History Fanfic / MyImmortal

12th Aug '16 2:56:38 PM nombretomado
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* AntiClimax: Chapter 17-18. 17 sets up some fight between "Dumblydore" and Voldemort, but 18 opens with Ebony waking up. It's explained away in a paragraph, where Dumbledore "chased him off" (and then segues into Ebony and Draco having sex to a Linkin Park song...). Of course, most fights end with someone flying away. Rather like ''TheIliad'', only stupid.

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* AntiClimax: Chapter 17-18. 17 sets up some fight between "Dumblydore" and Voldemort, but 18 opens with Ebony waking up. It's explained away in a paragraph, where Dumbledore "chased him off" (and then segues into Ebony and Draco having sex to a Linkin Park song...). Of course, most fights end with someone flying away. Rather like ''TheIliad'', ''Literature/TheIliad'', only stupid.
7th May '16 7:20:42 PM Willbyr
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* SelectiveSquick: [[invoked]] Tara refuses to refer to her- er, ''Ebony's'' vagina as anything other than "my you-know-what" or "my thingie", but does not skimp on introducing anal sex, rape, [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs anal rape]], torture, etc.
1st Feb '16 4:43:09 PM nombretomado
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* ViewersAreMorons: Geddit?
8th Sep '15 3:51:04 AM SeptimusHeap
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* DarknessVonGothickname: Most of the original Harry Potter character have been given new names. Such as Hermione now being B'loody Mary, Ron being Diabolo, "Navel" becoming "[[{{Dracula}} Dracola]]" and Harry becoming Vampire.



* FailOSuckyName: Most of the original Harry Potter character have been given new names. Such as Hermione now being B'loody Mary, Ron being Diabolo, "Navel" becoming "[[{{Dracula}} Dracola]]" and Harry becoming Vampire.
6th Nov '14 8:04:00 AM SeptimusHeap
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See also ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries''", a WebVideo adaptation. Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.

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See also ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries''", ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries'', a WebVideo adaptation. Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.
''VideoGame/TheImmortal'' or the song by Music/{{Evanescence}}.
1st Sep '14 9:59:10 AM Telcontar
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* SecondPersonNarration: The story briefly dips into this in chapter 37, then switches back to first person. Of note, the sentence "You went to the conmen room after putting on my clothes."
1st Aug '14 6:39:36 AM Willbyr
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* CompleteMonster: [[invoked]] Snap, Loopin, and Volxemort, according to Tara. It doesn't really work out.




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* YouMonster: Snap, Loopin, and Volxemort, according to Tara. It doesn't really work out.
24th Jun '14 12:24:07 PM Willbyr
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Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.

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See also ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries''", a WebVideo adaptation. Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.
18th Apr '14 6:32:46 AM Willbyr
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What this fic ''does'' have, however, is sex, torture, rape, time travel ([[Film/BackToTheFuture Marty McFly]] makes an inexplicable cameo), guns, goth concerts, ludicrous and confusing nicknames, dramatic entrances, tears of blood, wrist-cutting, homo-/bisexuality, fishnets and clothing descriptions worthy of ''Literature/AmericanPsycho''. This is not to mention the OOC drama, ranging from Tara's constant interaction with her incensed reviewers, the rocky relationship between Tara and her best friend, Raven, as well as some back-and-forth between Tara and a mysterious "hacker." The [[RougeAnglesOfSatin constant spelling mistakes]] don't help the reader's understanding either. The story [[FigureItOutYourself may or may not be]] the work of a {{Troll}}. If she is a troll, she's an incredibly skilled, determined, and realistic one. If not, then weep for humanity's future. WEEP.

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What this fic ''does'' have, however, is sex, torture, rape, time travel ([[Film/BackToTheFuture Marty McFly]] makes an inexplicable cameo), guns, goth concerts, ludicrous and confusing nicknames, dramatic entrances, tears of blood, wrist-cutting, homo-/bisexuality, fishnets and clothing descriptions worthy of ''Literature/AmericanPsycho''. This is not to mention the OOC drama, ranging from Tara's constant interaction with her incensed reviewers, the rocky relationship between Tara and her best friend, Raven, as well as some back-and-forth between Tara and a mysterious "hacker." The [[RougeAnglesOfSatin constant spelling mistakes]] don't help the reader's understanding either. The story [[FigureItOutYourself may or may not be]] Depending on who you believe]], it's either one of the work worst fanfics ever written or a shining example of a {{Troll}}. If she is a troll, she's an incredibly skilled, determined, and realistic one. If not, then weep for humanity's future. WEEP.
TrollFic.









* TrollFic: [[PoesLaw Maybe...]]

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* TrollFic: [[PoesLaw Maybe...]]Maybe.]] Several people (Someone named [[http://web.archive.org/web/20110430232448/http://ohinternet.com/My_Immortal/TheBatMan%27s_confession TheBatMan]] for example said it was his work) have claimed that this fic was created deliberately badly written.
11th Apr '14 2:39:29 PM shimaspawn
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* SaidBookism: Nearly every exchange of dialogue involves one of these, ranging from the basic "said [adverb]" to "Lupin slurped as he sat in chains." "Shouted angrily" shows up a lot, too.
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