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* CasualDangerDialog:
** The crew of callsign Matchbox Zero speaks this while taking down Alliance soldiers from the safety of their [=M1A3=] Abrams. [[spoiler: AllAccordingToPlan for the Alliance.]]
** Also [[spoiler: Discord]] during his fight with [[spoiler: Lord Hircus]].
* TitleDrop: "Black Sun, Red Moon" is dropped in chapter thirty-six.
** The crew of callsign Matchbox Zero speaks this while taking down Alliance soldiers from the safety of their [=M1A3=] Abrams. [[spoiler: AllAccordingToPlan for the Alliance.]]
** Also [[spoiler: Discord]] during his fight with [[spoiler: Lord Hircus]].
* TitleDrop: "Black Sun, Red Moon" is dropped in chapter thirty-six.
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* TitleDrop: "Black Sun, Red Moon" is dropped in chapter thirty-six.
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* NamesTheSame: InUniverse. The name of the planet the Humans and the Ponies reside on is named Earth. Go figure.
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* TheNameIsBondJamesBond: An Equestrian physician introduces herself in this form in chapter twenty five.
-->'''Winter Willow:''' "Oh, yes. My name is Winter Willow, Doctor Winter Willow."
-->'''Winter Willow:''' "Oh, yes. My name is Winter Willow, Doctor Winter Willow."
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* AFatherToHisMen: General Lockleer comes off as this.
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* TheAlcatraz: The appropriately named Alcatrotz Island.
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* AlienInvasion: What the Americans think of the exodus of [[spoiler: Liberation Allience defectors]] is.
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* ApocalypticLog: Bronze Leaf starts to keep one in his head while he is in Alliance custody.
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* BattleTrophy: What the alicorn horns are presented as.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast:
** Equestria as a whole in the form of the "Great Equestrian Purge".
** According to his background information in chapter thirty, some believe Lieutenant Kaiser's past was this.
* DeadpanSnarker: Lenard and Lime Tree have their moments.
** Equestria as a whole in the form of the "Great Equestrian Purge".
** According to his background information in chapter thirty, some believe Lieutenant Kaiser's past was this.
* DeadpanSnarker: Lenard and Lime Tree have their moments.
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* FarmersDaughter: [=AppleFlower=].
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* FirstContact: What happened with the portal.
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler: Vance to Lord Hircus.]]
* FourStarBadass: General Lockleer.
* FourStarBadass: General Lockleer.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Affairs of Darkness, Equestria's special forces unit. Quite fitting considering their job.
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* WarRefugees: Try about [[UpToEleven eighty fucking thousand]] of them.
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* WarRefugees: Try about [[UpToEleven eighty fucking thousand]] thousand of them.
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* BiggerBad: [[spoiler: Lord Hircus]].
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* [[BreatherEpisode Breather Chapter]]: Chapter twenty six, which gives us a break from everypony getting use to the human world and shows the [=CMC=] and their friends ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg oh, and Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon]]) playing with some of the human children present in the Georgia Dome.
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* [[BreatherEpisode Breather Chapter]]: BreatherEpisode: Chapter twenty six, which gives us a break from everypony getting use to the human world and shows the [=CMC=] and their friends ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg oh, and Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon]]) playing with some of the human children present in the Georgia Dome.
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* MirroringFactions: One of the story's themes is that humans and ponies are actually very similar.
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* NotSoDifferent: One of the story's themes is that humans and ponies are actually very similar.
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* RealityEnsues: What the author did to all of Equestria and its world, with the SugarBowl elements downplayed.
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* RealityEnsues: ThisIsReality: What the author did to all of Equestria and its world, with the SugarBowl elements downplayed.
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* TheWarOnTerror: Steven Mace mentions that he saw some action in Iraq about two years ago.
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* UsefulNotes/AmericanAccents: Lieutenant Cleaves speaks with a New York accent.
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* ApocalypseHow: {{Discussed}} briefly. Celestia believes that the war with the Liberation Alliance could be a Class 3 for her subjects.
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* ApocalypseHow: {{Discussed}} briefly. Celestia believes that the war with the Liberation Alliance could be a Class 3 for her subjects.mean the extinction of ponykind.
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--> Scientist: “I can't believe we've done it. We've cracked the code, decrypted the enigma, solved the Rubik's cube!”
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--> Twilight: "Eclipstria? Alicorn wars? Ancient rams? You two as fillies?!"
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--> King Soltare: "You think you can come to MY city and accuse ME of treachery?! You should have accepted my offer, because now I am going to send what's left of you and your pathetic army of inferiority back to the doorstep of your utterly leveled cities!"
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* [[TitleDrop Chapter Name Drop]]: "Black Sun, Red Moon" is dropped in chapter thirty-six.
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* [[TitleDrop Chapter Name Drop]]: TitleDrop: "Black Sun, Red Moon" is dropped in chapter thirty-six.
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* [[ChildrenForcedToKill Child Forced To Kill]]: Spike kills two Alliance Griffins in self defense.
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* [[ChildrenForcedToKill Child Forced To Kill]]: ChildrenForcedToKill: Spike kills two Alliance Griffins in self defense.
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--> Snow Wisp: "We rescued some of the survivors from Matchbox battalion, they got to see it up close. It is called the [=HailFire=], and apparently it is some kind of crazy hybrid between a steam generator powered Leviathan landship, and a heavily armored hot air filled blimp. Even worse, according to the survivors, it is armed to the teeth with the same weapons that destroyed Matchbox and Steel Hoof battalions, and is continuously refitted to repel even our heaviest weapons."
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--> Applebloom: "Crusaders, retreat to the Courageous Crusader Castle of Doom!"
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--> Lockleer: "Let me get one thing straight right now. I haven't forgotten what you did to my men. I won't ever forget. But if you're helping us get out of this miserable hell hole, you have my thanks. For now."
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--> Luna: "Know this, Captain. You and your comrades are, and forever will be our friends."
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* [[ChildrenAreInnocent Foals Are Innocent]]: What Celestia believes in, since her foalhood was destroyed by her parents, the Rams, and The Banded.
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* [[ChildrenAreInnocent Foals Are Innocent]]: ChildrenAreInnocent: What Celestia believes in, since her foalhood was destroyed by her parents, the Rams, and The Banded.
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--> [[spoiler: Discord]]: "Please. I'm a trickster, not some genocidal maniac."
** [[spoiler: Flockleader Wingroot, Phalanx, Gilda, and many other members of the Liberation Alliance after they realize Lord Hircus' true plan.]]
** [[spoiler: Flockleader Wingroot, Phalanx, Gilda, and many other members of the Liberation Alliance after they realize Lord Hircus' true plan.]]
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--> Major Classified: "Why does everypony have such a hard time understanding that? My mother and father were both in the military and "Classified" seemed like a good name. Why does that confuse everypony?"
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* [[{{Fingore}} Hoovegore]]: Among his injuries obtained in battle, General Rock had an arrow impaled through his left foreleg.
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* [[{{Fingore}} Hoovegore]]: {{Fingore}}: Among his injuries obtained in battle, General Rock had an arrow impaled through his left foreleg.
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--> Government Worker: "I'll put you down as white and purple."
--> Rarity: "No-no-no-no. I believe you mean alabaster and violet."
--> Rarity: "No-no-no-no. I believe you mean alabaster and violet."
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--> Rarity:
'''Rarity:''' "No-no-no-no. I believe you mean alabaster and violet."
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* [[spoiler: InvadedStatesOfAmerica: The defectors from the Liberation Alliance open an anomaly to escape to the human world but the humans mistake this for an invasion attempt thanks to Lord Hircus' forces coming in with them.]]
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* [[spoiler: InvadedStatesOfAmerica: The [[spoiler:The defectors from the Liberation Alliance open an anomaly to escape to the human world but the humans mistake this for an invasion attempt thanks to Lord Hircus' forces coming in with them.]]
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--> Stonewall: "Frankly, I see no reason for any of this, but I will do my duty. Understand?"
* KillItWithFire:
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* [[NoCelebritiesWereHarmed No Politics Were Harmed]]: Subverted.
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* [[NoCelebritiesWereHarmed No Politics Were Harmed]]: NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Subverted.
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--> Lynolius: "The running joke here was that I expected him to lose the recent election and be re elected in some sort of triumphant return, sorta like a certain president from the past. But this really isn't important. Good eye for catching it though. I was wondering when someone would bring that up."
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* [[NotHimself Not Themselves]]: Anyone sucked into [[spoiler: Lord Hircus' portal or possessed by him]] becomes a silent, brainwashed soldier fighting for him.
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* [[NotHimself Not Themselves]]: NotHimself: Anyone sucked into [[spoiler: Lord Hircus' portal or possessed by him]] becomes a silent, brainwashed soldier fighting for him.
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--> Applejack: "Ah can't believe it. Mah kin were on that land since the Princesses were lil' fillies?"
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* JustForFun/PoniesWithPikes: The Equestrian Armed Forces fight alongside the Americans while fighting the Liberation Alliance.
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--> "Arching into the sky, the greatest forces of destruction ever created by hand and hoof collided in mid air, giving life to a combined nuclear and elemental magical event. There was not a flash of light, rather an approaching wall of luminous energy that blinded the pilot through his visor. Panels and gauges began to spark. The jet veered wildly in the shock wave. When his vision returned, all the pilot could see was what can only be described as a mass of energy in it's purest form. It was a perfect pearl of power, pulsing with unnatural might. It was almost beautiful."
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* TakeMeToYourLeader: Said almost word for word by Celestia. Lenard briefly LampShades on it.
--> Lenard: "Did you just say take us to you lea- Never mind."
--> Lenard: "Did you just say take us to you lea- Never mind."
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* TakeMeToYourLeader: Said almost word for word by Celestia. Lenard briefly LampShades Lampshades on it.
--> Lenard: -->'''Lenard:''' "Did you just say take us to you lea- Never mind."
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--> Mace: "A brand new [=M1A3=] Abrams main battle tank with a 50. Cal. turret and advanced impact reactive armor?! Somebody up there loves us!"
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--> [[spoiler: Discord]]: I have seen the promised land and it is good!"
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--> Winter Willow: "Oh, yes. My name is Winter Willow, Doctor Winter Willow."
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--> [[spoiler:Lord Hircus]]: "Be silent, human. I invade your world because I have the power to do so. When I am done, there will be no more wars, no more killing or hatred or destruction. When I have finished, I will remake both halves of Earth in MY image."
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--> AOD Soldier: "Tyrants, thieves, monsters. What could have possible lead them to say all of these things?"
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* [[WouldntHitAGirl Wouldn't Shoot A Mare]]: Star Sabre gets a little disturbed when he has to kill a female Alliance officer.
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* [[WouldntHitAGirl Wouldn't Shoot A Mare]]: WouldntHitAGirl: Star Sabre gets a little disturbed when he has to kill a female Alliance officer.
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* [[spoiler:YouKillItYouBoughtIt: Vance killed the original Lord Hircus and took his name and title when he found that the latter did not care for his subjects.]]
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* [[spoiler:YouKillItYouBoughtIt: Vance YouKillItYouBoughtIt: [[spoiler:Vance killed the original Lord Hircus and took his name and title when he found that the latter did not care for his subjects.]]
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** As part of a pre flight checkup, Callsign Treehouse tells Captain Greene to [[{{VideoGame/StarFox}} do a barrel roll]].
** A construction worker mispronounces [[spoiler: Discord]] as [[{{Franchise/GIJoe}} Destro]].
** A construction worker mispronounces [[spoiler: Discord]] as [[{{Franchise/GIJoe}} Destro]].
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** As part of a pre flight checkup, Callsign Treehouse tells Captain Greene to [[{{VideoGame/StarFox}} [[VideoGame/StarFox do a barrel roll]].
** A construction worker mispronounces[[spoiler: Discord]] [[spoiler:Discord]] as [[{{Franchise/GIJoe}} [[Franchise/GIJoe Destro]].
** A construction worker mispronounces
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** PlayedForLaughs. When Commander Mason Stuart introduces the [=DeltaScout=] Extra-planetary probe Mk1, Lieutenant Greene swore he saw him wipe a [[TearsOfJoy Tear of Joy]].
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** PlayedForLaughs. When Commander Mason Stuart introduces the [=DeltaScout=] Extra-planetary probe Mk1, [=Mk1=], Lieutenant Greene swore he saw him wipe a [[TearsOfJoy Tear of Joy]].
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* [[StraightManAndWiseGuy Straight Mare And Wise Mare]]: Bon-Bon and Lyra.
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* [[StraightManAndWiseGuy StraightManAndWiseGuy: Straight Mare And Wise Mare]]: Mare: Bon-Bon and Lyra.
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* [[SuicidePill Suicide Herb]]: The Banded, a group of ponies that are allied with the Liberation Alliance, use a poisonous herb for this purpose.
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* [[SuicidePill SuicidePill: Suicide Herb]]: Herb: The Banded, a group of ponies that are allied with the Liberation Alliance, use a poisonous herb for this purpose.
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* OneOfUs: A real life example as the author is an editor on Wiki/TvTropes.
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* StockDinosaursNonDinosaurs: Pandragons and Pandragon Minors are described and being pterosaur-like.
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* YanksWithTanks: A team of Marines, Navy Seals, and Army Rangers go into the anomaly to protect the scientist working on the other side.
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* OneOfUs: A real life example as the author is an editor on TvTropes.
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* OneOfUs: A real life example as the author is an editor on TvTropes.Wiki/TvTropes.
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* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: Not only totally averted, but explicitly written as a sort-of HateFic about this very concept.
--> Lynolius: "I wrote this story to combat the notion the Human race has to be portrayed negatively in stories. Frankly, I grow tired of stories where human characters leave their families behind, (who presumably grieve over their disappearance for the rest of their lives,) just to live in a fantasy land. I also grow tired of fics like TheConversionBureau, where humans are looked down on as inferior, so you won't find anything like that here. There, I said it. In this story I endeavored to show the real Equestria, the world the Equestrian Department of Censorship would never allow to get into the show, and when two great worlds meet, they meet as equals..."
--> Lynolius: "I wrote this story to combat the notion the Human race has to be portrayed negatively in stories. Frankly, I grow tired of stories where human characters leave their families behind, (who presumably grieve over their disappearance for the rest of their lives,) just to live in a fantasy land. I also grow tired of fics like TheConversionBureau, where humans are looked down on as inferior, so you won't find anything like that here. There, I said it. In this story I endeavored to show the real Equestria, the world the Equestrian Department of Censorship would never allow to get into the show, and when two great worlds meet, they meet as equals..."
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* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: Not only totally averted, but this story was explicitly written as a sort-of HateFic HateFic[=/=]TakeThat about this very concept.
--> Lynolius: "I -->'''Lynolius:''' I wrote this story to combat the notion the Human race has to be portrayed negatively in stories. Frankly, I grow tired of stories where human characters leave their families behind, (who presumably grieve over their disappearance for the rest of their lives,) just to live in a fantasy land. I also grow tired of fics like TheConversionBureau, ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau'', where humans are looked down on as inferior, so you won't find anything like that here. There, I said it. In this story I endeavored to show the real Equestria, the world the Equestrian Department of Censorship would never allow to get into the show, and when two great worlds meet, they meet as equals..."
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* UsefulNotes/PlaneSpotting: The author knows his aircraft.
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* TearsOfJoy: [[spoiler: Discord]] after seeing the BadAss [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RzEDtcfYGss Old Spice commercial]].
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* TearsOfJoy: [[spoiler: Discord]] after seeing the BadAss badass [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RzEDtcfYGss Old Spice commercial]].
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* PlaneSpotting: The author knows his aircraft.
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* PlaneSpotting: UsefulNotes/PlaneSpotting: The author knows his aircraft.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1401/]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by Lynolius.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1401/]]'' net/story/1401/ Heroes and Allies]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by Lynolius.
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[[caption-width-right:250:Earth and Equestria meet to battle their greatest foe yet.]]
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1401/Heroes-and-Allies Heroes and Allies]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by Lynolius.
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1401/Heroes-and-Allies Heroes and Allies]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by Lynolius.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.
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After some military experiments reveal an anomaly near Dobbins Air Reserve Base in Atlanta, Georgia, a team of scientists perform various experiments on it. When they stabilize the anomaly enough to send items through, they find that the anomaly is a transdimensional portal that leads straight to Equestria. As a team small team of scientists and soldiers pass through and make FirstContact with the inhabitants, they will eventually be embroiled in a war that will span all of Equestria and possibly Earth.
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After some military experiments reveal an anomaly near Dobbins Air Reserve Base in Atlanta, Georgia, a team of scientists perform various experiments on it. When they stabilize the anomaly enough to send items through, they find that the anomaly is a transdimensional portal that leads straight to Equestria. As a team small team of scientists and soldiers pass through and make FirstContact with the inhabitants, they will eventually be embroiled in a war that will span all of Equestria and possibly Earth.
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* CoolAirship: The Liberation Alliance's [=HailFire=] which is said to be the results of decades of reaserach and development.
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* CoolAirship: The Liberation Alliance's [=HailFire=] which is said to be the results of decades of reaserach research and development.