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** Brimstone gives a very cathartic one to [[HateSink Shackles]], from which the latter is still limping several chapters later.
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* NothingIsScarier: The creatures in the outer metro, heralded by the smell of rotten mint. We never get a full explanation of what they are, nor a physical description beyond a shadowy blur and beady white eyes, but they are unquestionably the deadliest things around, even putting hellhounds to shame. RunOrDie is in full effect whenever they're around.

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* AnythingButThat: Murky's default response to most any kind of aggression, by virtue of being a slave all his life.
* AnythingThatMoves: Glimmerlight.
* TheAtoner: Brimstone Blitz. Glimmerlight could possibly count as well.

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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Weathervane.

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* BeleagueredBureaucrat: Wicked Slit is what happens when you combine this with an AxCrazy KnifeNut. Even other slavers are wary of disrupting her factory's schedule.

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* BeleagueredBureaucrat: Wicked Slit is what happens when you combine this with an AxCrazy KnifeNut.PsychoKnifeNut. Even other slavers are wary of disrupting her factory's schedule.



* KnifeNut: Wicked Slit, a rather volatile slaver fond of threatening slaves with knives.


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* PsychoKnifeNut: Wicked Slit, a rather volatile slaver fond of threatening slaves with knives.
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* AdultFear:
** Slavery in general.
** Coral Eve is separated from her son Chirpy.
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* NotSoDifferent: Chainlink Shackles favorite way to torment Murky.
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* MistakenForGay: Glimmer (jokingly) attempts multiple times to convince Murky to hook up with another colt, despite Murky's insistence that he's straight. Occasional FoeYay with Protégé doesn't help his case.

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* MistakenForGay: Glimmer (jokingly) attempts multiple times to convince Murky to hook up with another colt, despite Murky's insistence that he's straight. Occasional FoeYay sexual tension with Protégé doesn't help his case.
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Murky is a pegasus.

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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: FirstEpisodeTwist: Murky is a pegasus.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NgCmMMuecDRzbX05uIsZN1sN5HdHNNPQa68QCPDGvdo/preview?pli=1 Murky Number Seven]]'' is a completed RecursiveFanfiction of ''FanFic/FalloutEquestria'', written by Fuzzy.

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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NgCmMMuecDRzbX05uIsZN1sN5HdHNNPQa68QCPDGvdo/preview?pli=1 ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/47300/fallout-equestria-murky-number-seven Murky Number Seven]]'' is a completed RecursiveFanfiction of ''FanFic/FalloutEquestria'', written by Fuzzy.
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** Coral Eve, introduced later on in the story, has an eternal grudge against Glim for [[spoiler: causing the raiders to attack her home]], and one against Brim for being the one to destroy it. Nevermind the fact that she's now sans her son as well.

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** Coral Eve, introduced later on in the story, has an eternal grudge against Brimstone for [[spoiler: leading the raiders that sacked her home village]], and one towards Glim for [[spoiler: causing enabling the raiders to attack find her home]], and one against Brim for being village in the one to destroy it.first place]]. Nevermind the fact that she's now sans her son as well.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Played tragically straight with Protégé.]]

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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Played tragically Subverted with Brimstone Blitz, but played straight with Protégé.]]

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* DentedIron: By the end of the story, [[spoiler: Brimstone has definitely become this]].



* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Invoked strongly throughout. Red Eye is the only character who views slavery as a necessary evil, often invoking the need for sacrifice for the sake of progress. Protég&eacute shares his views, mostly out of loyalty and a firm belief in his master. The treatment of ponies in Fillydelphia is what inspired Brimstone to pull a HeelFaceTurn.

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* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Invoked strongly throughout. Red Eye is the only character who views slavery as a necessary evil, often invoking the need for sacrifice for the sake of progress. Protég&eacute Protégé shares his views, mostly out of loyalty and a firm belief in his master. The treatment of ponies in Fillydelphia is what inspired Brimstone to pull a HeelFaceTurn.
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* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Invoked strongly throughout. Red Eye is the only character who views slavery as a necessary evil, often invoking the need for sacrifice for the sake of progress. Protég&eacute shares his views, mostly out of loyalty and a firm belief in his master. The treatment of ponies in Fillydelphia, is what inspired by Brimstone to pull a HeelFaceTurn.

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* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Invoked strongly throughout. Red Eye is the only character who views slavery as a necessary evil, often invoking the need for sacrifice for the sake of progress. Protég&eacute shares his views, mostly out of loyalty and a firm belief in his master. The treatment of ponies in Fillydelphia, Fillydelphia is what inspired by Brimstone to pull a HeelFaceTurn.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Played heartbreakingly straight with Protégé.]]

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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Played heartbreakingly tragically straight with Protégé.]]



* SlaveBrand: Murky's ''cutie mark'' acts as his. Protég&eacute is revealed that his Cutie Mark is actually one.

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* SlaveBrand: Murky's ''cutie mark'' acts as his. Protég&eacute is Protégé later revealed that his Cutie Mark is actually one.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Played heartbreakingly straight with Protégé.]]
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* FramingDevice: Murky is recalling his story to a yet-unnamed friend or interviewer.

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* FramingDevice: Murky is recalling his story to a yet-unnamed friend or interviewer. [[spoiler: It's later revealed to be [[FanFic/FalloutEquestria Homage]]]].
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* EvilOldFolks: Grindstone.
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* BrokenPedestal: Murky idolises Littlepip, having witnessed her escape in person. However, upon hearing about [[spoiler: Arbu, then Bucklyn Cross, and followed by how Littlepip never really escaped Fillydelphia, Murky's faith is Littlepip is severly shaken. He gets over it when he learns the truth, as well as finding more self-reliance in the process.]]

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* BrokenPedestal: Murky idolises Littlepip, having witnessed her escape in person. However, upon hearing about [[spoiler: Arbu, then Bucklyn Cross, and followed by how Littlepip never really escaped Fillydelphia, Murky's faith is Littlepip is severly severely shaken. He gets over it when he learns the truth, as well as finding more self-reliance in the process.]]



** Coral Eve, introduced later on in the story, has an eternal grudge against Glim for causing the raiders to attack her home]], and one against Brim for being the one to destroy it. Nevermind the fact that she's now sans her son as well.

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** Coral Eve, introduced later on in the story, has an eternal grudge against Glim for [[spoiler: causing the raiders to attack her home]], and one against Brim for being the one to destroy it. Nevermind the fact that she's now sans her son as well.
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** Coral Eve is seperated from her son Chirpy.

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** Coral Eve is seperated separated from her son Chirpy.



* HappinessInSlavery: Absolutely avoided in the story. Protég&eacute tries to shape his two-year deal with Murky as this. The influence of the [[spoiler: Nexus Orb]] causes ponies with a weak mind to turn into brainwashed slaves with a merry attitude, happy to serve others.

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* HappinessInSlavery: Absolutely avoided in the story. Protég&eacute Protégé tries to shape his two-year deal with Murky as this. The influence of the [[spoiler: Nexus Orb]] causes ponies with a weak mind to turn into brainwashed slaves with a merry attitude, happy to serve others.
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** [[spoiler: Murky shoots Chainlink dead in the final chapter using Protég&eacute's gun, blasting off his cutie mark in the process.]]

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** [[spoiler: Murky shoots Chainlink dead in the final chapter using Protég&eacute's Protégé's gun, blasting off his cutie mark in the process.]]
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* [[WhamEpisode Wham Chapter]]: 25, where we find out that [[spoiler: Murky is Unity's special somepony]].

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* [[WhamEpisode Wham Chapter]]: WhamEpisode: Chapter 25, where we find out that [[spoiler: Murky is Unity's special somepony]].

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** Coral Eve is seperated from her son.

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** Coral Eve is seperated from her son.son Chirpy.



* TheAtoner: Brimstone Blitz. [[spoiler:Glimmerlight]] could possibly count as well.

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* TheAtoner: Brimstone Blitz. [[spoiler:Glimmerlight]] Glimmerlight could possibly count as well.



* AwfulTruth: Contrary to what Weathervane believes, [[spoiler:his son never made it to safety when the bombs fell]]. Murky doesn't have the heart to tell him.

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* AwfulTruth: Contrary to what Weathervane believes, [[spoiler:his his son Sundial never made it to safety when the bombs fell]].fell. Murky doesn't have the heart to tell him. [[spoiler: Decides to when Weathervane nearly goes feral.]]
* [[BeautifulSlaveGirl Beautiful Slave Pony]]: Murky sees Unity as this.



* BloodFromTheMouth: Murky suffers from this when his radsickness becomes particularly severe.



* BloodFromTheMouth: Murky suffers from this when his radsickness becomes particularly severe.
* BornIntoSlavery
* BreakTheCutie: Life in Fillydelphia is harsh.
* BreatherEpisode: Chapter 19. Murky has a birthday party and even manages to get hammered drunk.
** There's also a scene in Chapter 12 when Murky gets "geared up", finally [[spoiler:getting his battle saddle]], to the tune of the song Find A Pet.

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* BloodFromTheMouth: BoomHeadshot: Several characters die this way.
** [[spoiler: Caduceus gets killed this way during the Six-shooter Surprise.]]
** [[spoiler: Sooty Morass is shot through the head by Glimmerlight when he tries to capture Murky.]]
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Murky suffers from this when shoots Chainlink dead in the final chapter using Protég&eacute's gun, blasting off his radsickness becomes particularly severe.
cutie mark in the process.]]
* BornIntoSlavery
BornIntoSlavery: Murky was born a slave and it is all he has ever known.
* BreakTheCutie: Life in Fillydelphia is harsh.
harsh, but particularly for Murky. He pretty much is broken at the start of the story, but Chainlink Shackles strives to completely crush his spirit and sense of individuality.
* BreatherEpisode: Chapter 19.19, during Red Eye's "Rest Day". Murky has a birthday party and even manages to get hammered drunk.
** There's also a scene in Chapter 12 when Murky gets "geared up", finally [[spoiler:getting [[spoiler: getting his battle saddle]], to the tune of the song Find A Pet.



** [[spoiler: Murky, who had his wings badly broken as a young colt. Ragini suffers the same treatment during the Six-shooter Surprise ordeal]].
* BrokenPedestal: Murky hearing about [[spoiler:Arbu, followed by how Littlepip never really escaped Fillydelphia. He gets over it when he learns the truth, as well as finding more self-reliance in the process.]]

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** [[spoiler: Murky, who had his wings badly broken as a young colt. [[spoiler: Ragini suffers the same treatment during the Six-shooter Surprise ordeal]].
* BrokenPedestal: Murky idolises Littlepip, having witnessed her escape in person. However, upon hearing about [[spoiler:Arbu, [[spoiler: Arbu, then Bucklyn Cross, and followed by how Littlepip never really escaped Fillydelphia.Fillydelphia, Murky's faith is Littlepip is severly shaken. He gets over it when he learns the truth, as well as finding more self-reliance in the process.]]



* CoDragons: A senior slaver named Grindstone and the three former lieutenants of Brimstone's gang serve as these for Shackles. Each of them eventually takes the role of ArchEnemy to their counterpart among the protagonists. [[spoiler:True to the trope, each of the protagonists defeats their nemesis personally]].

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** A RunningGag is that Murky has never sworn before, and often chickens out when trying.
* CoDragons: A senior slaver named Grindstone and the three former lieutenants of Brimstone's gang (Wildcard, Barb, Brutus) serve as these for Shackles. Each of them eventually takes the role of ArchEnemy to their counterpart among the protagonists. [[spoiler:True [[spoiler: True to the trope, each of the protagonists defeats their nemesis personally]].



** Wildcard vs [[ActionGirl Glimmerlight]]

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** Wildcard [[AxCrazy Wildcard]] vs [[ActionGirl Glimmerlight]]



* CondemnedContestant: Most of the fighters forced into the Pits have broken the rules in Fillydelphia, defied their Masters, or actually volunteered for the ring.



* DoomedByCanon: [[spoiler: Red Eye and Stern]].



* DrivenToSuicide: Multiple examples.
* DrJerk: Doctor Weathervane, a very cranky ghoul doctor who specializes in pegasi.

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* DrivenToSuicide: Multiple examples.
[[spoiler: Murky tries this three times, though the second was played by Barb for his amusement.]]
* DrJerk: Doctor Weathervane, a very cranky ghoul doctor who specializes in pegasi.pegasi, being the official medic for the Shadowbolts.



** Glimmerlight is loose and lackadaisical [[spoiler:because she wipes her own memories]].

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** Glimmerlight is loose and lackadaisical [[spoiler:because because she wipes her own memories]].memories of traumatic events.



** Coral Eve, introduced later on in the story, has an eternal grudge against Glim for [[spoiler:causing the raiders to attack her home]], and one against Brim for [[spoiler:being the one to destroy her home.]] Nevermind the fact that she's now sans her son as well.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Everyone, except Protégé, Mr. Peace, and Caduceus.]]
* EthicalSlut: Glimmerlight's dialogue and attitude towards relationships reflect this as a viewpoint.

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** Coral Eve, introduced later on in the story, has an eternal grudge against Glim for [[spoiler:causing causing the raiders to attack her home]], and one against Brim for [[spoiler:being being the one to destroy her home.]] it. Nevermind the fact that she's now sans her son as well.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Everyone, [[spoiler: Everyone, except Protégé, Mr. Peace, and Caduceus.]]
* EthicalSlut: Glimmerlight's dialogue and attitude towards relationships reflect this as a viewpoint. When Coral calls Glimmer a slut (after catching her trying to have sex with another pony during wartime), Glimmer chews her out.



** Protégé, who, like Murky, [[spoiler:was born as a slave before earning his freedom]]. He's not as malicious, though.

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** Protégé, who, like Murky, [[spoiler:was born as a slave before earning his freedom]]. He's not as malicious, though.



* FantasticRacism: Murky tends to suffer this from other ponies, due to [[spoiler:being a pegasus]].

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* FantasticRacism: Murky tends to suffer this from other ponies, due to [[spoiler:being being a pegasus]].pegasus.



* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Murky is [[spoiler: a pegasus]].
* FlingALightIntoTheFuture: Several examples.

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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Murky is [[spoiler: a pegasus]].
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* FlingALightIntoTheFuture: Several examples. Sundial's messages on his [=PipBuck=] slowly reveal the backstory of the main plot.
** [[spoiler: A holographic, recorded message from Pinkie Pie contacts Murky on his birthday, revealing more crucial details related to Sundial.]]



* ForcedToWatch



* HappinessInSlavery: Absolutely avoided in the story. Protég&eacute tries to shape his two-year deal with Murky as this. The influence of the [[spoiler: Nexus Orb]] causes ponies with a weak mind to turn into brainwashed slaves with a merry attitude, happy to serve others.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: Littlepip, following her own journey in ''Fallout Equestria''. The events of her story, related to Fillydelphia, occur in concurrent with Murky's, often influencing his.



* IJustWantToBeFree: Murky's modus operandi is to be free and escape the bonds of slavery.



* InterruptedSuicide: [[spoiler:Murky jumps off a building after being set to become a sex slave. Brimstone smashes through a wall to catch him]].

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* InterruptedSuicide: [[spoiler:Murky [[spoiler: Murky jumps off a building after being set to become a sex slave. Brimstone smashes through a wall to catch him]].



* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: How "Number Six"/[[spoiler:Brimstone Blitz]] finds out the password for the emergency exit in Chapter 1.

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* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: How "Number Six"/[[spoiler:Brimstone Blitz]] Brimstone Blitz finds out the password for the emergency exit in Chapter 1.



* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:Glimmerlight inflicts this upon herself as a coping method.]]

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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:Glimmerlight Glimmerlight inflicts this upon herself as a coping method.method.
** [[spoiler: Murky and Unity are revealed to have done this to themselves, having been lovers and plotted to escape together. When they were caught and faced having to fight each other in the Pit, they used Aurora Star's memory machine to erase their relationship to avoid the trauma.
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* MadeASlave: Most of the slaves have suffered this, though Murky was born into slavery.



* TheMaster: Occasionally, Murky will refer to Chainlink Shackles as "the Master".

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* TheMaster: Occasionally, Murky will refer refers to Chainlink Shackles as "the Master".Master" through the first half of the story.



* SlaveBrand: Murky's ''cutie mark'' acts as his.
* {{Slimeball}}: Sooty Morass, a slave who manages to worm his way up by way of his ruthless merchant business. He exploits Murky as much as he can at every turn, at one point humiliatingly making him [[spoiler:pluck out his own feathers]] to trade for his desperately-needed [=RadAway=]. Later he joins the slavers, running a sex trade.

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* SlaveBrand: Murky's ''cutie mark'' acts as his.
his. Protég&eacute is revealed that his Cutie Mark is actually one.
* SlaveCollar: Chainlink forces Murky to wear one as a sign of his ownership. He also wears him an irradiated collar at one point.
* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Invoked strongly throughout. Red Eye is the only character who views slavery as a necessary evil, often invoking the need for sacrifice for the sake of progress. Protég&eacute shares his views, mostly out of loyalty and a firm belief in his master. The treatment of ponies in Fillydelphia, is what inspired by Brimstone to pull a HeelFaceTurn.
* {{Slimeball}}: Sooty Morass, a slave who manages to worm his way up by way of his ruthless merchant business. He exploits Murky as much as he can at every turn, at one point humiliatingly making him [[spoiler:pluck [[spoiler: pluck out his own feathers]] to trade for his desperately-needed [=RadAway=]. Later he joins the slavers, running a sex trade.



* StealthPun / MythologyGag: Wildcard is heard humming a melody: four short notes, followed by a long one, repeated twice. [[spoiler:The show's main theme song]].

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* StealthPun / MythologyGag: Wildcard is heard humming a melody: four short notes, followed by a long one, repeated twice. [[spoiler:The twice - The show's main theme song]].song.



* ThemeNaming: A hint that [[spoiler: Sundial is Dr. Weathervane's son]].

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* ThemeNaming: A hint that [[spoiler: Sundial is Dr. Weathervane's son]].son.



* [[WhamEpisode Wham Chapter]]: 25, where we find out that [[spoiler:Murky is Unity's special somepony]].
* WhenHeSmiles: Other characters find Murky's rare moments of hope and happiness inspiring. Including [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie.]]

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* [[WhamEpisode Wham Chapter]]: 25, where we find out that [[spoiler:Murky [[spoiler: Murky is Unity's special somepony]].
* WhenHeSmiles: Other characters find Murky's rare moments of hope and happiness inspiring. Including [[spoiler:Pinkie [[spoiler: Pinkie Pie.]]



* WingsDoNothing: [[spoiler:Murky's]] wings were broken and healed wrong while they were still developing. He can't even move them without pain. [[spoiler:Slowly subverted over the course of the story, as help from Dr. Weathervane allows them to begin healing; Murky eventually gains the strength to glide. The trope is firmly and triumphantly averted in the final chapter, when Murky takes off and flies to freedom under his own power.]]

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* WingsDoNothing: [[spoiler:Murky's]] Murky's wings were broken and healed wrong while they were still developing. He can't even move them without pain. [[spoiler:Slowly [[spoiler: Slowly subverted over the course of the story, as help from Dr. Weathervane allows them to begin healing; Murky eventually gains the strength to glide. The trope is firmly and triumphantly averted in the final chapter, when Murky takes off and flies to freedom under his own power.]]

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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Grindstone, the merciless donkey slaver, is crushed within his own forcefield by Coral Eve's magic.]]



** Much earlier, his Pipbuck beeping is the only thing preventing Murky [[spoiler:from jumping off the control tower]]. Possibly courtesy of [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie, who tampered with said Pipbuck]].

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** Much earlier, his Pipbuck beeping is the only thing preventing Murky [[spoiler:from [[spoiler: from jumping off the control tower]]. Possibly courtesy of [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie, who tampered with said Pipbuck]].
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Subverted slightly in the sense that Murky and the gang survive as well as they can by confiding in one another, but enforced in the sense that a lot of them have some seriously deep seated problems.

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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Subverted slightly Downplayed in the sense that Murky and the gang survive as well as they can by confiding in one another, but enforced in the sense that a lot of them have some seriously deep seated problems.
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** Protégé, one of Murky's masters. He tries to avoid unnecessary cruelty, and is genuinely concerned about Murky's well-being. He is, however, a slaver who willingly works in the Fillydelphia system.

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** Protégé, one of Murky's masters. He tries to avoid unnecessary cruelty, and is genuinely concerned about Murky's well-being. He is, however, a slaver who willingly works in the Fillydelphia system.



* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Everyone, except Protege, Mr. Peace, and Caduceus.]]

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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Everyone, except Protege, Protégé, Mr. Peace, and Caduceus.]]



** Protege, who, like Murky, [[spoiler:was born as a slave before earning his freedom]]. He's not as malicious, though.

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** Protege, Protégé, who, like Murky, [[spoiler:was born as a slave before earning his freedom]]. He's not as malicious, though.



** Protégé, particularly early on, comes across as the Twilight Sparkle to Red Eye's Princess Celestia. He even writes his master letters.
** Carrying over from ''FanFic/FalloutEquestria'', the city of Fillydelphia is based on [[Videogame/FallOut3 Fallout 3]]'s Pittsburgh DLC. Red Eye and Protégé both exhibit the UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans traits of Lord Ashur.

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** Protégé, particularly early on, comes across as the Twilight Sparkle to Red Eye's Princess Celestia. He even writes his master letters.
** Carrying over from ''FanFic/FalloutEquestria'', the city of Fillydelphia is based on [[Videogame/FallOut3 Fallout 3]]'s Pittsburgh DLC. Red Eye and Protégé both exhibit the UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans traits of Lord Ashur.



* FootnoteFever: As is typical for [=FoE=] spinoffs.

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* FootnoteFever: As is typical for [=FoE=] FO:E spinoffs.



* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler: Chainlink meets his long-awaited end in the final chapter, nearly hung by Murky, beaten up by his own slaves, before being shot through the head by Murky using Protege's gun.]]

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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler: Chainlink meets his long-awaited end in the final chapter, nearly hung by Murky, beaten up by his own slaves, before being shot through the head by Murky using Protege's Protégé's gun.]]



* MistakenForGay: Glimmer (jokingly) attempts multiple times to convince Murky to hook up with another colt, despite Murky's insistence that he's straight. Occasional FoeYay with Protégé doesn't help his case.

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* MistakenForGay: Glimmer (jokingly) attempts multiple times to convince Murky to hook up with another colt, despite Murky's insistence that he's straight. Occasional FoeYay with Protégé doesn't help his case.



* NeverLearnedToRead: Murky, though Protege later teaches him.

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* NeverLearnedToRead: Murky, though Protege Protégé later teaches him.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Possibly Protégé, who's caring and good-natured despite his role as a slaver. A few other slavers express remorse or reluctance over the poor treatment that the slaves often receive.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Possibly Protégé, who's caring and good-natured despite his role as a slaver. A few other slavers express remorse or reluctance over the poor treatment that the slaves often receive.
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** [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy Wildcard]] vs [[ActionGirl Glimmerlight]]

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* CoDragons: A senior slaver named Grindstone and the three former lieutenants of Brimstone's gang serve as these for Shackles. Each of them eventually takes the role of ArchEnemy to their counterpart among the protagonists. [[spoiler:True to the trope, each of the protagonists defeats their nemesis personally]].
** [[CastingAShadow Barb]] vs [[CowardlyLion Murky]]
** [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy Wildcard]] vs [[ActionGirl Glimmerlight]]
** [[TheBrute Big Brutus]] vs [[TheBigGuy Brimstone Blitz]]
** [[SmugSnake Grindstone]] vs [[MamaBear Coral Eve]]


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* DeathByGenreSavviness: [[spoiler: Wildcard knows about the special magic bullet that Glimmerlight set aside just for him, and dodges it with ease. Glimmer prepared for this and made two, so the second shot comes as a surprise.]]
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* DoorStopper: Now complete, ''Murky Number Seven'' clocks in just short of 1.1 million words.

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* DoorStopper: Now complete, ''Murky Number Seven'' clocks in just short of 1.1 million words. To compare, it's about equal to every book in the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' series combined.
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* DoorStopper: Now complete, MN7 clocks in just short of 1.1 million words.

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* DoorStopper: Now complete, MN7 ''Murky Number Seven'' clocks in just short of 1.1 million words.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Everyone, except Protege, Mr. Peace, and Caduceus.]]

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