History FanFic / TheMonsterWeMade

21st May '15 12:10:14 AM CorahIlCappo
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The story can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/94846/the-monster-we-made here]]. There is a sequel in progress, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/141957/memoirs-in-ink-and-blood Memoirs in Ink and Blood]]''.

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The story can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/94846/the-monster-we-made here]]. There is a sequel in progress, as well, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/141957/memoirs-in-ink-and-blood Memoirs in Ink and Blood]]''.



* ConstrainedWriting: Each chapter, except for the last one and the bonus chapter, has exactly 1000 words. The last chapter has exactly 2000 words. Since the bonus chapter is about [[spoiler:Discord]], it has a non-round number: 1050 words. The sequel is following the same pattern so far. The author calls it "an exercise in minimalism".

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* AsTheGoodBookSays: In Twilight's chapter towards the end of the first fic, she paraphrases Romans 8:31.
-->Twilight: If the gods are for us, then who can be against us?
* BiblicalMotifs: There are several times where both the fic and its sequel tie themes back to the Bible. This becomes most prominent in the sequel, which even has a chapter titled ''I Am''.
**In fact, the sequel cranked this up even further, with the authors notes on the last few chapters. They were a mystery to fans, until the author revealed that they were written in Biblical Hebrew.
* ConstrainedWriting: Each chapter, except for the last one and the bonus chapter, has exactly 1000 words. The last chapter has exactly 2000 words. Since the bonus chapter is about [[spoiler:Discord]], it has a non-round number: 1050 words. The sequel is following the same pattern so far. The author calls it "an exercise in minimalism".minimalism".
** This pattern continues into the sequel, where all chapters, save those focused on [[spoiler:Discord]] remain at 1000 words each.


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** Happens again to [[spoiler:Discord]] later in the sequel. This one was arguably more severe as he was stabbed with what seemed to be ''molten iron''.


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* TheStarsAreGoingOut: In the sequel, its implied that Twilight literally throws stars to earth as a weapon. In the same way, most of the other ponies comment that the sun and moon seem to be at war with one another, frequently leaving them in periods of eclipse.
7th Nov '13 3:19:26 PM CesarB
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* [[spoiler:PosthumousNarration]]: Except for [[spoiler:Luna and Discord]].

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* [[spoiler:PosthumousNarration]]: Except for [[spoiler:Luna [[spoiler:Luna, Discord, and Discord]].Twilight Sparkle]].
7th Nov '13 3:02:11 PM CesarB
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* AGodAmI: Twilight Sparkle.
7th Nov '13 2:49:42 PM CesarB
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* RashomonStyle
2nd Nov '13 3:24:57 PM CesarB
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-> We trained her.
-> We taught her.
-> We raised her to godhood.
-> She brought us down to earth.

''The Monster We Made'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' DarkFic by Corah Il Cappo.

Twilight Sparkle was raised into an immortal alicorn goddess by Celestia and Luna.

She rebelled against them.

The story can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/94846/the-monster-we-made here]]. There is a sequel in progress, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/141957/memoirs-in-ink-and-blood Memoirs in Ink and Blood]]''.

!!This story contains examples of:

* ApocalypticLog: the first chapter is a document left behind by Luna [[spoiler:after she was forced to flee for her life]].
* ConstrainedWriting: Each chapter, except for the last one and the bonus chapter, has exactly 1000 words. The last chapter has exactly 2000 words. Since the bonus chapter is about [[spoiler:Discord]], it has a non-round number: 1050 words. The sequel is following the same pattern so far. The author calls it "an exercise in minimalism".
* CurbStompBattle: Except for [[spoiler: Discord]], none of the characters had a chance.
* DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie keeps a smile to her end.]]
* GoneHorriblyRight: Celestia and Luna recognized Twilight Sparkle's exceptional talent, trained and taught her, and raised her into an alicorn goddess.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Rarity]].
* [[spoiler:PosthumousNarration]]: Except for [[spoiler:Luna and Discord]].
* ShutUpHannibal: [[spoiler:Discord to Twilight in the bonus chapter.]]
* SwitchingPOV: Each chapter is narrated in FirstPersonPerspective from a different character.
* TitleDrop: Twice. [[spoiler:Once in Celestia's chapter, and once at the end of the last chapter.]]
** And [[spoiler:Discord]] drops the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic series title]] [[spoiler:at the end of his chapter]].
* VisualPun: [[spoiler:Discord]] does one to Twilight. She does not take it well.
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