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* AccidentalInnuendo: "Tomo literally felt her mind being blown."
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* MemeticMutation: "[[NightmareFuel Goodnight]], [[ColdBloodedTorture sweet]] [[{{Fingore}} prince.]] [[BlackAndGreyMorality Y'know]], [[SociopathicHero I]] [[KickTheDog almost]] [[ChaoticNeutral feel]] [[AntiHero bad]] for [[TheWoobie you.]]"
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* MemeticMutation: "[[NightmareFuel Goodnight]], "Goodnight, [[ColdBloodedTorture sweet]] [[{{Fingore}} prince.]] [[BlackAndGreyMorality Y'know]], [[SociopathicHero I]] [[KickTheDog almost]] [[ChaoticNeutral feel]] [[AntiHero bad]] for [[TheWoobie you.]]"
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* MemeticMutation: "[[NightmareFuel Goodnight]], [[ColdBloodedTorture sweet]] [[{{Fingore}} prince.]] [[BlackAndGreyMorality Y'know]], [[HeroicSociopath I]] [[KickTheDog almost]] [[ChaoticNeutral feel]] [[AntiHero bad]] for [[TheWoobie you.]]"
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* MemeticMutation: "[[NightmareFuel Goodnight]], [[ColdBloodedTorture sweet]] [[{{Fingore}} prince.]] [[BlackAndGreyMorality Y'know]], [[HeroicSociopath [[SociopathicHero I]] [[KickTheDog almost]] [[ChaoticNeutral feel]] [[AntiHero bad]] for [[TheWoobie you.]]"
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* AntiHero: Tomo, who definitely fits into the [[SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes Type V]], almost to the point of being a VillainProtagonist.
** [[spoiler: Chiyo]] could be argued as a Type II.
** [[spoiler: Chiyo]] could be argued as a Type II.
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** In chapter ten, Tomo [[spoiler: returning to health after being crushed by a boat... In only eight hours.]]
** In chapter ten, Tomo [[spoiler: returning to health after being crushed by a boat... In only eight hours.]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since any of them have seen each other. The plot begins with Tomo working for Tokyo police against a cat burglar. [[spoiler: [[TheReveal Said burglar is revealed to be Sakaki,]] who was trained from an early age by her father and Kimura, members of a clan of thieves. Due to an injury and being accused of manslaughter, she is removed from the force, and most of the story follows her RoaringRampageOfRevenge against Sakaki.]] Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its (currently in-progress) entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, Manga/AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since any of them have seen each other. The plot begins with Tomo working for Tokyo police against a cat burglar. [[spoiler: [[TheReveal Said burglar is revealed to be Sakaki,]] who was trained from an early age by her father and Kimura, members of a clan of thieves. Due to an injury and being accused of manslaughter, she is removed from the force, and most of the story follows her RoaringRampageOfRevenge against Sakaki.]] Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its (currently in-progress) entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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** Tomo is defended in court by [[AceAttorney Griffin Left]].
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** Tomo is defended in court by [[AceAttorney Griffin Left]].Left.
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** [[spoiler: [[DeathNote L]] (or at least an {{Expy}} of him) is briefly mentioned in chapter one, and plays a major role in Chapter Eight.]]
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** [[spoiler: [[DeathNote [[Manga/DeathNote L]] (or at least an {{Expy}} of him) is briefly mentioned in chapter one, and plays a major role in Chapter Eight.]]
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* BeyondTheImpossible: The [[spoiler: Tomo v. Chiyo v. Sakaki]] fight in Chapter Nine.
** In chapter ten, Tomo [[spoiler: returning to health after being crushed by a boat... In only eight hours. And subsequent escape by riding her hospital bed out of a window.]]
** In chapter ten, Tomo [[spoiler: returning to health after being crushed by a boat... In only eight hours. And subsequent escape by riding her hospital bed out of a window.]]
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* BeyondTheImpossible: The [[spoiler: Tomo v. Chiyo v. Sakaki]] fight in Chapter Nine.
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** In chapter ten, Tomo [[spoiler: returning to health after being crushed by a boat... In only eight hours. And subsequent escape by riding her hospital bed out of a window.]]
** In chapter ten, Tomo [[spoiler: returning to health after being crushed by a boat... In only eight hours.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: [[anime/LuckyStar Konata]] mentions that it seems like she's seen Tomo on TV before.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: [[anime/LuckyStar LeaningOnTheFouArthWall: [[Anime/LuckyStar Konata]] mentions that it seems like she's seen Tomo on TV before.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: [[LuckyStar Konata]] mentions that it seems like she's seen Tomo on TV before.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: [[LuckyStar [[anime/LuckyStar Konata]] mentions that it seems like she's seen Tomo on TV before.
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* MetaGuy: [[LuckyStar Konata]], of all people.
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* MetaGuy: [[LuckyStar [[Anime/LuckyStar Konata]], of all people.
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** [[LuckyStar [[Anime/LuckyStar Konata's]] repeated appearances.
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* AntiHero: Tomo, who definitely fits into the [[SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes Type V]], almost to the point of being a VillainProtagonist.
** [[spoiler: Chiyo]] could be argued as a Type II.
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler: Sakaki]], who could easily be interpreted as the moral superior to Tomo, [[spoiler: having been forced into the whole robbing-and-murdering thing.]]
** [[spoiler: Chiyo]] could be argued as a Type II.
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler: Sakaki]], who could easily be interpreted as the moral superior to Tomo, [[spoiler: having been forced into the whole robbing-and-murdering thing.]]
* BlackAndGreyMorality: Pretty much everyone in the story has their KickTheDog moments.
* {{Fingore}}: [[spoiler: Tomo's method of interrogation/revenge on Kaorin.]]
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* IronWoobie: [[spoiler: Sakaki and Chiyo.]]
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* IronWoobie: [[spoiler: Sakaki and Chiyo. Though Sakaki is somewhat affected by the series' BlackAndGreyMorality.]]
* KickTheDog: Tomo [[spoiler: torturing Kaorin.]]
* KickTheDog: Tomo [[spoiler: torturing Kaorin.]]
** TV Tropes is actually referenced in one of the author's notes, [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife as a distraction to their writing.]]
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** Tomo refering to her revolvers as [[SoulEater "Liz and Patty"]] in chapter one.
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** Tomo refering referring to her revolvers as [[SoulEater "Liz and Patty"]] in chapter one.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: [[spoiler: Kaorin,[[StalkerWithACrush naturally.]]]]
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: [[spoiler: Kaorin,[[StalkerWithACrush Kaorin, [[StalkerWithACrush naturally.]]]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since they've seen each other. The plot begins with Tomo working for Tokyo police against a cat burglar. [[spoiler: [[TheReveal Said burglar is revealed to be Sakaki,]] who was trained from an early age by her father and Kimura, members of a clan of thieves. Due to an injury and being accused of manslaughter, she is removed from the force, and most of the story follows her RoaringRampageOfRevenge against Sakaki.]] Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its (currently in-progress) entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since they've any of them have seen each other. The plot begins with Tomo working for Tokyo police against a cat burglar. [[spoiler: [[TheReveal Said burglar is revealed to be Sakaki,]] who was trained from an early age by her father and Kimura, members of a clan of thieves. Due to an injury and being accused of manslaughter, she is removed from the force, and most of the story follows her RoaringRampageOfRevenge against Sakaki.]] Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its (currently in-progress) entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since they've seen each other. The plot begins with Tomo working for Tokyo police against a cat burglar. [[spoiler: [[TheReveal Said burglar is revealed to be Sakaki.]] Due to an injury and being accused of manslaughter, she is removed from the force, and most of the story follows her RoaringRampageOfRevenge against Sakaki.]] Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its (currently in-progress) entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since they've seen each other. The plot begins with Tomo working for Tokyo police against a cat burglar. [[spoiler: [[TheReveal Said burglar is revealed to be Sakaki.]] Sakaki,]] who was trained from an early age by her father and Kimura, members of a clan of thieves. Due to an injury and being accused of manslaughter, she is removed from the force, and most of the story follows her RoaringRampageOfRevenge against Sakaki.]] Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its (currently in-progress) entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since they've seen each other. The plot mainly follows Tomo's RoaringRampageOfRevenge against the cat burglar [[spoiler: [[TheReveal revealed to be Sakaki]]]] who got her forcibly removed from police duty. Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its (currently in-progress) entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since they've seen each other. The plot mainly begins with Tomo working for Tokyo police against a cat burglar. [[spoiler: [[TheReveal Said burglar is revealed to be Sakaki.]] Due to an injury and being accused of manslaughter, she is removed from the force, and most of the story follows Tomo's her RoaringRampageOfRevenge against the cat burglar [[spoiler: [[TheReveal revealed to be Sakaki]]]] who got her forcibly removed from police duty. Sakaki.]] Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its (currently in-progress) entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: [[spoiler: Tomo's injuryeye getting sliced open, and her subsequent removal from the force. Also, TheReveal of Sakaki in chapter five is about midway through, but it just as important to talk about the later chapters.]]
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* PetTheDog:
** A minor one in chapter ten, when [[spoiler: when Tomo spares Chiyo.]]
** A minor one in chapter ten, when [[spoiler: when Tomo spares Chiyo.]]
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* BloodierAndGorier: Well, it is a DarkFic...
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since they've seen each other. The plot mainly follows Tomo's RoaringRampageOfRevenge against the cat burglar [[spoiler: [[TheReveal revealed to be Sakaki]]]] who got her forcibly removed from police duty. Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its (currently in-progress) entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since they've seen each other. The plot mainly follows Tomo's RoaringRampageOfRevenge against the cat burglar [[spoiler: [[TheReveal revealed to be Sakaki]]]] who got her removed from the force. Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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Differing Paths... is a DarkFic, based around the characters of AzumangaDaioh, taking place five years after the end of the series, long since they've seen each other. The plot mainly follows Tomo's RoaringRampageOfRevenge against the cat burglar [[spoiler: [[TheReveal revealed to be Sakaki]]]] who got her forcibly removed from the force.police duty. Notable is the constant MoodWhiplash, ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging, and the exaggeration of the main characters' personality traits. Can be viewed in its entirety [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6637295/1/Differing_Paths here.]]
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** "[[StarWars If you strike me down,]] [[BigDamnHeroes I will become more powerful than you can possibly imagine.]]"
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** "[[StarWars If you strike me down,]] [[BigDamnHeroes I will become more powerful than you can possibly imagine.]]"]]"
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* CerebusRollercoaster: Pretty much all the way through. [[spoiler: The largely content-free chapter one is followed by chapter two's DownerEnding, which is followed by the third and fourth chapters, which are entirely PlayedForLaughs. Chapters five, six, the second half of chapter seven, and chapter eight go back to the bleak tone, which are then followed by chapter nine and ten, where it takes a turn into hilariously over-the-top action.]]
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* ChunkySalsaRule: [[spoiler: Tomo takes advantage of this in the fight with [[OldMaster Kimura]], though she does take the time to DoubleTap just in case.]]
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** [[spoiler: Osaka [[WelcomeToTheNHK is a college dropout, and has been living for almost four years as a hikikomori, in an apartment next door to a bishoujo-obsessed otaku, who "would later make what would be considered to be one of the greatest H-games of all time.".]]
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** [[spoiler: Osaka [[WelcomeToTheNHK is a college dropout, and has been living for almost four years as a hikikomori, in an apartment next door to a bishoujo-obsessed otaku, who "would later make what would be considered to be one of the greatest H-games of all time.".]]]]]]
