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Fan Fic: Twilight Revised
Twilight, Revised is a My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic Dark Fic by Vimbert the Unimpressive. It is an Alternate Universe Fic that takes place as the main six confront Nightmare Moon. But rather than defeating her, Nightmare Moon casts a spell on Twilight that makes her see Princess Celestia instead.

In a world where she sees from a distorted perspective, all Twilight Sparkle can do is cling to the one pony she knows will never let her down: her teacher, the princess... no matter which princess her addled brain tells her that is. Twilight's used to rewriting letters, but when she's the one being rewritten, she finds the sensation to be altogether different.

Can be read over here.

This Fan Fic provides examples of:

  • The Bad Guy Wins
  • Bold Inflation: Twilight puts a lot of emphasis on Her. The exact Amount depends on her mental state.
  • Brainwashed
  • Brainwash Residue: Twilight struggles with this when she briefly shakes off control.
  • Crapsack World: What Equestria is becoming under the rule of Nightmare Moon.
  • Downer Ending
  • The Dragon: Twilight to Nightmare Moon, unwittingly.
  • The Dreaded: Twilight, eventually.
  • Fan Disservice: Twilight's misguided attempt at seduction, made all the worse by the circumstances.
  • Fake Memories: These are all part of the package Twilight gets.
  • Dude, Where's My Respect?: Twilight has a particularly sniveling sort of reaction at first when she doesn't win much approval from Nightmare Moon.
  • Gainax Ending: In the last chapter, Twilight suddenly manifests the Element of Magic, blasts Nightmare Moon out a window, then either dies, is possessed, or is exiled to the sun with Princess Celestia. Almost none of this is explained.
  • Happiness in Slavery: Twilight Sparkle is this to "Princess Celestia" (actually Nightmare Moon) until the end of chapter 3, where she finds out the truth. But until that point, Twilight constantly says she is not worthy to be her "Celestia's" student, but willing to stand by her side, and even begins to think of herself as "Celestia's" pet.
  • Hope Spot: Several. The most explicit example is near the end, when Twilight actually severely injures Nightmare Moon in combat.
  • Journey to the Center of the Mind: A notable one that ends in almost literal Mind Rape, with a Nightmare Moon-inspired clone of Twilight rewriting Twilight's memories and then forcing herself on the actual Twilight as Brainwashed and Crazy sets in.
  • La Résistance: Rainbow Dash is either leading one or part of one.
  • Killed Off Screen: Rarity. Rainbow Dash shortly after.
  • Madness Mantra: Twilight has a lot of those towards Her.
  • More than Mind Control
  • Shaggy Dog Story: Borders on Shoot the Shaggy Dog. Everything Twilight does either helps Nightmare Moon or ends up being completely ineffectual.
  • The Night That Never Ends: In this version, Nightmare Moon wins, and her Eternal Night will no doubt last forever.
  • You Have Outlived Your Usefulness: Nightmare Moon towards Twilight, several times.
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