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* MoodWhiplash: One scene has some characters battle Lucifer, and one of them becomes exhausted and fall falls down. The gripping suspense is ''somewhat'' broken as the author inserts the following note:
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* LampshadeHanging - Lots; it's a lot of [[HammerheadSnark Snark]] and SelfParody
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* LampshadeHanging - Lots; it's a lot of [[HammerheadSnark Snark]] Snark and SelfParody
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotSymbolic - [[CrucifiedHeroShot Crowley is tied cruciform to a tree.]] It's very painful for a demon [[HilarityEnsues and causes hallucinations.]]
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-->''[[Music/{{Journey}} Don't Stop Believing...]]''
-->'''Raphael:''' ''[[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents You gave me quite a fright, you did. Usually one person doesn't get hurt quite so badly, but you've always had to go above and beyond, haven't you? ...And you never visit anymore, and I can't believe you never mentioned your demon boyfriend.]]''
-->'''Raphael:''' ''[[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents You gave me quite a fright, you did. Usually one person doesn't get hurt quite so badly, but you've always had to go above and beyond, haven't you? ...And you never visit anymore, and I can't believe you never mentioned your demon boyfriend.]]''
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* CrucifiedHeroShot: [[spoiler: Zira]] ties Crowley to a tree in this position so he won't be able to do anything.
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* EvilMakeover - [[spoiler: Aziraphale/Zira after Falling.]] Subverted, since the change is mostly physical and his behaviour doesn't change much afterwards.
* FallenHero - subverted with [[spoiler:Aziraphale]], see WhatYouAreInTheDark
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* EvilMakeover - Subverted with [[spoiler: Aziraphale/Zira Aziraphale/Zira]]; after Falling.]] Subverted, since the change is mostly physical and he Falls, he starts looking more "evil", but his behaviour behavior doesn't change much afterwards.
actually change.
* FallenHero -subverted Subverted with [[spoiler:Aziraphale]], see WhatYouAreInTheDark WhatYouAreInTheDark.
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* EvilMakeover - [[spoiler: Aziraphale/Zira]]Aziraphale/Zira after Falling.]] Subverted, since the change is mostly physical and his behaviour doesn't change much afterwards.
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* FoeYay - Michael and Lucifer. See Has Two Daddies below.
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* DotingParents: [[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents Raphael]] thinks that just about everything his little [[EmbarrassingNickname Zizi]] does is amazing and adorable.
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* AccidentalMarriage - Aziraphale's last name has technically been 'Crowley' for the past 500 years or so; they both thought that the other had arranged the divorce.
* ActionGirl - Sister Prudence
* AerithAndBob - Names of angels and demons varies from Aziraphale, Crowley, Beezlebub and Steve.
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer - Young Aziraphale. He was a bit of a nerd.
* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents - Raphael
* ArchangelGabriel - SurroundedByIdiots
* ArchangelMichael - [[LeeroyJenkins At least someone is having fun.]]
* AuthorAppeal - anime, music, [=RPG=]s, etc.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking - Lucifer
* AxeCrazy - Uriel
* BackFromTheDead - [[spoiler: Aziraphale and Crowley]]
* BackToBackBadasses - Gabriel and Michael, Michael and War briefly.
* BadBoss - [[spoiler:God and Lucifer. God gets a PetTheDog moment / becomes a BenevolentBoss at the end.]]
* ActionGirl - Sister Prudence
* AerithAndBob - Names of angels and demons varies from Aziraphale, Crowley, Beezlebub and Steve.
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer - Young Aziraphale. He was a bit of a nerd.
* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents - Raphael
* ArchangelGabriel - SurroundedByIdiots
* ArchangelMichael - [[LeeroyJenkins At least someone is having fun.]]
* AuthorAppeal - anime, music, [=RPG=]s, etc.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking - Lucifer
* AxeCrazy - Uriel
* BackFromTheDead - [[spoiler: Aziraphale and Crowley]]
* BackToBackBadasses - Gabriel and Michael, Michael and War briefly.
* BadBoss - [[spoiler:God and Lucifer. God gets a PetTheDog moment / becomes a BenevolentBoss at the end.]]
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*ActionGirl - ActionGirl: Sister Prudence
Prudence.
*AerithAndBob - AerithAndBob: Names of angels and demons varies from Aziraphale, Crowley, Beezlebub and Steve.
*AllOfTheOtherReindeer - AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Young Aziraphale. He was a bit of a nerd.
* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents -Raphael
Raphael.
*ArchangelGabriel - SurroundedByIdiots
ArchangelGabriel: Poor guy is SurroundedByIdiots.
*ArchangelMichael - ArchangelMichael: [[LeeroyJenkins At least someone is having fun.]]
*AuthorAppeal - anime, AuthorAppeal: Anime, music, [=RPG=]s, etc.
*AuthorityEqualsAsskicking - Lucifer
AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Lucifer.
*AxeCrazy - Uriel
AxeCrazy: Uriel.
*BackFromTheDead - BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Aziraphale and Crowley]]
Crowley.]]
*BackToBackBadasses - BackToBackBadasses: Gabriel and Michael, Michael and War briefly.
*BadBoss - BadBoss: [[spoiler:God and Lucifer. God gets a PetTheDog moment / becomes a BenevolentBoss at the end.]]
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* ChekhovsGun - the chocolate muffin Rafael tucks away after the Archangels visit the diner in chapter 8 resurfaces when he shoves it in Uriel's mouth [[spoiler:after the latter attempts to smite Zira]] in chapter 15. May double as a BrickJoke or a ChekhovsGag depending on the reader's sense of humor.
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* ChekhovsGun - the ChekhovsGun: The chocolate muffin Rafael tucks away after the Archangels visit the diner in chapter 8 resurfaces when he shoves it in Uriel's mouth [[spoiler:after the latter attempts to smite Zira]] in chapter 15. May double as a BrickJoke or a ChekhovsGag depending on the reader's sense of humor.
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* CrowdSong - [[Music/{{Journey}} Don't Stop Believin']], which the angels use to [[spoiler: defeat Satan]].
* CrackFic - Part of the charm.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass - Uriel
* CrowdSong - [[Music/{{Journey}} Don't Stop Believin']], which the angels use to [[spoiler: defeat Satan]].
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment - CoolAndUnusualPunishment: "Now that's just overkill."
*CrackFic - CrackFic: Part of the charm.
*CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass - Uriel
CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Uriel may be a childish CloudCuckooLander most of the time, [[AxeCrazy but if he thinks you need to be smote...]]
*CrowdSong - CrowdSong: [[Music/{{Journey}} Don't Stop Believin']], which the angels use to [[spoiler: defeat Satan]].
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* BadassNormal - Sister Prudence
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* BasementDweller -Brian
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* TheBerserker - Michael, War,Moloch
Moloch.
* BerserkButton: The only time Raphael is anything other than [[TeamMom patient and kind]] to [[TrueCompanions the other archangels]] is when [[spoiler: they seem to be treating Aziraphale's death as a triviality.]]
* BewareTheNiceOnes - One of Hell's very fewrulesrules.
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* TheBerserker - Michael, War,
* BerserkButton: The only time Raphael is anything other than [[TeamMom patient and kind]] to [[TrueCompanions the other archangels]] is when [[spoiler: they seem to be treating Aziraphale's death as a triviality.]]
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* DeadpanSnarker - [[TallDarkAndSnarky Crowley]], Gabriel Gabriel.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: Aziraphale and Crowley get together, Crowley Rises, and everyone ends up happy.]] But boy did they have to go through hell first. Literally, at one point.
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* TheHeart: Raphael, to the rest of the archangels. He ''is'' the healer, after all. At one point he notes that without his stabilizing influence they'd probably be a lot less sane than they are.
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* NoSocialSkills - Those entities that haven't been on Earth for very long aren't aware of appropriate human behavior.
* NoodleIncident - Death owes the Antichrist a favor for never mentioning this one incident. It involved [[NoodleImplements two kittens, thirteen girl scouts, an ice cream cone, a goat and six pairs of socks]].
* OminousLatinChanting - The song playing in the background when [[spoiler:Uriel destroys Mammon]]
* OneWingedAngel - Lucifer, it gets a LampshadeHanging
* OpenMindedParent - Raphael again.
* OppositeDay - er... Bizarro book of prophecies
* {{Otaku}} - Brian
* PapaWolf - Raphael
* PokeThePoodle - [[spoiler: Zira]]'s "insults."
* PsychoForHire - War
* NoSocialSkills - Those entities that haven't been on Earth for very long aren't aware of appropriate human behavior.
* NoodleIncident - Death owes the Antichrist a favor for never mentioning this one incident. It involved [[NoodleImplements two kittens, thirteen girl scouts, an ice cream cone, a goat and six pairs of socks]].
* OminousLatinChanting - The song playing in the background when [[spoiler:Uriel destroys Mammon]]
* OneWingedAngel - Lucifer, it gets a LampshadeHanging
* OpenMindedParent - Raphael again.
* OppositeDay - er... Bizarro book of prophecies
* {{Otaku}} - Brian
* PapaWolf - Raphael
* PokeThePoodle - [[spoiler: Zira]]'s "insults."
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero - NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[LeeroyJenkins Nice job opening a portal that connects Hell and Earth that can't be closed, dumbass.]]
*NoSocialSkills - NoSocialSkills: Those entities that haven't been on Earth for very long aren't aware of appropriate human behavior.
*NoodleIncident - NoodleIncident: Death owes the Antichrist a favor for never mentioning this one incident. It involved [[NoodleImplements two kittens, thirteen girl scouts, an ice cream cone, a goat and six pairs of socks]].
*OminousLatinChanting - OminousLatinChanting: The song playing in the background when [[spoiler:Uriel destroys Mammon]]
Mammon.]]
*OneWingedAngel - OneWingedAngel: Lucifer, it gets a LampshadeHanging
* OpenMindedParent - Raphael again.LampshadeHanging.
*OppositeDay - er... OpenMindedParent: Raphael again.
* OppositeDay: Er... Bizarro book ofprophecies
prophecies.
*{{Otaku}} - Brian
{{Otaku}}: Brian.
*PapaWolf - Raphael
PapaWolf: Raphael.
*PokeThePoodle - PokeThePoodle: [[spoiler: Zira]]'s "insults."
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* RunningGag - There is only one response, be you demon, nun, Jesus, or ''Satan'' to the question "Would you like some tea?"
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* SamusIsAGirl - [[spoiler: and so is Jesus]]
* ScrewDestiny - [[spoiler: God doesn't want the Apocalypse stopped this time. Aziraphale doesn't care.]]
* SamusIsAGirl - [[spoiler: and so is Jesus]]
* ScrewDestiny - [[spoiler: God doesn't want the Apocalypse stopped this time. Aziraphale doesn't care.]]
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* SamuelLJackson - SamuelLJackson: Beelzebub's human form. Because Samuel L L. Jackson is badass.
*SamusIsAGirl - SamusIsAGirl: [[spoiler: and And so is Jesus]]
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* StockBritishPhrases - [[spoiler: Inner]] Aziraphale uses these quite liberally.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Averted. [[spoiler: Aziraphale/Zira Falls, accidentally Falls and becomes a demon, but it doesn't change his mission to save humanity or his [[NiceGuy sweethearted personality]] in the slightest.]]
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* TrapDoor - "sauntering vaguely downwards" sounds so much better
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood - Angels like chocolate
chocolate.
* TrapDoor -"sauntering "Sauntering vaguely downwards" sounds so much better
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''[[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=434&textsize=0&chapter=1 Manchester Lost]]'' by JA{{Tropers/Moczo}} is a very funny ''Literature/GoodOmens'' CrackFic / ActionAdventure / (non-explicit) SlashFic in which Aziraphale is captured by Hell and Crowley, War and the Archangel Michael (on a MissionFromGod) break in to save him and set off a second apocalypse. It introduces entertaining [[OriginalCharacter characterizations]] of [[TrueCompanions other angels such as Michael, Raphael (Aziraphale's adopted father), Gabriel, and Uriel.]] It's a [[SelfParody self parodying]] AffectionateParody with many interesting twists and turns along the way.
It is technically a sequel to [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=433&chapter=1 How Crowley Fell Out of Love with the Bentley]] (which is a sequel to ''Literature/GoodOmens''). Fanfic/ManchesterLost has a sequel itself, which is complete: [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=478 Paradise Thwarted]]. Now Fanfic/ParadiseThwarted has its own page too!
It is technically a sequel to [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=433&chapter=1 How Crowley Fell Out of Love with the Bentley]] (which is a sequel to ''Literature/GoodOmens''). Fanfic/ManchesterLost has a sequel itself, which is complete: [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=478 Paradise Thwarted]]. Now Fanfic/ParadiseThwarted has its own page too!
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''[[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=434&textsize=0&chapter=1 Manchester Lost]]'' by [=JAMoczo=] is a very funny ''Literature/GoodOmens'' CrackFic / ActionAdventure / (non-explicit) SlashFic in which Aziraphale is captured by Hell and Crowley, War and the Archangel Michael (on a MissionFromGod) break in to save him and set off a second apocalypse. It introduces entertaining [[OriginalCharacter characterizations]] of [[TrueCompanions other angels such as Michael, Raphael (Aziraphale's adopted father), Gabriel, and Uriel.]] It's a [[SelfParody self parodying]] AffectionateParody with many interesting twists and turns along the way.
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''[[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=434&textsize=0&chapter=1 Manchester Lost]]'' by [=JAMoczo=] JA{{Tropers/Moczo}} is a very funny ''Literature/GoodOmens'' CrackFic / ActionAdventure / (non-explicit) SlashFic in which Aziraphale is captured by Hell and Crowley, War and the Archangel Michael (on a MissionFromGod) break in to save him and set off a second apocalypse. It introduces entertaining [[OriginalCharacter characterizations]] of [[TrueCompanions other angels such as Michael, Raphael (Aziraphale's adopted father), Gabriel, and Uriel.]] It's a [[SelfParody self parodying]] AffectionateParody with many interesting twists and turns along the way.
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* ChekhovsGun - the chocolate muffin Rafael tucks away after the Archangels visit the diner in chapter 8 resurfaces when he shoves it in Uriel's mouth [[spoiler:after the latter attempts to smite Zira]] in chapter 15. May double as a BrickJoke or a ChekhovsGag [[YourMileageMayVary depending on the reader's sense of humor]].humor.
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It is technically a sequel to [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=433&chapter=1 How Crowley Fell Out of Love with the Bentley]] (which is a sequel to GoodOmens). Fanfic/ManchesterLost has a sequel itself, which is complete: [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=478 Paradise Thwarted]]. Now Fanfic/ParadiseThwarted has its own page too!
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It is technically a sequel to [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=433&chapter=1 How Crowley Fell Out of Love with the Bentley]] (which is a sequel to GoodOmens).''Literature/GoodOmens''). Fanfic/ManchesterLost has a sequel itself, which is complete: [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=478 Paradise Thwarted]]. Now Fanfic/ParadiseThwarted has its own page too!
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* BeyondTheImpossible
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It is technically a sequel to [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=433&chapter=1 How Crowley Fell Out of Love with the Bentley]] (which is a sequel to GoodOmens). Fanfic/ManchesterLost has a sequel itself, which is complete: [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=478 Paradise Thwarted]].
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It is technically a sequel to [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=433&chapter=1 How Crowley Fell Out of Love with the Bentley]] (which is a sequel to GoodOmens). Fanfic/ManchesterLost has a sequel itself, which is complete: [[http://library.good-omens.com/viewstory.php?sid=478 Paradise Thwarted]]. \n Now Fanfic/ParadiseThwarted has its own page too!
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer - Young Aziraphale. [He was a bit of a nerd.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer - Young Aziraphale. [He He was a bit of a nerd.
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* ChekhovsGun - the chocolate muffin Rafael tucks away after the Archangels visit the diner in chapter 8 resurfaces when he shoves it in Uriel's mouth [[spoiler:after the latter attempts to smite Zira]] in chapter 15. May double as a BrickJoke or a ChekhovsGag [[YourMileageMayVary if you found it funny]].
-->'''Uriel:''' ''You were hoarding!''
-->'''Uriel:''' ''You were hoarding!''
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* ChekhovsGun - the chocolate muffin Rafael tucks away after the Archangels visit the diner in chapter 8 resurfaces when he shoves it in Uriel's mouth [[spoiler:after the latter attempts to smite Zira]] in chapter 15. May double as a BrickJoke or a ChekhovsGag [[YourMileageMayVary if you found it funny]].
-->'''Uriel:''' ''You were hoarding!''depending on the reader's sense of humor]].
-->'''Uriel:''' ''You were hoarding!''
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* BondVillainStupidity - Lucifer
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* BondVillainStupidity - Lucifer Lucifer
* ChekhovsGun - the chocolate muffin Rafael tucks away after the Archangels visit the diner in chapter 8 resurfaces when he shoves it in Uriel's mouth [[spoiler:after the latter attempts to smite Zira]] in chapter 15. May double as a BrickJoke or a ChekhovsGag [[YourMileageMayVary if you found it funny]].
-->'''Uriel:''' ''You were hoarding!''
* ChekhovsGun - the chocolate muffin Rafael tucks away after the Archangels visit the diner in chapter 8 resurfaces when he shoves it in Uriel's mouth [[spoiler:after the latter attempts to smite Zira]] in chapter 15. May double as a BrickJoke or a ChekhovsGag [[YourMileageMayVary if you found it funny]].
-->'''Uriel:''' ''You were hoarding!''
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-->''[[{{Journey}} Don't Stop Believing...]]''
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* CrowdSong - [[{{Journey}} Don't Stop Believin']], which the angels use to [[spoiler: defeat Satan]].
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* CrowdSong - [[{{Journey}} [[Music/{{Journey}} Don't Stop Believin']], which the angels use to [[spoiler: defeat Satan]].
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* EvillyAffable - Lucifer
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** PluckyComicRelief - Aziraphale, [[ObfuscatingStupidity Uriel]]
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** PluckyComicRelief - Aziraphale, [[ObfuscatingStupidity Uriel]] Uriel]]
* {{Flanderization}}: Crowley and Aziraphale's respective [[GoodAngelBadAngel Good Angel, Bad Angels]] are basically Flanderized versions of the characters they represent.
* {{Flanderization}}: Crowley and Aziraphale's respective [[GoodAngelBadAngel Good Angel, Bad Angels]] are basically Flanderized versions of the characters they represent.
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* {{Fangirl}}: Uriel is Gabriel's fangirl. [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Yes, Uriel is male.]]