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->''"[[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming No matter what you do, no matter who you become, you're still my sister. And I'm always going to protect you, to forgive you, because that's exactly what you did for me.]]"''
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6726188/1/Hunger Hunger]] is a VideoGame/{{Prototype}} fanfic written by Fanfiction.net user [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2737433/ TheWunn]].
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[[IThoughtItMeant Not to be confused]] with the [[{{Film.Hunger}} 2008 movie]] of the [[SimilarlyNamedWorks same name.]]
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* MoralMyopia: Wilson in the sequel has this in spades. He [[WhatTheHellHero calls Alex out on his actions throughout the series]], only to turn around and ''do the exact same thing.'' [[spoiler:[[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity Though it is shown that he is growing increasingly unhinged as]] [[EvilFeelsGood he realises the high that his abilities give him.]]]]
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* MoralMyopia: Wilson in the sequel has this in spades. He [[WhatTheHellHero calls Alex out on his actions throughout the series]], only to turn around and ''do the exact same thing.'' [[spoiler:[[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity Though it is shown that he is growing increasingly unhinged as]] [[EvilFeelsGood he realises the high that his abilities give him.]]]]
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* OneWordTitle: As the protagonist can eat people.
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-->'''Dana:''' ''I've always been a bit of a [[AWorldwidePunomenon heartbreaker]]''
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-->'''Dana:''' ''I've always been a bit of a [[AWorldwidePunomenon [[{{Pun}} heartbreaker]]''
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Wilson in the sequel. He [[WhatTheHellHero calls Alex out on his actions throughout the series]], only to turn around and ''do the exact same thing.'' [[spoiler:[[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity Though it is shown that he is growing increasingly unhinged as]] [[EvilFeelsGood he realises the high that his abilities give him.]]]]
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* {{Hypocrite}}: MoralMyopia: Wilson in the sequel.sequel has this in spades. He [[WhatTheHellHero calls Alex out on his actions throughout the series]], only to turn around and ''do the exact same thing.'' [[spoiler:[[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity Though it is shown that he is growing increasingly unhinged as]] [[EvilFeelsGood he realises the high that his abilities give him.]]]]
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Wilson in the sequel. He [[WhatTheHellHero calls Alex out on his actions throughout the series]], only to turn around and ''do the exact same thing.'' [[spoiler:[[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity Though it is shown that he is growing increasingly unhinged as]] [[EvilFeelsGood he realises the high that his abilities give him.]]]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6726188/1/Hunger Hunger]] is a {{Prototype}} fanfic written by Fanfiction.net user [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2737433/ TheWunn]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6726188/1/Hunger Hunger]] is a {{Prototype}} VideoGame/{{Prototype}} fanfic written by Fanfiction.net user [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2737433/ TheWunn]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: Well duh, this is a {{Prototype}} fanfiction, what did you expect?
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* ImAHumanitarian: Well duh, this is a {{Prototype}} VideoGame/{{Prototype}} fanfiction, what did you expect?
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** Two references to InFAMOUS, both concerning the protagonist's [[ShockAndAwe abilities.]]
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** Two references to InFAMOUS, ''VideoGame/{{inFAMOUS}}'', both concerning the protagonist's [[ShockAndAwe abilities.]]
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*BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:''The Infected'']] manage to pull this off. [[spoiler:Although slightly subverted in that they immediately attack Dana afterward.]]
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** Two references to InFAMOUS, both concerning the protagonist's [[ShockAndAwe abilities.]]
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-->'''Dana:''' ''I've always been a bit of a heartbreaker.''
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-->'''Dana:''' ''I've always been a bit of a heartbreaker.''[[AWorldwidePunomenon heartbreaker]]''
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There is now a [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6767118/1/Gods_Among_Men sequel]] in the works, currently on hiatus.
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There is now a [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6767118/1/Gods_Among_Men sequel]] in the works, currently on alternating on-and-off hiatus.
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* BeigeProse
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* {{Gorn}}
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* HowDoIShotWeb: Dana, at first.
* IdiotBall: Dana picks it up in a fight with [[spoiler: her brother]], when she turns and walks away after only destroying the heart of her opponent.
* IdiotBall: Dana picks it up in a fight with [[spoiler: her brother]], when she turns and walks away after only destroying the heart of her opponent.
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There is now a [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6767118/1/Gods_Among_Men sequel]] in the works, currently on short hiatus.
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There is now a [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6767118/1/Gods_Among_Men sequel]] in the works, currently on short hiatus.
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*OhCrap:
-->''"When the hydras and Leaders arrived in dozens, however, Dana realised that she and Alex were, to use the proper term, well and truly f***ed."''
-->''"When the hydras and Leaders arrived in dozens, however, Dana realised that she and Alex were, to use the proper term, well and truly f***ed."''
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The work's two main characters are the game's protagonist, [[PersonOfMassDestruction Alex Mercer]], and his sister, Dana. Other characters include Bradley Ragland, a doctor who Alex has some history with, an unnamed sexist businessman, the Infected Hive Mind, and Blackwatch's [[spoiler:new]] General[[spoiler: who is later revealed as the NotQuiteDead Specialist Cross]]. When Alex learns that Dana is likely to die due to rapid cellular degeneration, he and Ragland infect her with a modified version of his own strain of the Blacklight virus. The story follows Dana's change from a scared young woman into a fully-fledged killing machine, with a large pile of corpses in between.
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The work's two main characters are the game's protagonist, [[PersonOfMassDestruction Alex Mercer]], and his sister, Dana. Other characters include Bradley Ragland, a doctor who Alex has some history with, an unnamed sexist businessman, the Infected Hive Mind, and Blackwatch's [[spoiler:new]] General[[spoiler: General[[spoiler:, who is later revealed as the NotQuiteDead Specialist Cross]]. When Alex learns that Dana is likely to die due to rapid cellular degeneration, he and Ragland infect her with a modified version of his own strain of the Blacklight virus. The story follows Dana's change from a scared young woman into a fully-fledged killing machine, with a large pile of corpses in between.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Dana says that she "can't go from normal to slaughtering people overnight". Later in the story, she does ''exactly that.''
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* NukeEm:
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* NukeEm:NuclearOption:
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*BondOneLiner:
-->'''Dana:''' ''I've always been a bit of a heartbreaker.''
*BuffySpeak: From Dana:
-->'''Dana:''' ''Okay, I can do this. Just shift that guy's...stuff into my legs.''
*HilariousInHindsight: Dana says that she "can't go from normal to slaughtering people overnight". Later in the story, she does ''exactly that.''
-->'''Dana:''' ''I've always been a bit of a heartbreaker.''
*BuffySpeak: From Dana:
-->'''Dana:''' ''Okay, I can do this. Just shift that guy's...stuff into my legs.''
*HilariousInHindsight: Dana says that she "can't go from normal to slaughtering people overnight". Later in the story, she does ''exactly that.''
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*LetsGetDangerous: Quoted verbatim by Dana.
*NukeEm:
-->'''Blackwatch Computer:''' ''RECOMMENDED ENGAGEMENT METHOD: Tactical nuclear strike. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill Multiple, if possible.]]
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-->'''Blackwatch Computer:''' ''RECOMMENDED ENGAGEMENT METHOD: Tactical nuclear strike. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill Multiple, if possible.]]
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*ShoutOut: One soldier [[LeeroyJenkins runs ahead of his squad screaming his name.]] Dana guts him instantly.
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[[IThoughtItMeant Not to be confused]] with the [[{{Hunger}} 2008 movie]] of the [[SimilarlyNamedWorks same name.]]
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[[IThoughtItMeant Not to be confused]] with the [[{{Hunger}} [[{{Film.Hunger}} 2008 movie]] of the [[SimilarlyNamedWorks same name.]]
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*BladeBelowTheShoulder: Alex's preferred weapon. Later in the fic, Dana gets a [[KatanasAreJustBetter thinner, lighter, sharper version.]]
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*KatanasAreJustBetter: Stated verbatim by Dana when she sees her new blade.
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HorrorHunger: The craving for biomass is what motivates Dana to commit her first murder.
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HorrorHunger: The craving for biomass is what motivates Dana to commit her first murder.
* ImAHumanitarian: Well duh, this is a {{Prototype}} fanfiction, what did you expect?
* ImAHumanitarian: Well duh, this is a {{Prototype}} fanfiction, what did you expect?
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* ImAHumanitarian: Well duh, this is a {{Prototype}} fanfiction, what did you expect?
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->''"No matter what you do, no matter who you become, you're still my sister."''
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The work's two main characters are the game's protagonist, [[PersonOfMassDestruction Alex Mercer]], and his sister, Dana. Other characters include Bradley Ragland, a doctor who Alex has some history with, an unnamed sexist businessman, the Infected Hive Mind, and Blackwatch's [[spoiler:new]] General[[spoiler: who is later revealed as the NotQuiteDead Specialist Cross]]. When Alex learns that Dana is likely to die due to rapid cellular degeneration, he and Ragland infect her with a modified version of his own strain of the Blacklight virus. The story follows Dana's change from a scared young woman into a fully-fledged killing machine, with a large pile of corpses in between.
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The work's two main characters are the game's protagonist, [[PersonOfMassDestruction Alex Mercer]], and his sister, Dana. Other characters include Bradley Ragland, a doctor who Alex has some history with, an unnamed sexist businessman, the Infected Hive Mind, and Blackwatch's [[spoiler:new]] General[[spoiler: who is later revealed as the NotQuiteDead Specialist Cross]]. When Alex learns that Dana is likely to die due to rapid cellular degeneration, he and Ragland infect her with a modified version of his own strain of the Blacklight virus. The story follows Dana's change from a scared young woman into a fully-fledged killing machine, with a large pile of corpses in between.between.
There is now a [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6767118/1/Gods_Among_Men sequel]] in the works, currently on short hiatus.
[[IThoughtItMeant Not to be confused]] with the [[{{Hunger}} 2008 movie]] of the [[SimilarlyNamedWorks same name.]]
!!This work provides examples of:
*AffablyEvil: [[spoiler:When Alex and Dana meet up with Cross, he seems to view Alex as a valuable ally, and sees Dana as genuinely attractive. Then he gets out the ''[[MoreDakka rapid-fire]] [[OhCrap grenade launcher.]]'']]
*KnightTemplarBigBrother / MySisterIsOffLimits: At one point in the sequel, a horny guy tries to come on to Dana. When he ends up using force, Alex [[OffWithHisHead decapitates]] [[DisproportionateRetribution him.]]
*ImAHumanitarian: Well duh, this is a {{Prototype}} fanfiction, what did you expect?
*PersonOfMassDestruction: Alex and Dana (Once she overcomes the shock of her [[ImAHumanitarian powers]]).
*WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: Explicitly stated in one of the sequel's author's notes.
-->'''[=TheWunn=]:''' There may be some posting delays, as I am literally making this up as I go along. It seemed to work for the last one.
There is now a [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6767118/1/Gods_Among_Men sequel]] in the works, currently on short hiatus.
[[IThoughtItMeant Not to be confused]] with the [[{{Hunger}} 2008 movie]] of the [[SimilarlyNamedWorks same name.]]
!!This work provides examples of:
*AffablyEvil: [[spoiler:When Alex and Dana meet up with Cross, he seems to view Alex as a valuable ally, and sees Dana as genuinely attractive. Then he gets out the ''[[MoreDakka rapid-fire]] [[OhCrap grenade launcher.]]'']]
*KnightTemplarBigBrother / MySisterIsOffLimits: At one point in the sequel, a horny guy tries to come on to Dana. When he ends up using force, Alex [[OffWithHisHead decapitates]] [[DisproportionateRetribution him.]]
*ImAHumanitarian: Well duh, this is a {{Prototype}} fanfiction, what did you expect?
*PersonOfMassDestruction: Alex and Dana (Once she overcomes the shock of her [[ImAHumanitarian powers]]).
*WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: Explicitly stated in one of the sequel's author's notes.
-->'''[=TheWunn=]:''' There may be some posting delays, as I am literally making this up as I go along. It seemed to work for the last one.