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* CatchPhrase: A few.
** Abathur will say, "Large scale improvement of ____ sequences," when he [[spoiler:gathers essence that can be applied to ____]].
** Abathur will say, "Large scale improvement of ____ sequences," when he [[spoiler:gathers essence that can be applied to ____]].
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* TheEvilGenius: The role Abathur plays in the Swarm.
* TheHero: Abathur, easily.
* TheLancer: Either Reimu or Aya, depending on the situation.
* TheHero: Abathur, easily.
* TheLancer: Either Reimu or Aya, depending on the situation.
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---> '''Abathur''': Evol- ''Abby?''
---> '''Aya''': It’s a nickname! Get used to it! Anyways, what are you?
---> '''Abathur''': Evol- ''Abby?''
---> '''Aya''': It’s a nickname! Get used to it! Anyways, what are you?
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'''Aya''': It’s a nickname! Get used to it! Anyways, what are you?
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* ZergRush: Being a fanfic of the [[TropeNamers Trope Namer,]] of course the Zerg pulled this in their attack against the Tal'Darim. When Kerrigan realized that Tal'Darim reinforcements were arriving, she took all the Zerg she had and invaded their base.
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* ZergRush: Being a fanfic of the [[TropeNamers Trope Namer,]] of course the Zerg pulled this in their attack against the Tal'Darim. When Kerrigan realized that Tal'Darim reinforcements were arriving, she took all the Zerg she had and invaded their base.base.
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* MeaningfulName: [[LightNovel/IsThisAZombie Ayumu]] [[UsefulNotes/CharlesManson Manson]]. She's a zombie. [[spoiler: She's also a serial killer who leaves song lyrics at the scenes of her crimes.]]
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* MeaningfulName: [[LightNovel/IsThisAZombie [[Literature/IsThisAZombie Ayumu]] [[UsefulNotes/CharlesManson Manson]]. She's a zombie. [[spoiler: She's also a serial killer who leaves song lyrics at the scenes of her crimes.]]
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** [[OurZombiesAreDifferent Ayumu Manson's]] first name is a shout out to LightNovel/IsThisAZombie. [[spoiler: Her last name is a reference to [[UsefulNotes/CharlesManson Charles Manson]].]]
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** [[OurZombiesAreDifferent Ayumu Manson's]] first name is a shout out to LightNovel/IsThisAZombie.Literature/IsThisAZombie. [[spoiler: Her last name is a reference to [[UsefulNotes/CharlesManson Charles Manson]].]]
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* HasTwoMommies: [[spoiler:Yukari likes to think of Chen as her and Ran's daughter]].
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---> [[spoiler:How does [Yukari] know about the Xel’Naga? What could she possibly have planned? [[HasTwoMommies Why is she so obsessed with the idea of Chen being her and Ran’s daughter]]?]]
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---> [[spoiler:How does [Yukari] know about the Xel’Naga? What could she possibly have planned? [[HasTwoMommies Why is she so obsessed with the idea of Chen being her and Ran’s daughter]]?]]daughter?]]
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The story revolves around four focus characters ([[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[GenkiGirl Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[DarkIsNotEvil Alice]] [[MarionetteMaster Margatroid]] (starting in chapter 11; prior to this, her role was taken by [[CheerfulChild Cirno]]), and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[KnightInSourArmor Hakurei]]) as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology and psychology. Like the two series' that it is based on, the series has a hell of a lot more characters than that. It also likes to avoid Flanderization, making Cirno rather bright and Meiling a competent gate guard, for example.
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The story revolves around four focus characters ([[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[GenkiGirl Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[DarkIsNotEvil Alice]] [[MarionetteMaster Margatroid]] (starting in chapter 11; prior to this, her role was taken by [[CheerfulChild Cirno]]), and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[KnightInSourArmor Hakurei]]) as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology and psychology. Like the two series' series that it is based on, the series story has a hell of a lot more characters than that. It also likes to avoid Flanderization, making Cirno rather bright and Meiling a competent gate guard, for example.
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The story revolves around four focus characters ([[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[GenkiGirl Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[DarkIsNotEvil Alice]] [[MarionetteMaster Margatroid]] (starting in chapter 11; prior to this, her role was taken by [[CheerfulChild Cirno]]), and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[KnightInSourArmor Hakurei]]) as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology and psychology. Like the two series' that it is based on, the series has [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a hell of a lot more characters than that]]. It also likes to avoid Flanderization, making Cirno rather bright and Meiling a competent gate guard, for example.
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The story revolves around four focus characters ([[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[GenkiGirl Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[DarkIsNotEvil Alice]] [[MarionetteMaster Margatroid]] (starting in chapter 11; prior to this, her role was taken by [[CheerfulChild Cirno]]), and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[KnightInSourArmor Hakurei]]) as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology and psychology. Like the two series' that it is based on, the series has [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a hell of a lot more characters than that]].that. It also likes to avoid Flanderization, making Cirno rather bright and Meiling a competent gate guard, for example.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: It's a fanfic of two different examples of the trope. It's rather obvious that this occurs.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10060844/1/Gensokyo-s-Heart Gensokyo's Heart]]'' is a VideoGame/{{Touhou}} and VideoGame/StarCraft crossover fanfic written by Antagonist Chan. The premise is that Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, comes to Gensokyo with a small army of Zerg to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10060844/1/Gensokyo-s-Heart Gensokyo's Heart]]'' is a VideoGame/{{Touhou}} ''Franchise/TouhouProject'' and VideoGame/StarCraft ''VideoGame/StarCraft'' crossover fanfic written by Antagonist Chan. The premise is that Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, comes to Gensokyo with a small army of Zerg to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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* AnIcePerson: Cirno, [[CaptainObvious obviously.]]
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* AnIcePerson: Cirno, [[CaptainObvious obviously.]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:Ayumu Manson]]. She has a habit of tricking people into thinking that she's weak before hitting them with a barrage of danmaku when their guard is down. [[CaptainObvious Suffice to say,]] nobody likes her.
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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:Ayumu Manson]]. She has a habit of tricking people into thinking that she's weak before hitting them with a barrage of danmaku when their guard is down. [[CaptainObvious Suffice to say,]] say, nobody likes her.
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The bulk of the story was updated quite rapidly (even updating three times in one day at one point). However, no new chapters have been posted since August 2014.
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** Ayumu also uses the spell card [[Film/NightOfTheLivingDead Romero Sign "Character Death"]].
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** Ayumu also uses the spell card [[Film/NightOfTheLivingDead [[Film/NightOfTheLivingDead1968 Romero Sign "Character Death"]].
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* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler: Ayumu Manson]]. It's incredibly impressive that she's managed to live as long as she has despite the fact that nobody [[spoiler: who isn't on the Mysterious Woman's payroll]] actually likes her.
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** [[OurZombiesAreDifferent Ayumu Manson's]] first name is a shout out to LightNovel/IsThisAZombie. [[spoiler: Her last name is a reference to [[UsefulNotes/CharlesManson Charles Manson.]]
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** [[OurZombiesAreDifferent Ayumu Manson's]] first name is a shout out to LightNovel/IsThisAZombie. [[spoiler: Her last name is a reference to [[UsefulNotes/CharlesManson Charles Manson.Manson]].]]
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* MeaningfulName: [[LightNovel/IsThisAZombie Ayumu]] [[UsefulNotes/CharlesManson Manson]]. She's a zombie.
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* MeaningfulName: [[LightNovel/IsThisAZombie Ayumu]] [[UsefulNotes/CharlesManson Manson]]. She's a zombie. [[spoiler: She's also a serial killer who leaves song lyrics at the scenes of her crimes.]]
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* GirlOfTheWeek: Every arc focuses on a different aspect of Gensokyo, and Abathur befriends just about everyone [[spoiler:who isn't associated with the Mysterious Woman.]] Because it changes focuses a lot, characters tend to get left behind.
** [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] in chapter 21:
---> '''Akyuu''': He seems to be touring Gensokyo, trying to meet everyone.
---> '''Akyuu''': He leaves a lot of people behind in the dust.
** [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] in chapter 21:
---> '''Akyuu''': He seems to be touring Gensokyo, trying to meet everyone.
---> '''Akyuu''': He leaves a lot of people behind in the dust.
* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: [[spoiler:Satori Hydralisk]] is described as a "Satori Sniper Cowgirl" at one point.
** Hell, all the [[spoiler:Youkai Zerg]] are examples. [[spoiler: A vampire/Ultralisk? A kappa/Leviathan? A bunch of Zerglings mixed with moon rabbits?]]
** Hell, all the [[spoiler:Youkai Zerg]] are examples. [[spoiler: A vampire/Ultralisk? A kappa/Leviathan? A bunch of Zerglings mixed with moon rabbits?]]
* OverlyLongGag: [[spoiler:Tengu Mutalisk]] saluting every time she speaks. The narration itself seems to get annoyed at her tendency to do this.
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** [[OurZombiesAreDifferent Ayumu Manson's]] first name is a shout out to LightNovel/IsThisAZombie. [[spoiler: Her last name is a reference to [[UsefulNotes/CharlesManson Charles Manson.]]
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* OnlySaneMan: Mystia Lorelei is this to Team Nineball.
** Reisen Udongein Inaba also counts.
---> '''Reisen''': "Why doesn't anything make sense anymore?!"
** Recent chapters show that Ran is, too.
** Reisen Udongein Inaba also counts.
---> '''Reisen''': "Why doesn't anything make sense anymore?!"
** Recent chapters show that Ran is, too.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Bob the Tal'Darim Warrior ends up practicing Shintoism instead, and ends up living at the Hakurei Shrine.]]
** Abathur himself counts, too, as he switches from being TheEvilGenius to being TheHero very early on.
** Abathur himself counts, too, as he switches from being TheEvilGenius to being TheHero very early on.
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** Chapter 15 is called [[Music/Level80EliteTaurenChieftain Protoss Up The Night.]]
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* CheerfulChild: All of [[FanNickname Team Nineball]], with the exception of [[OnlySaneMan Mystia]] [[DeadpanSnarker Lorelei]].
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* AerithAndBob: [[Bob the Tal'Darim Warrior.]] Doesn't seem like an example at first, until you remember that the Protoss usually have names like Zeratul and Tassadar.
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* AerithAndBob: [[Bob [[spoiler:Bob the Tal'Darim Warrior.]] Doesn't seem like an example at first, until you remember that the Protoss usually have names like Zeratul and Tassadar.
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* AerithAndBob: [[Bob the Tal'Darim Warrior.]] Doesn't seem like an example at first, until you remember that the Protoss usually have names like Zeratul and Tassadar.
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Kappa Leviathan]] comes to the rescue of Sanae, and later in the same chapter, Aya and Abathur.
** Earlier than that, [[spoiler:Vampire Ultralisk]] came to the rescue of Abathur when [[spoiler:Flandre was attacking him.]]
** Earlier than that, [[spoiler:Vampire Ultralisk]] came to the rescue of Abathur when [[spoiler:Flandre was attacking him.]]
** Matt Horner says that the [[ReligionOfEvil Tal'Darim]] managed to steal a powerful Siege Breaker tank. [[spoiler:The villain of the fourth arc is a Tal'Darim warrior named [[AerithAndBob Bob]] with a Siege Breaker.]]
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** [[OurZombiesAreDifferent Ayumu Manson's Manson's]] first name is a shout out to LightNovel/IsThisAZombie.LightNovel/IsThisAZombie.
** Ayumu also uses the spell card [[Film/NightOfTheLivingDead Romero Sign "Character Death"]].
** Ayumu also uses the spell card [[Film/NightOfTheLivingDead Romero Sign "Character Death"]].
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** Chapter 13, the third Intermission, upholds the tradition by having Abathur give Kerrigan a status report on how things in Gensokyo are going.
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* Main/Flanderization: Averted, for the most part. Cirno's a pretty bright kid (although she's still a kid) and Meiling is good at her job and only takes one afternoon nap.
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* Main/Foreshadowing: Abathur mentions that [[spoiler:he can use hair to gather essence. Guess what his primary means of gathering essence ends up being?]]
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* BreatherEpisode: While the story on its own isn't too dark, the Intermission chapters are notably more lighthearted and contain no action (the first one being a Bunbunmaru article about the events of the first arc, the second one being Abathur explaining how the Zerg work to [[FanNickname Team Nineball]]).
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* BreatherEpisode: While the story on its own isn't too dark, the Intermission chapters are notably more lighthearted and contain no action (the first one being a Bunbunmaru article about the events of the first arc, the second one being Abathur explaining how the Zerg work to [[FanNickname Team Nineball]]).Nineball]], and the third being Abathur giving a status update to Kerrigan).
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** Lampshaded in chapter 12.
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** Lampshaded [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] in chapter 12.