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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Bella’s bizarre Aunt Stephenie thinks that Edward kidnapping and marrying her while she's drink is "almost sort of romantic."
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Bella’s bizarre Aunt Stephenie thinks that Edward kidnapping spiriting her away and marrying her while she's drink drunk is "almost sort of romantic."
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* InSpiteOfANail: Even though Bella makes it very, very clear that she sees Edward as a creepy stalker and wants nothing to do with him, he still acts like they're in love and behaves exactly as he did in the series.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Bella’s bizarre Aunt Stephenie.Stephenie thinks that Edward kidnapping and marrying her while she's drink is "almost sort of romantic."
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* DeadFic: Finally, finally, ''finally'' subverted.
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* TheyJustDontGetIt: Edward just will not accept that Bella is not in love with him, absolutely despises him, and considers him a creepy stalker who she wants out of her life. To the point that when she's drunk, he puts her in his car and drives her to Las Vegas so they can get married.
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* NiceGirl: Despite her snarkiness, Bella is a lot nicer and less self-centered than she was in ''Twilight.'' She even expresses sympathy for Tyler when he gets hurt after almost hitting her with his van.
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* CassandraTruth: Charlie doesn't believe Bella when she tells him that Alice kidnapped her, dragged her off to Volterra, and "rescued" Edward.
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** The Author's reason for skipping ''Eclipse''? ''Eclipse'' had no plot.
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** The Author's reason for skipping ''Eclipse''? ''Eclipse'' had no plot.Nothing happened in it.
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** The Author's reason for skipping ''Eclipse''? ''Eclipse'' had no plot.
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So Cool Its Awesome is a fanspeak term that doesn't get wicks.
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What if Bella were, well, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin sane?]] What if she had an ounce of rationality in her body? What if she kept a diary? This is what would happen. And yes, it ''is'' SoCoolItsAwesome. After a couple of years of being a DeadFic, the author has put up coverage of Eclipse [[spoiler:(not really)]] ''Eclipse'' and Breaking Dawn...
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* [[spoiler:AndNowYouMustMarryMe]]: The plot of chapter four, wherein [[spoiler:Edward drugs Bella, drives her to Vegas, and gets them hitched while she’s too out of it to fight back]].
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* [[spoiler:AndNowYouMustMarryMe]]: AndNowYouMustMarryMe: The plot of chapter four, wherein [[spoiler:Edward drugs Bella, drives her to Vegas, and gets them hitched while she’s too out of it to fight back]].
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-->'''Bella''': "It'd totally ruin my day to be raped, killed and dumped in a trash can behind a McDonald's somewhere."
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-->'''Bella''': "It'd totally ruin my day to be raped, killed and dumped in a trash can behind a McDonald's UsefulNotes/McDonalds somewhere."
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* TakeThat: Bella happens to have a very Mormon and ''very'' loopy aunt named [[StephenieMeyer Stephenie]] who finds Edward forcefully marrying Bella "romantic.”
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* TakeThat: Bella happens to have a very Mormon and ''very'' loopy aunt named [[StephenieMeyer [[Creator/StephenieMeyer Stephenie]] who finds Edward forcefully marrying Bella "romantic.”
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* {{Understatement}}: Bella's thoughts on Edward possibly being insane.
-->'''Bella''': "It'd totally ruin my day to be raped, killed and dumped in a trash can behind a McDonald's somewhere."
-->'''Bella''': "It'd totally ruin my day to be raped, killed and dumped in a trash can behind a McDonald's somewhere."
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* StationsOfTheCanon: Edward (in fact, all of the Cullens) is oblivious to Bella's protests, so he keeps following the plot of the books even when it shouldn't logically happen.
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* KissingCousins: Bella suspects that the Cullens are this, due to the fact that they all look alike.
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* KissingCousins: Bella suspects that the Cullens are this, due to the fact that they all look alike. BrotherSisterIncest can also apply.
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-->'''Bella:''' (''after Edward "sparkles" for her) But I don't love you! I don't even like you! In fact, after all this, I hate you! Are you deaf or something?
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-->'''Bella:''' (''after Edward "sparkles" for her) her'') But I don't love you! I don't even like you! In fact, after all this, I hate you! Are you deaf or something?
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-->'''Bella:''' (''after Edward "sparkles" for her) But I don't love you! I don't even like you! In fact, after all this, I hate you! Are you deaf or something?
-->'''Edward:''' "I know, my dearest snowflake, but I am too dangerous for our love to flourish!"
-->'''Edward:''' "I know, my dearest snowflake, but I am too dangerous for our love to flourish!"
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* {{Yandere}}: Edward, towards Bella.
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* FurAgainstFang: Averted; though Edward claims to be a vampire and Jacob claims to be a werewolf, no mention is ever made of the antagonism between them that was so prevalent in ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''.
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* SpotOfTea: This is how Bella recovers from her trauma at the end of the fic.
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* {{Yandere}}: Edward.
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* {{Yandere}}: Edward.Edward, towards Bella.
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* [[spoiler:AndNowYouMustMarryMe]]: The plot of chapter four, wherein [[spoiler:Edward drugs Bella, drives her to Vegas, and gets them hitched while she’s too out of it to fight back]].
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* GoshdarnItToHeck: Averted-- Bella Averted--Bella never once says, "Holy crow."
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* IRejectYourReality: Edward doesn’t seem to listen, listen when Bella says she doesn’t love him back.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: [[spoiler: Bella absolutely freaks out when she discovers may have married Edward.]]
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* StalkingIsLove: Averted-- Bella finds it creepy.
* StalkingIsLove: Averted-- Bella finds it creepy.
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* PapaWolf: Charlie Swan in the end of chapter one. Bella relates the story of how he pulled a shotgun on Edward (not [[ShotgunWedding like that]]) and got him arrested for his creepy behavior. This gets dialed down in later chapters, though, to Bella’s frustration.
* SanitySlippage: Bella in chapter4, calling the dates, four, dating her journal entries as "Day Who Cares" Gives a Shit" and "Day Fuck the World.Everything." [[spoiler: This only gets worse when she finds out that she may have married Edward. After the marriage is annulled, she calms down.]]
* StalkingIsLove:Averted-- Bella Averted--Bella finds it creepy.
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* WaterSourceTampering: In chapter four, Bella speculates that “the water in Oregon is just spiked with crazysauce” as an explanation for everyone’s deranged behavior.
* {{Yandere}}: Edward.
* WaterSourceTampering: In chapter four, Bella speculates that “the water in Oregon is just spiked with crazysauce” as an explanation for everyone’s deranged behavior.
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Dawn...
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What if Bella were, well, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin sane?]] What if she had an ounce of rationality in her body? What if she kept a diary? This is what would happen. And yes, it ''is'' SoCoolItsAwesome. After a couple of years of being a DeadFic, the author has put up coverage of Eclipse (not really) and Breaking Dawn... AndTheFandomRejoiced.
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What if Bella were, well, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin sane?]] What if she had an ounce of rationality in her body? What if she kept a diary? This is what would happen. And yes, it ''is'' SoCoolItsAwesome. After a couple of years of being a DeadFic, the author has put up coverage of Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.
Dawn... AndTheFandomRejoiced.
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* DeadFicDeadFic: Finally, finally, ''finally'' subverted.
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If Bella Was Sane has been updated; editing article to mention this.
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What if Bella were, well, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin sane?]] What if she had an ounce of rationality in her body? What if the kept a diary? This is what would happen. And yes, it ''is'' SoCoolItsAwesome. But alas, it was TooGoodToLast, having only 2 chapters.After a couple of years of being a DeadFic, the author has put up coverage of Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.
