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* EurekaMoment: When discussing assaulting Menzoberranzan, Keyes asks how they are supposed to so with such a small force, noting the differences between fighting a defensive battle and an offensive one. She trails off mid-sentence when she realizes it, [[spoiler:when launching an offensive battle, there's no reason not to use nerve gas or nukes]].



* LargeHam: The Arbiter is as over the top as ever, as are [[spoiler:the rest of the Elites]]. Johnson however has toned it down.

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* LargeHam: The Arbiter is as over the top as ever, as are [[spoiler:the rest of the Elites]]. Johnson however has toned it down.down (except when he's MrExposition, which admittedly calls for hamminess).



* MundaneLuxury: The Chief's idea of "a little luxury R&R" is five hours of sleep, a hot meal, "and maybe even a shower"

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* AwfulTruth: [[spoiler:The Neo-Covenant don't take the revelation that the Forerunners and humanity are the same race well, and are infuriated to learn that the Prophets knew it all along]].



** In fact, dual wielding is quite common among the drow.



** This is perhaps best shown in their interrogation of Briza. Keyes has the Chief ''crush'' her hands prior to the interrogation, "She can't cast spells with her hands if her hands don't work"; and upon getting all information out of her and learning she cannot be redeemed, simply has her executed on the spot.



* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Drizzt, as usual.
** [[spoiler:Jarlaxle and his company]] as well, by the end.



* ThePeterPrinciple: Briefly mused on. [[spoiler: After Miranda Keyes is promoted to Rear Admiral, she notes that while she's a proven excellent commander of a single ship and even a capable ground battle commander, commanding a fleet is something else entirely and she isn't sure she can do it]].



* PragmaticHero: The Halo cast are all several steps closer to the cynical side of the SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism than the Forgotten Realms characters and it shows. However, the Forgotten Realms characters mostly come around to the pragmatic point of view. By the final battle, the only objection to genecide of the drow is the Gods insistence that they save some of the children, so that the drow race will live on even if the drow culture doesn't.

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* PragmaticHero: The Halo cast are all several steps closer to the cynical side of the SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism than the Forgotten Realms characters and it shows. However, the Forgotten Realms characters mostly come around to the pragmatic point of view. By the final battle, the only objection to genecide of the drow is the Gods insistence that they save some of the children, so that the drow race will live on even if the drow culture doesn't. In fact, most characters see the death of drow culture as a good thing.
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** In the beginning, he's utterly dumbfounded when he sees first a reindeer then a human on an alien world. His jaw actually drops over it.

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** In the beginning, he's utterly dumbfounded when he sees first a reindeer and then a human on an alien world. His jaw actually drops over it.
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* MundaneLuxury: The Chief's idea of "a little luxury R&R" is five hours of sleep, a hot meal, "and maybe even a shower"


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** In the beginning, he's utterly dumbfounded when he sees first a reindeer then a human on an alien world. His jaw actually drops over it.
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* FeedItABomblet: Chief throws a plasma grenade at a half ogre's head, only for the creature to open its mouth and accidentally swallow the projectile. A few seconds later, none of the half-ogre exists anymore.

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* FeedItABomblet: FeedItABomb: Chief throws a plasma grenade at a half ogre's head, only for the creature to open its mouth and accidentally swallow the projectile. A few seconds later, none of the half-ogre exists anymore.
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* The dark elf children, however, disappear after the scene where they ask Keyes what will happen to them. Who she will convince to adopt emotionally-abused children from a near-universally-despised race whom will take at least sixty years to mature is not addressed.

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* ** The dark elf children, however, disappear after the scene where they ask Keyes what will happen to them. Who she will convince to adopt emotionally-abused children from a near-universally-despised race whom will take at least sixty years to mature is not addressed.
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* AFatherToHisMen: Jarlaxle greatly values the lives of his soldiers, refuses to sacrifice them pointlessly, [[spoiler:and ultimately turns against Lolth out of disgust that his forces slaughtered]].

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* AFatherToHisMen: Jarlaxle greatly values the lives of his soldiers, refuses to sacrifice them pointlessly, [[spoiler:and ultimately turns against Lolth out of disgust that half his forces slaughtered]].were slaughtered due to her]].



* [[BFG}}: The Rhino main cannon, Spartan Laser, and [[spoiler: All the Forerunner weapons]].

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* BadassGrandpa: Sergeant Johnson is in his 80's and still kickin' ass
** Gazap the Grunt commander has been in the army for 30 years, and survived '''3''' engagements with Spartans (both are incredible achievements by Unggoy standards). He even states that he is considered "Ancient" by his kind.
** Mephasm. He's literally Neeshka's grandfather, and he's one of the more powerful pit fiends.
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* CruelMercy: Flashback's reveal that after the Didact abandoned his post in a doomed effort to save his wife (dooming ''trillions'' in the process), the Council punished him by having him by the one to fire the Halos. Forcing him to live with with ''killing the galaxy'' turns out to be pretty horrifying punishment.

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* CruelMercy: Flashback's reveal that after the Didact abandoned his post in a doomed effort to save his wife (dooming ''trillions'' in the process), the Council punished him by having him by the one to fire the Halos. Forcing him to live with with ''killing the galaxy'' turns out to be a pretty horrifying punishment.

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* AFatherToHisMen: Jarlaxle greatly values the lives of his soldiers, refuses to sacrifice them pointlessly, [[spoiler:and ultimately turns against Lolth out of disgust that his forces slaughtered]].



* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: [[spoiler:Most of the Chief's initial attacks on Demogorgon really just make him angry. While he does eventually hurt the demon, those wounds heal quickly as well and now he's ''pissed.'' Finally killing Demogorgon nearly kills the Chief, and virtually destroys the suit.]]

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* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: [[spoiler:Most of the Chief's initial attacks on Demogorgon really just make him angry. While he does eventually hurt the demon, those wounds heal quickly as well and now he's ''pissed.'' Finally killing Demogorgon nearly kills the Chief, and virtually destroys the his suit.]]



* CruelMercy: Flashback's reveal that after the Didact abandoned his post in a doomed effort to save his wife (dooming ''trillions'' in the process), the Council punished him by having him by the one to fire the Halos. Forcing him to live with with ''killing the galaxy'' turns out to be pretty horrifying punishment.



** [[Mias Tarkimee]] chooses to hold off Triel so that his task force can retreat to safety. When his capture at her hands seems inevitable, he commits suicide by shooting himself in the brain, preventing her from using psychic powers to learn of the group's strengths and weaknesses (and more importantly, their mission inside Menzoberranzen).

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** [[Mias [[spoiler:Mias Tarkimee]] chooses to hold off Triel so that his task force can retreat to safety. When his capture at her hands seems inevitable, he commits suicide by shooting himself in the brain, preventing her from using psychic powers to learn of the group's strengths and weaknesses (and more importantly, their mission inside Menzoberranzen).



* IDieFree: [[spoiler::Mias Tarkimee]] tells Triel that they were once similar, the difference now is "I die with no yoke upon my back."



* UndyingLoyalty: Jarlaxle's mercenary company all have a great degree of loyalty to each other. And in a culture that encourages treachery, that's really saying something.



* TheWorfBarrage: [[spoiler:During the Chief's fight with Demongorgon, the Chief narrates the what his weapons system could destroy (including a Covenant Super Carrier). That Demongorgon just ''keeps coming'' makes it clear how terrifying powerful he is]].

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* TheWorfBarrage: [[spoiler:During the Chief's fight with Demongorgon, the Chief narrates the what his weapons system could destroy (including a Covenant Super Carrier). That Demongorgon just ''keeps coming'' makes it clear how terrifying powerful he is]].is]].
* YouAreInCommandNow: Extreme case, in flashbacks to the Forerunner/Flood war, after the Halos fire Offensive Bias asks the Didact what should be done with Mendicant Bias.
-->'''Didact:''' Why ask permission of me?
-->'''Offensive:''' Because, Reclaimer, you are the last ranking member of the military alive.

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** Then we get to a serious aversion when MC runs into [[spoiler: Demogorgon]], who can take anything thrown at him - including possibly Forward Unto Dawn's MAC - and keeps coming.

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** Then we get to a serious aversion when MC runs into [[spoiler: Demogorgon]], who can take anything thrown at him - including possibly Forward Unto Dawn's MAC - and keeps coming.



* HeroKiller: Gromph Baenre who manages to kill [[spoiler: Revajik, Lady Alustriel, and the Hunter Denos]].

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* HeroKiller: Gromph Baenre Baenre, who manages to kill [[spoiler: Revajik, Lady Alustriel, and the Hunter Denos]].



** Also, [[spoiler: Denos sacrifices himself to save Lotar, and a villainous example when Gromph chooses to save Triel Baenre instead of himself. She later wonders why he did so.]]
** Mias Tarkimee chooses to hold off Triel so that his task force can retreat to safety. When his capture at her hands seems inevitable, he commits suicide by shooting himself in the brain, preventing her from using psychic powers to learn of the group's strengths and weaknesses (and more importantly, their mission inside Menzoberranzen).

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** Also, [[spoiler: Denos sacrifices himself to save Lotar, and a villainous example when Gromph chooses to save Triel Baenre instead of himself. She later wonders why he did so.]]
Lotar,]]
** Mias Tarkimee [[Mias Tarkimee]] chooses to hold off Triel so that his task force can retreat to safety. When his capture at her hands seems inevitable, he commits suicide by shooting himself in the brain, preventing her from using psychic powers to learn of the group's strengths and weaknesses (and more importantly, their mission inside Menzoberranzen).Menzoberranzen).
*** When he becomes apparent he wont be able to hold her off on his own, [[spoiler:Usze]] joins him.
** And a villainous example when [[spoiler:Gromph]] chooses to save Triel Baenre instead of himself. He spends his final moments trying to figure out why.



* IShallTauntYou: Johnson uses this on the drow when they assault Mithril Hall, working them to a frenzy. [[spoiler:Helm]] also uses this to great effect on Lolth, causing her attacks to become more crazed, and distracting her from the surface battle. The crowner though, is probably when [[spoiler: Mias Tarkimee]] insults Triel Baenre so that she focuses on him and his men can escape. "Turn and face me, you misbegotten servant of a spider bitch!"

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* IShallTauntYou: Johnson uses this on the drow Drow when they assault Mithril Hall, working them to a frenzy. [[spoiler:Helm]] also uses this to great effect on Lolth, causing her attacks to become more crazed, and distracting her from the surface battle. The crowner though, is probably when [[spoiler: Mias Tarkimee]] insults Triel Baenre so that she focuses on him and his men can escape. "Turn and face me, you misbegotten servant of a spider bitch!"



* NotSoStoic: see the second TearJerker entry below.

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* NotSoStoic: see See the second TearJerker entry below.



--> '''Offensive Bias''' "My turn, Brother."

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--> '''Offensive Bias''' "My [[NowItsMyTurn My turn, Brother."Brother]].



* TankGoodness: The Scorpion, and the new Rhino. The [[spoiler: New-Covenant are apparently terrified of the Rhino, having heard stories about them]].

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* TankGoodness: The Scorpion, and the new Rhino. The [[spoiler: New-Covenant are apparently terrified of the Rhino, having heard stories about them]].its capabilities.]].



* WhyWontYouDie: Lolth asks this of [[spoiler: Helm/Didact]] when they fight.

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* WhyWontYouDie: Lolth asks this of [[spoiler: Helm/Didact]] when they fight.fight.
* TheWorfBarrage: [[spoiler:During the Chief's fight with Demongorgon, the Chief narrates the what his weapons system could destroy (including a Covenant Super Carrier). That Demongorgon just ''keeps coming'' makes it clear how terrifying powerful he is]].

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'''{{Franchise/Halo}}: Finishing the Fight''' is a crossover styled story taking place in an alternate ending to ''{{VideoGame/Halo 3}}'', where the remaining members of the ''Forward Unto Dawn's'' crew (The Master Chief, Cortana, Commander Keyes, Sergeant Major Johnson, and the Arbiter) escape the destruction of the Halo array with their lives, only to get sucked through a NegativeSpaceWedgie in the process, and wind up literally crash-landing into the ''TabletopGame/ForgottenRealms'' universe (sometime between ''Literature/TheIcewindDaleTrilogy'' and the ''Literature/LegacyOfTheDrowSeries'').

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'''{{Franchise/Halo}}: ''{{Franchise/Halo}}: Finishing the Fight''' Fight'' is a crossover styled story taking place in an alternate ending to ''{{VideoGame/Halo 3}}'', ''VideoGame/Halo3'', where the remaining members of the ''Forward Unto Dawn's'' crew (The Master Chief, Cortana, Commander Keyes, Sergeant Major Johnson, and the Arbiter) escape the destruction of the Halo array with their lives, only to get sucked through a NegativeSpaceWedgie in the process, and wind up literally crash-landing into the ''TabletopGame/ForgottenRealms'' universe (sometime between ''Literature/TheIcewindDaleTrilogy'' and the ''Literature/LegacyOfTheDrowSeries'').



''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]].

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''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. weaponry]].

The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]].




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* ArmCannon: [[spoiler: The Golems created by Cortana]] have a 30mm cannon attached to the left forearm and a flamethrower on the right.

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[[spoiler: The Golems created by Cortana]] have a 30mm cannon attached to the left forearm and a flamethrower on the right.



-->'''Johnson:''' "You will not trigger these things by banging, dropping, or otherwise manhandling them." He closed the second case. "Nevertheless, and I want everyone to hear me very carefully here, you treat this shit as if it were armed, and the slightest jostle could set it off. You treat it, as if the very second you stop respecting it for what it is, that it will kill you."

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-->'''Johnson:''' --->'''Johnson:''' "You will not trigger these things by banging, dropping, or otherwise manhandling them." He closed the second case. "Nevertheless, and I want everyone to hear me very carefully here, you treat this shit as if it were armed, and the slightest jostle could set it off. You treat it, as if the very second you stop respecting it for what it is, that it will kill you."



* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Helm/Didact]]

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* BattleInTheRain: '“Yeah, all we need is a torrential downpour and the trope is complete,” Cortana said.' Sure enough...

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* BattleInTheRain: '“Yeah, '"Yeah, all we need is a torrential downpour and the trope is complete,” complete," Cortana said.' Sure enough...



* [[BigFreakingGun BFG]]: The Rhino main cannon, Spartan Laser, and [[spoiler: All the Forerunner weapons]].

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* [[BigFreakingGun BFG]]: [[BFG}}: The Rhino main cannon, Spartan Laser, and [[spoiler: All the Forerunner weapons]].



-->The Spartan's fist connected with the bronze codpiece that it wore, and a resounding 'gong' echoed through the room. The Tiefling's mouth dropped open as the piece of protective equipment crumpled inward and collapsed under the fury of the blow. The Glabrezu stumbled backwards, its eyes crossing slightly. It collapsed to its knees, its lower arms clutching at its wound. Then it howled in agony as its brain finally finished processing what had happened to it. It was a scream, Neeshka noted with a smirk, which was quite a few octaves higher than she believed the wolf demons were capable of. This was followed a by a moment of whimpering, before the Spartan turned his weapon upon the creature.

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-->The --->The Spartan's fist connected with the bronze codpiece that it wore, and a resounding 'gong' echoed through the room. The Tiefling's mouth dropped open as the piece of protective equipment crumpled inward and collapsed under the fury of the blow. The Glabrezu stumbled backwards, its eyes crossing slightly. It collapsed to its knees, its lower arms clutching at its wound. Then it howled in agony as its brain finally finished processing what had happened to it. It was a scream, Neeshka noted with a smirk, which was quite a few octaves higher than she believed the wolf demons were capable of. This was followed a by a moment of whimpering, before the Spartan turned his weapon upon the creature.
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* ChestOfMedals: [[spoiler:At the end, Admiral Hood conducts a ceremony endowing Chief with a medal, and quietly asks if he wants it to be taken care of, "like the other ones". A bit later, Johnson clarifies to Neeshka that somewhere, there's a rather large room filled floor to ceiling with awards, medals and commendations Chief and the Spartans have won, and that if Chief tried to wear all the medals he'd ever earned, it's likely they would double as a particularly shiny and noisy suit of armor.]]

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* FeedItABomblet: Chief throws a plasma grenade at a half ogre's head, only for the creature to open its mouth and accidentally swallow the projectile. A few seconds later, none of the half-ogre exists anymore.



* MythologyGag: [[spoiler: Johnson making a joke about Miranda NOT trying to attack Truth on foot, which was what led to her death in canon.]]

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[[spoiler: Johnson making a joke about Miranda NOT trying to attack Truth on foot, which was what led to her death in canon.]]



** Johnson plays the Mjolnir Mix version of the Halo Theme over his speakers to ease pre-fight tension.
** Given his... well, ''alien'' appearance, the Arbiter is constantly mistaken for some form of demon... which the Chief finds funny, given that it wasn't all that long ago that the Arbiter was calling ''him'' that.

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** *** Johnson plays the Mjolnir Mix version of the Halo Theme over his speakers to ease pre-fight tension.
** *** Given his... well, ''alien'' appearance, the Arbiter is constantly mistaken for some form of demon... which the Chief finds funny, given that it wasn't all that long ago that the Arbiter was calling ''him'' that.


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** [[spoiler:The last part is actually still technically canon - there are ''two'' diacts, one who was for humanity and one who wanted to wipe them out]].
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Mephasm may be a devil, but he cares very much for his granddaughter. [[RoaringRampageOfRescue His rival Errtu and a group of Drow find this out the hard way.]]
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* GenreBlind: The UNSC characters meet various elves and dwarves, and not one of them ever thinks of LordOfTheRings or Santa Claus and his elf helpers.

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* GenreBlind: The UNSC characters meet various elves and dwarves, and not one of them ever thinks of LordOfTheRings ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'' or Santa Claus and his elf helpers.
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* BringItOn: [[spoiler:After Mendicant Bias offers to let the Foreunner fleet surrender, Admiral Dulianus tells Offensive Bias to give their response: "I think I speak for us all, Sir, when I tell my brother than he and his 'Master' can both go to Oblivion, and rot in the endless void. Come, Mendicant, let us see if you and your master can triumph over us. We will not go quietly to our ends!]]

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* BringItOn: BringIt: [[spoiler:After Mendicant Bias offers to let the Foreunner fleet surrender, Admiral Dulianus tells Offensive Bias to give their response: "I think I speak for us all, Sir, when I tell my brother than he and his 'Master' can both go to Oblivion, and rot in the endless void. Come, Mendicant, let us see if you and your master can triumph over us. We will not go quietly to our ends!]]
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** When the Master Chief describes Hunters to the Faerun inhabitants, he describes his fight with them as described in ''The Fall of Reach'' in the fight on Cote de Azure.

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* BattleInTheRain: '“Yeah, all we need is a torrential downpour and [[OneOfUs the trope is complete]],” Cortana said.' Sure enough...

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* BattleInTheRain: '“Yeah, all we need is a torrential downpour and [[OneOfUs the trope is complete]],” complete,” Cortana said.' Sure enough...



* OneOfUs: The title of the second chapter is "Observations, Plans, and a Xanatos Gambit".
** As noted above, Cortana muses: “Yeah, all we need is a torrential downpour and [[BattleInTheRain the trope is complete]]". Johnson also uses the word EldritchAbomination at one point.
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''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Main/{{Spacebattles}}.com with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]].

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''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Main/{{Spacebattles}}.com Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]].
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** Mephasm. He's literally Neeshka's grandfather, and he's one of the more powerful Balors.

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** And the same occurs when UNSC/Covenant-style warfare is applied to Faerun. [[spoiler: The second battle of Mithril Hall is easily the bloodiest battle is Faerun's history, with nearly half a million slaughtered in a matter of hours.]]

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** And the same occurs when UNSC/Covenant-style warfare is applied to Faerun. [[spoiler: The second battle of Mithril Hall is easily the bloodiest battle is Faerun's history, with nearly half a million ''millions'' slaughtered in a matter of hours.]]
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** And the same occurs when UNSC/Covenant-style warfare is applied to Faerun. [[spoiler: The second battle of Mithril Hall is easily the bloodiest battle is Faerun's history, with nearly half a million slaughtered in a matter of hours.]]
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** The biggest hints that [[spoiler: Helm is actually a Forerunner come right before his reveal as Didact, with him showing a great amount of familiarity with UNSC and Covenant technology, and the Chief noting that the interior of Helm's sanctum greatly resembles that of the Halos.]]


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* GoodIsNotSoft: The UNSC [[spoiler: and Neo Covenant]] may be pretty unambiguously heroic, but they are also utterly ''ruthless'' [[CombatPragmatist Combat Pragmatists]] compared to the armies of Faerun. Even some of the ''Drow'' are shocked by the ruthlessness of some of their tactics.
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''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Main/{{Spacebattles}}.com with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has forty-four chapters.

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''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Main/{{Spacebattles}}.com with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has forty-four chapters.
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* PragmaticHero: The Halo cast are all several steps closer to the cynical side of the {{SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism}} than the Forgotten Realms characters and it shows. However, the Forgotten Realms characters mostly come around to the pragmatic point of view. By the final battle, the only objection to genecide of the drow is the Gods insistence that they save some of the children, so that the drow race will live on even if the drow culture doesn't.

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* PragmaticHero: The Halo cast are all several steps closer to the cynical side of the {{SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism}} SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism than the Forgotten Realms characters and it shows. However, the Forgotten Realms characters mostly come around to the pragmatic point of view. By the final battle, the only objection to genecide of the drow is the Gods insistence that they save some of the children, so that the drow race will live on even if the drow culture doesn't.
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''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Main/{{Spacebattles}}.com with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has forty-three chapters.

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''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Main/{{Spacebattles}}.com with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has forty-three forty-four chapters.
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''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Main/{{Spacebattles}}.com with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has thirty-eight chapters.

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''Halo: Finishing the Fight'' is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story was completed on 19th of January, 2011, and is available on two major sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/aratechs-finishing-the-fight-now-uninterrupted.159198/ Creative Writing Forum]] of Main/{{Spacebattles}}.com with the full forty-six chapters, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has thirty-eight forty-three chapters.

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