History FanFic / ShinraHighSOLDIER

29th Nov '17 12:20:28 AM Ximei
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Between the ages of 14 and 18 (2002-2006), Sephirothslave wrote her two novels Shinra High and Shinra SOLDIER, boastiidiotbng a total of [[DoorStopper 169 chapters (170 including the epilogue)]] of meandering plot lines. What starts off seeming as a typical HighSchoolAU turns out to be her attempt to write the history before the story began.

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Between the ages of 14 and 18 (2002-2006), Sephirothslave wrote her two novels stories Shinra High and Shinra SOLDIER, boastiidiotbng boasting a total of [[DoorStopper 169 chapters (170 including the epilogue)]] of meandering plot lines. What starts off seeming as a typical HighSchoolAU turns out to be her attempt to write the history before the story began.
25th Nov '17 11:49:16 AM MagBas
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Between the ages of 14 and 18 (2002-2006), Sephirothslave wrote her two self-proclaimed [[SmallNameBigEgo "novels"]] Shinra High and Shinra SOLDIER, boastiidiotbng a total of [[DoorStopper 169 chapters (170 including the epilogue)]] of meandering plot lines. What starts off seeming as a typical HighSchoolAU turns out to be her attempt to write the history before the story began.

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Between the ages of 14 and 18 (2002-2006), Sephirothslave wrote her two self-proclaimed [[SmallNameBigEgo "novels"]] novels Shinra High and Shinra SOLDIER, boastiidiotbng a total of [[DoorStopper 169 chapters (170 including the epilogue)]] of meandering plot lines. What starts off seeming as a typical HighSchoolAU turns out to be her attempt to write the history before the story began.
25th Nov '17 11:44:32 AM MasamiPhoenix
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* PowerCreepPowerSeep: The other locations on Gaia (including minor locations like Cosmo Canyon or Fort Condor) are inflated to be equal to Shinra in either resources, military or both, to try to give Shinra more challenging opponents, or to let Julia and Sephiroth import services and goods on a greater level.
25th Nov '17 8:29:11 AM MasamiPhoenix
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Between the ages of 14 and 18 (2002-2006), Sephirothslave wrote her two self-proclaimed [[SmallNameBigEgo "novels"]] Shinra High and Shinra SOLDIER, boasting a total of [[DoorStopper 169 chapters (170 including the epilogue)]] of meandering plot lines. What starts off seeming as a typical HighSchoolAU turns out to be her attempt to write the history before the story began.

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Between the ages of 14 and 18 (2002-2006), Sephirothslave wrote her two self-proclaimed [[SmallNameBigEgo "novels"]] Shinra High and Shinra SOLDIER, boasting boastiidiotbng a total of [[DoorStopper 169 chapters (170 including the epilogue)]] of meandering plot lines. What starts off seeming as a typical HighSchoolAU turns out to be her attempt to write the history before the story began.


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** Even by the standards of this fic, Julia holds the ball tight when she decides to drive super fast in white-out conditions, rather than just turn the heat up in her luxury car, resulting in her crashing the car and nearly killing Sephiroth in the process.
28th Oct '17 12:57:10 PM nombretomado
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* {{Christianity}}: Julia says that she is a Christian, even though the story is supposed to take place in the Final Fantasy VII universe.
17th Oct '17 8:31:38 PM ImperialMajestyXO
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* DeathOfAChild: Happens in Chapter 88. Julia and Sephiroth's infant son is violently killed onscreen by a group of soldiers under Hojo's command. It is implied that all the children in the capital of Wutai are killed as well.

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* DeathOfAChild: Happens in Chapter 88.88 of Shinra SOLDIER. Julia and Sephiroth's infant son is violently killed onscreen by a group of soldiers under Hojo's command. It is implied that all the children in the capital of Wutai are killed as well.
17th Oct '17 8:31:12 PM ImperialMajestyXO
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* DeathOfAChild: Happens in Chapter 88. Julia and Sephiroth's infant son is violently killed onscreen by a group of soldiers under Hojo's command. It is implied that all the children in the capital of Wutai are killed as well.



* InfantImmortality: Averted. Julia and Sephiroth's infant son is violently killed onscreen by a group of soldiers under Hojo's command. It is implied that all the children in the capital of Wutai are killed as well.
16th Oct '17 10:35:57 AM ImperialMajestyXO
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** When they know that an enemy army is going to move on their location in three weeks, the entire Shinra army just sits there and waits for it, instead of hitting the army in transit. (particularly since the army has to march through the Midgar Swamp, which provides an amazing choke point, complete with mobility impeding swamp and a deadly, violent, snake-monster). While waiting, they decide to withdraw all training from the new recruits, and instead give extra training to the first-class SOLDIERs. They make no attempts to up defense and engage the enemy inside the city, instead of beyond the impenetrable wall. Their tactic is to literally throw grunts at the enemy until they run out of bullets and cannonballs.

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** When they know that an enemy army is going to move on their location in three weeks, the entire Shinra army just sits there and waits for it, instead of hitting the army in transit. (particularly since the army has to march through the Midgar Swamp, which provides an amazing choke point, complete with mobility impeding swamp and a deadly, violent, snake-monster). While waiting, they decide to withdraw all training from the new recruits, and instead give extra training to the first-class SOLDIERs.[=SOLDIERs=]. They make no attempts to up defense and engage the enemy inside the city, instead of beyond the impenetrable wall. Their tactic is to literally throw grunts at the enemy until they run out of bullets and cannonballs.
5th Oct '17 3:43:29 PM MasamiPhoenix
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Julia and later Laura. Julia is jealous of Laura's relationship with Sephiroth, whom she is infatuated with, while Laura becomes briefly jealous of Julia when she sees Sephiroth smiling and laughing with her.

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* ClingyJealousGirl: Julia and later Laura. Julia is jealous of Laura's relationship with Sephiroth, whom she is infatuated with, while Laura becomes briefly jealous of Julia when she sees Sephiroth smiling and laughing with her. Laura also gets upset that Sephiroth isn't paying attention to her for a few mere hours, while he's concerned that his friend (Julia) might be dying.
21st Dec '16 8:58:52 AM Discar
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* AManIsNotAVirgin: Averted. Julia seems outright pleased by Sephiroth's lack of sex drive.
** Due to inconsistent characterization, he was a HormoneAddledTeenager with his first girlfriend, Laura.



* ConflictBall: Laura is defined by this quality. She is introduced as a kind girl with a loving family so Sephiroth could fall for her, causing Julia to be unable to confess her feelings for him. The moment this is established, Laura is redefined as a selfish, shallow bitch who only wants Sephiroth because he does her work for her, so that Sephiroth can be with "the wrong girl." This leads to her breaking up with Sephiroth because [[AManIsNotAVirgin he won't sleep with her.]] Once Sephiroth is back with Julia, she [[SpurnedIntoSuicide commits suicide, declaring it's because she doesn't want to live without Sephiroth]], even though she's the one who ended their relationship.

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* ConflictBall: Laura is defined by this quality. She is introduced as a kind girl with a loving family so Sephiroth could fall for her, causing Julia to be unable to confess her feelings for him. The moment this is established, Laura is redefined as a selfish, shallow bitch who only wants Sephiroth because he does her work for her, so that Sephiroth can be with "the wrong girl." This leads to her breaking up with Sephiroth because [[AManIsNotAVirgin he won't sleep with her.]] her. Once Sephiroth is back with Julia, she [[SpurnedIntoSuicide commits suicide, declaring it's because she doesn't want to live without Sephiroth]], even though she's the one who ended their relationship.
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