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* [[OneManArmy One Mare Army]]: '''Celestia.''' She literally takes on an entire army by herself, and ''wins''.
* [[OneSteveLimit One Sarah Limit]]: Averted. Sarah Summers eventually meets Sarah Lyons, of the Brotherhood.
* [[OneSteveLimit One Sarah Limit]]: Averted. Sarah Summers eventually meets Sarah Lyons, of the Brotherhood.
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* [[OneManArmy One Mare Army]]: OneManArmy: '''Celestia.''' She literally takes on an entire army by herself, and ''wins''.
*[[OneSteveLimit One Sarah Limit]]: OneSteveLimit: Averted. Sarah Summers eventually meets Sarah Lyons, of the Brotherhood.
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* ShoutOut: Several mentionable ones. ''WebAnimation/RedVsBlue'''s 'why are we here' is discussed by a pair of super mutants moments before they're killed. A man who resembles the Doctor shows up to offer Sarah aid at one point, though he appears to only resemble him in appearance.
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* ShoutOut: Several mentionable ones. ''WebAnimation/RedVsBlue'''s ShoutOut:
**''WebAnimation/RedVsBlue'''s 'why are we here' is discussed by a pair of super mutants moments before they'rekilled. killed.
** A man who resembles [[Series/DoctorWho theDoctor Doctor]] shows up to offer Sarah aid at one point, though he appears to only resemble him in appearance.
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* {{Squee}}: Moira has this reaction when she sees Luna for the first time. This involved breaking into Sarah's house and waking them up one morning. They were not amused.
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** Moira has this reaction when she sees Luna for the first time. This involved breaking into Sarah's house and waking them up one morning. They were not amused.
** Moira has this reaction when she sees Luna for the first time. This involved breaking into Sarah's house and waking them up one morning. They were not amused.
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''Wandering Moon'' is a {{VideoGame/Fallout 3}}/WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Crossover by [=Ed2481=] on [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137585/wandering-moon Fimfiction.net]] featuring the Lone Wanderer and Princess Luna.
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''Wandering Moon'' is a {{VideoGame/Fallout 3}}/WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''VideoGame/Fallout3''/''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Crossover by [=Ed2481=] on [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137585/wandering-moon Fimfiction.net]] featuring the Lone Wanderer and Princess Luna.
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* TheHero: Sarah and Luna.
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What if during the final battle against Celestia, Nightmare Moon was not sent to the moon, but instead to the Capital Wasteland?
Now stranded in a hostile and violent world quite unlike their own, Luna and Nightmare Moon must work together to make their way home and reclaim the throne that is rightfully theirs.
However, the alicorn and her nightmare aren't the only ones searching for something. Joining them on their quest is Sarah Summers, a young woman recently kicked out of Vault 101 who holds a destiny greater than any other in the Wasteland.
Together, a Princess, a Nightmare, and a Wanderer must traverse a violent and unstable Wasteland while dark shadows seek to blot out the wandering moon.
Now stranded in a hostile and violent world quite unlike their own, Luna and Nightmare Moon must work together to make their way home and reclaim the throne that is rightfully theirs.
However, the alicorn and her nightmare aren't the only ones searching for something. Joining them on their quest is Sarah Summers, a young woman recently kicked out of Vault 101 who holds a destiny greater than any other in the Wasteland.
Together, a Princess, a Nightmare, and a Wanderer must traverse a violent and unstable Wasteland while dark shadows seek to blot out the wandering moon.
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Now stranded
However, the alicorn and her nightmare aren't the only ones searching for something. Joining them on their quest is Sarah Summers, a young woman recently kicked out
Together, a Princess, a Nightmare, and a Wanderer must traverse a violent and unstable Wasteland while dark shadows seek to blot out the wandering moon.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Sarah and Luna, eventually.
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* LadyOfWar: Queen Celestia is most definitely this when she enters the battlefield. Calm, beautiful, deadly, and [[PhysicalGod incredibly powerful]].
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* LadyOfWar: Queen Celestia is most definitely this when she enters the battlefield. Calm, calm, beautiful, deadly, and [[PhysicalGod incredibly powerful]].powerful]] when she enters the battlefield.
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* AGodAmI: As to be expected, Braun once more proves to be a completely irredeemable control freak with delusions of grandeur brought on by his control of Tranquility Lane.
* AGodAmI: As to be expected, Braun once more proves to be a completely irredeemable control freak with delusions of grandeur brought on by his control of Tranquility Lane.
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* HopeSpot: Done by the Author to the Audience when James is [[spoiler: teleported to safety by Luna only to die a day later thanks to internal injuries]]
* InterspeciesAdoption: Celestia and Luna were adopted by a dragon after living alone for several years.
* InterspeciesAdoption: Celestia and Luna were adopted by a dragon after living alone for several years.
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* TheHero: Sarah and Luna.
* HopeSpot: Done by the Author to the Audience when James is [[spoiler: teleported to safety by Luna only to die a day later thanks to internalinjuries]]
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* InterspeciesAdoption: Celestia and Luna were adopted by a dragon after living alone for severalyears.years.
* InterspeciesRomance: Sarah and Luna, eventually.
* HopeSpot: Done by the Author to the Audience when James is [[spoiler: teleported to safety by Luna only to die a day later thanks to internal
* InterspeciesAdoption: Celestia and Luna were adopted by a dragon after living alone for several
* InterspeciesRomance: Sarah and Luna, eventually.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Sarah and Luna, eventually.
* NarniaTime: A serious one between Wasteland time and Equestrian time. Sometimes a few days in the Wasteland equals a week or a year in Equestria or in more extreme cases, a single day in the Wastes can be equal to several hundred years of Equestrian time. It really just moves at the speed of plot.
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* TheHero: Sarah and Luna
* TimeDilation: A serious one between Wasteland time and Equestrian time. Sometimes a few days in the Wasteland equals a week or a year in Equestria or in more extreme cases, a single day in the Wastes can be equal to several hundred years of Equestrian time. It really just moves at the speed of plot.
* TimeDilation: A serious one between Wasteland time and Equestrian time. Sometimes a few days in the Wasteland equals a week or a year in Equestria or in more extreme cases, a single day in the Wastes can be equal to several hundred years of Equestrian time. It really just moves at the speed of plot.
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* ShoutOut: Several mentionable ones. ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'''s 'why are we here' is discussed by a pair of super mutants moments before they're killed. A man who resembles the Doctor shows up to offer Sarah aid at one point, though he appears to only resemble him in appearance.
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* ShoutOut: Several mentionable ones. ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'''s ''WebAnimation/RedVsBlue'''s 'why are we here' is discussed by a pair of super mutants moments before they're killed. A man who resembles the Doctor shows up to offer Sarah aid at one point, though he appears to only resemble him in appearance.
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* TranquilFury: Celestia is a master of this, as proven when she took on [[spoiler:Xanthos's]] army. [[WorldOfCardBoardSpeech Especially when she tells him what he's up against]].
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* TranquilFury: Celestia is a master of this, as proven when she took on [[spoiler:Xanthos's]] army. [[WorldOfCardBoardSpeech Especially when she tells him what he's up against]].against.
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* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Celestia gives Xanthos a rather terrifying one after he [[spoiler:kills Clover the Clever and tells her of his plans to enslave Luna.]]
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* {{BFS}}: Both Luna and Celestia have them, though Luna’s silver broadsword Daybreaker is much more prominent.
* BestialityIsDepraved: Wadsworth (Sarah’s robotic butler) is horrified by the idea of his master sleeping with what equates to a horse even before Sarah and Luna hook up.
* BestialityIsDepraved: Wadsworth (Sarah’s robotic butler) is horrified by the idea of his master sleeping with what equates to a horse even before Sarah and Luna hook up.
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* {{BFS}}: Both Luna and Celestia have them, though Luna’s Luna's silver broadsword Daybreaker is much more prominent.
* BestialityIsDepraved: Wadsworth(Sarah’s (Sarah's robotic butler) is horrified by the idea of his master sleeping with what equates to a horse even before Sarah and Luna hook up.
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* CurbstompBattle: Celestia versus [[spoiler: Xanthos’s army.]] She takes it on virtually alone and comes out of it without so much as a scratch on her armour.
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* CurbstompBattle: Celestia versus [[spoiler: Xanthos’s Xanthos's army.]] She takes it on virtually alone and comes out of it without so much as a scratch on her armour.
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* ShoutOut: Several mentionable ones. ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'''s ‘why are we here’ is discussed by a pair of super mutants moments before they’re killed. A man who resembles the Doctor shows up to offer Sarah aid at one point, though he appears to only resemble him in appearance.
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* ShoutOut: Several mentionable ones. ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'''s ‘why 'why are we here’ here' is discussed by a pair of super mutants moments before they’re they're killed. A man who resembles the Doctor shows up to offer Sarah aid at one point, though he appears to only resemble him in appearance.
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''Wandering Moon'' is a {{VideoGame/Fallout 3}}/WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Crossover by Ed2481 on [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137585/wandering-moon Fimfiction.net]] featuring the Lone Wanderer and Princess Luna.
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''Wandering Moon'' is a {{VideoGame/Fallout 3}}/WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Crossover by Ed2481 [=Ed2481=] on [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137585/wandering-moon Fimfiction.net]] featuring the Lone Wanderer and Princess Luna.
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* BerserkButton: Luna does ''not'' like Necromancy. She usually executes anyone or anything related to it. This includes ghouls who greatly resemble zombies. Fortunately, Sarah manages to talk her out of killing any non-feral ones.
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** Luna does ''not'' like Necromancy. She usually executes anyone or anything related to it. This includes ghouls who greatly resemble zombies. Fortunately, Sarah manages to talk her out of killing any non-feral ones.
** Luna does ''not'' like Necromancy. She usually executes anyone or anything related to it. This includes ghouls who greatly resemble zombies. Fortunately, Sarah manages to talk her out of killing any non-feral ones.
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* [[CurbstompBattle Curb-Stomp Battle]]: Celestia versus [[spoiler: Xanthos’s army.]] She takes it on virtually alone and comes out of it without so much as a scratch on her armour.
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* [[CurbstompBattle Curb-Stomp Battle]]: CurbstompBattle: Celestia versus [[spoiler: Xanthos’s army.]] She takes it on virtually alone and comes out of it without so much as a scratch on her armour.
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* Expy: A Godlike character who some consider to be a big good, but with a surprising dark side, who wields a sword called 'Dawnbreaker', and absolutely loathes necromancy. Wait, are we talking about Luna or [[Franchise/TheElderScrolls Meridia?]]
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: A Godlike godlike character who some consider to be a big good, but with a surprising dark side, who wields a sword called 'Dawnbreaker', and absolutely loathes necromancy. Wait, are we talking about Luna or [[Franchise/TheElderScrolls Meridia?]]
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''Wandering Moon'' is a {{VideoGame/Fallout 3}}/WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Crossover by Ed2481 on Fimfiction.net featuring the Lone Wanderer and Princess Luna.
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''Wandering Moon'' is a {{VideoGame/Fallout 3}}/WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Crossover by Ed2481 on [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137585/wandering-moon Fimfiction.net net]] featuring the Lone Wanderer and Princess Luna.
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A {{VideoGame/Fallout 3}}/WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Crossover Fic by Ed2481, centering on the adventures the Lone Wanderer and Princess Luna.
Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137585/wandering-moon here]].
Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137585/wandering-moon here]].
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* AGodIAm: As to be expected, Braun once more proves to be a completely irredeemable control freak with delusions of grandeur brought on by his control of Tranquility Lane.
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* AGodIAm: AGodAmI: As to be expected, Braun once more proves to be a completely irredeemable control freak with delusions of grandeur brought on by his control of Tranquility Lane.
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* OneOfUs: The story mentions several tropes by name.
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** In chapter 36, Luna takes several grazing hits from a submachine gun. She says that [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail "Tis but a series of flesh wounds."]]
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** In chapter 36, Luna takes several grazing hits from a submachine gun. She says that [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail [[Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail "Tis but a series of flesh wounds."]]
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* BadassPrincess: Luna qualifies. Between her sword, laser rifle, and magic, she’s honestly more of a threat than Sarah is most of the time.
** Queen Celestia catches wind of a centaur named Xanthos who is attempting to summon Luna and start a new lunar rebellion. Xanthos had [[BadassArmy an army]]. The Royal Guard had [[PhysicalGod Celestia]]. She led the charge personally, and ordered her own forces to stay ten minutes behind her ''so she wouldn't kill them by accident''.
** Queen Celestia catches wind of a centaur named Xanthos who is attempting to summon Luna and start a new lunar rebellion. Xanthos had [[BadassArmy an army]]. The Royal Guard had [[PhysicalGod Celestia]]. She led the charge personally, and ordered her own forces to stay ten minutes behind her ''so she wouldn't kill them by accident''.
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* Expy: A Godlike character who some consider to be a big good, but with a surprising dark side, who wields a sword called 'Dawnbreaker', and absolutely loathes necromancy. Wait, are we talking about Luna or [[TheElderScrolls Meridia?]]
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* Expy: A Godlike character who some consider to be a big good, but with a surprising dark side, who wields a sword called 'Dawnbreaker', and absolutely loathes necromancy. Wait, are we talking about Luna or [[TheElderScrolls [[Franchise/TheElderScrolls Meridia?]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: We never do find out what happened to Colonel Autumn.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never do find out what happened to Colonel Autumn.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: We never do find out what happened to Colonel Autumn.
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* ShoutOut: Several mentionable ones. RedVsBlue’s ‘why are we here’ is discussed by a pair of super mutants moments before they’re killed. A man who resembles the Doctor shows up to offer Sarah aid at one point, though he appears to only resemble him in appearance.
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* ShoutOut: Several mentionable ones. RedVsBlue’s ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'''s ‘why are we here’ is discussed by a pair of super mutants moments before they’re killed. A man who resembles the Doctor shows up to offer Sarah aid at one point, though he appears to only resemble him in appearance.
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Now stranded in a hostile and violent world quite unlike their own Luna and Nightmare Moon must work together to make their way home and reclaim the throne that is rightfully theirs.
However the alicorn and her nightmare aren't the only ones searching for something. Joining them on their quest is Sarah Summers, a young woman recently kicked out of Vault 101 who holds a destiny greater than any other in the Wasteland.
However the alicorn and her nightmare aren't the only ones searching for something. Joining them on their quest is Sarah Summers, a young woman recently kicked out of Vault 101 who holds a destiny greater than any other in the Wasteland.
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Now stranded in a hostile and violent world quite unlike their own own, Luna and Nightmare Moon must work together to make their way home and reclaim the throne that is rightfully theirs.
However However, the alicorn and her nightmare aren't the only ones searching for something. Joining them on their quest is Sarah Summers, a young woman recently kicked out of Vault 101 who holds a destiny greater than any other in the Wasteland.
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A {{VideoGame/Fallout 3}}/WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Crossover Fic by Ed2481, centering on the adventures the Lone Wanderer and Princess Luna.
Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137585/wandering-moon here]].
Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137585/wandering-moon here]].