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* BelligerentSexualTension:
** Subverted by Asuka and Shinji. [[spoiler:They blow right past their mutual attraction and enter a state of mutual loathing.]]
** Possibly played straight by [[spoiler:Asuka and Toji]].
* BerserkButton: A number of characters possess or develop a few triggers that are guaranteed to piss them off:
** Derogatory remarks about Gendo are this for Rei, [[spoiler:at least at first]].
** Gendo becomes one for Shinji after they have an epic falling out over the phone.
** Any reminder of the collateral damage Asuka has caused in her solo battles, [[MyGreatestFailure for Asuka]].
** Asuka's tendencies for excessive violence for Misato, and [[spoiler:after she annihilates a hijacked Unit-00 in Terminal Dogma, for Ritsuko]].

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* ImportantHaircut - Important [[spoiler:Beard Trim]].

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* ImportantHaircut - ImportantHaircut:
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Important [[spoiler:Beard Trim]].
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* CrowningMomentofFunny
** Shinji's imagination running away with the idea of being thrown in jail for spilling classified secrets.
--> [[PrisonRape soap soap soap soap soap soap]]
** Gendo [[spoiler:sings Karaoke. With Fuyutsuki. At a strip club.]]
** Rei being mistaken for a computerized answering machine by Asuka when she takes a call for Misato.

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''Don't worry. I have a plan.''

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''Don't ->''Don't worry. I have a plan.''



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gendo delivers one hell of a speech of this kind to Shinji in Chapter 10 over the phone.

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gendo delivers one hell of a speech of this kind to Shinji in Chapter 10 over the phone. phone.
* SarcasticConfession: You have to be real careful what you tell Rei because she CAN read between lines (despite her emotionless nature)...
-->'''Asuka:''' Look, boy and girls...men and women too...have rituals.\\
'''Rei:''' Rituals?\\
'''Asuka:''' It's stupid crap girls gotta do if they wanna [[UnusualEuphemism get their mack on with the dude they want to bone]]--like cooking them lunch first or being all fake demure--because if they don't do it then everyone else thinks she's a slut.\\
'''Rei:''' Ah, so your behavior towards Mister Kaji is explained by [[BrutalHonesty your desire to "bone" him but to not appear promiscuous for wanting to do so]].\\
'''Asuka:''' [[VisibleSilence ...]]\\
'''Rei:''' Am I...in error?

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!!Tropes present in FanFic/TakingSights:

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!!Tropes present in FanFic/TakingSights:!!Tropes:



* DeadFic: No update since 2010.



* WhoWantsToLiveForEver - [[spoiler:Original Asuka. She's literally lived to the ''end of the universe''.]]

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* WhoWantsToLiveForEver - [[spoiler:Original Asuka. She's literally lived to the ''end of the universe''.]]]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gendo delivers one hell of a speech of this kind to Shinji in Chapter 10 over the phone.

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* VillainProtagonist - Sort of. Most of Gendo's plans revolves around undoing his own schemes in the [[NeonGenesisEvangelion original series]].

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* VillainProtagonist - Sort of. Most of Gendo's plans revolves around undoing his own schemes in the [[NeonGenesisEvangelion [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion original series]].



* WhoWantsToLiveForEver - [[spoiler:Original Asuka. She's literally lived to the ''end of the universe''.]]
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* WhoWantsToLiveForEver - [[spoiler:Original Asuka. She's literally lived to the ''end of the universe''.]]
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* MistakenForGay - [[spoiler:Shinji]] gets this by [[spoiler:Gendo]].
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* [[NiceJobBreakingItHero NiceJobBreakingItAntiHero]]: [[spoiler:Gendo's attempts to improve his relationship with Rei and Shinji approach EpicFail levels.]]

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* [[NiceJobBreakingItHero NiceJobBreakingItAntiHero]]: Nice Job Breaking It, Anti-Hero]]: [[spoiler:Gendo's attempts to improve his relationship with Rei and Shinji approach EpicFail levels.]]
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--> soap soap soap soap soap soap

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--> [[PrisonRape soap soap soap soap soap soapsoap]]



---> '''Fuyutsuki:''' Trust me, Shinji. If there's one thing the commander doesn't get, it's angry.
---> Thirty Minutes Ago
---> '''Gendo:''' I am going to ''murder'' that little shit.

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---> --> '''Fuyutsuki:''' Trust me, Shinji. If there's one thing the commander doesn't get, it's angry.
---> --> Thirty Minutes Ago
---> --> '''Gendo:''' I am going to ''murder'' that little shit.



--->[[spoiler:"That's how you know it, and how I, who am an illusion of your mind and definitely '''not''' a phantom from the Dark Era at the absolute end of the universe's entropic arc, know it too."]]

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--->[[spoiler:"That's -->[[spoiler:"That's how you know it, and how I, who am an illusion of your mind and definitely '''not''' a phantom from the Dark Era at the absolute end of the universe's entropic arc, know it too."]]

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* CrowningMomentofFunny - Gendo [[spoiler:sings Karaoke. With Fuyutsuki. At a strip club.]]

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* CrowningMomentofFunny - CrowningMomentofFunny
** Shinji's imagination running away with the idea of being thrown in jail for spilling classified secrets.
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Gendo [[spoiler:sings Karaoke. With Fuyutsuki. At a strip club.]]

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It Got Worse de-wicking (this entry is a Zero Context Example anyway.)


* GilliganCut - Indulged in during the lighter moments.
---> '''Fuyutsuki:''' Trust me, Shinji. If there's one thing the commander doesn't get, it's angry.
---> Thirty Minutes Ago
---> '''Gendo:''' I am going to ''murder'' that little shit.



* ItGotWorse - So, so much. And the author is only promising more.
* GilliganCut - Indulged in during the lighter moments.
---> '''Fuyutsuki:''' Trust me, Shinji. If there's one thing the commander doesn't get, it's angry.
---> Thirty Minutes Ago
---> '''Gendo:''' I am going to ''murder'' that little shit.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: In Chapter 4:
--> '''Fuyutsuki:''' "THIS! ISN'T! FUNNY!"
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** Rei being mistaken for a computerized answering machine by Asuka when she takes a call for Misato.
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A fanfic by Lavanya Six, which proceeds to turn the entire PeggySue trope completely on it's head... by sending ''[[BigBad Gendo]]'' back in time, instead of the usual (ie Shinji). [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4109686/1/Taking_Sights_Book_1 Available here]]

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A fanfic by Lavanya Six, which proceeds to turn the entire PeggySue trope completely on it's head... by sending ''[[BigBad Gendo]]'' back in time, instead of the usual (ie (i.e. Shinji). [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4109686/1/Taking_Sights_Book_1 Available here]]



* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Gendo's attempts to improve his relationship with Rei and Shinji approach EpicFail levels.]]

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Gendo's [[NiceJobBreakingItHero NiceJobBreakingItAntiHero]]: [[spoiler:Gendo's attempts to improve his relationship with Rei and Shinji approach EpicFail levels.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Gendo's attempts to improve his relationship with Rei and Shinji approach EpicFail levels.]]
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* MagnificentBastard

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* MagnificentBastardManipulativeBastard - Gendo. [[spoiler:Rarely actually works though]].

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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation - Used liberally [[spoiler:to screw over Gendo's emotional manipulation of others]]. And of Gendo himself, obviously.



* CrowningMomentOfAwesome - Asuka vs [[spoiler:Sandalphon]].
** To elaborate: [[spoiler:after the Angel's telepathic attack leaves everyone except Gendo and Asuka unconscious - ''including'' Units 00 & 02 - Asuka uses Unit 01 to fight Sandalphon. Towards the end, the battle has spilled over into Terminal Dogma, the two combatants duking it out right in front of Lilith. Skipping to the awesome: Asuka, through sheer bloody-mindedness and willpower, triggers Unit-01's Berserk State... except she's still in total control. At the end, she ''rips Lilith's mask off and uses the sharp edge to hammer/stab Sandalphon's core until it dies''.]]



* {{HSQ}} - How much worse can the situation get? Can it get worse than ''that?'' What matter of manipulative plan can Gendo come up with to try and fix it? [[spoiler:How badly will ''that'' fail?]]



* MagnificentBastard - You know who.
* ManipulativeBastard - See above. [[spoiler:Rarely actually works though]].

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* MagnificentBastard - You know who.
MagnificentBastard
* ManipulativeBastard - See above. [[spoiler:Rarely actually works though]].OldShame: [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showpost.php?p=6436929&postcount=63 To Lavanya Six, believe it or not]].
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* GilliganCut - Indulged in during the lighter moments.
---> '''Fuyutsuki:''' Trust me, Shinji. If there's one thing the commander doesn't get, it's angry.
---> Thirty Minutes Ago
---> '''Gendo:''' I am going to ''murder'' that little shit.

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* {{HSQ}} - How much worse can the situation get? Can it get worse than ''that?'' What matter of manipulative plan can Gendo come up with to try and fix it? [[spoiler:How badly will ''that'' fail?]]



* {{HSQ}} - How much worse can the situation get? Can it get worse than ''that?'' What matter of manipulative plan can Gendo come up with to try and fix it? [[spoiler:How badly will ''that'' fail?]]



** And not just that--one flash forward to an EoE sequence sees Misato make a comment about Asuka's shorter hair.

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** And not just that--one flash forward to an EoE [=EoE=] sequence sees Misato make a comment about Asuka's shorter hair.



* MagnificentBastard - You know who.
* ManipulativeBastard - See above. [[spoiler:Rarely actually works though]].



* MagnificentBastard - You know who.
* ManipulativeBastard - See above. [[spoiler:Rarely actually works though]]



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* TroubledButCute: Misato's [[TroubledButCute exact words]] to describe Shinji in the third chapter.

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* CallingTheOldManOut - Fuyutsuki (ironically) and [[spoiler: Shinji]].

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* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler:Asuka's]] started earlier than in canon.
* CallingTheOldManOut - Fuyutsuki (ironically) and [[spoiler: Shinji]].[[spoiler:Shinji]].


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* DysfunctionJunction: Misato's household, even more than the canon version.


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* PromotionToParent: Hikari Horaki after her mother's death.


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* ScheduleSlip: Was once updated on a somewhat regular basis, then slowed down and eventually stopped moving for a while in 2009. Got one more chapter in early 2010, and it's been dormant since then. The author has admitted that she's struggled with the direction the story had taken, and that it was making it difficult to write. She has, however, promised that she will eventually finish it, as she doesn't want to become "one of those authors.

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* ScheduleSlip: Was once updated on a somewhat regular basis, then slowed down and eventually stopped moving for a while in 2009. Got one more chapter in early 2010, and it's been dormant since then. The author has admitted that she's struggled with the direction the story had taken, and that it was making it difficult to write. She has, however, promised that she will eventually finish it, as she doesn't want to become "one of those authors."
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* ScheduleSlip: Was once updated on a somewhat regular basis, then slowed down and eventually stopped moving for a while in 2009. Got one more chapter in early 2010, and it's been dormant since then. The author has admitted that she's struggled with the direction the story had taken, and that it was making it difficult to write. She has, however, promised that she will eventually finish it, as she doesn't want to become "one of those authors.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation - Used liberally [[spoiler: to screw over Gendo's emotional manipulation of others]]. And of Gendo himself, obviously.

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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation - Used liberally [[spoiler: to [[spoiler:to screw over Gendo's emotional manipulation of others]]. And of Gendo himself, obviously.



* CreepyChild - [[spoiler: Rei]]. As Hideki Anno always intended.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome - Asuka vs [[spoiler: Sandalphon]].

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* CreepyChild - [[spoiler: Rei]]. As Rei, as Hideki Anno always intended.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome - Asuka vs [[spoiler: Sandalphon]].[[spoiler:Sandalphon]].



* CrowningMomentofFunny - Gendo [[spoiler:sings Karaoke. With Fuyutsuki. At a strip club.]]

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* CrowningMomentofFunny - Gendo [[spoiler:sings Karaoke. With Fuyutsuki. Fuyutsuki. At a strip club.]]



* PeggySue - Subverted. It's the ''villain'' that goes back. [[spoiler:And a slightly Lovecraftian, immortal version of Asuka, but not properly]]

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* PeggySue - Subverted. It's the ''villain'' that goes back. [[spoiler:And a slightly Lovecraftian, immortal version of Asuka, but not properly]]properly.]]

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* CallingTheOldManOut - Fuyutsuki (ironically) and [[spoiler: Shinji]]

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* CallingTheOldManOut - Fuyutsuki (ironically) and [[spoiler: Shinji]]Shinji]].



* CrowningMomentOfAwesome - Asuka vs [[spoiler: Sandalphon]]

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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome - Asuka vs [[spoiler: Sandalphon]]Sandalphon]].



* {{HSQ}} - How much worse can the situation get? Can it get worse than ''that?'' What matter of manipulative plan can Gendo come up with to try and fix it? [[spoiler: How badly will ''that'' fail?]]
* DirtyOldWoman - Yui and [[spoiler: Lovecraftian!Asuka]].

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* {{HSQ}} - How much worse can the situation get? Can it get worse than ''that?'' What matter of manipulative plan can Gendo come up with to try and fix it? [[spoiler: How [[spoiler:How badly will ''that'' fail?]]
* DirtyOldWoman - Yui and [[spoiler: Lovecraftian!Asuka]].[[spoiler:Lovecraftian!Asuka]].



* HeterosexualLifePartners - Gendo and Fuyutsuki. [[spoiler: Depending on if the balls touched while fulling Yui's birthday request of a threesome.]]
* ImportantHaircut - Important [[spoiler: Beard Trim]]

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* HeterosexualLifePartners - Gendo and Fuyutsuki. [[spoiler: Depending [[spoiler:Depending on if the balls touched while fulling Yui's birthday request of a threesome.]]
* ImportantHaircut - Important [[spoiler: Beard Trim]][[spoiler:Beard Trim]].



* LoveAtFirstPunch - possibly [[spoiler: Touji]]
* PeggySue - subverted. It's the ''villain'' that goes back. [[spoiler: And a slightly Lovecraftian, immortal version of Asuka, but not properly]]
* MagnificentBastard - you know who
* ManipulativeBastard - see above. [[spoiler: Rarely actually works though]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong - [[spoiler: It doesn't work very well]]
* SoProudOfYou - Gendo does this. [[spoiler: It gets seen through]]

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* LoveAtFirstPunch - possibly [[spoiler: Touji]]
Possibly [[spoiler:Touji]].
* PeggySue - subverted.Subverted. It's the ''villain'' that goes back. [[spoiler: And [[spoiler:And a slightly Lovecraftian, immortal version of Asuka, but not properly]]
* MagnificentBastard - you You know who
who.
* ManipulativeBastard - see See above. [[spoiler: Rarely [[spoiler:Rarely actually works though]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong - [[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It doesn't work very well]]
well.]]
* SoProudOfYou - Gendo does this. [[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It gets seen through]]through.]]
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Done by [[spoiler:Lovecraftian!Asuka]] in Shinji's dream.
--->[[spoiler:"That's how you know it, and how I, who am an illusion of your mind and definitely '''not''' a phantom from the Dark Era at the absolute end of the universe's entropic arc, know it too."]]



* VillainProtagonist - sort of. Most of Gendo's plans revolves around undoing his own schemes in the [[NeonGenesisEvangelion original series]].
* VillainsOutShopping - Gendo and Fuyutsuki [[spoiler: go to a strip club. And it's hilarious!]]
* WellDoneSonGuy - Deconstructed at both ends
* WhoWantsToLiveForEver - [[spoiler: Original Asuka. She's literally lived to the ''end of the universe'']]

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* VillainProtagonist - sort Sort of. Most of Gendo's plans revolves around undoing his own schemes in the [[NeonGenesisEvangelion original series]].
* VillainsOutShopping - Gendo and Fuyutsuki [[spoiler: go [[spoiler:go to a strip club. And it's hilarious!]]
* WellDoneSonGuy - Deconstructed at both ends
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* WhoWantsToLiveForEver - [[spoiler: Original [[spoiler:Original Asuka. She's literally lived to the ''end of the universe'']]universe''.]]

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