History FanFic / TwilightRevised

* TheBadGuyWins

* {{Brainwashed}}

* CrapsackWorld: What Equestria becomes under the rule of Nightmare Moon.
* DarkFic

* FakeMemories: These are all part of the package Twilight gets.

* MindRape

* CoversAlwaysLie: The cover art is a cute, pastel-colored picture of a lovestruck Twilight skipping after Princess Celestia, making it look like some kind of romance story. The real story is ''much'' darker.

* DespairEventHorizon[-/-]NietzscheWannabe: [[spoiler:Twilight crosses into this frame of mind by the story's end]].

* DudeWheresMyRespect: Twilight has a particularly sniveling sort of reaction at first when she doesn't win much approval from Nightmare Moon.

* [[spoiler:TheBadGuyWins]]

* [[spoiler:DownerEnding]]: [[spoiler:The story ends with Twilight's banishment to the Sun]].
** [[spoiler:BittersweetEnding]]: [[spoiler:Arguably for Twilight, considering she has the real Celestia for company. For the rest of the world, not so much]].

* [[spoiler: TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt]]: [[spoiler:It's made abundantly clear that the ponies have no hope of surviving TheNightThatNeverEnds]].

* [[spoiler: ShaggyDogStory: Borders on ShootTheShaggyDog. Everything Twilight does either helps Nightmare Moon or ends up being completely ineffectual]].

''Twilight, Revised'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' DarkFic by Vimbert the Unimpressive. It is an AlternateUniverseFic that takes place as the main six confront Nightmare Moon. But rather than defeating her, Nightmare Moon casts a spell on Twilight that makes her see Princess Celestia instead.

In a world where she sees from a distorted perspective, all Twilight Sparkle can do is cling to the one pony she knows will never let her down: her teacher, the princess... no matter which princess her addled brain tells her that is. Twilight's used to rewriting letters, but when she's the one being rewritten, she finds the sensation to be altogether different.

* BoldInflation: Twilight puts a lot of emphasis on '''Her'''. The ''exact'' Amount depends on her mental state.

* CrapsackWorld: What Equestria is becoming under the rule of [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]].
* [[spoiler:DownerEnding]]
* TheDragon: [[spoiler:Twilight to Nightmare Moon, unwittingly.]]
* TheDreaded: [[spoiler:Twilight, eventually.]]

* DudeWheresMyRespect: Twilight has a particularly sniveling sort of reaction at first when she doesn't win much approval from [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]].
* GainaxEnding: [[spoiler: In the last chapter, Twilight suddenly manifests the Element of Magic, blasts Nightmare Moon out a window, then either dies, is possessed, or is exiled to the sun with Princess Celestia. Almost none of this is explained.]]
* HappinessInSlavery: Twilight Sparkle is this to "Princess Celestia" (actually [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]]) until the end of chapter 3, where she finds out the truth. But until that point, Twilight constantly says she is not worthy to be her "Celestia's" student, but willing to stand by her side, and even begins to think of herself as "Celestia's" pet.
* HopeSpot: Several. The most explicit example is[[spoiler: near the end, when Twilight actually severely injures Nightmare Moon in combat.]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: A notable one that ends in almost literal MindRape, with [[spoiler: a Nightmare Moon-inspired clone of Twilight rewriting Twilight's memories and then forcing herself on the actual Twilight as BrainwashedAndCrazy sets in.]]

* KilledOffScreen: [[spoiler:Rarity. Rainbow Dash shortly after.]]

* MoreThanMindControl
* [[spoiler: ShaggyDogStory: Borders on ShootTheShaggyDog. Everything Twilight does either helps Nightmare Moon or ends up being completely ineffectual.]]
* TheNightThatNeverEnds: In this version, [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon wins, and her Eternal Night will no doubt last forever.]]
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Nightmare Moon towards Twilight, several times.

* BrokenBase: Around the release of the final chapter, the base splintered, with some liking the [[spoiler: GainaxEnding]] and some leaving long rants in the comments. The author eventually gave a nod to those who had issues by adding a genre to the story warning readers of its [[spoiler: ShaggyDogStory]] status.

* TheNightThatNeverEnds: In this version, [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon wins, and her Eternal Night will no doubt last forever.]]

* HopeSpot: Plenty - Imagine the story's HappyEnding ([[spoiler:not that it ever comes]]) as a piece of meat on a string that you try to swallow ''again and again''.

* HopeSpot: Plenty - Imagine the story's HappyEnd as a piece of meat on a string that you try to swallow ''again and again''.

* HopeSpot: Plenty - Imagine the story as a piece of meat on a string that you try to swallow.

* HopeSpot: Plenty - Imagine the story as a piece of meat on a string that gets yanked back out of your throat after you eat it ''again and again''.

* HopeSpot

* LaResistance

* NightThatNeverEnds: In this version, [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon wins, and her Eternal Night will no doubt last forever.]]

* MoreThanMindControl

* KilledOffScreen: [[spoiler:Rarity.]]

* TheDragon: [[spoiler:Twilight to Nightmare Moon]]

''Twilight, Revised'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' DarkFic by Vimbert the Unimpressive. It is an AlternateUniverseFic that takes place as the main six confront Nightmare Moon. But rather than defeating her, Nightmare Moon casts a spell on Twilight that makes her see Princess Celestia instead of NMM.

A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' DarkFic by Vimbert the Unimpressive. It is an AlternateUniverseFic that takes place as the main six confront Nightmare Moon. But rather than defeating her, Nightmare Moon casts a spell on Twilight that makes her see Princess Celestia instead of NMM.