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* TheBeard[=/=]UndercoverAsLovers: Connor and Risa pretend to be in a relationship during most of the first book so they won't get separated.
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* DisabledLoveInterest: [[spoiler:Risa's spine gets paralyzed when the Clappers detonate their suicide bombs at the Chop Shop. She refuses to get a spine transplant because this is her choice and she wants to be herself. Also because if she gets a transplant, she'll be immediately unwound. There are laws protecting the disabled from being unwound. Until she's blackmailed into having a spine transplant by Roberta.]]
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* KeepingTheHandicap: She could have regained the use of her legs with a replacement spine, but she refuses it for a couple of reasons: doing so is her choice and she wants to be herself, and a transplant would have to come from an unwound teen and she'd be immediately unwound herself.
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* KeepingTheHandicap: She could have regained the use of her legs with a replacement spine, spine [[spoiler: (she is paralyzed when the Clappers detonate their suicide bombs at the Chop Shop )]] but she refuses it for a couple of reasons: doing so is her choice and she wants to be herself, and a transplant would have to come from an unwound teen and she'd be immediately unwound herself.herself. [[spoiler:Until she's blackmailed into having a spine transplant by Roberta.]]
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TRS has defined The Beard as "fake straight relationship to hide being LGBT". Fake-dating examples that don't fit this go in Fake Relationship or one of its other subtropes. Low context/unclear examples will be deleted.
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* TheBeard[=/=]UndercoverAsLovers: Connor and Risa pretend to be in a relationship during most of the story so they won't get separated.
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* [[spoiler:TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: Decides that to win Risa's heart, he needs to take down Proactive Citizenry.]]
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* [[spoiler:TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: Decides TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Decides that to win Risa's heart, he needs to take down Proactive Citizenry.]]
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%%* [[HasTwoMommies Has Two Daddies]]
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* UnacceptableTargets: InUniverse. Grace is "low-cortical" (intellectually disabled) and apparently parts pirates won't unwind people like her.
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%%* TheChick
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* BookDumb: The natural result of kicking-AWOL in the tenth grade.
* BookDumb: The natural result of kicking-AWOL in the tenth grade.
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* [[{{Delinquents}} Delinquent]]
* DoorstopBaby: Connor and Risa take care of one for a while.
* EyeScream: [[spoiler:Lost his eye - ''and'' his arm - during the Clapper incident at the Chop Shop.]]
* FamedInStory: As the Akron AWOL.
* DoorstopBaby: Connor and Risa take care of one for a while.
* EyeScream: [[spoiler:Lost his eye - ''and'' his arm - during the Clapper incident at the Chop Shop.]]
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* HumbleHero
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter
* HotBlooded: This trait of his is why the Lassiters signed the order to have Connor unwound. Over time, though, Connor learns to control his temper and it cools down into TranquilFury.
* IneffectualLoner: Until Risa convinces him that he needs to start playing politics.
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter
* HotBlooded: This trait of his is why the Lassiters signed the order to have Connor unwound. Over time, though, Connor learns to control his temper and it cools down into TranquilFury.
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* SecondLove: [[spoiler:Risa.]]
* SlapSlapKiss: Connor and Risa from time to time.
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* BigSisterInstinct: Towards Lev while on the run.
* BigSisterMentor: Her relationship to many of the younger Whollies.
* BoyMeetsGirl: Connor meets Risa.
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* KeepingTheHandicap: She could have regained the use of her legs with a replacement spine, but she refuses it because this is her choice and she wants to be herself. Also because if she gets a transplant, it would have to come from an unwound teen, and she'll be immediately unwound herself.
* LoveTriangle: A mild, implied one between Connor, Risa, and Ariana. Connor, Risa, and Roland could possibly count too.
* LoveTriangle: A mild, implied one between Connor, Risa, and Ariana. Connor, Risa, and Roland could possibly count too.
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* KeepingTheHandicap: She could have regained the use of her legs with a replacement spine, but she refuses it because this for a couple of reasons: doing so is her choice and she wants to be herself. Also because if she gets herself, and a transplant, it transplant would have to come from an unwound teen, teen and she'll she'd be immediately unwound herself.
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** A mild, implied one between Connor, Risa, and Ariana. Connor, Risa, and Roland could possibly count too.
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** A mild, implied one between Connor, Risa, and Ariana. Connor, Risa, and Roland could possibly count too.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[spoiler:When Lev becomes a Clapper.]]
* BrattyHalfPint: In the beginning.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:In Undivided Nelson sets her shop on fire and she dies.]]
* ScrewPolitenessImASenior
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Grace is "low-cortical."
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* BeligerantSexualTension: BelligerentSexualTension: Has this dynamic with Camus in ''Unsouled''