History FanFic / EvangelionGear

10th Sep '16 10:04:38 PM WillBGood
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans: Keel's plans to "unite" the world through {{Instrumentality}}.

to:

* UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans: Keel's plans to "unite" the world through {{Instrumentality}}.[[AssimilationPlot Instrumentality]].
1st Aug '16 9:29:34 AM generalzod39
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for bringing John Hayter (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.

to:

* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for bringing John Hayter (a four-star five-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.
1st Aug '16 8:47:14 AM generalzod39
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting John Hayter (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.

to:

* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting bringing John Hayter (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.
31st Jul '16 6:46:45 PM generalzod39
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting John Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.

to:

* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting John Hayter/Big Boss Hayter (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.
30th Jul '16 8:49:58 PM generalzod39
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.

to:

* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General John Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.
30th Jul '16 8:48:56 PM generalzod39
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to Hayter's death threats was cathartic.

to:

* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats threats]] was cathartic.
30th Jul '16 8:41:27 PM generalzod39
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* FlawExploitation: The Patriots know that [[spoiler: Seele was trying listening to them. So Big Boss had Otacon and Mei Ling send out false information, 'causing Seele to bomb the wrong location.]]

to:

* FlawExploitation: The Patriots know knew that [[spoiler: Seele was trying listening tlistening to them. So them, so Big Boss had Otacon and Mei Ling send out false information, 'causing causing Seele to bomb the wrong location.]]


Added DiffLines:

* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to Hayter's death threats was cathartic.
30th Jul '16 8:24:51 PM generalzod39
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji brings Misato's gun to school to execute Asuka and Rei and then shoot up the rest of the class before killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it (thanks to Big Boss) except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]

to:

* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji brings Misato's gun to school to execute Asuka and Rei and then shoot up the rest of the class before killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it (thanks to Big Boss) Boss), except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]



* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Asuka, eventually pilots for Seele.]]

to:

* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Asuka, Asuka eventually pilots for Seele.]]
30th Jul '16 8:23:22 PM generalzod39
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji brings Misato's gun to school, and plans to execute Asuka and Rei, and shoot up the rest of the class before ultimately killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it however. Except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]

to:

* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji brings Misato's gun to school, and plans school to execute Asuka and Rei, Rei and then shoot up the rest of the class before ultimately killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it however. Except (thanks to Big Boss) except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]
30th Jul '16 8:21:49 PM generalzod39
Is there an issue? Send a Message


* BuryYourGays: Done very blatantly with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literaly out of nowere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications.
** It deosn't help that the author also stated in the very first chapter, Vamp will be permanetly dead in this version...

to:

* BuryYourGays: Done very blatantly with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literaly literally out of nowere, nowhere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications.
** It deosn't doesn't help that the author also stated in the very first chapter, Vamp will be permanetly dead in this version...



* ContinuityNod: Plenty, two that come to mind are Snake's bandana giving him infinite ammo, and [[spoiler: Asuka's eye getting injured, while she screams, "I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you all".]]

to:

* ContinuityNod: Plenty, two that come to mind are Snake's bandana bandanna giving him infinite ammo, and [[spoiler: Asuka's eye getting injured, while she screams, "I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you all".]]
This list shows the last 10 events of 49. Show all.
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/article_history.php?article=FanFic.EvangelionGear