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''Sono Hanabira ni Kuchizuke Wo (A Kiss for the Petals)'' is a fluffy [[GirlsLove Yuri]] {{Eroge}} series, in which the biggest issues facing the characters are at worst an argument and/or the threat of a break-up. ''Franchise/ShinMegamiTensei'' is a dark JRPG series, in which the regular issues the characters have to deal with are demon outbreaks, the end of the world, and a ForeverWar between a [[GodIsEvil tyrannical God]] and a [[{{Satan}} Devil]] who wants nothing but unrestrained anarchy.

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''Sono Hanabira ni Kuchizuke Wo (A Kiss for the Petals)'' is a fluffy [[GirlsLove [[YuriGenre Yuri]] {{Eroge}} series, in which the biggest issues facing the characters are at worst an argument and/or the threat of a break-up. ''Franchise/ShinMegamiTensei'' is a dark JRPG series, in which the regular issues the characters have to deal with are demon outbreaks, the end of the world, and a ForeverWar between a [[GodIsEvil tyrannical God]] and a [[{{Satan}} Devil]] who wants nothing but unrestrained anarchy.
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** ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' shout-outs [[AuthorAppeal permeate the story]]: the city is named [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Kazamino]], and a number of {{Original Character}}s have names that relate to the series (Taichi ''Tomohisa'', ''[[Creator/GenUrobuchi Gen]]'' ''Nakazawa''). [[https://s.vndb.org/ch/35/10935.jpg Risa]] is a character with pink hair who uses a [[ArcherArchetype bow and arrow]] wielding demon, while her girlfriend [[https://s.vndb.org/ch/36/10936.jpg Miya]] is a girl with long black hair who uses a demon with a big clock face in its design: parallels between their uncanny resemblance to Madoka and Homura respectively, and for bonus points she wields a 'sidearm' in the form of a [[GolfClubbing golf club]], like Homura did at the beginning of her career.. Although she stumbles on the name, Sara likens a [[PocketDimension Demon's Domain]] to a Witch's Labyrinth.

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** ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' shout-outs [[AuthorAppeal permeate the story]]: the city is named [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Kazamino]], and a number of {{Original Character}}s have names that relate to the series (Taichi ''Tomohisa'', ''[[Creator/GenUrobuchi Gen]]'' ''Nakazawa''). [[https://s.vndb.org/ch/35/10935.jpg Risa]] is a character with pink hair who uses a [[ArcherArchetype bow and arrow]] arrow wielding demon, while her girlfriend [[https://s.vndb.org/ch/36/10936.jpg Miya]] is a girl with long black hair who uses a demon with a big clock face in its design: parallels between their uncanny resemblance to Madoka and Homura respectively, and for bonus points she wields a 'sidearm' in the form of a [[GolfClubbing golf club]], like Homura did at the beginning of her career.. Although she stumbles on the name, Sara likens a [[PocketDimension Demon's Domain]] to a Witch's Labyrinth.

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* CatchPhrase: TheChainsOfCommanding: Mai shows hints of this throughout the story, manifesting as her trying to figure everything out herself and overall taking way too much responsibility. It comes to a head when [[spoiler: she drops the bombshell about the Flock's true nature, realizes she has no idea how to deal with them, and beats herself up over it, calling herself a joke of a leader who relies on [[IndyPloy ad-lib]].]]
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** Reo's is "[[{{Angrish}} GAAAAAAH!]]"
* TheChainsOfCommanding: Mai shows hints of this throughout the story, manifesting as her trying to figure everything out herself and overall taking way too much responsibility. It comes to a head when [[spoiler: she drops the bombshell about the Flock's true nature, realizes she has no idea how to deal with them, and beats herself up over it, calling herself a joke of a leader who relies on [[IndyPloy ad-lib]].]]
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* {{Invocation}}: The [[spoiler:Flock lieutenants]] [[spoiler:summon their]] Archangels with "In Nomine Patris Et Filii Et Spiritus Sancti!"]]

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* {{Invocation}}: The [[spoiler:Flock lieutenants]] [[spoiler:summon their]] Archangels with "In Nomine Patris Et Filii Et Spiritus Sancti!"]]Sancti!"
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* BadassBaritone: Phillips has a voice described as 'powerful'; extremely deep and booming despite his old, withered appearance.
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** [[spoiler: Phillips flings his shirt away before engaging the girls personally during their final battle.

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** [[spoiler: Phillips flings his shirt away before engaging the girls personally during their final battle.]]
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** LighterAndSofter: The lightness of Sono Hanabira is present as well: none of the heroes have died yet, and there's plenty of ComicRelief courtesy of [[HairTriggerTemper Reo]] and [[CloudCuckooLander Sara.]]

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** LighterAndSofter: The lightness of Sono Hanabira is present as well: none of the heroes have died yet, and there's plenty of ComicRelief comic relief courtesy of [[HairTriggerTemper Reo]] and [[CloudCuckooLander Sara.]]
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* SlapstickKnowsNoGender: Risa and Miya's break-in to return the food they had stolen ends with a catastrophic chain of physical comedy straight out of ''Film/TheThreeStooges'': Nanami blinds them [[HoistByHisOwnPetard (and herself)]] with Horus, and all three proceed to bumble around in a panic, crashing into things and each other. By the time Yuuna and the others dash downstairs, Risa has slugged her girlfriend in the face and run headlong into a cabinet, while Nanami slipped on a golf club and [[{{Pratfall}} crashed down on her butt.]]

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* SlapstickKnowsNoGender: {{Slapstick}}: Risa and Miya's break-in to return the food they had stolen ends with a catastrophic chain of physical comedy straight out of ''Film/TheThreeStooges'': Nanami blinds them [[HoistByHisOwnPetard (and herself)]] with Horus, and all three proceed to bumble around in a panic, crashing into things and each other. By the time Yuuna and the others dash downstairs, Risa has slugged her girlfriend in the face and run headlong into a cabinet, while Nanami slipped on a golf club and [[{{Pratfall}} crashed down on her butt.]]
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Sara earns one from [[BewareTheNiceOnes Mai]] when she reveals [[TooDumbToLive she ran out into the demon-infested city]] alone to [[WrongGenreSavvy 'train'.]]
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* FiveManBand:
** TheLeader: Mai, combination Levelheaded and Charismatic.
** TheLancer: Reo: her HairTriggerTemper and {{Tsundere}} attitude directly contrasts Mai's.
** TheSmartGuy: Yuuna, who also serves as Mai's NumberTwo.
** TheBigGuy: Sara is the cheerful and boisterous ComicRelief, doubling as TheHeart of the team when things look grim.
** TheChick: Nanami's role can be summed up as the 'emotional tagalong'.
** SixthRanger: [[spoiler: Kaede, who joins the team without a phone in Day 5, and officially obtains demons on Day 6.]]
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* SkunkStripe: Naito: a white stripe on the left side of his head.
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* HateSink: [[spoiler: After the reveal of his true nature, Phillips shows himself to have absolutely zero redeeming factors: on top of the fact he's a misanthropic, deceitful, murderous, cowardly, sadistic asshole with a total lack of empathy, there's his ego. Ohhh, LAWDY does Phillips have an ego. At the height of his breakdown he can't go two sentences without crowing about how great he is, even as he's being pummeled. Not even his own allies are safe from him, as he kills a group of his underlings for losing to the girls, and then when Metatron deals a well-deserved punishment to Phillips for his stunning failures, Phillips turns the tables on the Voice of God Himself and the closest thing Phillips has to a direct superior, stealing the angel's body and using it to continue his fight against the girls. It's telling that out of all the people following him by the end of the story, only one of them does so out of something besides fear and desperation, and he's nearly as deranged as his boss.]]
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* DuelingMessiahs: Two {{Dark Messiah}}s, at that: on one hand we have Shusui Naito, who wants to overthrow society itself and create a world where the oppressed can take revenge on their oppressors and fancies himself as fighting ForGreatJustice and giving the people [[HopeBringer 'hope'.]] [[spoiler: The other is Father Archibald Phillips, who caused the outbreak to begin with so that he can be hailed as a hero and hold demons over humanity as boogeymen to scare them into doing what he wants.]]

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* DuelingMessiahs: Two {{Dark Messiah}}s, at that: on one hand we have Shusui Naito, who wants to overthrow society itself and create a world where the oppressed can take revenge on their oppressors and fancies himself as fighting ForGreatJustice and giving the people [[HopeBringer 'hope'.]] [[spoiler: The other is Father Archibald Phillips, who caused the outbreak to begin with so that he can be hailed as a hero and hold demons over humanity as boogeymen to scare them into doing what he wants.]]]] Played with with the girls: unlike the other two major players of the outbreak, they have no interest whatsoever in playing messiah or enforcing their own values on the world at large. All they want is to end the outbreak and survive. Nonetheless, thanks to [[spoiler: Lucifer guiding them and helping them after they catch his interest]], they become ''essentially'' TheChosenMany, and by the end of the story [[HopeBringer most of the survivors have pinned their hopes on them]].

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* WalkingShirtlessScene: Naito, in a way: he wears a pinstriped purple suit, but it's open enough near the top to show off a lot of his tattooed chest.

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** [[spoiler: Phillips flings his shirt away before engaging the girls personally during their final battle.
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* VillainsWantMercy: [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos The dreaded Hastur's]] [[FamousLastWords last words]] before getting demolished by the heroes are: "No! Wait...!"

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* VillainsWantMercy: [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos The dreaded Hastur's]] [[FamousLastWords last words]] words before getting demolished by the heroes are: "No! Wait...!"
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* OperationBlank: Mai is the one to declare the missions the girls go on: unfortunately, she's not too creative with the names, seeing as how she literally just calls them '[[GiverOfLameNames Operation: Literally-Whatever-Their-Objective-Is']].
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* VillainousBreakdown: The last two chapters involve [[spoiler: Phillips's spectacular descent into insanity. The constant setbacks for the finally push the mad preacher into embracing his inner cartoon villain, his motivations rapidly deteriorating from 'take over the world and rule it as a theocracy' to 'exterminate humanity and [[AGodAmI OVERTHROW THE GREAT WILL.']]]]

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* VillainousBreakdown: The last two chapters involve [[spoiler: Phillips's spectacular descent into insanity. The constant setbacks for the Flock finally push the mad preacher into embracing his inner cartoon villain, his motivations rapidly deteriorating from 'take over the world and rule it as a theocracy' to 'exterminate humanity and [[AGodAmI OVERTHROW THE GREAT WILL.']]]]

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* CoolShades: Phillips sports a reflective pair of round sunglasses. [[spoiler: Doubles as SinisterShades with the reveal of his [[BigBad true nature.]]]]



* LennonSpecs: Phillips sports a reflective pair of round sunglasses. [[spoiler: Doubles as SinisterShades with the reveal of his [[BigBad true nature.]]]]
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Written by Krimzon Flygon, ''Megami no Hanabira'' details the adventures of Mai Sawaguchi, her girlfriend Reo Kawamura and their friends Nanami Oda, Yuuna Matsubara and Sara Kitajima, as they try to survive an outbreak of demons in their home city. Aiding their efforts are ‘[[MysteriousBenefactor Cypher]]’, the mysterious Demon Summoning Program, which allows them to [[{{Mons}} recruit and use demons]] of their own for protection, and a decidedly shadowy organization of Angel-wielders known as the Flock, who may have more to do with the present situation then they are letting on...

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Written by Krimzon Flygon, ''Megami no Hanabira'' details the adventures of Mai Sawaguchi, her girlfriend Reo Kawamura and their friends Nanami Oda, Yuuna Matsubara and Sara Kitajima, as they try to survive an outbreak of demons in their home city. Aiding their efforts are ‘[[MysteriousBenefactor Cypher]]’, '[[MysteriousBenefactor Cypher]]', the mysterious Demon Summoning Program, which allows them to [[{{Mons}} recruit and use demons]] of their own for protection, and a decidedly shadowy organization of Angel-wielders known as the Flock, who may have more to do with the present situation then they are letting on...



* ArmorPiercingSlap: Sara earns one from [[BewareTheNiceOnes Mai]] when she reveals [[TooDumbToLive she ran out into the demon-infested city]] alone to [[WrongGenreSavvy ‘train’.]]
* BadassAdorable: The main characters are all quite adorable. They’re also VERY good at handling demons.

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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Sara earns one from [[BewareTheNiceOnes Mai]] when she reveals [[TooDumbToLive she ran out into the demon-infested city]] alone to [[WrongGenreSavvy ‘train’.'train'.]]
* BadassAdorable: The main characters are all quite adorable. They’re They're also VERY good at handling demons.



* BattleCouple: Mai and Reo, and Yuuna and Nanami. Sara has a girlfriend as well: Kaede, but she’s not a part of the team [[spoiler: until Day 5]].

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* BattleCouple: Mai and Reo, and Yuuna and Nanami. Sara has a girlfriend as well: Kaede, but she’s she's not a part of the team [[spoiler: until Day 5]].



* {{Expy}}: The story takes place more or less in the VideoGame/DevilSurvivor series continuum: the Mortician’s List is the latest incarnation of the Laplace Mail or Nicea, while the Flock is more or less the Shomonkai, complete with a leader with a daughter who helps the team, [[spoiler: and deeper connections to the outbreak then they let on.]] The Demon Summoning Program even says "Peaceful Days are Over: Let's Survive" when it first boots up. That said, the story samples from other Megaten games: Day 4 has the girls sucked into a [[VideoGame/ShinMegamiTenseiIV Demon's Domain]].

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* {{Expy}}: The story takes place more or less in the VideoGame/DevilSurvivor series continuum: the Mortician’s Mortician's List is the latest incarnation of the Laplace Mail or Nicea, while the Flock is more or less the Shomonkai, complete with a leader with a daughter who helps the team, [[spoiler: and deeper connections to the outbreak then they let on.]] The Demon Summoning Program even says "Peaceful Days are Over: Let's Survive" when it first boots up. That said, the story samples from other Megaten games: Day 4 has the girls sucked into a [[VideoGame/ShinMegamiTenseiIV Demon's Domain]].



* MysteriousBacker: ‘Cypher,’ who gave the girls [[spoiler: and the other Demon Tamers]] the Summoning programs.

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* MysteriousBacker: ‘Cypher,’ 'Cypher,' who gave the girls [[spoiler: and the other Demon Tamers]] the Summoning programs.



--> [[spoiler: Father Phillips: [[BlatantLies “We don’t exactly use the Demon Summoning Program, Sawaguchi-san!”]]]]

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--> [[spoiler: Father Phillips: [[BlatantLies “We don’t "We don't exactly use the Demon Summoning Program, Sawaguchi-san!”]]]]Sawaguchi-san!"]]]]
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* TheEndOrIsIt: [[spoiler: The story ends with the demons and angels banished and Mai and her family on a train heading to their new home. Mai glances out the window...and notices [[{{Satan}} Cypher]] in the crowd, looking right at her and [[PsychoticSmirk grinning]].]]

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