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Do not confuse this with ''VideoGame/{{Max Payne}}'s'' ShowWithinAShow called ''Address Unknown'' (which is, coincidentally, made by Remedy Entertainment).

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* ContinuityNod: Derpy's canon appearances in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPInkieKeen Feeling Pinkie Keen]]" and "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E14TheLastRoundup The Last Roundup]]" are mentioned frequently. Derpy still feels guilty over both, though Twilight assures her she doesn't hold a grudge.

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* ChoresWithoutPowers: Pegasus mailponies are sometimes punished by being forced to deliver mail on hoof, which they see as humiliating. However, this allows Derpy to prove she really is good at her job.
* ContinuityNod: Derpy's canon appearances in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPInkieKeen "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPinkieKeen Feeling Pinkie Keen]]" and "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E14TheLastRoundup The Last Roundup]]" are mentioned frequently. Derpy still feels guilty over both, though Twilight assures her she doesn't hold a grudge.
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-->'''Derpy''': They just appeared when my eyes were starting to get to the point where I had real difficulty seeing. I never knew what they meant, but everypony else thinks it’s just because that’s what’s filling my head most of the time. It’s the only explanation I’ve been given that comes close to making any sense, but I really hate that idea. I don’t want my special something to be that I’m an "airhead".
-->'''Twilight''': No, Derpy. I don’t think that’s it at all. You’re obviously not an airhead, and anypony who thinks that doesn’t know anything about the real you. Bubbles are a symbol of innocent joy, but also of beauty. A filly blowing bubbles doesn’t see soap filled with air; if they did it wouldn’t be any fun for them, would it? Bubbles are ever-changing; they’re unique, showing brilliant colors and endless possibilities to those who look for them. But, they are also vulnerable, fragile. They are blown about, at the mercy of the winds they are caught in. To really see its beauty, a bubble needs to be in a stable environment where it can be appreciated while it lasts. ''And'', when you look through a bubble, it causes significant visual distortion - just like what you were starting to see when you got your mark. Derpy, I think your cutie mark set you aside as special because despite your distorted view, you were, and are, a beautiful, unique individual with something nopony else has. You have a deep inner splendor that can only be seen best when you accept yourself and somepony else accepts you as you are.

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-->'''Derpy''': --->'''Derpy''': They just appeared when my eyes were starting to get to the point where I had real difficulty seeing. I never knew what they meant, but everypony else thinks it’s just because that’s what’s filling my head most of the time. It’s the only explanation I’ve been given that comes close to making any sense, but I really hate that idea. I don’t want my special something to be that I’m an "airhead".
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"airhead".\\
'''Twilight''':
No, Derpy. I don’t think that’s it at all. You’re obviously not an airhead, and anypony who thinks that doesn’t know anything about the real you. Bubbles are a symbol of innocent joy, but also of beauty. A filly blowing bubbles doesn’t see soap filled with air; if they did it wouldn’t be any fun for them, would it? Bubbles are ever-changing; they’re unique, showing brilliant colors and endless possibilities to those who look for them. But, they are also vulnerable, fragile. They are blown about, at the mercy of the winds they are caught in. To really see its beauty, a bubble needs to be in a stable environment where it can be appreciated while it lasts. ''And'', when you look through a bubble, it causes significant visual distortion - just like what you were starting to see when you got your mark. Derpy, I think your cutie mark set you aside as special because despite your distorted view, you were, and are, a beautiful, unique individual with something nopony else has. You have a deep inner splendor that can only be seen best when you accept yourself and somepony else accepts you as you are.
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* EroticDream: Twilight, in chapter 9.

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-->[[spoiler: '''Applejack''': [[TranquilFury Twilight.]] Look around you, Twi. You just look. You went and lost all control you had, and this is what the result is. If this is what you can go doin’ just by getting’ mad, Ah can’t blame the princess for tellin’ you to stop that spell. You’d best go get yer head on straight before you even think about talkin’ to Derpy. Ah ain’t gonna lecture you about this. You just take a look at her. Take a good, long look, and then go somewhere quiet an’ private an’ figure out what it is yer thinkin’ before freakin’ out like that again.]]

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-->[[spoiler: --->[[spoiler: '''Applejack''': [[TranquilFury Twilight.]] Look around you, Twi. You just look. You went and lost all control you had, and this is what the result is. If this is what you can go doin’ just by getting’ mad, Ah can’t blame the princess for tellin’ you to stop that spell. You’d best go get yer head on straight before you even think about talkin’ to Derpy. Ah ain’t gonna lecture you about this. You just take a look at her. Take a good, long look, and then go somewhere quiet an’ private an’ figure out what it is yer thinkin’ before freakin’ out like that again.]]



-->'''Twilight''': For a pony with normal sight to suddenly see like you do, it's entirely debilitating. I could barely stand, let alone walk; I knocked over everything in my path, and I nearly gagged from the intense vertigo it caused. But ''you''... You may be slightly clumsy, and not fly entirely straight, but you've adapted to it enough to function as well as anypony else. Right now, I can truthfully grasp how amazing you really are. Not only have you adjusted to your condition, you've come close to nullifying its effects while enduring agonizing emotions all the while.

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-->'''Twilight''': --->'''Twilight''': For a pony with normal sight to suddenly see like you do, it's entirely debilitating. I could barely stand, let alone walk; I knocked over everything in my path, and I nearly gagged from the intense vertigo it caused. But ''you''... You may be slightly clumsy, and not fly entirely straight, but you've adapted to it enough to function as well as anypony else. Right now, I can truthfully grasp how amazing you really are. Not only have you adjusted to your condition, you've come close to nullifying its effects while enduring agonizing emotions all the while.
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* NotSoDifferent: Rainbow Dash realises this about Derpy and Fluttershy, which fuels her HeelRealisation. Derpy herself has one when she reacts to Rainbow's apology with the same irrational anger and scorn that Rainbow has long shown her, then sees that Rainbow's dejection at realisng the pain she's caused to Derpy mirrors her own. This prompts her to forgive her.

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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Rainbow Dash realises this about Derpy and Fluttershy, which fuels her HeelRealisation. Derpy herself has one when she reacts to Rainbow's apology with the same irrational anger and scorn that Rainbow has long shown her, then sees that Rainbow's dejection at realisng the pain she's caused to Derpy mirrors her own. This prompts her to forgive her.
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* [[spoiler: CastFromLifespan: The spell that Twilight uses at the end to fix Derpy's eyes requires her to permanently donate some of her magic to keep the spell going. Twilight agrees to it, but not without Derpy's informed consent.]]

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* [[spoiler: CastFromLifespan: The spell that Twilight uses at the end to fix [[spoiler:fix Derpy's eyes requires her to permanently donate some of her magic to keep the spell going. Twilight agrees to it, but not without Derpy's informed consent.]]



* [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Jerks Have Standards]]: Admittedly it comes after Rainbow has resolved to stop being a jerk to Derpy, but her authentic outrage at Crafty Crate monitoring Derpy's first shift on probation so he could fire her at the first opportunity, regardless of whose fault it was, comes across as this.

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* [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Jerks Have Standards]]: EveryoneHasStandards: Admittedly it comes after Rainbow has resolved to stop being a jerk to Derpy, but her authentic outrage at Crafty Crate monitoring Derpy's first shift on probation so he could fire her at the first opportunity, regardless of whose fault it was, comes across as this.



* [[InAnotherMansShoes In Another Mare's Shoes]]: Twilight invokes this in Chapter 8, taking a potion made by Zecora to mimic Derpy's condition. Her inability to adjust to it fills her with respect for how far Derpy has come in spite of it.

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* [[InAnotherMansShoes In Another Mare's Shoes]]: InAnotherMansShoes: Twilight invokes this in Chapter 8, taking a potion made by Zecora to mimic Derpy's condition. Her inability to adjust to it fills her with respect for how far Derpy has come in spite of it.



* [[UnstoppableMailman Unstoppable Mailpony]]: Not so much in the air, but Derpy shows a definite aptitude for this once she's on the ground, finishing her first shift in Ponyville well ahead of schedule even after the hours she lost waiting for the letters to dry after Twilight scattered them in the rain.

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* [[UnstoppableMailman Unstoppable Mailpony]]: UnstoppableMailman: Not so much in the air, but Derpy shows a definite aptitude for this once she's on the ground, finishing her first shift in Ponyville well ahead of schedule even after the hours she lost waiting for the letters to dry after Twilight scattered them in the rain.
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* DramaticIrony: Upon hearing about the accident, Rainbow Dash instantly assumes that Derpy messed something up and hurt Twilight, while the viewers know that Derpy has actually lost her sight. This makes Rainbow's glares, mental threats, smugness at what she believes Derpy is ashamed when she sees her eyes closed and calling her a coward look even crueler to the viewers.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom : The librarian mocking Twilight's intelligence, and not believing her when she says she wants to help an adult mare with an eye condition that's usually only seen in little foals, makes her so angry that she decides to continue researching entirely by her own, not even thinking about asking for any medical expert's help, thinking they'll react just like the librarian.

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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom : UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The librarian mocking Twilight's intelligence, and not believing her when she says she wants to help an adult mare with an eye condition that's usually only seen in little foals, makes her so angry that she decides to continue researching entirely by her own, not even thinking about asking for any medical expert's help, thinking they'll react just like the librarian.

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* {{Jerkass}}: Crafty Crate, along with two unnamed Cloudsdale mailponies. Rainbow Dash crosses her [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold usual line]] a few times, bluntly telling Derpy that she finds the idea of sitting at her place all day painful enough, but she [[HeelRealisation gets better]].

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* {{Jerkass}}: Crafty Crate, along with two unnamed Cloudsdale mailponies. Rainbow Dash crosses her [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold usual line]] a few times, bluntly telling Derpy that she finds the idea of sitting at her place all day painful enough, but she [[HeelRealisation gets better]]. Similarly, the librarian in charge of Canterlot's medical library is an arrogant jerk to Twilight Sparkle when she does her research to help Derpy.


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* UnkemptBeauty: In chapter 6, Derpy sees Twilight immediately after the latter has just showered. Twilight thinks her mane is a mess. Derpy doesn't mind ''at all''.
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* TrademarkFavouriteFood: Hilariously subverted: Derpy hasn't been able to look at a muffin without wanting to throw up since the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E4ApplebuckSeason Baked Bads incident]].

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* TrademarkFavouriteFood: TrademarkFavoriteFood: Hilariously subverted: Derpy hasn't been able to look at a muffin without wanting to throw up since the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E4ApplebuckSeason Baked Bads incident]].
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As of a recent revision, the story now has two side chapters, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112521/destination-known Destination Known]]''.

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As of a recent revision, the story now has two side chapters, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112521/destination-known Destination Known]]''.
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* ContinuityNod: Derpy's canon appearances in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPInkieKeen Feeling Pinkie Keen]]" and "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E14TheLastRoundup The Last Roundup]]" are mentioned. Derpy still feels guilty over both, though Twilight assures her she doesn't hold a grudge.

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* ContinuityNod: Derpy's canon appearances in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPInkieKeen Feeling Pinkie Keen]]" and "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E14TheLastRoundup The Last Roundup]]" are mentioned. mentioned frequently. Derpy still feels guilty over both, though Twilight assures her she doesn't hold a grudge.grudge.
** Plenty of other episodes - particularly various Mane characters most embarassing moments - get referenced as well.
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** Thankfully, in the revised version, [[LaserGuidedKarma he does not get away with it]]: Post reports his discrimination to the Mayor of Cloudsdale, and Crafty ends up under investigation and on probation.

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As of a recent revision, the story now has two side chapters, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112521/destination-known Destination Known]]''.



* FinaglesLaw: The spell Twilight finds to fix Derpy's exotropia has to be cast several times before it becomes permanent, and any mistake could cause serious damage. In addition, the scroll she finds it on is very old, badly damaged and almost illegible without a lot of effort. So when she tries it on Derpy in Chapter 10, it ends up blinding her entirely. However, her vision has returned by the following morning, and Rarity manages to pinpoint Twilight's mistake - [[spoiler:though the spell continues to be enough of a risk for Celestia to ban her from using it]].

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* FinaglesLaw: The spell Twilight finds to fix Derpy's exotropia has to be cast several times before it becomes permanent, and any mistake could cause serious damage. In addition, the scroll she finds it on is very old, badly damaged and almost illegible without a lot of effort. So when she tries it on Derpy in Chapter 10, 13, it ends up blinding her entirely. However, her vision has returned by the following morning, and Rarity manages to pinpoint Twilight's mistake - [[spoiler:though the spell continues to be enough of a risk for Celestia to ban her from using it]].



* HarmfulToMinors: In Chapter 9 Rainbow Dash and Applejack sensibly attempt to keep Spike away from the library while Twilight and Derpy are alone together. He gets back just in time to see them making out, but it could have been worse, as the two had sex while he was out.
* HappyEndingMassage: Derpy gives one to Twilight in Chapter 16.
* HeelRealization: Rainbow Dash in Chapter 13, after realising how much she's contributed to Derpy's life of misery. She tearfully apologises in Chapter 14:

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* HarmfulToMinors: In Chapter 9 12 Rainbow Dash and Applejack sensibly attempt to keep Spike away from the library while Twilight and Derpy are alone together. He gets back just in time to see them making out, but it could have been worse, as the two had sex while he was out.
* HappyEndingMassage: Derpy gives one to Twilight in Chapter 16.
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* HeelRealization: Rainbow Dash in Chapter 13, 16, after realising how much she's contributed to Derpy's life of misery. She tearfully apologises in Chapter 14:17:



* MoodWhiplash: In chapter 20 Derpy returns to the library after successfully befriending Fluttershy and Applejack to find Twilight BurningWithAnger. In the following chapter, [[spoiler: Derpy reads Princess Celestia's letter, which abruptly shifts from congratulating Twilight on her new relationship and expressing her interest in the mystery of Derpy's Cutie Mark to admonishing her for using such a dangerous spell and ordering her to hand over all her information on it.]]

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* MoodWhiplash: In chapter 20 23 Derpy returns to the library after successfully befriending Fluttershy and Applejack to find Twilight BurningWithAnger. In the following chapter, [[spoiler: Derpy reads Princess Celestia's letter, which abruptly shifts from congratulating Twilight on her new relationship and expressing her interest in the mystery of Derpy's Cutie Mark to admonishing her for using such a dangerous spell and ordering her to hand over all her information on it.]]



** And she seems to be on the right track, because [[spoiler:as discovered in Chapter 14, the bubbles on her Cutie Mark have started changing colour, matching the fur and mane colours of the Elements of Harmony - in order, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity Fluttershy and Applejack - as each of them come to accept her as she is. The seventh changes in Chapter 23, to Derpy's own colouring. This is a phenomenon that neither Twilight nor Celestia have ever seen or heard of before]].

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** And she seems to be on the right track, because [[spoiler:as discovered in Chapter 14, 17, the bubbles on her Cutie Mark have started changing colour, matching the fur and mane colours of the Elements of Harmony - in order, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity Fluttershy and Applejack - as each of them come to accept her as she is. The seventh changes in Chapter 23, 26, to Derpy's own colouring. This is a phenomenon that neither Twilight nor Celestia have ever seen or heard of before]].

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* EroticDream: Twilight, in chapter 5.

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* EroticDream: Twilight, in chapter 5.9.



* [[InAnotherMansShoes In Another Mare's Shoes]]: Twilight invokes this in Chapter 8, taking a potion made by Zecora to mimic Derpy's condition. Her inability to adjust to it fills her with respect for how far Derpy has come in spite of it.



-->'''Derpy''': You know, occasionally when I’m delivering mail I get a letter addressed to a place that doesn’t exist; maybe somepony moved, or maybe somepony miswrote the address. When we get those letters, we just send them back to where they came from and move on to the next destination. There is nothing we can do in the Post Office to make that address appear. Maybe that same thing will happen with fixing my eyes. Maybe there is no answer; maybe there is no fix. It doesn’t mean we can’t look, but if it’s not there, then it’s just an 'address unknown'. We accept it, we move on. And then I can move on, too.

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-->'''Derpy''': You know, occasionally when I’m delivering mail I get a letter addressed to a place that doesn’t exist; maybe somepony moved, or maybe somepony miswrote the address. When we get those letters, we just send them back to where they came from and move on to the next destination. There is nothing we can do in the Post Office to make that address appear. Maybe that same thing will happen with fixing my eyes. Maybe there is no answer; maybe there is no fix. It doesn’t mean we can’t look, but if it’s not there, then it’s just an 'address unknown'. We accept it, we move on. And If no answer exists, then I can move on, too.on without any regrets.



** In chapter 6, Derpy tries to preemptively apologise to Post for the accidents she's likely to cause sooner or later. Post assures her that accidents happen to everypony and that he doesn't want her to doubt herself.

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** Twilight again, after invoking InAnotherMansShoes:
-->'''Twilight''': For a pony with normal sight to suddenly see like you do, it's entirely debilitating. I could barely stand, let alone walk; I knocked over everything in my path, and I nearly gagged from the intense vertigo it caused. But ''you''... You may be slightly clumsy, and not fly entirely straight, but you've adapted to it enough to function as well as anypony else. Right now, I can truthfully grasp how amazing you really are. Not only have you adjusted to your condition, you've come close to nullifying its effects while enduring agonizing emotions all the while.
** In chapter 6, 5, Derpy tries to preemptively apologise to Post for the accidents she's likely to cause sooner or later. Post assures her that accidents happen to everypony and that he doesn't want her to doubt herself.

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