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* HeroesWantRedHeads: Shinji. He blatantly admits Asuka is the only person he would have gone to the school dance with.
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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Shinji was abandoned by his father when he was four and summoned ten years later because his father needed him to pilot a HumongousMecha and fight [[{{EldritchAbomination}} alien monsters]]. Due to the machinations of his father during the Angel war Shinji got hurt physically and emotionally, and saw [[HeroesWantRedheads his life's love]], his sister, his [[ParentalSubstitute surrogate mother]] and [[ThoseTwoGuys his friends]] suffering and dying until [[DespairEventhorizon he crumbled down]] and [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds let the world dying]]. [[PeggySue Then he got a second chance]], and he [[spoiler:revealed the secrets of Nerv to [[TheMole Kaji]] as soon as he met him.]]
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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Shinji was abandoned by his father when he was four and summoned ten years later because his father needed him to pilot a HumongousMecha and fight [[{{EldritchAbomination}} alien monsters]]. Due to the machinations of his father during the Angel war Shinji got hurt physically and emotionally, and saw [[HeroesWantRedheads his life's love]], love, his sister, his [[ParentalSubstitute surrogate mother]] and [[ThoseTwoGuys his friends]] suffering and dying until [[DespairEventhorizon he crumbled down]] and [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds let the world dying]]. [[PeggySue Then he got a second chance]], and he [[spoiler:revealed the secrets of Nerv to [[TheMole Kaji]] as soon as he met him.]]
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Asuka/Shinji. It was there in the series but it has increased due to Shinji having a better insight into Asuka's feelings and emotions. Sometimes they seem to be channeling ''[[Anime/MazingerZ Kouji/Sayaka]]''. Or more properly, GenderFlipped ''[[Anime/GreatMazinger Tetsuya/Jun]]'' (since Asuka ''is'' a GenderFlipped Tetsuya, and Shinji, ignoring his partner's barbs or replying back, acts just like Jun... who is a half-black girl, just like ''[[Anime/NadiaTheSecretOfBlueWater Shinji's template]]'').
** Amusingly, they actually ''enjoy'' trading barbs back and forth, Shinji because of his affection for Asuka, Asuka because she believes to have found a [[WorthyOpponent worthy]] [[TheRival rival]] in Shinji.
** Amusingly, they actually ''enjoy'' trading barbs back and forth, Shinji because of his affection for Asuka, Asuka because she believes to have found a [[WorthyOpponent worthy]] [[TheRival rival]] in Shinji.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Asuka/Shinji. It was there in the series series, but it has increased due to Shinji having a better insight into Asuka's feelings and emotions. Sometimes they seem to be channeling ''[[Anime/MazingerZ Kouji/Sayaka]]''. Or more properly, GenderFlipped ''[[Anime/GreatMazinger Tetsuya/Jun]]'' (since Asuka ''is'' a GenderFlipped Tetsuya, and Shinji, ignoring his partner's barbs or replying back, acts just like Jun... who is a half-black girl, just like ''[[Anime/NadiaTheSecretOfBlueWater Shinji's template]]'').
**Amusingly, they actually ''enjoy'' trading barbs back and forth, Shinji because of his affection for Asuka, Asuka because she believes to have found a [[WorthyOpponent worthy]] [[TheRival rival]] in Shinji.
**
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* RelationshipUpgrade: Per WoG, Shinji and Asuka will get together.
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* RelationshipUpgrade: Per WoG, [=WoG=], Shinji and Asuka will get together.
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Hurting Hero is a disambiguation
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* HurtingHero:
** After his mother's passing and his father abandoning him, Shinji was raised by people did not care about him for ten years. Then he fought a War against giant space aliens where he and everyone he cared about were hurt, abused and manipulated until he was broken enough to wish for the end of mankind. And now he has to go through it again, burdened with the weight of his massive guit as he tries to not let anyone down this time.
** During an argument with Asuka related to a school trip, Misato ponders how badly Asuka was betrayed and hurt in the past by everyone and even so she still fights giant aliens that threaten mankind.
** After his mother's passing and his father abandoning him, Shinji was raised by people did not care about him for ten years. Then he fought a War against giant space aliens where he and everyone he cared about were hurt, abused and manipulated until he was broken enough to wish for the end of mankind. And now he has to go through it again, burdened with the weight of his massive guit as he tries to not let anyone down this time.
** During an argument with Asuka related to a school trip, Misato ponders how badly Asuka was betrayed and hurt in the past by everyone and even so she still fights giant aliens that threaten mankind.
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* TheHero: Shinji is determined to save the world this time.
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They Do is now a disambig page
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* TheyDo: Although the story is dormnant, the author has said that Shinji and Asuka will eventually get together.
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Everythings Better With Penguins has been disambiguated. Removing for not fitting any other tropes.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPenguins: Scenes with Pen-Pen are highly hilarious
** Shinji, on a whim, reveals the whole bit about "I'm a time traveler who's trying to change the past to atone for my mistakes"... to Pen Pen. The bird's response?
--->''([=PenPen=]) stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.''
** When a package was delivered to the Katsuragi household while Shinji was at school Pen Pen signed for it. Shinji does not know how Pen Pen did it and he ''doesn't'' want to try figuring it out.
** Misato has somehow turned the bird into an alcoholic and he apparently reads the ''Wall Street Journal'' every morning to check stock rates.
** Shinji, on a whim, reveals the whole bit about "I'm a time traveler who's trying to change the past to atone for my mistakes"... to Pen Pen. The bird's response?
--->''([=PenPen=]) stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.''
** When a package was delivered to the Katsuragi household while Shinji was at school Pen Pen signed for it. Shinji does not know how Pen Pen did it and he ''doesn't'' want to try figuring it out.
** Misato has somehow turned the bird into an alcoholic and he apparently reads the ''Wall Street Journal'' every morning to check stock rates.
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: A hilarious version. Shinji, on a whim, reveals the whole bit about "I'm a time traveler who's trying to change the past to atone for my mistakes"... to [[EverythingsBetterWithPenguins PenPen]]. The bird's response?
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: A hilarious version. Shinji, on a whim, reveals the whole bit about "I'm a time traveler who's trying to change the past to atone for my mistakes"... to [[EverythingsBetterWithPenguins PenPen]].Pen-Pen the penguin. The bird's response?
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* MindScrew: This is ''Evangelion''. It is to be expected. Other than the Third Impact, a minor but humorous one happens when a package is been delivered to the Katsuragi household while Shinji is at school. [[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow Shinji doesn't want to try figuring out how]] [[EverythingsBetterWithPenguins PenPen]] had signed for it because he suspects [[GoneMadFromTheRevelation the truth would destroy his mind.]]
** A lot of things [[EverythingsBetterWithPenguins PenPen]] does tends to boggle the mind; Misato has somehow turned the bird into an alcoholic and he apparently reads the ''Wall Street Journal'' every morning to check stock rates.
** A lot of things [[EverythingsBetterWithPenguins PenPen]] does tends to boggle the mind; Misato has somehow turned the bird into an alcoholic and he apparently reads the ''Wall Street Journal'' every morning to check stock rates.
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* MindScrew: This is ''Evangelion''. It is to be expected. Other than the Third Impact, a minor but humorous one happens when a package is been delivered to the Katsuragi household while Shinji is at school. [[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow Shinji doesn't want to try figuring out how]] [[EverythingsBetterWithPenguins PenPen]] had signed for it because he suspects [[GoneMadFromTheRevelation the truth would destroy his mind.]]
**A lot of things [[EverythingsBetterWithPenguins PenPen]] Pen-Pen the penguin does tends tend to boggle the mind; Misato has somehow turned the bird into an alcoholic and he apparently reads the ''Wall Street Journal'' every morning to check stock rates.rates. When a package gets delivered to the Katsuragi household while Shinji is at school, he decides not to look into how Pen-Pen signed for it because he suspects [[GoneMadFromTheRevelation the truth would destroy his mind.]]
**
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* LegFocus: In chapter 9, when a gust of wind billows Asuka's dress, Shinji notes that her legs are utterly gorgeous.
-->Because right now, despite knowing what was about to happen, despite being aware of the consequences… he found himself unable to look away as a gust of wind pushed across the flight deck, billowing Asuka's dress at her waist and giving the trio of young men in front of her a splendid view of her utterly gorgeous legs and white, lacey –probably cotton- undergarments-
-->Because right now, despite knowing what was about to happen, despite being aware of the consequences… he found himself unable to look away as a gust of wind pushed across the flight deck, billowing Asuka's dress at her waist and giving the trio of young men in front of her a splendid view of her utterly gorgeous legs and white, lacey –probably cotton- undergarments-
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* ShesGotLegs: In chapter 9, when a gust of wind billows Asuka's dress, Shinji notes that her legs are utterly gorgeous.
-->Because right now, despite knowing what was about to happen, despite being aware of the consequences… he found himself unable to look away as a gust of wind pushed across the flight deck, billowing Asuka's dress at her waist and giving the trio of young men in front of her a splendid view of her utterly gorgeous legs and white, lacey –probably cotton- undergarments-
-->Because right now, despite knowing what was about to happen, despite being aware of the consequences… he found himself unable to look away as a gust of wind pushed across the flight deck, billowing Asuka's dress at her waist and giving the trio of young men in front of her a splendid view of her utterly gorgeous legs and white, lacey –probably cotton- undergarments-
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8969391/1/Once-More-with-Feeling A Code Geass fanfic]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4813784/1/Once-More-With-Feeling a Final Fantasy VII fanfic]] of the same name, with a similar Peggy Sue nature, also exist. This is not those fics.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8969391/1/Once-More-with-Feeling A Code Geass fanfic]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4813784/1/Once-More-With-Feeling [[Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeelingIllusorMeaneld a Final Fantasy VII fanfic]] of the same name, with a similar Peggy Sue nature, also exist. This is not those fics.
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* PantyShot: In chapter 9, a gust of wind billows Asuka's dress and gives Shinji and his two friends a view of her undergarments. Needless to say, she was ''not'' amused.
-->Because right now, despite knowing what was about to happen, despite being aware of the consequences… he found himself unable to look away as a gust of wind pushed across the flight deck, billowing Asuka's dress at her waist and giving the trio of young men in front of her a splendid view of her utterly gorgeous legs and white, lacey –probably cotton- undergarments-
-->Because right now, despite knowing what was about to happen, despite being aware of the consequences… he found himself unable to look away as a gust of wind pushed across the flight deck, billowing Asuka's dress at her waist and giving the trio of young men in front of her a splendid view of her utterly gorgeous legs and white, lacey –probably cotton- undergarments-
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Shinji mentally traveled back approximately one year. He's not "much older" so much as he's now a war veteran.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: After travelling to the past, Shinji looks (naturally) like a teenager. However he's mentally and emotionally way older. A secondary character notes this.
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* ReverseMole: On one hand, [[spoiler:Shinji]] is feeding information to the enemy about what the organization he works for he is up to. On the other hand, given WHAT that organization is up to, and what he is trying to avert (including the deaths of those ones he cares for), you would be hard-pressed to call him a bad guy (and if they knew about his motives, it is highly doubtful anybody bar [[spoiler:Gendo and SEELE]] would call him a traitor). He is essentially a good guy pretends to be a bad guy pretending to be a good guy.
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* TheMole: On one hand, [[spoiler:Shinji]] is feeding information to the enemy about what the organization he works for he is up to. On the other hand, given WHAT that organization is up to, and what he is trying to avert (including the deaths of those ones he cares for), you would be hard-pressed to call him a bad guy (and if they knew about his motives, it is highly doubtful anybody bar [[spoiler:Gendo and SEELE]] would call him a traitor). He is essentially a good guy pretends to be a bad guy pretending to be a good guy.
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** After Shinji turned Chihiro down, some students spread rumors of he was gay. However, thanks Toji and Hikari, after a very embarassing morning, almost nobody believed those rumors. Shinji did not specify what happened in that morning.
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** After Shinji turned Chihiro down, some students spread rumors of he was gay. However, thanks to Toji and Hikari, after a very embarassing morning, almost nobody believed those rumors. Shinji did not specify what happened in that morning.
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* LineOfSightName: Invoked. The director of JDA intelligence chooses codenames based on nearby items, in order to make his agents harder to find.
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* LineOfSightName: LineOfSightAlias: Invoked. The director of JDA intelligence chooses codenames based on nearby items, in order to make his agents harder to find.
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per Trope Repair Shop, Jerkass Facade is being cut in favor of Hidden Heart Of Gold / Jerk With A Heart Of Gold.
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* JerkassFacade: After Third Impact, Shinji knows that Asuka’s annoying, snappy, arrogant behavior is a façade to protect herself.
-->Then the Second Child had arrived, bringing with her conflict, friction and more then a few painful contusions to his head as she continually let him know ''exactly'' what she thought of him as an Eva Pilot, a man and a human.\\
All of it a giant lie to shield the four year old girl desperately hiding deep behind the moats, minefields and electrified fences she had placed around her heart.
-->Then the Second Child had arrived, bringing with her conflict, friction and more then a few painful contusions to his head as she continually let him know ''exactly'' what she thought of him as an Eva Pilot, a man and a human.\\
All of it a giant lie to shield the four year old girl desperately hiding deep behind the moats, minefields and electrified fences she had placed around her heart.
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Hello Nurse Renamed per TRS
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* HeartbrokenBadass: Shinji doesn’t show it outwardly, but he’s traumatized because he let his life’s love die.
* HelloNurse: Asuka had a pack of male students following her around in the school grounds.
* HelloNurse: Asuka had a pack of male students following her around in the school grounds.
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* HeartbrokenBadass: Shinji doesn’t show it outwardly, but he’s traumatized because he let his life’s love die.
* HelloNurse:HeadTurningBeauty:
** Asuka had a pack of male students following her around in the school grounds.
* HelloNurse:
** Asuka had a pack of male students following her around in the school grounds.
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--->Both young men freely admitted she was hot, that simply wasn't in question. In a school of generally polite, reserved young Japanese girls, she was a living, breathing firestorm, an impression helped along by her red hair that whirled around her like a burning halo as she moved about the school at speed. Add to that her stunning looks and the fact that she publicly had announced –and Shinji had confirmed- that she was an Evangelion pilot…
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--->Both young men freely admitted she was hot, that simply wasn't in question. In a school of generally polite, reserved young Japanese girls, she was a living, breathing firestorm, an impression helped along by her red hair that whirled around her like a burning halo as she moved about the school at speed. Add to that her stunning looks and the fact that she publicly had announced –and Shinji had confirmed- that she was an Evangelion pilot…pilot...
* HeartbrokenBadass: Shinji doesn’t show it outwardly, but he’s traumatized because he let his life’s love die.
* HeartbrokenBadass: Shinji doesn’t show it outwardly, but he’s traumatized because he let his life’s love die.
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* {{WAFF}}: During the scenes involving Shinji and Asuka.
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!!'''FanFic/OnceMoreWithFeeling''' includes examples of:
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* AssimilationPlot: When Shinji meets Kaji he reveals SEELE and Gendo's real goal is killing all humans and merge their souls to create a new god after defeating the Angels.
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* AssimilationPlot: AssimilationPlot:
** When Shinji meets Kaji he reveals SEELE and Gendo's real goal is killing all humans and merge their souls to create a new god after defeating the Angels.
** When Shinji meets Kaji he reveals SEELE and Gendo's real goal is killing all humans and merge their souls to create a new god after defeating the Angels.
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* TheAtoner: Neither Misato nor Hikari understand why Shinji is so determined to and obsessed with making everyone happy. They do not know that Shinji feels inmensely guilty and is trying to make amends because in the original timeline he left Rei alone because she "scared" him, let Misato die because he was wrapped up in his grief, defiled Asuka and abandoned her -which led to her very bloody and gorey death- and wished that everyone died because he thought nobody loved him.
* AttentionWhore: Asuka is a very big attention-seeker. Shinji does not mind, though, since he now knows why she craves for attention, and he actually helps her to stand out as he makes clear he will always care about her, not matter what.
* AttentionWhore: Asuka is a very big attention-seeker. Shinji does not mind, though, since he now knows why she craves for attention, and he actually helps her to stand out as he makes clear he will always care about her, not matter what.
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* TheAtoner: Neither Misato nor Hikari understand why Shinji is so determined to and obsessed with making everyone happy. They do not know that Shinji feels inmensely immensely guilty and is trying to make amends because in the original timeline he left Rei alone because she "scared" him, let Misato die because he was wrapped up in his grief, defiled Asuka and abandoned her -which her--which led to her very bloody and gorey death- and gory death--and wished that everyone died because he thought nobody loved him.
* AttentionWhore: Asuka is a very big attention-seeker. Shinji does not mind, though, since he now knows why she cravesfor attention, and he actually helps her to stand out as he makes clear he will always care about her, not matter what.
* AttentionWhore: Asuka is a very big attention-seeker. Shinji does not mind, though, since he now knows why she craves
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* BigDamnHeroes: In chapter 17 Asuka [[spoiler:fought Sandalphon inside a volcano and killed it,]] but she was sinking to her death... until [[spoiler:Rei leapt inside the ocean of burning magma, dove towards her and rescued her.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: In chapter 17 Asuka [[spoiler:fought Sandalphon inside a volcano and killed it,]] but she was sinking to her death... until [[spoiler:Rei leapt inside the ocean of burning magma, dove towards her and rescued her.]]her]].
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--->'''Gendo:''': “You are not indispensable. If you will not pilot the Evangelion, Rei will do so instead”.\\
'''Shinji:''' “You know, on some level I should be surprised that you would threaten to have a fourteen year old Girl sent to her death if I didn’t do exactly what you said… but I’m not”.\\
'''Fuyutsuki:''' “Now Shinji, that’s not what he-”\\
'''Shinji:''' “Oh of course it is. You don’t have any need to defend this man in front of me. Yesterday he paraded Rei out as the consequence of me defying him, putting her through hell just to blackmail me into Unit One. Every one of us knows she wouldn’t have lasted five seconds in combat, but he didn’t give a damn”.
'''Shinji:''' “You know, on some level I should be surprised that you would threaten to have a fourteen year old Girl sent to her death if I didn’t do exactly what you said… but I’m not”.\\
'''Fuyutsuki:''' “Now Shinji, that’s not what he-”\\
'''Shinji:''' “Oh of course it is. You don’t have any need to defend this man in front of me. Yesterday he paraded Rei out as the consequence of me defying him, putting her through hell just to blackmail me into Unit One. Every one of us knows she wouldn’t have lasted five seconds in combat, but he didn’t give a damn”.
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--->'''Gendo:''': “You You are not indispensable. If you will not pilot the Evangelion, Rei will do so instead”.instead.\\
'''Shinji:'''“You You know, on some level I should be surprised that you would threaten to have a fourteen year old Girl sent to her death if I didn’t do exactly what you said… but I’m not”.not.\\
'''Fuyutsuki:'''“Now Now Shinji, that’s not what he-”\\
he-\\
'''Shinji:'''“Oh Oh of course it is. You don’t have any need to defend this man in front of me. Yesterday he paraded Rei out as the consequence of me defying him, putting her through hell just to blackmail me into Unit One. Every one of us knows she wouldn’t have lasted five seconds in combat, but he didn’t give a damn”.damn.
'''Shinji:'''
'''Fuyutsuki:'''
'''Shinji:'''
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-->Glancing across at Shinji as she reflected on what he had just so genuinely and freely offered to Asuka, Misato had an uncanny feeling that if this had been the Asuka who had arrived in Japan a few months ago, she would have gleefully jumped at his offer with both hands and barely a second thought. Yet now, when given the –apparent- choice of going, but going without Shinji or Rei…
* ChefOfIron: According Asuka, Shinji ''knows'' how to cook well, and his piloting skills almost match hers.
* ChefOfIron: According Asuka, Shinji ''knows'' how to cook well, and his piloting skills almost match hers.
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-->Glancing across at Shinji as she reflected on what he had just so genuinely and freely offered to Asuka, Misato had an uncanny feeling that if this had been the Asuka who had arrived in Japan a few months ago, she would have gleefully jumped at his offer with both hands and barely a second thought. Yet now, when given the –apparent- choice of going, but going without Shinji or Rei…
Rei...
* ChefOfIron: According to Asuka, Shinji ''knows'' how to cook well, and his piloting skills almost match hers.
* ChefOfIron: According to Asuka, Shinji ''knows'' how to cook well, and his piloting skills almost match hers.
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* CordonBleughChef: When Misato declares that she’ll cook him a huge welcome home meal, Shinji is not thrilled at the prospect of trying her “meals” again given her penchant for mixing foodstuff which was not meant to be mixed.
-->"Oh… great" Shinji managed to get out before swallowing. Oh God in heaven, not again, I can't go through that… food… again…
-->"Oh… great" Shinji managed to get out before swallowing. Oh God in heaven, not again, I can't go through that… food… again…
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* CordonBleughChef: When Misato declares that she’ll cook him a huge welcome home meal, Shinji is not thrilled at the prospect of trying her “meals” "meals" again given her penchant for mixing foodstuff which was not meant to be mixed.
-->"Oh… -->"Oh... great" Shinji managed to get out before swallowing. Oh God in heaven, not again, I can't go through that… food… again…
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** After seeing his father's huge -and nearly completely empty- office:
--->'''Shinji:''' “I’m guessing you’ve never heard of Ikea”
--->'''Shinji:''' “I’m guessing you’ve never heard of Ikea”
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** After seeing his father's huge -and huge--and nearly completely empty- office:
empty--office:
--->'''Shinji:'''“I’m I’m guessing you’ve never heard of Ikea”Ikea.
--->'''Shinji:'''
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-->'''Asuka''':"Third Child [...] Come with me".\\
'''Shinji''' (to Misato):"You have no idea how long I've waited to hear her say that…"\\
'''Asuka''': "Don't make me destroy you"
* DrivenToSuicide: Mentioned, but not really invoked. [[spoiler: After Shinji reveals his whole story to him, Kaji wonders how the kid has kept himself from "eating the gun", so to speak]].
'''Shinji''' (to Misato):"You have no idea how long I've waited to hear her say that…"\\
'''Asuka''': "Don't make me destroy you"
* DrivenToSuicide: Mentioned, but not really invoked. [[spoiler: After Shinji reveals his whole story to him, Kaji wonders how the kid has kept himself from "eating the gun", so to speak]].
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'''Shinji'''
'''Asuka''':
* DrivenToSuicide: Mentioned, but not really invoked.
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-->'''Ritsuko:'''You're three for three Shinji; you really have some nice moves, you know"\\
'''Shinji:''' (jerking his head towards Misato) Yeah that's what she said last night.\\
'''Misato:''' (after spitting her coffee) What the hell is THAT supposed to mean?\\
'''Shinji:''' (nonchalantly) You know, when we were playing that video game last night?"
'''Shinji:''' (jerking his head towards Misato) Yeah that's what she said last night.\\
'''Misato:''' (after spitting her coffee) What the hell is THAT supposed to mean?\\
'''Shinji:''' (nonchalantly) You know, when we were playing that video game last night?"
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'''Shinji:''' (jerking his head towards Misato) Yeah that's what she said last night.
'''Shinji:''' *''jerking his head towards Misato''* Yeah that's what she said last night.\\
'''Misato:'''
'''Shinji:'''
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-->''"Actually," he called out into the living room, tossing the hand towel onto the bench as stepped out of the kitchen, "I wouldn’t mind staying if Asuka went." Walking into the living room, he paused to swipe a can of iced tea and walked up next to a disbelieving Asuka - who was lookingrather nice in a loose singlet top and very short shots that left little to the imagination -''\\
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-->''"Actually," he called out into the living room, tossing the hand towel onto the bench as stepped out of the kitchen, "I wouldn’t mind staying if Asuka went." Walking into the living room, he paused to swipe a can of iced tea and walked up next to a disbelieving Asuka - who was lookingrather looking rather nice in a loose singlet top and very short shots shorts that left little to the imagination -''\\
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* EldritchAbomination: Lilith -an ancient alien goddess is the source of Earth life- and the Angels -powerful alien beings- that Shinji has to fight again... and who seem more powerful than they were in the original timeline.
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* EldritchAbomination: Lilith -an Lilith--an ancient alien goddess is the source of Earth life- and life--and the Angels -powerful Angels--powerful alien beings- that Shinji has to fight again... and who seem more powerful than they were in the original timeline.
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-->''([=PenPen=]) stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.''
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-->Oh come on Asuka… we both know how you kept glancing at him yesterday during training, with him in that tight fitting dance getup as he built up a sweat-
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-->Oh come on Asuka… Asuka... we both know how you kept glancing at him yesterday during training, with him in that tight fitting dance getup as he built up a sweat-
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8969391/1/Once-More-with-Feeling A Code Geass fanfic]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4813784/1/Once-More-With-Feeling a Final Fantasy VII fanfic]] of the same name, with similar Peggy Sue natures to it, also exist. This is not those fics.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8969391/1/Once-More-with-Feeling A Code Geass fanfic]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4813784/1/Once-More-With-Feeling a Final Fantasy VII fanfic]] of the same name, with a similar Peggy Sue natures to it, nature, also exist. This is not those fics.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8969391/1/Once-More-with-Feeling A Code Geass fanfic of the same name]], with a similar Peggy Sue nature to it, also exists. This is not that fic.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8969391/1/Once-More-with-Feeling A Code Geass fanfic fanfic]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4813784/1/Once-More-With-Feeling a Final Fantasy VII fanfic]] of the same name]], name, with a similar Peggy Sue nature natures to it, also exists. exist. This is not that fic.those fics.
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* DeadFic: The lack of updates in two years suggested it had become this, but the author assured readers he was still working on it. In 2011 he posted new material to prove it. And then, all of a sudden there was a [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/nge-once-more-with-feeling-alt-fic.122280/page-18 full chapter update]] mid-2013. So it is fortunately an AvertedTrope (thus far).
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* DeadFic: The lack of updates in two years suggested it had become this, but the author assured readers he was still working on it. In 2011 he posted new material to prove it. And then, all of a sudden there was a [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/nge-once-more-with-feeling-alt-fic.122280/page-18 full chapter update]] mid-2013. So It seemed to be an AvertedTrope, but it hasn't updated since then as of February 2018, so it is fortunately an AvertedTrope (thus far).most likely dead for good.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8969391/1/Once-More-with-Feeling A Code Geass fanfic on the same name]], with a similar Peggy Sue nature to it, also exists. This is not that fic.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8969391/1/Once-More-with-Feeling A Code Geass fanfic on of the same name]], with a similar Peggy Sue nature to it, also exists. This is not that fic.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: A girl asks Asuka if Shinji is her boyfriend. Asuka claims they are JustFriends, and the girl hints maybe she will take him all for herself, then. Asuka chewed her head off.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: A girl asks Asuka if Shinji is her boyfriend. Asuka claims they are JustFriends, and the girl hints maybe she will take him all for herself, then. Asuka chewed her head off. [[PassiveAggressiveKombat Politely, of course]].
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Shinji is usually pretty calm and even glum. But when he faced Sachiel again and thought of everything happening again if he did nothing, he went berserker.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Shinji is usually pretty calm and even glum. But when he faced Sachiel again and thought of everything happening again if he did nothing, he went berserker.berserk.
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* TheBerserker: As soon as Shinji came face to face with Sachiel he charged savagely and furiously, killing it in less than one minute. He fought so brutally he made NERV believing it was his robot the one had gone berserker.
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* TheBerserker: As soon as Shinji came face to face with Sachiel he charged savagely and furiously, killing it in less than one minute. He fought so brutally he made NERV believing believe that it was his robot the one had gone berserker.Eva-01 that was berserk.
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** During their argument in the Eva cages, Shinji said his father he has ''not'' forgotten that robot was the thing swallowed his mother. He constantly misses Yui, and when a co-worker told him several things he remembered about her, Shinji was deeply grateful for those memories.
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** During their argument in the Eva cages, Shinji said his father he has ''not'' forgotten that robot was the thing that swallowed his mother. He constantly misses Yui, and when a co-worker told him several things he remembered about her, Shinji was deeply grateful for those memories.