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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5926116/1/Evangelion_Gear Evangelion Gear]] is a fanfiction written by Snafu the Great which combines both the universes of VideoGame/MetalGear and Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion into a single world.
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* BrokenAce: Asuka, obviously. Even more so than usual.
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* {{Determinator}}: Asuka. Dear God, '''''ASUKA'''''!
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* EyeScream: Poor Asuka...
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* FourStarBadass: Big Boss, of course.
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* MeaningfulEcho: Many. ''Many.''
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* ShoutOut: A lot.
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* TheSociopath: Asuka.
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* ThousandYardStare: Gendo has nothing on Big Boss.
* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler: Big Boss and Eva.]]
* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler: Big Boss and Eva.]]
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* TheUnfettered: Keel Lorenz.
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Incorruptible Pure Pureness has been renamed to The Incorruptible and redefined to be about characters who are portrayed in-universe as untemptable/incorruptible. Removing ZCE.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Yui Ikari.
** {{Flanderization}}: She was [[AlternativeCharacterInterpretation heavily implied]] to be a [[{{Ubermensch}} much more]] [[LadyMacbeth morally]] [[MadScientist complex]] and [[TheChessmaster interesting]] character in canon, compared to her version in this fic.
** {{Flanderization}}: She was [[AlternativeCharacterInterpretation heavily implied]] to be a [[{{Ubermensch}} much more]] [[LadyMacbeth morally]] [[MadScientist complex]] and [[TheChessmaster interesting]] character in canon, compared to her version in this fic.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5926116/1/Evangelion_Gear Evangelion Gear]] is a fanfiction written by Snafu the Great which combines both the universes of Franchise/MetalGear and Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion into a single world.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5926116/1/Evangelion_Gear Evangelion Gear]] is a fanfiction written by Snafu the Great which combines both the universes of Franchise/MetalGear VideoGame/MetalGear and Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion into a single world.
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Considering this is a story based on both Franchise/MetalGear ''and'' [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Evangelion]] there are bound to be ''tons'' of spoilers before. '''''You have been warned.'''''
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Considering this is a story based on both Franchise/MetalGear VideoGame/MetalGear ''and'' [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Evangelion]] there are bound to be ''tons'' of spoilers before. '''''You have been warned.'''''
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Some scenes are written as if the story is actually a Franchise/MetalGear game that the reader happens to be playing/watching.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Some scenes are written as if the story is actually a Franchise/MetalGear VideoGame/MetalGear game that the reader happens to be playing/watching.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Averted with Snake. Unlike in VideoGame/MetalGearSolid4, here he isn't suffering from advanced aging. [[spoiler: Played straight at the end however, despite being only fourteen years since The Battle For Humanity, Snake looks quite old, a lot like his [=MGS4=] counterpart.]] This is especially true in contrast to Meryl, who still looks quite young, despite being in her forties.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Averted with Snake. Unlike in VideoGame/MetalGearSolid4, VideoGame/MetalGearSolid4GunsOfThePatriots, here he isn't suffering from advanced aging. [[spoiler: Played straight at the end however, despite being only fourteen years since The Battle For Humanity, Snake looks quite old, a lot like his [=MGS4=] counterpart.]] This is especially true in contrast to Meryl, who still looks quite young, despite being in her forties.
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: After being used by Nerv, Seele, and being sentenced to a life in a mental hospital things couldn't possibly get worse for Asuka. She'll at least get the help she needs right? Nope! She basically becomes a SexSlave for her therapist, and then kills herself a year later when she finds out [[DespairEventHorizon he didn't love her]]...]].
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler: After being used by Nerv, Seele, and being sentenced to a life in a mental hospital things couldn't possibly get worse for Asuka. She'll at least get the help she needs right? Nope! She basically becomes a SexSlave for her therapist, and then kills herself a year later when she finds out [[DespairEventHorizon he didn't love her]]...]].]].
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* FirstKiss: [[spoiler: Rei kisses Shinji on the cheek after he wakes up from his coma, signaling the [[TheyDo change in their relationship]].]]
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* FirstKiss: [[spoiler: Rei kisses Shinji on the cheek after he wakes up from his coma, signaling the [[TheyDo [[RelationshipUpgrade change in their relationship]].]]
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* BuryYourGays: Done very blatantly with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literally out of nowhere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications. %%move to GayGuyDiesFirst when that's launched
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* BuryYourGays: Done very blatantly with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literally out of nowhere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications.status]]. %%move to GayGuyDiesFirst when that's launched
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* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler: Big Boss, mirroring his death in VideoGame/MetalGearSolid4.]]
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* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji brings Misato's gun to school to execute Asuka and Rei and then shoot up the rest of the class before killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it (thanks to Big Boss), except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]
* [[spoiler: BabiesEverAfter: Shinji and Rei have a daughter named Aya Yui Ikari fourteen years after The Battle For Humanity. A few other characters also end up having children.]]
* [[spoiler: BabiesEverAfter: Shinji and Rei have a daughter named Aya Yui Ikari fourteen years after The Battle For Humanity. A few other characters also end up having children.]]
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* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji [[spoiler:Shinji brings Misato's gun to school to execute Asuka and Rei and then shoot up the rest of the class before killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it (thanks to Big Boss), except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]
*[[spoiler: BabiesEverAfter: [[spoiler: Shinji and Rei have a daughter named Aya Yui Ikari fourteen years after The Battle For Humanity. A few other characters also end up having children.]]
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler: Kaworu Nagisa, who is killed early on after Metal Gear Ray drops an N2 mine on him.]]
** Johnny gets it even worse, with his death being nonchalantly mentioned in the timeline, and that's about it.
** Johnny gets it even worse, with his death being nonchalantly mentioned in the timeline, and that's about it.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim:
** [[spoiler: Kaworu Nagisa, who is killed early on after Metal Gear Ray drops an N2 mine on him.]]
** Johnny gets it even worse, with his death being nonchalantly mentioned in the timeline, and that's about it.
** [[spoiler: Kaworu Nagisa, who is killed early on after Metal Gear Ray drops an N2 mine on him.]]
** Johnny gets it even worse, with his death being nonchalantly mentioned in the timeline, and that's about it.
