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* MakeMeWannaShout: The power of the Rhythm-Rhythm Fruit as eaten by [[spoiler: Greg Universe.]] Currently, he has only demonstrated the ability to create music out of thin air, emulate various instruments using only his hands, and vocal mimicry.

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* MakeMeWannaShout: MakeSomeNoise: The power of the Rhythm-Rhythm Fruit as eaten by [[spoiler: Greg Universe.]] Currently, he has only demonstrated the ability to create music out of thin air, emulate various instruments using only his hands, and vocal mimicry.
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* BlandNameProduct: Steven gives [[spoiler: Tashigi]] a [[UsefulNotes/{{GameBoy}} Game Child]] gaming system with three games (''[[VideoGame/{{Tetris}} Soviet Block Revolution]]'', ''[[VideoGame/{{SuperMarioLand2SixGoldenCoins}} Super Mueo. Land 2]]'', and ''[[VideoGame/{{PokemonRedAndBlue}} Pokkettomon: Red Version]]'') after she shows interest in playing ''[[VideoGame/{{SuperSmashBros}} Smash Pals Scuffle]]'' on his [[UsefulNotes/{{NintendoGameCube}} Sumy Dolphin]].

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* BlandNameProduct: Steven gives [[spoiler: Tashigi]] a [[UsefulNotes/{{GameBoy}} [[Platform/{{GameBoy}} Game Child]] gaming system with three games (''[[VideoGame/{{Tetris}} Soviet Block Revolution]]'', ''[[VideoGame/{{SuperMarioLand2SixGoldenCoins}} Super Mueo. Land 2]]'', and ''[[VideoGame/{{PokemonRedAndBlue}} Pokkettomon: Red Version]]'') after she shows interest in playing ''[[VideoGame/{{SuperSmashBros}} Smash Pals Scuffle]]'' on his [[UsefulNotes/{{NintendoGameCube}} [[Platform/{{NintendoGameCube}} Sumy Dolphin]].
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[WesternAnimation/{{StevenUniverse}} The odds are against us. This won't be easy but we're not going to do it alone.]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[SmugSnake Spandam]], [[WildChild Amethyst]], [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking [[RankScalesWithAsskicking Garnet]], [[NobleBigot Pearl]], [[NoSocialSkills Peridot]], [[TranquilFury Monkey D. Luffy]], and [[TheEmpath Steven Universe]].[[/note]]]]
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* AlternateUniverseFic: [[spoiler: Based on comments by the Gorosei and Spandam, Gems have had some kind of presence in their world...but the details of it are unknown.and with the story dead, those secrets will never be revealed.]]

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* AlternateUniverseFic: [[spoiler: Based on comments by the Gorosei and Spandam, Gems have had some kind of presence in their world...but the details of it are unknown.and And with the story dead, those secrets will never be revealed.]]
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** Steven himself...on a technical level. While the Steven of the source material has been in fights before, he typically takes a pacifist stance and rarely fights offensively. After Luffy has a serious pep talk with him after the first confrontation with Wapol, he has been put in situations that have required him to fight back. The most notable fight Steven participated in offensively was against Crocodile in the desert, but it did little good for him.

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** Steven himself...on a technical level. While the Steven of the source material has been in fights before, he typically takes a pacifist stance and rarely fights offensively. Which in the one piece world is downright self destructive to one’s survival on the grand line. After Luffy has a serious pep talk with him after the first confrontation with Wapol, he has been put in situations that have required him to fight back. The most notable fight Steven participated in offensively was against Crocodile in the desert, but it did little good for him.



* AllLovingHero: Steven, of course. He believes anyone can be redeemed and tries to appeal to the betterment of everyone he meets. This extends even to Crocodile, whom he believes can be rehabilitated for his crimes. That being said, he is not the biggest fan of the man or of Mr. 3 due to their actions, but he sees their potential for good with time.
* AlternateUniverseFic: [[spoiler: Based on comments by the Gorosei and Spandam, Gems have had some kind of presence in their world...but the details of it are unknown at this time.]]

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* AllLovingHero: Steven, of course. He believes anyone can be redeemed and tries to appeal to the betterment of everyone he meets. This extends even to Crocodile, whom he believes can be rehabilitated for his crimes. That being said, he is not the biggest fan of the man or of Mr. 3 due to their actions, but he sees their potential for good with time.
time. Unfortunately this trait seemed to be downright dangerous for steven, as he couldn’t fully comprehend that some villains in one piece, were genuinely bad people that couldn’t be redeemed. And spandam perfectly embodies this, when the madman threatened to torture and abuse robin and immediately decides to beat steven till he was barely breathing.
* AlternateUniverseFic: [[spoiler: Based on comments by the Gorosei and Spandam, Gems have had some kind of presence in their world...but the details of it are unknown at this time.unknown.and with the story dead, those secrets will never be revealed.]]



* BreakTheCutie: Poor Steven has this happen quite a bit throughout both the Ocean's Dream arc and Water Seven arc. Thankfully, he always finds a way to bounce back...for now...

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* BreakTheCutie: Poor Steven has this happen quite a bit throughout both the Ocean's Dream arc and Water Seven arc. Thankfully, he always finds a way to bounce back...for now...back…for now.



* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Crocodile does not see the world in terms of good and evil, so a person like Steven completely baffles him.
* FamilyFriendlyFirearms: Damian's new revolver is a blue gun that looks like a cork-gun, just like in the 4kids dub!

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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Crocodile does not see the world in terms of good and evil, so a person like Steven completely baffles him.
him. He is in layman’s terms, a paradox for the warlord.
* FamilyFriendlyFirearms: Damian's new revolver is a blue gun that looks like a cork-gun, just like in the 4kids dub!dub!



* TheInternetIsForPorn: The first thing that Sanji does when he gets his hands on Steven's computer is to look up...well, the story does not say but it left Steven's computer with several viruses.

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* TheInternetIsForPorn: The first thing that Sanji does when he gets his hands on Steven's computer is to look up...well, the story does not say but it left Steven's computer with several viruses.viruses from no doubt very questionable sites…
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The list of featured characters only keeps growing, and it does not seem to be stopping anytime soon.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: There are currently over 440,000 words in this story and the second part hasn’t even finished yet. With a total of five parts to this story planned out with a sixth in the planning stages, this story is going to end up being rather long!
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''A Gem in the Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least four more planned...unfortunately, the author has claimed the story is on hiatus for the time being (although he does wish to return to writing eventually). This hiatus ended in the summer of 2020.

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''A Gem in the Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least four more planned...unfortunately, the author has claimed the story is on hiatus for the time being (although he does wish to return to writing eventually). This hiatus ended in the summer of 2020.
2020 with one final chapter before the author announced that the story is dead as of February 4th, 2022.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: There are currently over 440,000 words in this story and the second part hasn’t even finished yet. With a total of five parts to this story planned out with a sixth in the planning stages, this story is going to end up being rather long!


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* OrwellianRetcon:
** At some point, all of Garnet's dialogue was rewritten to remove her asking questions following a statement by Rebecca Sugar that Garnet did not ask questions, period.
** The names of Steven's video games were modified to match up with the established games in the show.
** Steven and Luffy's personal talk at the end of "The Dream Island" was later completely rewritten to be more natural.
** The ending of "The Call on the Private Line" was edited to include Vivi.
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* DiegeticSoundtrackUsage: "We Are The Crystal Gems" is performed numerous times in the story. Steven sings the pilot version to the "Mr. 5 Pair" when he first meets them in "The Surprise Guest Of The 'Mr. 5 Pair," Genevieve tries to remember the words of it after painting Steven's snowman in "The Would-Be King," the Straw Hats used it to tell Crocodile who they were in "The Gauntlets In The Sand,” and (most faithfully to the original opening) the Gems sing it as their entrance song for the Davy Back Fight (with Peridot joining in) in "The Straw Hat Reserve Team." That's not the only theme song that is spotlighted...[[spoiler: the 4kids Rap is performed in its entirety with extra verses to include Robin, the Baroque Works trio, Smoker, and Tashigi.]]



* ThemeTuneCameo: "We Are The Crystal Gems" is performed numerous times in the story. Steven sings the pilot version to the "Mr. 5 Pair" when he first meets them in "The Surprise Guest Of The 'Mr. 5 Pair," Genevieve tries to remember the words of it after painting Steven's snowman in "The Would-Be King," the Straw Hats used it to tell Crocodile who they were in "The Gauntlets In The Sand,” and (most faithfully to the original opening) the Gems sing it as their entrance song for the Davy Back Fight (with Peridot joining in) in "The Straw Hat Reserve Team." That's not the only theme song that is spotlighted...[[spoiler: the 4kids Rap is performed in its entirety with extra verses to include Robin, the Baroque Works trio, Smoker, and Tashigi.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[WesternAnimation/{{StevenUniverse}} The odds are against us. This won't be easy but we're not going to do it alone.]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[SmugSnake Spandam]], [[WildChild Amethyst]], [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking Garnet]], [[NobleBigot Pearl]], [[{{Adorkable}} Peridot]], [[TranquilFury Monkey D. Luffy]], and [[TheEmpath Steven Universe]].[[/note]]]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:[[WesternAnimation/{{StevenUniverse}} The odds are against us. This won't be easy but we're not going to do it alone.]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[SmugSnake Spandam]], [[WildChild Amethyst]], [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking Garnet]], [[NobleBigot Pearl]], [[{{Adorkable}} [[NoSocialSkills Peridot]], [[TranquilFury Monkey D. Luffy]], and [[TheEmpath Steven Universe]].[[/note]]]]
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''A Gem in the Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least four more planned...unfortunately, the author has claimed the story is on hiatus for the time being (although he does wish to return to writing eventually).

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''A Gem in the Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least four more planned...unfortunately, the author has claimed the story is on hiatus for the time being (although he does wish to return to writing eventually).
eventually). This hiatus ended in the summer of 2020.
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Manga/{{OnePiece}} Come aboard and bring along all your hopes and dreams!]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[BigFun Steven Universe]], [[TeamPet Karoo]], Nefertari Vivi, [[BadassBookworm Nico Robin]], [[BrilliantbutLazy Genevieve]], [[TeamMom Nami]], [[HavingABlast Damian]], [[GravityMaster Petrea]], [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Tony Tony Chopper]], [[ConsummateLiar Usopp]], [[SupremeChef Sanji]], [[MasterSwordsman Roronoa Zoro]], and [[RubberMan Monkey D. Luffy]].[[/note]]]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Manga/{{OnePiece}} Come aboard and bring along all your hopes and dreams!]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[BigFun Steven Universe]], [[TeamPet Karoo]], [[PrincessProtagonist Nefertari Vivi, Vivi]], [[BadassBookworm Nico Robin]], [[BrilliantbutLazy Genevieve]], [[TeamMom Nami]], [[HavingABlast Damian]], [[GravityMaster Petrea]], [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Tony Tony Chopper]], [[ConsummateLiar Usopp]], [[SupremeChef Sanji]], [[MasterSwordsman Roronoa Zoro]], and [[RubberMan Monkey D. Luffy]].[[/note]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Manga/{{OnePiece}} Come aboard and bring along all your hopes and dreams!]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[BigFun Steven Universe]], [[TeamPet Karoo]], [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses Nefertari Vivi]], [[BadassBookworm Nico Robin]], [[BrilliantbutLazy Genevieve]], [[TeamMom Nami]], [[HavingABlast Damian]], [[GravityMaster Petrea]], [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Tony Tony Chopper]], [[ConsummateLiar Usopp]], [[SupremeChef Sanji]], [[MasterSwordsman Roronoa Zoro]], and [[RubberMan Monkey D. Luffy]].[[/note]]]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Manga/{{OnePiece}} Come aboard and bring along all your hopes and dreams!]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[BigFun Steven Universe]], [[TeamPet Karoo]], [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses Nefertari Vivi]], Vivi, [[BadassBookworm Nico Robin]], [[BrilliantbutLazy Genevieve]], [[TeamMom Nami]], [[HavingABlast Damian]], [[GravityMaster Petrea]], [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Tony Tony Chopper]], [[ConsummateLiar Usopp]], [[SupremeChef Sanji]], [[MasterSwordsman Roronoa Zoro]], and [[RubberMan Monkey D. Luffy]].[[/note]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Manga/{{OnePiece}} Come aboard and bring along all your hopes and dreams!]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[BigFun Steven Universe]], [[TeamPet Carue]], [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses Nefertari Vivi]], [[BadassBookworm Nico Robin]], [[BrilliantbutLazy Genevieve]], [[TeamMom Nami]], [[HavingABlast Damian]], [[GravityMaster Petrea]], [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Tony Tony Chopper]], [[ConsummateLiar Usopp]], [[SupremeChef Sanji]], [[MasterSwordsman Roronoa Zoro]], and [[RubberMan Monkey D. Luffy]].[[/note]]]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Manga/{{OnePiece}} Come aboard and bring along all your hopes and dreams!]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[BigFun Steven Universe]], [[TeamPet Carue]], Karoo]], [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses Nefertari Vivi]], [[BadassBookworm Nico Robin]], [[BrilliantbutLazy Genevieve]], [[TeamMom Nami]], [[HavingABlast Damian]], [[GravityMaster Petrea]], [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Tony Tony Chopper]], [[ConsummateLiar Usopp]], [[SupremeChef Sanji]], [[MasterSwordsman Roronoa Zoro]], and [[RubberMan Monkey D. Luffy]].[[/note]]]]



** Kohza's way of discovering that King Cobra was actually Mr. 2 was asking him what his childhood nickname for the king was. It turns out to be "Nebra," which was 4kids' inexplicable name change for the character.

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** Kohza's Koza's way of discovering that King Cobra was actually Mr. 2 was asking him what his childhood nickname for the king was. It turns out to be "Nebra," which was 4kids' inexplicable name change for the character.



* NarrativeProfanityFilter: Steven covers his ears in the story after Sanji discovers just who ate the ship's food supply before reaching Alabasta. As such, the readers do not get to know just WHAT Sanji calls Usopp and Carue, but we know it has to be quite colorful.

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* NarrativeProfanityFilter: Steven covers his ears in the story after Sanji discovers just who ate the ship's food supply before reaching Alabasta. As such, the readers do not get to know just WHAT Sanji calls Usopp and Carue, Karoo, but we know it has to be quite colorful.
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''A Gem in the Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least four more planned.

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''A Gem in the Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least four more planned.
planned...unfortunately, the author has claimed the story is on hiatus for the time being (although he does wish to return to writing eventually).
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* ActorAllusion:
** Steven’s favorite comic book character is Captain Marvel, in reference to Zach Callison’s role as [[WesternAnimation/SupermanShazamTheReturnOfBlackAdam Billy Batson.]]
** Mayor Dewey has to remind himself that most of the bad things in Beach City are Gem things [[Series/{{MysteryScienceTheater3000}} and that he should really just relax.]]
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* AmnesiaEpisode: By virtue of adapting the Ocean's Dream filler, this comes into play. The only characters unaffected by memory loss are Robin and the Gems [[spoiler: minus Amethyst.]]

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* AmnesiaEpisode: By virtue of adapting the Ocean's Dream filler, this comes into play. The only characters unaffected by memory loss are Robin Robin, Connie, and the Gems [[spoiler: minus Amethyst.]]
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* HotWitch: What Eirney Hecca describes herself as instead of a “crone”...despite not looking remotely like a crone.

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* HotWitch: What Eirney Hecca Heca describes herself as instead of a “crone”...despite not looking remotely like a crone. [[spoiler: It turns out her real appearance is actually that of a woman resembling a crone, but take on a youthful disguise to feel sexier using her Devil Fruit powers.]]



** The mnemosurgey showcases scenes from various season one and two episodes of Steven Universe verbatim, specifically Peridot explaining the Cluster (with Damian and Petrea added given their new presence), the duel between the Jam Buds and Pearl, the dream connection between Lapis and Steven, the forming of Malachite, and Pearl’s lament about Rose after almost letting Steven die.

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** The mnemosurgey showcases scenes from various season one and two episodes of Steven Universe ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' verbatim, specifically Peridot explaining the Cluster (with Damian and Petrea added given their new presence), the duel between the Jam Buds and Pearl, the dream connection between Lapis and Steven, the forming of Malachite, and Pearl’s lament about Rose after almost letting Steven die.die, and Rose’s last words recorded for Steven on the VCR tape.

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* AuraVision: [[spoiler: Steven gains this ability around the time of the Ocean's Dream arc. He uses it to locate Noko in the woods and later ends up seeing and sensing the literal emotions of the crew after the duel between Luffy and Usopp, causing him to leave the ship in a fury of emotions.]] [[spoiler: Although not confirmed in the story yet, the author has confirmed that this is Observation Haki.]]

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* AuraVision: [[spoiler: Steven gains this ability around the time of the Ocean's Dream “Ocean's Dream” arc. He uses it to locate Noko in the woods and later ends up seeing and sensing the literal emotions of the crew after the duel between Luffy and Usopp, causing him to leave the ship in a fury of emotions.]] [[spoiler: Although not confirmed in the story yet, the author has confirmed that this is Observation Haki.]]



** Robin compares the concept of visualizing one’s memories as a film reel slide show using the same terminology Steven and Connie use to describe what a movie is back in Beach City.



** [[spoiler: Eirney Heca’s Past-Past Fruit powers allow for her to view memory in the same manner as Charlotte Pudding (a film strip), although she does not have the ability to alter memories like Pudding does, but can use them to her own advantage.]]



** Noko and Tatsu from the “Ocean’s Dream” also qualify as their characters don’t even use the same motivations as their canon (to the anime, at least) counterparts. While the concepts of the seahorse using its powers to control Noko and its desire to gain power by siphoning dreams are present, Noko is given an actual backstory and Tatsu is overhauled from wanting to become a Millenial Dragon to actually being [[spoiler: a Corrupted Gem that somehow made it to the Grand Line years before the story began.]]

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** Noko and Tatsu from the “Ocean’s Dream” arc also qualify as their characters don’t even use the same motivations as their canon (to the anime, at least) counterparts. While the concepts of the seahorse using its powers to control Noko and its desire to gain power by siphoning dreams are present, Noko is given an actual backstory and Tatsu is overhauled from wanting to become a Millenial Dragon to actually being [[spoiler: a Corrupted Gem that somehow made it to the Grand Line years before the story began.]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Manga/{{OnePiece}} Come aboard and bring along all your hopes and dreams!]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[BigFun Steven Universe]], [[TeamPet Carue]], [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses Nefeltari Vivi]], [[BadassBookworm Nico Robin]], [[BrilliantbutLazy Genevieve]], [[TeamMom Nami]], [[HavingABlast Damian]], [[GravityMaster Petrea]], [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Tony Tony Chopper]], [[ConsummateLiar Usopp]], [[SupremeChef Sanji]], [[MasterSwordsman Roronoa Zoro]], and [[RubberMan Monkey D. Luffy]].[[/note]]]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Manga/{{OnePiece}} Come aboard and bring along all your hopes and dreams!]][[note]]Counterclockwise from top to bottom: [[BigFun Steven Universe]], [[TeamPet Carue]], [[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses Nefeltari Nefertari Vivi]], [[BadassBookworm Nico Robin]], [[BrilliantbutLazy Genevieve]], [[TeamMom Nami]], [[HavingABlast Damian]], [[GravityMaster Petrea]], [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Tony Tony Chopper]], [[ConsummateLiar Usopp]], [[SupremeChef Sanji]], [[MasterSwordsman Roronoa Zoro]], and [[RubberMan Monkey D. Luffy]].[[/note]]]]


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* BagOfHolding: Connie possesses one of these thanks to [[spoiler: Uncle Grandpa.]]


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* OCStandIn: The Baroque Works Trio (Miss Valentine, Mr. 5, and Miss Goldenweek). None of these characters were given much personality in the manga (even with a cover story dedicated to them!), but they were given dreams, which served as the basis for their character motivations. Beyond that and some general bits of canon behavior (Miss Goldenweek’s laziness and Miss Valentine’s sadism), everything else is developed purely by the author.
** Noko and Tatsu from the “Ocean’s Dream” also qualify as their characters don’t even use the same motivations as their canon (to the anime, at least) counterparts. While the concepts of the seahorse using its powers to control Noko and its desire to gain power by siphoning dreams are present, Noko is given an actual backstory and Tatsu is overhauled from wanting to become a Millenial Dragon to actually being [[spoiler: a Corrupted Gem that somehow made it to the Grand Line years before the story began.]]
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** The mnemosurgery Steven undergoes forced him to replay memories from both past episodes of the show and from the entire story in general (including scenes implied, but not fully shown, like Steven’s first time boarding the Going Merry).


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* MindRape: [[spoiler: Eirney Heca’s]] specialty.


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** The mnemosurgey showcases scenes from various season one and two episodes of Steven Universe verbatim, specifically Peridot explaining the Cluster (with Damian and Petrea added given their new presence), the duel between the Jam Buds and Pearl, the dream connection between Lapis and Steven, the forming of Malachite, and Pearl’s lament about Rose after almost letting Steven die.
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--> '''Spandam''':“You care about this brat, don't you?! Oh, psychological scars are almost as fun to inflict as physical ones! Lucci, our young captive here has a point. It will hurt Nico Robin far more to watch helplessly than to be hit herself...it's better this way.”

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--> '''Spandam''':“You '''Spandam''': “You care about this brat, don't you?! Oh, psychological scars are almost as fun to inflict as physical ones! Lucci, our young captive here has a point. It will hurt Nico Robin far more to watch helplessly than to be hit herself...it's better this way.”
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* WouldHurtAChild: Spandam takes sick pleasure in beating Steven to a pulp in order to make Robin suffer more than she already is.
--> '''Spandam''':“You care about this brat, don't you?! Oh, psychological scars are almost as fun to inflict as physical ones! Lucci, our young captive here has a point. It will hurt Nico Robin far more to watch helplessly than to be hit herself...it's better this way.”
* WouldHitAGirl: Spandam...again.
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** Usopp’s tall-tale to Ronaldo is literally describing Monet and the giant children from Punk Hazard, keeping up with the joke that Usopp’s tall-tales eventually happen in the story proper in some capacity.
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''A Gem In The Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least four more planned.

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''A Gem In The in the Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least four more planned.



!!''A Gem In The Rough'' and ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' contains the following tropes:


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!!''A Gem In The in the Rough'' and ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' contains the following tropes:

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--> '''Genevieve''': Discounting the fact that I'm underage and have no intentions of being a functional alcoholic like Zoro, drinking isn't something I'll ever be interested in. As a painter, I need to keep my head clear. I'd rather focus on the art and not get sloppy [...] Crappy painters need an artificially created vision to get going. I'm different. I want my art to be purely me. Besides, most artists can't influence emotions using their paints. If I were to be out of it at all, the entire color and emotional spectrum would...well, it's too long to explain and I really don't have the energy to do so."

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--> '''Genevieve''': Discounting “Discounting the fact that I'm underage and have no intentions of being a functional alcoholic like Zoro, drinking isn't something I'll ever be interested in. As a painter, I need to keep my head clear. I'd rather focus on the art and not get sloppy [...] Crappy painters need an artificially created vision to get going. I'm different. I want my art to be purely me. Besides, most artists can't influence emotions using their paints. If I were to be out of it at all, the entire color and emotional spectrum would...well, it's too long to explain and I really don't have the energy to do so."
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VitriolicBestBuds: Zoro/ Sanji and Pearl/Amethyst, of course.

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* VitriolicBestBuds: Zoro/ Sanji and Pearl/Amethyst, of course.

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