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* BreakingTheFourthWall: **To the surprise of Cortana, [[ScaryBlackMan Johnson]] is able to kill Master Chief with nothing but his belt. Luckily the Chief [[IGotBetter respawns a few seconds later.]]
** Master Chief scrambled into a Warthog, putting pedal to the metal, bowling over anything in the way. Ahead was a strange area packed with ramps and platforms. "You know," said the Chief, "if I wasn't in such a hurry, I'd say that this looks a lot like a video game level."
** Master Chief scrambled into a Warthog, putting pedal to the metal, bowling over anything in the way. Ahead was a strange area packed with ramps and platforms. "You know," said the Chief, "if I wasn't in such a hurry, I'd say that this looks a lot like a video game level."
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: To the surprise of Cortana, [[ScaryBlackMan Johnson]] is able to kill the Master Chief with nothing but his belt. Luckily, the Chief [[IGotBetter respawns a few seconds later.]]
** When a similar thing happens in the sequel, Cortana even refers to it as "respawning."
** While fleeing the [[exploding]] ''Pillar of Autumn'' in a Warthog, the Chief casually mentions that their surroundings look "a lot like a video game level."
** When a similar thing happens in the sequel, Cortana even refers to it as "respawning."
** While fleeing the [[exploding]] ''Pillar of Autumn'' in a Warthog, the Chief casually mentions that their surroundings look "a lot like a video game level."
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: At one point the Master Chief is stupid enough to stick his helmet onto an Elite's head, which effectively breaks the Cole Protocol and gives the alien knowledge of Earth's location. Luckily, Chief kills him ASAP.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: To **To the surprise of Cortana, [[ScaryBlackMan Johnson]] is able to kill Master Chief with nothing but his belt. Luckily the Chief [[IGotBetter respawns a few seconds later.]] ]]
** Master Chief scrambled into a Warthog, putting pedal to the metal, bowling over anything in the way. Ahead was a strange area packed with ramps and platforms. "You know," said the Chief, "if I wasn't in such a hurry, I'd say that this looks a lot like a video game level."
** Master Chief scrambled into a Warthog, putting pedal to the metal, bowling over anything in the way. Ahead was a strange area packed with ramps and platforms. "You know," said the Chief, "if I wasn't in such a hurry, I'd say that this looks a lot like a video game level."
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: At one point the Master Chief is stupid enough to stick his helmet onto an Elite's head, which effectively breaks the Cole Protocol and gives the alien knowledge of Earth's location. Luckily, Chief kills him ASAP.
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* UnreliableNarrator: There is an instance when the reader finds the omniscient narrator of the story can see what everyone is doing and thinking, but can't see outside of the ring world of Halo.
** "The Chief experienced a type of vertigo so extreme, it was like doing a backflip on bars atop [[ShapedLikeItself the tallest building on Earth, whichever one it was during the year 2552."]]
** "The Chief experienced a type of vertigo so extreme, it was like doing a backflip on bars atop [[ShapedLikeItself the tallest building on Earth, whichever one it was during the year 2552."]]
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: To the surprise of Cortana, [[ScaryBlackMan Johnson]] is able to kill Master Chief with nothing but his belt. Luckily the Chief[[IGotBetter respawns a few seconds later.]]
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: To the surprise of Cortana, [[ScaryBlackMan Johnson]] is able to kill Master Chief with nothing but his belt. Luckily the Chief[[IGotBetter Chief [[IGotBetter respawns a few seconds later.]]
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: To the surprise of Cortana, [[ScaryBlackMan Johnson]] is able to kill Master Chief with nothing but his belt. Luckily the Chief[[IGotBetter respawns a few seconds later.]]
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* BreakingTheFouthWall: To the surprise of Cortana, [[BigScaryBlackGuy Johnson]] is able to kill Master Chief with nothing but his belt. Luckily he [[IGotBetter respawns a few seconds later.]]
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* BreakingTheFouthWall: To the surprise of Cortana, [[BigScaryBlackGuy Johnson]] is able to kill Master Chief with nothing but his belt. Luckily he [[IGotBetter respawns a few seconds later.]]
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* BerserkButton: Bringing the Chief out of cryo-sleep, killing his allies, [[ItMakesSenseInContext not saying "Everybody Smiles At Kittens" instead of "United Nations Space Command"]]...there's too many to name. [[ItGotWorse And the worst part is]], whether or not these [[{{Trigger}} triggers]] are successfully pushed ''[[LoudGulp is essentially random]]''.
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* BerserkButton: Bringing the Chief out of cryo-sleep, killing his allies, [[ItMakesSenseInContext not saying "Everybody Smiles At Kittens" instead of "United Nations Space Command"]]...there's too many to name. [[ItGotWorse And the worst part is]], whether or not these [[{{Trigger}} triggers]] triggers are successfully pushed ''[[LoudGulp is essentially random]]''.
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Picture the ''{{Halo}}'' universe. Now add an [[BunnyEarsLawyer absentminded]], [[CloudCuckooLander mentally unstable]] protagonist with [[AxCrazy violent impulses]] and a penchant for [[VerbalTic silly exclamations]], a beautiful-but-frustrated [[ArtificialIntelligence AI]], a black [[SpaceMarine Marine]] who [[ChewBubblegum listens to metal]] [[TheyLive and kicks ass]] and brags about his size, a [[ScaryDogmaticAliens religious coalition of alien races]] hell-bent on activating the Halos (and [[DeathBySex raping humanity into extinction]] along the way), and a legion of [[EldritchAbomination horrific]] [[ZombieApocalypse zombifying]] [[FaceFullOfAlienWingWong sex parasites]]. The result?
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Picture the ''{{Halo}}'' universe. Now add an [[BunnyEarsLawyer absentminded]], [[CloudCuckooLander mentally unstable]] protagonist with [[AxCrazy violent impulses]] and a penchant for [[VerbalTic silly exclamations]], a beautiful-but-frustrated [[ArtificialIntelligence AI]], a black [[SpaceMarine Marine]] who [[ChewBubblegum listens to metal]] [[TheyLive and kicks ass]] and brags about his size, [[BiggerIsBetterInBed size]], a [[ScaryDogmaticAliens religious coalition of alien races]] hell-bent on activating the Halos (and [[DeathBySex raping humanity into extinction]] along the way), and a legion of [[EldritchAbomination horrific]] [[ZombieApocalypse zombifying]] [[FaceFullOfAlienWingWong sex parasites]]. The result?
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* RunningGag: Dubbo suffering wounds to his junk.
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* AndShowItToYou: The Master Chief does this to [[spoiler:the Prophet of Regret.]]
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* SmokingHotSex: The Prophet of Regret lights up after receiving oral from an underling.
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* AssShove: What tends to happen to Elites with energy swords when they run into the Master Chief.
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* BlackComedyRape: ''Every'' occurrence of rape is treated this way, in [[DeadBabyComedy varying degrees]]. One that particularly stands out is [[spoiler:Captain Keyes]] on [[spoiler:Sergeant Johnson]].
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* RapeAsComedy: [[spoiler:Captain Keyes]] on [[spoiler:Sergeant Johnson.]]
** ''Every'' occurrence of rape is treated this way, in [[DeadBabyComedy varying]] [[{{Squick}} degrees.]]
** ''Every'' occurrence of rape is treated this way, in [[DeadBabyComedy varying]] [[{{Squick}} degrees.]]
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Misuse of Understatement. Please don\'t add or link it to your own examples to make an Understatement.Only use it when it\'s been used in-universe
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** Don't question the Prophet of Truth. It makes him [[{{Understatement}} mad]].
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* BerserkButton: Bringing the Chief out of cryo-sleep, killing his allies, [[spoiler:not saying "Everybody Smiles At Kittens" instead of "United Nations Space Command"]]...there's too many to name. [[ItGotWorse And the worst part is]], whether or not these [[{{Trigger}} triggers]] are successfully pushed ''[[LoudGulp is essentially random]]''.
** Sergeant Johnson doesn't like people disrespecting his prowess.
** Sergeant Johnson doesn't like people disrespecting his prowess.
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* BerserkButton: Bringing the Chief out of cryo-sleep, killing his allies, [[spoiler:not [[ItMakesSenseInContext not saying "Everybody Smiles At Kittens" instead of "United Nations Space Command"]]...there's too many to name. [[ItGotWorse And the worst part is]], whether or not these [[{{Trigger}} triggers]] are successfully pushed ''[[LoudGulp is essentially random]]''.
** Sergeant Johnson doesn't like people disrespecting hisprowess.manhood.
** Sergeant Johnson doesn't like people disrespecting his
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* [[spoiler: CelebrityCameo: [[AmericanIdol Sanjaya Malakar]] in Chapter 9, BreakingBenjamin in Chapter 12.]]
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* [[spoiler: CelebrityCameo: [[AmericanIdol Sanjaya Malakar]] in Chapter 9, BreakingBenjamin Music/BreakingBenjamin in Chapter 12.]]
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* AttemptedRape: The Covenant [[spoiler:[[TentacleRape and the Orgy]]]] are guilty of this. Sometimes they [[AFateWorseThanDeath succeed]].
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* AttemptedRape: The Covenant [[spoiler:[[TentacleRape and [[spoiler:at the Orgy]]]] Orgy]] are guilty of this. Sometimes they [[AFateWorseThanDeath succeed]].
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* DreamSequence / NightmareSequence: The Master Chief has one while in cryo-sleep.
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* DreamSequence / NightmareSequence: DreamSequence[=/=]NightmareSequence: The Master Chief has one while in cryo-sleep.
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--> '''Johnson''': Am I right, Marines?
--> '''Marines''': SIR, YES, SIR!
--> '''Marines''': SIR, YES, SIR!
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--> '''Johnson''': '''Johnson:''' Am I right, Marines?
-->'''Marines''': '''Marines:''' SIR, YES, SIR!
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* TooDumbToLive: Captain Keyes. And [[spoiler:ForegoneConclusion he doesn't.]]
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* TooDumbToLive: Captain Keyes. And [[spoiler:ForegoneConclusion [[spoiler:[[ForegoneConclusion he doesn't.]]]]]]
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* TooDumbToLive: Captain Keyes. And [[spoiler:he doesn't.]]
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* TooDumbToLive: Captain Keyes. And [[spoiler:he [[spoiler:ForegoneConclusion he doesn't.]]
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--> -- The '''[[TheProtagonist Master Chief]]''', [[{{Beat}} right before]] [[FrickinLaserBeams something]] [[MoreDakka bad]] [[ZergRush happens]] [[StuffBlowingUp to]] [[ChewToy him]] [[OhNoNotAgain yet again]]
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--> -- The '''[[TheProtagonist Master Chief]]''', [[{{Beat}} right before]] [[FrickinLaserBeams something]] [[MoreDakka bad]] [[ZergRush happens]] [[StuffBlowingUp to]] [[ChewToy [[IronButtMonkey him]] [[OhNoNotAgain yet again]]
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* MercyKill: While looking for Keyes, the Chief does this to a hysterical, trigger-happy Marine he runs into.
** In ''[=H2I=]'', Johnson shoots dead a Marine being raped by an Elite.
** The Arbiter also asks [[spoiler:Gravemind]] for this.
** In ''[=H2I=]'', Johnson shoots dead a Marine being raped by an Elite.
** The Arbiter also asks [[spoiler:Gravemind]] for this.
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* DreamSequence / NightmareSequence: The Master Chief, while in cryo-sleep.
* FlatWhat: The Chief's reaction to Guilty Spark revealing himself to be aboard the ''Pillar of Autumn''.
* FlatWhat: The Chief's reaction to Guilty Spark revealing himself to be aboard the ''Pillar of Autumn''.
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* DreamSequence / NightmareSequence: The Master Chief, Chief has one while in cryo-sleep.
* FlatWhat: The Chief's reaction toGuilty Spark revealing himself to be [[spoiler:Guilty Spark's]] presence aboard the ''Pillar of Autumn''.
* FlatWhat: The Chief's reaction to
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* MercyKill: While looking RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: Though not shown, [[spoiler:Ellen Dowski's]] thanks for Keyes, betraying the Chief does this to command crew is a hysterical, trigger-happy Marine he runs into.fatal gang rape at Covenant hands. [[spoiler:Her]] body is found by the rescue force in the brig of the ''Truth and Reconciliation''.
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--> -- The '''[[TheProtagonist Master Chief]]''', [[{{Beat}} right before]] [[FrickinLaserBeams something]] [[MoreDakka bad]] [[ZergRush happens]] [[StuffBlowingUp to]] [[ChewToy him]] [[OhNoNotAgain yet again]]
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* CompensatingForSomething: Averted with Tartarus and the [[MeaningfulName Dick of Fukt]]. He is stated to be quite well-endowed, even for a Brute. At one point, he even [[spoiler:knocks out the Arbiter with his penis.]]
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** Don't question the Prophet of Truth. It makes him [[{{Understatement}} mad]].
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* PrecisionFStrike: Mostly from Cortana. In ''[=H2I=]'', she ''[[ClusterFBomb really]]'' unloads.
** Johnson and 'Sadumee do this, as well.
** Johnson and 'Sadumee do this, as well.
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Picture the ''{{Halo}}'' universe. Now add an [[BunnyEarsLawyer absentminded]], [[CloudCuckooLander mentally unstable]] protagonist with [[AxCrazy violent impulses]] and a penchant for [[VerbalTic silly exclamations]], a beautiful-but-frustrated [[ArtificialIntelligence AI]], a black [[SpaceMarine Marine]] who [[ChewBubblegum listens to metal]] [[TheyLive and kicks ass]] and brags about his [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean size]], size, a [[ScaryDogmaticAliens religious coalition of alien races]] hell-bent on activating the Halos (and [[DeathBySex raping humanity into extinction]] along the way), and a legion of [[EldritchAbomination horrific]] [[ZombieApocalypse zombifying]] [[FaceFullOfAlienWingWong sex parasites]]. The result?
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* MilitarySalute: In the first fic, Johnson returns a lower-ranked Marine's salute in an [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean unusual]] [[StrangeSalute way]]. In the second, he and the Chief salute Admiral Sir Hood. [[spoiler:[[ItMakesSenseInContext Johnson's unbelted pants fall down in the process]], much to Lord Hood's disgust.]]
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* MilitarySalute: In the first fic, Johnson returns a lower-ranked Marine's salute in an [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean unusual]] unusual [[StrangeSalute way]]. In the second, he and the Chief salute Admiral Sir Hood. [[spoiler:[[ItMakesSenseInContext Johnson's unbelted pants fall down in the process]], much to Lord Hood's disgust.]]
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** ''Every'' occurrence of rape is treated this way, in [[BlackComedy varying]] [[{{Squick}} degrees.]]
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