Line #18 FanFic/TheMonsterWeMade


1	-> We trained her.
2	-> We taught her.
3	-> We raised her to godhood.
4	-> She brought us down to earth.
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6	''The Monster We Made'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' DarkFic by Corah Il Cappo.
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8	Twilight Sparkle was raised into an immortal alicorn goddess by Celestia and Luna.
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10	She rebelled against them.
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12	The story can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/94846/the-monster-we-made here]]. There is a sequel as well, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/141957/memoirs-in-ink-and-blood Memoirs in Ink and Blood]]''.
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14	!!This story contains examples of:
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16	* AGodAmI: Twilight Sparkle.
17	* ApocalypticLog: the first chapter is a document left behind by Luna [[spoiler:after she was forced to flee for her life]].
18	* AsTheGoodBookSays: In Twilight's chapter towards the end of the first fic, she paraphrases Romans 8:31.
19	-->Twilight: If the gods are for us, then who can be against us?
20	* BiblicalMotifs: There are several times where both the fic and its sequel tie themes back to the Bible. This becomes most prominent in the sequel, which even has a chapter titled ''I Am''.
21	** In fact, the sequel cranked this up even further, with the authors notes on the last few chapters. They were a mystery to fans, until the author revealed that they were written in Biblical Hebrew.
22	* ConstrainedWriting: Each chapter, except for the last one and the bonus chapter, has exactly 1000 words. The last chapter has exactly 2000 words. Since the bonus chapter is about [[spoiler:Discord]], it has a non-round number: 1050 words. The author calls it "an exercise in minimalism".
23	** This pattern continues into the sequel, where all chapters, save those focused on [[spoiler:Discord]] remain at 1000 words each.
24	* CurbStompBattle: Except for [[spoiler: Discord]], none of the characters had a chance.
25	* DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie keeps a smile to her end.]]
26	* GoneHorriblyRight: Celestia and Luna recognized Twilight Sparkle's exceptional talent, trained and taught her, and raised her into an alicorn goddess.
27	* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Rarity]].
28	** Happens again to [[spoiler:Discord]] later in the sequel. This one was arguably more severe as he was stabbed with what seemed to be ''molten iron''.
29	* PosthumousNarration: Except for [[spoiler:Luna, Discord, and Twilight Sparkle]].
30	* RashomonStyle
31	* ShutUpHannibal: [[spoiler:Discord to Twilight in the bonus chapter.]]
32	* TheStarsAreGoingOut: In the sequel, its implied that Twilight literally throws stars to earth as a weapon. In the same way, most of the other ponies comment that the sun and moon seem to be at war with one another, frequently leaving them in periods of eclipse.
33	* SwitchingPOV: Each chapter is narrated in FirstPersonPerspective from a different character.
34	* TitleDrop: Twice. [[spoiler:Once in Celestia's chapter, and once at the end of the last chapter.]]
35	** And [[spoiler:Discord]] drops the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic series title]] [[spoiler:at the end of his chapter]].
36	* VisualPun: [[spoiler:Discord]] does one to Twilight. She does not take it well.

Context FanFic / TheMonsterWeMade