less.]]

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* AnachronismStew: Carnotaurus in 1980 (it was actually discovered in 1985)

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* AnachronismStew: Carnotaurus in 1980 (it was actually discovered in 1985)1985).



** [[spoiler:GlaDOS, of all characters, makes one later, courtesy of Neo.]]



** A lot of the characters take their shoes off from time to time, and much attention is paid to their feet by other characters as well as the narrative. Keep in mind that this fanfic was originally supposed to be part of the [[FetishFuel tickling fandom]], so this is somewhat justified.

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** A lot of the characters take their shoes off from time to time, and much attention is paid to their feet by other characters as well as the narrative. Keep in mind that this fanfic was originally supposed to be part of the [[FetishFuel tickling fandom]], so this is somewhat justified.



* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: [[RaptorAttack Velociraptors]] [[XMeetsY with]] [[MoreDakka GUNS.]]

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* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: [[RaptorAttack Velociraptors]] [[XMeetsY with]] [[MoreDakka GUNS.]]guns.]] Ripper in particular is part human, raptor, and robot.



* SeldomSeenSpecies: Most of the dinosaurs that show up are StockDinosaurs, of course, but who would have expected ''Platecarpus'', ''Ornithocheirus'', and ''friggin' [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mawsonia_(fish) Mawsonia]]'' of all species to have minor roles and cameos?

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* SeldomSeenSpecies: Most of the dinosaurs that show up are StockDinosaurs, of course, but who would have expected ''Platecarpus'', ''Ornithocheirus'', and ''friggin' [[http://en.''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mawsonia_(fish) Mawsonia]]'' of all species to have minor roles and cameos?



** PteroSoarer: Despite being billed as a ''Pteranodon'', Adam's pterosaur form [[http://fav.me/d3jrbr5 barely even looks like one.]] However, both he and WordOfGod clearly {{handwave}} this with the [[ItMakesSenseInContext perfectly acceptable excuse]] of being an Aperture bio-weapon.

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** PteroSoarer: Despite being billed as a ''Pteranodon'', Adam's pterosaur form [[http://fav.me/d3jrbr5 barely even looks like one.]] However, both he and WordOfGod clearly {{handwave}} this with the [[ItMakesSenseInContext perfectly acceptable excuse]] of as being an a genetically-engineered Aperture bio-weapon.



** There is one minor error on Adam's part, though that can be forgiven courtesy of RuleOfDrama. Adam implies that ''Pteranodon'' lived at the same time as ''Deinonychus'' - while in reality, the latter lived ''[[AnachronismStew 20 million years earlier.]]''

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** There is one minor error on Adam's part, though that can be forgiven courtesy of RuleOfDrama. Adam implies that ''Pteranodon'' lived at the same time as ''Deinonychus'' - while in reality, the latter lived ''[[AnachronismStew [[AnachronismStew 20 million years earlier.]]'']]



* TickleTorture=/=FriendlyTickleTorture: Glados loves to use this interrogation method on her test subjects. It helps to know that this fanfiction originally stemmed from the [[FetishFuel tickling fandom,]] so it's only natural that there are a few playful tickle scenes as well.

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* TickleTorture=/=FriendlyTickleTorture: TickleTorture[=/=]FriendlyTickleTorture: Glados loves to use this interrogation method on her test subjects. It helps to know that this fanfiction originally stemmed from the [[FetishFuel tickling fandom,]] so it's only natural that subjects, and there are a few playful tickle scenes as well.



* TheWorfEffect: And ''HOW.''
** The raptors are capable of killing the best of [[GreatWhiteHunter Great White Dinosaur Hunters]] - but that doesn't stop them being defeated by '''children.''' Granted, said children did have superpowers, but still - [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot Raptors with GUNS!]] [[MemeticMutation Y U NO]] KillAllHumans?!

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* TheWorfEffect: And ''HOW.''
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** The raptors are capable of killing the best of [[GreatWhiteHunter Great White Dinosaur Hunters]] - but that Hunters]]. That doesn't stop them being defeated by '''children.''' Granted, said children did have superpowers, but still - [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot Raptors with GUNS!]] [[MemeticMutation Y U NO]] KillAllHumans?!children, though to be fair, the latter had super-powers and were on their own home turf.
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* DeusExMachina: [[spoiler:The Cretaceous lily, complete with a ''{{Tangled}}'' reference. Though to be fair, [[ChekovsGun it did make one previous appearance,]] in which Vi had sent it to Adam as a bouquet.]]

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* DeusExMachina: [[spoiler:The Cretaceous lily, complete with a ''{{Tangled}}'' reference. Though to be fair, [[ChekovsGun [[ChekhovsGun it did make one previous appearance,]] in which Vi had sent it to Adam as a bouquet.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: Calling Adam a "dinosaur" will lead to this trope, [[spoiler:especially after he's been ForcedToWatch his girlfriend being brutally tortured. He breaks out of his holding tank as a result, leading to a rare moment when Ripper actually ''flees'' the scene.]]
** Taken UpToEleven when [[spoiler:Violet discovers how messed up Ludlow truly is. Since she happens to have been turned into a six-ton T. rex that's ImmuneToBullets, well...]]
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* DinosaursAreDragons: Subverted with Terrordactyl, but [[spoiler:played straight with V-Wrex.]]

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* DeusExMachina: [[spoiler:The Cretaceous lily, complete with a ''{{Tangled}}'' reference. Though to be fair, [[ChekovsGun it did make one previous appearance,]] in which Vi had sent it to Adam as a bouquet.]]
* DinosaursAreDragons: Subverted with Terrordactyl, Terrordactyl subverts this trope due to his friendly nature, but [[spoiler:played straight with V-Wrex.]][[spoiler:V-Wrex, a savage, spiky TyrannosaurusRex who isn't afraid to kill and eat the soldiers who antagonize her, plays it so straight, it's scary. Her MomentOfAwesome at the end of the final battle is even accompanied by [[StuffBlowingUp the HMS Kraken exploding]] behind her!]]


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* TorsoWithAView: [[spoiler:Violet gets this when Ludlow shoots her in the back. She gets better, thanks to the DeusExMachina above.]]
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* HumiliationConga: Takes up most of Episode 4. [[spoiler:Ludlow's plans, which are implied to have taken up over 15 years' preparation, are slowly and painfully unraveled through the course of ten chapters by the RoaringRampageOfRevenge of ''a single teenage girl, in a single night.'' Oh, and at the end of it all she has him killed in a ''brutally'' horrific manner, in front of all the cast members he'd been treating like dirt up to this point.]]
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* CriticalResearchFailure: InUniverse example. [[spoiler:Ludlow intends to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy all species apart from humans.]] ''[[CompleteMonster All of them.]]'' Such a {{plan}} will be doomed to fail regardless of whether or not he is stopped in time for two reasons. Firstly, as is pointed out a few times, humans are apex predators and depend on so many nonhuman species that wiping them out would render them extinct by default. Secondly, there are 8.7 ''million'' species, along with 5-10 million bacteria. Add to that the additional fact that at least a few would adapt and survive the outcome, and even a kindergartener's knowledge of biology, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and certainly Violet's high-school level tutelage]], would have instantly made such a plan theoretically impossible.]]

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* CriticalResearchFailure: InUniverse example. [[spoiler:Ludlow intends to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy all species apart from humans.]] ''[[CompleteMonster All ''All of them.]]'' '' Such a {{plan}} will be doomed to fail regardless of whether or not he is stopped in time for two reasons. Firstly, as is pointed out a few times, humans are apex predators and depend on so many nonhuman species that wiping them out would render them extinct by default. Secondly, there are 8.7 ''million'' species, along with 5-10 million bacteria. Add to that the additional fact that at least a few would adapt and survive the outcome, and even a kindergartener's knowledge of biology, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and certainly Violet's high-school level tutelage]], would have instantly made such a plan theoretically impossible.]]
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* JustDesserts: [[[[RuleOfThree Both of the]] {{Big Bad}}s.]]

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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree And yet again,]] both of the {{Big Bad}}s.]]

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* BloodierAndGorier: [[spoiler:Shows slight shades of this in Episode 1, tones it town in Episode 2, flaunts it more obviously in Episode 3, and finally takes it UpToEleven in Episode 4.]]



** Ripper [[SubvertedTrope subverts]] it, however. When his eyes are red, run fast. [[spoiler:When his eyes are YELLOW, '''[[RaptorAttack run]] [[OhCrap faster.]]'']]
** [[spoiler:Subverted with V-Wrex. Even though Sarah freaks out at her updated eye coloration, she, like the other T.rexes, remains all in all heroic.]]

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** Ripper [[SubvertedTrope subverts]] it, however. When however; his eyes are red, run fast. [[spoiler:When humanoid form has red eyes, his eyes are YELLOW, '''[[RaptorAttack run]] [[OhCrap faster.]]'']]
raptor form has yellow.
** [[spoiler:Subverted again with V-Wrex.V-Wrex, but in a different way. Even though Sarah freaks out at her updated eye coloration, she, like the other T.rexes, remains all in all heroic.]]



* TickleTorture: Glados loves to use this interrogation method on her test subjects. It helps to know that this fanfiction originally stemmed from the [[FetishFuel tickling fandom,]] so it's only natural that there are a few playful tickle scenes as well.

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* TickleTorture: TickleTorture=/=FriendlyTickleTorture: Glados loves to use this interrogation method on her test subjects. It helps to know that this fanfiction originally stemmed from the [[FetishFuel tickling fandom,]] so it's only natural that there are a few playful tickle scenes as well.



* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Aperture's entire modus operandi runs on this. [[spoiler:It doesn't take into account the Supers that escaped its confines, of course...]]

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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler:Chapter 25, in which Sarah is separated from her family and now both girls are presumed dead. Chapter 24 may also count.]]
* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Aperture's entire modus operandi runs on this. [[spoiler:It doesn't take into account the Supers that escaped its confines, of course...]]According to Helen? [[GenreSavvy "Everything."]]



* WiseBeyondTheirYears: All of the kids, but Adam in particular. His knowledge of dinosaurs is about neck-and-neck with ''present day'' (i.e. the late 2000's) paleontologists, and he knows the behavior of Aperture's bioweapons like the back of his wing - despite this fic being clearly set in 1980!
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!! !!This fanfic provides examples of:



* MegaCrossover: While this is an Incredibles fanfiction, other franchises to be featured include VideoGame/{{Portal}}, {{Megamind}}, Franchise/JurassicPark, VideoGame/DonkeyKongCountry, and many more.

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* MegaCrossover: While this is an Incredibles fanfiction, other franchises to be featured include VideoGame/{{Portal}}, {{Megamind}}, WesternAnimation/{{Megamind}}, Franchise/JurassicPark, VideoGame/DonkeyKongCountry, and many more.

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** FauxActionGirl: Despite being one of the main characters, Violet doesn't engage in much fighting, and when she does, she mostly plays as the StoneWall... [[spoiler:[[ScaledUp at first.]]]]



* AssholeVictim: It's implied in Dave's flashback that [[spoiler:Dean Cartman, aka Phylange, almost became this to Hurricane David. The only reason he lived was that Splashdown gave his life to save him, despite the fact that he'd abused him throughout nearly all of their college days together.]]

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* AssholeVictim: AssholeVictim:
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It's implied in Dave's flashback that [[spoiler:Dean Cartman, aka Phylange, almost became this to Hurricane David. The only reason he lived was that Splashdown gave his life to save him, despite the fact that he'd abused him throughout nearly all of their college days together.]]



* BerserkButton: '''NEVER''' call Adam a [[SomewhereAPaleontologistIsCrying dinosaur.]]

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'''NEVER''' call Adam a [[SomewhereAPaleontologistIsCrying dinosaur.]]



* CriticalResearchFailure: InUniverse example. [[spoiler:Ludlow intends to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy all species apart from humans.]] ''[[CompleteMonster All of them.]]'' Such a {{plan}} will be doomed to fail regardless of whether or not he is stopped in time for two reasons. Firstly, as is pointed out a few times, humans are apex predators and depend on so many nonhuman species that wiping them out would render them extinct by default. Secondly, there are 8.7 ''million'' species, along with 5-10 million bacteria. Add to that the additional fact that at least a few would adapt and survive the outcome, and even a kindergardener's knowledge of biology, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and certainly Violet's high-school level tutelage]], would have instantly made such a plan theoretically impossible.]]

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* CriticalResearchFailure: InUniverse example. [[spoiler:Ludlow intends to [[OmnicidalManiac destroy all species apart from humans.]] ''[[CompleteMonster All of them.]]'' Such a {{plan}} will be doomed to fail regardless of whether or not he is stopped in time for two reasons. Firstly, as is pointed out a few times, humans are apex predators and depend on so many nonhuman species that wiping them out would render them extinct by default. Secondly, there are 8.7 ''million'' species, along with 5-10 million bacteria. Add to that the additional fact that at least a few would adapt and survive the outcome, and even a kindergardener's kindergartener's knowledge of biology, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and certainly Violet's high-school level tutelage]], would have instantly made such a plan theoretically impossible.]]



* [[spoiler:EatenAlive: But not alive for long.]]
** Adam actually gets swallowed whole by the ''Spinosaurus'' at one point. Luckily, he manages to get it to vomit him back out, giving him just enough time to scramble to safety.

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* [[spoiler:EatenAlive: But not alive for long.]]
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EatenAlive: Adam actually gets swallowed whole by the ''Spinosaurus'' at one point. Luckily, he manages to get it to vomit him back out, giving him just enough time to scramble to safety.



* FauxActionGirl: Despite being one of the main characters, Violet doesn't engage in much fighting, and when she does, she mostly plays as the StoneWall... [[spoiler:[[ScaledUp at first.]]]]



* FootFocus: A lot of the characters take their shoes off from time to time, and much attention is paid to their feet by other characters as well as the narrative. Keep in mind that this fanfic was originally supposed to be part of the [[FetishFuel tickling fandom]], so this is somewhat justified.

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* FootFocus: FootFocus:
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A lot of the characters take their shoes off from time to time, and much attention is paid to their feet by other characters as well as the narrative. Keep in mind that this fanfic was originally supposed to be part of the [[FetishFuel tickling fandom]], so this is somewhat justified.



* HeroicBSOD: Sarah gets one [[spoiler:after finding out that her mom has been possessed by Aperture.]]

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* HeroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:
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Sarah gets one [[spoiler:after finding out that her mom has been possessed by Aperture.]]



* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: [[RaptorAttack Velociraptors]] [[XMeetsY with]] [[MoreDakka GUNS.]] WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome
* NonMaliciousMonster: Save for the [[AlwaysChaoticEvil raptors]] of course, the dinos aren't usually dangerous except hungry, territorial... [[spoiler:or under Aperture's control.]]

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* MundaneMadeAwesome: Even Velociripper's gestures are overly dramatic - so much as flipping a light switch requires a very exaggerated flourish and a bit of elaboration of his course of action.
* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: [[RaptorAttack Velociraptors]] [[XMeetsY with]] [[MoreDakka GUNS.]] WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome
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Save for the [[AlwaysChaoticEvil raptors]] of course, the dinos aren't usually dangerous except hungry, territorial... [[spoiler:or under Aperture's control.]]



* NoOneCouldSurviveThat: [[spoiler:For Ludlow, [[KilledOffForReal generously]] (and [[{{Gorn}} gruesomely]]) averted.]]

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[[spoiler:For Ludlow, [[KilledOffForReal generously]] (and [[{{Gorn}} gruesomely]]) averted.]]



* OhCrap: "I saw the yellow eyes with their [[HellishPupils reptilian slits for pupils,]] [[ThisIsGonnaSuck and felt a chill of horror running down my spine."]]

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"I saw the yellow eyes with their [[HellishPupils reptilian slits for pupils,]] [[ThisIsGonnaSuck and felt a chill of horror running down my spine."]]"



* TookALevelInBadass: Where to '''START?!'''

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* TookALevelInBadass: Where to '''START?!'''Many of the more important characters level up in the course of the plot.



* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome: Even Velociripper's gestures are overly dramatic - so much as flipping a light switch requires a very exaggerated flourish and a bit of elaboration of his course of action.

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* BullyingADragon: Guess who. Hint: [[spoiler:It's Ludlow. Technically it was a [[DinosaursAreDragons tyrannosaur]] he was bullying, but still...]]

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* BrainBleach: Several times in Episode 4, most notably when [[spoiler:Ludlow dies.]]
* BullyingADragon: Guess who. Hint: [[spoiler:It's Ludlow.[[spoiler:Ludlow. Technically it was a [[DinosaursAreDragons tyrannosaur]] he was bullying, but still...]]


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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Ludlow is eaten by baby tyrannosaurs ''in front of the entire cast'', with all the ScreamingAtSquick it implies.]]
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* ShootTheDog: [[spoiler:Ludlow's death at Violet's orders could be considered this.]]

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* BullyingADragon (or a Tyrannosaur): Guess who. Hint: [[spoiler:It's Ludlow.]]

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* BullyingADragon (or a Tyrannosaur): BullyingADragon: Guess who. Hint: [[spoiler:It's Ludlow. Technically it was a [[DinosaursAreDragons tyrannosaur]] he was bullying, but still...]]


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* DinosaursAreDragons: Subverted with Terrordactyl, but [[spoiler:played straight with V-Wrex.]]

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* [[spoiler:EatenAlive: But not alive for long, though.]]

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* [[spoiler:EatenAlive: But not alive for long, though.]]long.]]
** Adam actually gets swallowed whole by the ''Spinosaurus'' at one point. Luckily, he manages to get it to vomit him back out, giving him just enough time to scramble to safety.



* KillerRabbit: [[spoiler:The baby T.rexes, when the BigBad unknowingly angers them. They don't even care about the fact that everyone's watching them when they reveal their [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily razor-sharp teeth]] and eat Ludlow alive - they're just ''that pissed.'']]



* LetsGetDangerous: [[UpToEleven Everybody.]]



** Especially true of the T.rexes. Not one is portrayed in a villainous role and, heck, the 'rex parents featured in later episodes actually sides with the heroes after they play a major part in rescuing their offspring.

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** Especially true of the T.rexes. Not one is portrayed in a villainous role and, heck, the 'rex parents featured in later episodes actually sides side with the heroes after they play a major part in gratitude for rescuing their offspring.

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